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Home»Fan Fiction»Bepanah Pyar (sdch) Shot 2
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Bepanah Pyar (sdch) Shot 2

Ashnita456By Ashnita456December 12, 201712 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hi guys thanks for liking and commenting on previous shot.

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Let’s start

Some people were drinking wine. Girl looks at them from distance.

Man 1- yaar I’m going home.
Man 2- OK guys I’m also living. Thanks for calling us. We r meeting after so many years.
Man3 -wait I didn’t called u guys but u guys called me.

All blames each other. But none of them called eachother .They gets confused. They again argue and went to their house. After sometime girl looks at the man who was teasing girls. Girl wears gungat and went to him.

Girl -excuse me I’m new here can u tell this address.

Man -y not

By telling address man touches the girl

Girls -thanks for telling address

Man -u r welcome. Ur hand is so smooth than Ur face would be preetty. Can I taste u

Girl -y not ur place or mine
Man laughs -mine cum

Girl went with man. They came to a bungalow. Man gives leave to servants. Man takes girl to bedroom. He asks girl to take off her gungat.

Girl -no u will be scared

Man -no I won’t I promise

Girl asked man to take off. Man takes off gungat and gets scared. He shouts

Man – U how this possible

Girl – q pechana mujhe

Man -how can u

Girl -wat u think u guys spoiled my life and I will keep quiet. Not at all. I will kill one by one. Now ur turn

Man -no pliz dnt kill me. Pliz spare me

Girl -did u spared me. I was begging u guys u didn’t so y should I spare u. I will take my revenge

Man -I’m sorry

Girl- ur expiry date is came.

Girl took man to bathtub and drowns him repeatedly. Man died and girl left him in the bathroom and went.

Girl -one went and 6 left.I’m back to take revenge. Main apni intekaam lungi.

Time passes to night. Hall is beautifully decorated. Kabir Is getting ready when he feels someone presence. He looks everywhere but again didn’t see anyone. He goes downstairs and gets engaged with ruchika. Girl looks at them at the distance. Girl wipes her tears. She left.

Kabir was not feeling well he went to his room. He sleeps .After sometime girl sits beside Kabir and caresses his face. Her tears fell on Kabir. Kabir wakes up and saw no one.

Kabir -Wats happening to me. Y I feel someone presence everytime.

Kabir sits to read a book .He heard a voice

Voice -suna suna lamha lamha.

(Kabir stood up quickly and goes near window when he saw girl singing. )

Suna Suna
Lamha lamha
Meri rahen tanha tanha
Aakar mujhe tum thamlo
Manzil teri dekhe rashta

(Kabir runs downstairs. He searches the girl but didn’t find her. He was going back when he heard )

Mudke zaara ab dekh lo
Aisa Milan phir ho na ho

(Kabir saw girl leaving he follows the girl and girl kept singing)

Sab kuch mera ab tum hi toh ho
Bepanah pyar Hai aaja
Tera intezar Hai aaja.

Song ended and Kabir gets tapped on his shoulder. He turns back and gets shocked

To be continued

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Ashnita456

    Loving girl also known as NeonNinga. Writer of kanchi ff in sdch. Die heart Fan of SRK. Fav Jodi *kanchi *avneil shivika swasan swalak* raglak ragsan Fav Hero Vikram Sakhalkar

    12 Comments

    1. Priyanshipp on December 12, 2017 11:04 am

      So my suspense queen …. sorry for not commenting on last one .. I typed but due to network problem it failed. .. nd amazing story yaar but I’m disappointed with u ..as u r not going to continue ffs leaving them in between. ???? this was awesome episode full of suspense. I won’t guess anything as u r our suspense queen and u shock us with ur episodes. Luv u sissy or milte h ig pe ????

    2. Risu on December 12, 2017 11:19 am

      Awsm

    3. swethaa on December 12, 2017 12:40 pm

      amazing suspense ki dukan

    4. RuCh23 on December 12, 2017 12:57 pm

      God!! Ashu ??? I love this song ???. Epi was totally amazing!!! Lovers it???

    5. Aafiya on December 12, 2017 1:55 pm

      Nice.. Amazing…

    6. Rishika on December 12, 2017 2:49 pm

      Its awesome amazing n full of suspense loved it alot
      Love you dear
      Keep writing tc

    7. Amnaa on December 12, 2017 4:50 pm

      Its so amazing and full of suspence….. Waiting for the mystery girl revelation

    8. Anu88 on December 12, 2017 7:07 pm

      So so amazing and outstanding episode ashu……….

    9. niyaaa on December 12, 2017 8:32 pm

      Awsome mindblowing is yaar .. This is brillant.. And song yaar krisbna cottage movie ki yaad dila di ashu.. Lovv u yaar.. Post nxf part oc it asap bye tc milte h ig p agar tera tujhe tjme mila to.. U know time difference???..bye yaar lovv u???

    10. shining on December 12, 2017 10:35 pm

      i really liked the suspence. post next epi soon.

    11. Dhruti on December 13, 2017 12:52 am

      ashu ashu ahsu my suspense queen day by day your skill to create suspense in your story is superb……
      i just love it this story…………….post next one asap…………..tc…………………love you…………….and can you be regular if it’s possible……………………

    12. riyarocks on December 15, 2017 8:08 pm

      too good Ashu…..loved this a lot…….mind blowing khidkitod gazab……luv u meri pyaari chudail……….

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