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Home»Fan Fiction»Bepanah Pyar (sdch) Last & Memorable Shot
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Bepanah Pyar (sdch) Last & Memorable Shot

Ashnita456By Ashnita456January 3, 2018Updated:January 3, 201812 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey guys thanks for supporting me till here. So This is my last lost. I will make this memorable.

Do comment and tell me how was it .Silent readers I would like to see ur comments. I want to know how many of u read this.

This is last one so better comment guys OK. It’s and order for ig kamini ‘s and request to silent readers.

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Let’s start

Someone takes sanchi somewhere .Sanchi takes out her blindfolds and see no one there. She feels someone’s presence and smiles. She saw someone behind the tree.

Sanchi slowly slowy goes near the tree and saw no one .She was leaving when flowers showers on her .Sanchi smiles and enjoys.

Kabir I know u r doing all this cum out -sanchi

Just then sanchi saw a arrow and it’s written follow it. Sanchi follows the arrow and Cums to a beautiful studio. She enters in and saw all dark. Sanchi calls out Kabir and lights one by one turns on

Sanchi walks ahead and crosses a string. String is pulled up when a lot of rose petals falls on her.

Kabir where are u -sanchi

Kabir smiles who were hiding behind curtains.

kabir I know you are here cum out or else u know na who am I -sanchi

I know who r u my dear I won’t cum until u -kabir

Until wat u mean kabir -sanchi

u will know it by urself first take of cloth from there -kabir

where sanchi questioned him. Just then sanchi saw something with cloth covered. Sanchi removed cloth and saw a big box. She opens it and gets shocked to see a big glass showpiece. It’s written kanchi ( remember om gave to santi when she came to meet him in om santi om that kind of showpiece where couple dances.

Kabir Cums from behind and covers sanchi eyes. Sanchi smiles .

sanchi – kabir

kabir removes his hands from sanchi eyes. They hug each other.

Kanchi dance romantically in humko tumse pyar hai song . after there dance kanchi clicks their pics in every style. Kabir than took sanchi out .Kanchi sits on swing together and see each other romantically. Romantic bg plays and our kanchi lost in each other.

Day passes to night and kanchi was in jungle. Kabir was seeing kanchi pics. From behind sanchi hugs him. Kabir didn’t react. Sanchi Cums in front of him and hugs him tightly. Kabir didn’t respond. Sanchi gives him a peck to his cheek. Again kabir didn’t react. Sanchi understood. She smirks and Cums near kabir. She slowy slowy about to kiss him in his lips. Kabir closes his eyes and sanchi runs from there.

Kabir opens his eyes and saw sanchi missing. He smiles and tapped on his forehead. Sanchi laughs hiding. Kabir heard it.

Kabir u wanna kiss -sanchi

Kabir made a puppy face and nods. Sanchi told him to find her and take ur kiss. Kabir searches sanchi and finds her behind a tree. He slowly goes to her. Sanchi senses him after all she is a werewolf. Sanchi runs and kabir follows her .Romantic bg plays. Kabir caught sanchi and both fell down due to misbalance.

Kabir was on top of sanchi. Sanchi hair was on her face. Kabir slowly moves her hair.

Sanchi -kabir how much u love me.

Kabir -bepanah

Sanchi – u know na what I am u still love me like u love me in that birth.

kabir – Sanchi I don’t care wat u are i just loved u that time and this time also. Our love is bepanah.

And they have a passionate and kiss.

THE END

Thank you for ur support. I don’t know wat I wrote. So this was my last one I hope you like it.

Lots of Love
Ashnita

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Ashnita456

    Loving girl also known as NeonNinga. Writer of kanchi ff in sdch. Die heart Fan of SRK. Fav Jodi *kanchi *avneil shivika swasan swalak* raglak ragsan Fav Hero Vikram Sakhalkar

    12 Comments

    1. Aafiya on January 3, 2018 5:10 pm

      Superb… Hope you post updates soon… Take care..

    2. Simran on January 3, 2018 5:14 pm

      It was really a very amazing one…pls come back with a new ff I will miss u ……Till then bye bye and tc……

    3. vanu on January 3, 2018 7:24 pm

      amazing
      do come with new ff soon
      will be waiting

    4. puja on January 3, 2018 8:39 pm

      ashnita it was jst amazing…. i don’t have words to express my feelings….when i was reading it i had a broad smile on my face….it was really fabulous dear…..plz plz comr back soon with another amazing ff…..i am waiting for it…..plz its a humble request from ur silent reader …..luv u alot

    5. cherry on January 3, 2018 8:46 pm

      awesome
      please come back with new ff

    6. Amnaa on January 3, 2018 9:36 pm

      Its was amazing…. Loved it….. Plzz update ur other ffs too

    7. Niyaa on January 3, 2018 10:29 pm

      Beautifull os..superb ending..Kanchi nok jhok their romance is so cute.. Oyee dekh tere order p hum sab aaye nd commnt kiya ab hamara order sun nd to mujhe mera ff chahiye pyaar ya dhoka , zid, junoon, mile ho tum humko ye complete kar kaisi bhi ro k kar yaa has k samjhi? wrna bhul jana ki koi niyaa urff zombu h nhi to ye zombu tere sapne m aake teri band bajaungi.??? abhi m majak k mood m hun per baat ekdum serious h ??.. Hehe chal bye lovv u milte h ig p??.. Or haan fatafat ff post kar??

    8. Anu88 on January 3, 2018 11:55 pm

      So so beautiful and wonderful episode yaar…….love it so so much ashu…..tc dear……..love u sweety……..

    9. Risu on January 4, 2018 7:17 am

      Awsm dear

    10. swethaa on January 4, 2018 9:59 am

      its so beautiful..loved it dear..tc..love u..

    11. Priyanshipp on January 4, 2018 11:22 am

      Ye kya itti jldi khatam ho gya ??? yaar ab mujhe zid or junoon ka next episode cahiye . Or kisi ka nhi to kamse kam zid ka cahiye by hook or crook. Tu likh rhi h or ye mera order h. And such a beautiful episode dear. Loved it so much. Luv u sweetie ? ❤❤

    12. riyarocks on January 4, 2018 8:53 pm

      Abeo…apni cp band kar aur chup chap hame zid aur junoon waala ff de…aur ye tune theek nhi kiya…itna mazaa aa raha tha but tune itni jaldi end kardi…koi nhi punishment toh pehle hi suna chuki hoon ff likhne waali..luv u a lot chudail…milte hain ig pe

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