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Home»Fan Fiction»Bepanah Pyar (sdch) Shot 3
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Bepanah Pyar (sdch) Shot 3

Ashnita456By Ashnita456December 13, 201711 Comments6 Mins Read
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Let’s start

Kabir gets tapped on his shoulder. He turns back and gets shocked to see ruchika.

Wat r u doing here, asked both

I saw u coming here that’s y I followed u replied ruchika.

Wat to tell her she won’t believe that I followed the girl, Kabir thought himself.

Now cum it’s late ruchika told Kabir.

Ruchbir was going when Kabir thought where is the girl. He looks here and there but again didn’t saw the girl. So He Left with ruchika. The girl was following them. When ruchbir reached hotel then she left.

In jungle girl is crying. She gets tapped on her shoulder. She saw a person and hugs him.

Y he is not able to see me. I knw he can feel me than y can’t but cant see my face the girl asked the person.

control urself. U can’t loose dear. There’s a reason that he is not seeing u replied the person.

Is this my punishment sanchi question him.

Yes my dear this is ur punishment .He will feel u but could not see ur face said the person.

Won’t this punishment fininsh till when he will see me after his wedding. No I need him in my reveng said the girl.

Ur punishment will end when he calls when he want to see u. It’s upto him my dear person said to the girl.

Now he will call me. He will see me .My punishment will over yet and

And wat my dear asked the person.

U will get to knw replied girl.

Apne inteqam ke waja mat bulana and don’t forget who r u. You have only full moon time to do said the person.

But full moon is in next 72 hrs and ruchbir is getting married same day said the girl.

Remember if ruchbir married eachother u can’t go near him. U will loose him my dear man told the girl.

I promise in next 72 hrs I will make him mine said the girl.

Kabir I’m coming said the girl.

Kabir get some flashes again. He wakes up and makes a painting. He closes his eyes. Girls eyes r shown to him. He paints it. He again closes his eyes and paints. Painting is done. He memorized seeing the painting.

Who r u. Wat happened to me after seeing ur painting. Who r u and who is the girl which I feel I see her but couldn’t see her face Kabir thought himself.

Night passed to morning. Kabir wokes up and saw painting missing which he painted last night. He thought maybe he was dreaming to paint.

Otherside girl is praying. She asks kabir from the God.

Pliz give me strength that I will tell kabir everything but he has to call me than I can go infront of him. Pliz God help me said the girl.

Ruchbir haldi is done. Ruchika mehendi is going on. Girl is looking at her from the distance. She gets teary eyed. When mehendi girl was about to write kabir name on ruchika hand. Light goes off.

No I can’t be shelfish if kabir loves her than I dont want to ruin his happiness. But I won’t able to take my revenge. I need kabir. He is my strength. She looks at moon.

Pliz kabir full moon Pliz call me wat to do. She goes to kabirs room. and saw him trying to make girl painting again. Girl smiles at him

Someone comes inside and asked kabir to get ready. Pandit ji has cum.

Y I’m feeling I don’t want to marry kabir thought himself.

Kabir gets ready as groom. He was about to go downstairs when he again heard girl singing.

Suna Suna Lamha Lamha
Meri rahen tanha tanha
Akar mujhe tum thamlo
Manzil Teri dekhe rasta
Mudke zara ab dekh lo
Aisa milan phir ho na ho
Sab kuch mera tum hi toh ho ho ho
Bepanah pyar hai aaja
Tera intezar hai aaja

(Kabir runs outside and saw girl leaving he follows her girl turns back and saw him following she continues singing. )

Ho bapanah pyar hai
Tera intezar hai ajaa
Suna suna
Lamha lamha
Meri rahen tanha tanha

(Girl walks ahead and kabir searches her girl continues singing now girl is behind kabir )

Bichde hum joh kabhi rastein toh mein sang sang rahu gi sada
Kadamo ki awaz sunke chalungi tume dunlungi sada

(Kabir feels her presence he turns back and saw girl Iiving so he follows her again girl continues singing )

Guli mohabatki yeh khusbuyein hai hawaein mein fhele hui.

(Girl still walks ahead kabir follows her and reached at the temple. He gets some flashes girl sings )

Chuke mujhe aaj mehcoos kar lo mujhe woh yadein meri unchu yi.
Aisa milan phir ho na ho
Sab kuch mera tum hi toh ho ho ho
Bepanah pyar hai aaja tera intezar hai aaja.

Ho bapanah pyar hai aaja
Tera intezar hai aaja
Suna Suna
Lamha lamha
Meri rahen tanha tanha

(Kabir holds his head. Some blur images r shown of two people)

Yadoin ki dor mein Bande hai hum tum.
Zara tum dor tham lo
Bahon mein phir se bigal jaane do
Phir se mera naam lo

Mein woh sama ho joh roshan karke khud ko bigal jaungi
Subah ka suraj tumare liye hai
Mein raat hoon dhal jaungi

(Kabir shouts in pain girl walks in temple and kabir follows her and singing continues )

Aisa milan phir ho na ho
Sab kuch mera tum hi toh ho ho ho
Bepanah pyar hai aaja
Tera intezar hai aaja
Ho Bepanah pyar hai aaja

(Kabir again gets flashes he faints and girl wakes up him still singing )

Tera intezar hai aaja
Suna suna
Lamha
Lamha
Meri rahen tanha tanha

(Kabir wokes up and saw himself .He searches the girl in Temple )

Kabir shouts – who r u. ,where r u cum out

(Girl sings )
Mudke zara ab dekh lo
Aisa milan phir ho na ho
Sab kuch mera tum hi toh ho ho ho
Bepanah pyar hai aaja

(Kabir searches her and finds her sitting near idol she sings )

Tera intezar hai aaja
Ho Bepanah pyar hai aaja tera intezar hai aaja
Suna Suna
Lamha Lamha
Meri rahen tanha tanha

Kabir -enough of everything who r u. I want to see u. Turn back I want all my answers. Y I’m getting attracted to u. Y .wat relation we share. Who r u. Answer me damn it. Turn back I want to see u.

Girl looks at sky saw full moon and smiles

Precap: MOST AWAITING SUSPENSE WILL REVEAL
AND
KABIR SITS IN MADAP WITH RUCHIKA.
GIRL CRYS -I LOST HIM

Will suspense reveal after ruchbir wedding?
Will girl able to stop wedding?
Will kabir life take a U Turn

If you want to knw don’t miss next shot so stay tuned with me.

Regards
Ashnita

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Ashnita456

    Loving girl also known as NeonNinga. Writer of kanchi ff in sdch. Die heart Fan of SRK. Fav Jodi *kanchi *avneil shivika swasan swalak* raglak ragsan Fav Hero Vikram Sakhalkar

    11 Comments

    1. Srija on December 14, 2017 12:19 am

      Hi!..The epi was awesome can’t wait for Ur next update..pls post ASAP !!

    2. Dhruti on December 14, 2017 1:18 am

      ashu you are a superb writer and today’s story was awesome i can’t wait for next one so post asap…..
      see you soon……….tc my suspense queen………love you……….

    3. Priyanshipp on December 14, 2017 2:05 am

      So my suspense queen has planned something. Now can’t wait anymore for next episode. Post as soon as possible. This was awesome episode. Luv u meri chudail ???

    4. Dhruvi on December 14, 2017 5:32 am

      Areee suspense queen uff chudail….maar daala tune…wat a grt suspense…..loves it..update soon & bye

    5. swethaa on December 14, 2017 7:55 am

      kitna suspense mein rakh rahi ho but enjoyed it
      eagerly waiting for next epi

    6. niyaaa on December 14, 2017 12:17 pm

      Amaz mindblowing epi ashu.. Yaarkitna suspense rakhti ho…koi story bina suspense k bana skti ho kya????????just kidding.. M to ye janna chahti thi ki tum ideaskahan se lele aati ho.?Mujhe suspense thriller story pasand h.. Loved it post nxt asap.. Bye tc

    7. Anu88 on December 14, 2017 2:01 pm

      Superb and interesting and amazing yaar……… eagerly waiting for the next part yaar……

    8. shining on December 14, 2017 3:39 pm

      I liked the suspense dear. Post next episode ASAP

    9. amnaa on December 14, 2017 8:02 pm

      waiting for the revelation of the suspense

    10. Aafiya on December 15, 2017 3:12 pm

      Amazing.. Interesting..

    11. riyarocks on December 15, 2017 9:35 pm

      Ashuuuuuuuuu…..yaar, koi itna amazing kaise likh sakta hai…….tu bilkul apne naam ko justify kar rh ho……..suspense queen……..haha………luv u meri chudail & jaldi se nxt part submit karo…….baaki baatein ig pe

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