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Home»Fan Fiction»Beintehaa (A SwaSan OS)
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Beintehaa (A SwaSan OS)

Ayesha123By Ayesha123March 20, 201754 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hey Guys…Ayesha here…I am New here…No not Actually new I have visiting this Site Since last 6 months but never wrote anything..This is my first attempt plz encourage me..
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I am Starting it from the Track when kavita enters SwaSan life…
I hope u Guys with like it..
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Swara POV..
Its strange isn’t it…when some one is near u ..u never gave him importance but when he is away I seems like he is the one that matters to u..I don’t know why this always happen to me…Why am I always the only victim of losing my love …why do I have to sacrifice my Happiness…why Happiness can’t knock at my door without accompanying with it sorrows….
I love him More than anything but I can’t live with him…I know I realised my feelings late but it doesn’t means that I will get such a punishment for it…I just can’t describe that Scene.. That damaging scene…When ..MY SANSKAR was snatched away from me…but whom snatched him…His LOVE..HIS FIRST LOVE…how could u Forget this Swara..that First Love is always true and it can’t be forgotten…and the reason sanskar enters in your life is also because of his Love for Kavita…
You have to hide your feeling Swara for his Happiness..You have to move away from his life..
POV Ends..

Swara thought while wiping the tears which have been flowing continuously after seeing Sanskar and Kavita together..

Maheshwari Mansion…

Since the time Kavita arrived everyone was disappointed and worried about SwaSan future ..
.Sanskar was not we to Digest the Fact that Kavita is Alive and had came back after Five Years…The vision of the last five years started coming in front of him..how he spent these Years in Pain..In Rage of Hatred for his own Family and in a hope that Kavita will return back..But now after Meeting Swara…he haven’t experienced any such feeling…nor did he waited for Kavita anymore he just waited for the time when Swara will accept his Love and they will become one…But he never Expected Kavita to make such an entry…and her Presence will hurt him this much…he very well Knew Swara’s condition …How Anarchy would be Prevailing deep inside her heart and how much she will be hurt…..These thoughts were killing him from inside as he can’t imagaine swara in that condition… He never wants Swara to experience the pain which had gone through… But he was angry on her too…Because she left him so Easily… He easily Gave up on Him on their Love…he wanted to ask her why did she left him…why did she took such a step about THEIR life without consulting him…He wants Answers.. Which Only SHE can Give…so without wasting any more time he left from there…to meet her and yo Get his Answers…

Baadi..
(Late Night)

Sleep was far away from her Eyes..She Never Expected that she will even lose her Second TRUE love…Her Heart was still not Happy with the decision she took by Handing over Sanskar to Kavita…But her Mind was Persuading her not to get in her hearts words…Whatever she did was Right ..She Relized Sanskar of this relation… He himself told her that he do not love her…
She was so much Lost in Her Heart-Mind Fight that she didn’t noticed that someone Eventually entered her room…After some time when she could sense the sound of footsteps coming towards her.. She Turned immediately and Found HIM so Close to him…
His closeness Affects her…Both were Lost in a Immense and Never Ending Eyelock in which they were just trying to find answers to each other questions…Coming to her sense Swara Asks Sanskar..
Swara: What are u Doing here…

Sanskar:(Grabbing her by her shoulders( What am I going here… You are asking me this …Werent u waiting for me…

Swara:(Avoiding his Gaze) No…why would I wait for u…And You should have been with Kavita …she needs you..

Sanskar: And You ..don’t u need me…

Swara:Sanskar plz its hurting..Plz leave me..

Sanskar: Don’t you think its hurting me..Don’t u think u should have asked me once before taking such q decision..

Swara: Sanskar plz Leave..(in tears)

Sanskar:No Swara not this Time…I won’t leave u this time…You are MINE ..JUST MINE ..After confessing your Love after forcing me to believe that no one can Love me More than u..that I really can’t live without u…And u are my life …I love You Swara…I Love You…Why you did this..

Swara: Sanskar(Amazes)

Sanskar: What Sanskar…I wont listen to u this time…You are not always right…Just Remember one thing ..You Are Mine…Understand..

Swara: (Happy and teary eyes) Nodded her head vigoursly…

Sanskar:Hmm ..that’s Good..

Swara: But Sanskar what about Kavita..

Sanskar: (irked) Oh God Swara plz…Not again..I came here for Us…and you are bringing Kavita between us.

Swara: Arey No…I am sorry sanskar…I am…(interuptted)

Sanskar: no …No Sorry Today…You have to Pay for this…
By Saying this Her brings her closer and placed his Lips on hers …Swara was Surprised but she too Responded…And the kiss turned into a Passionate one…After Kissing for about Two Minutes they Parted Away….And both had a Eyelock when Again Sanskar took over her lips for a kiss…
After Parting Away…Sanskar looked into Her Eyes but this time with a different intention it seems like his Eyes were asking Permission… and Swara very well knew for What and Permitted him through her Eyes..
This was it …Sanskar starts Kissing her Neck…Making her moan and blush…

Suno na suno na
Kahe kya
Suno na suno na
Dil mera
Suno na suno na
Sunlo zara

Teri bahon mein
mujhe rehna hai raat bhar
Teri bahon mein
Hogi subah

(Sanskar start Giving her Open mouth kissing) He took Her in his arms looking deep inside her eyes and f
Moving towards the Bed

Be intehaan be intehaan
Yun pyaar kar
Yun pyaar kar
Be intehaan

Dekha karon
Sari umar
Sari umar

Tere nishaan
Be intehaan
Koi kasar na rahe
Meri khabar na rahe
Choole mujhe iss kadar
Be intehaan

(He slowly Placed her on Bed and Lean on her..Swara turns her Back due to shyness..taking it as a chance Sanskar open her Dori and Starts kissing her Bare back..Making Swara all crazy..)

Jab saanson mein teri
Saasein ghuli toh
Phir sulaghne lagey
Ehsaas mere mujhse
Kehne lagey
Haan bahon mein teri
Aake jahan do
Yu simatne lagey
Sailaab jaise koi
Behne lagey

Khoya hoon mein
Aagosh mein
Tu bhi kahan ab
hosh mein
Makhmali raat ki
Ho na subah
Be intehaan be intehaan
Yun pyaar kar
Be intehaan

( Sanskar turns her and kissing her Collar bone and her face he starts taking off her clothes)

Gustakhiyaan kuch tum karo
Kuch hum karein
Is tarah
Sharmake do
Saaye hai jo
Mooh pher le
Humse yahan
Haan choo to liya hai
Yeh jism tune
Rooh bhi choom le
Anfaaz bheege bheege
Kyun hai mere

(This was it for Swara…Now it was Sanskar time to bear her sweet Tortures.. She unbuttons his Shirt and start kissing his chest making Sanskar moan)

Haan yun choor hoke
Majboor hoke
Qatra qatra kahe
Ehsaas bheege bheege
Kyun hai mere

Do bekhabar
Bheege badan
Ho besabar
Bheege badan
Le rahe raat bhar angraaiyan

(After removing the barriers between them They started making Love to each other)

Be intehaan
Be intehaan be intehaan
Yun pyaar kar
Be intehaan
Dekha karon
Saari umar

Tere nishaan
Beinteha
Koi kasar na rahe
Meri khabar na rahe
Choole mujhe iss kadar
be intehaan

Like this both became one Forever… Never letting Anyone to come between them…

THE END
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I hope u Guys Like it…plz ignore My Mistakes..and Correct me where Needed..
Plz do Share your Views….I will be waiting for Your Response…

Bye;
May Allah Bless You All.

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    54 Comments

    1. mica on March 20, 2017 9:01 am

      Hi Ayeshaaaaa… what is that !!!!! omg! you portrait Swasan emotion soo very well..
      first read it.. i’m soo emotional, almost crying..but then…
      uughhhhh.. you turned me to “something else”.. paralyzed…
      i can’t stop laughing to see my own condition.. omg!!!!!! 😀 😀

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 10:35 am

        Hey Mica…Thank you so very much dear…your words really means a lot…It was my very first attempt..you words really encouraged me….

    2. ritu on March 20, 2017 10:04 am

      welcome ayesha…i’m also new here as a silent reader…n coming to os…simply amazing dear…write more on our heavenly swasan…

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 10:44 am

        Thank You so much Ritu…I am really happy to see your comment after knowing that u are a silent reader…I will definitely write more if Time permits..

    3. Harshita on March 20, 2017 10:25 am

      Loved it dear

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 10:44 am

        Thanks dear

    4. kat on March 20, 2017 10:46 am

      nice dear??

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 4:27 pm

        Thank you dear

    5. anu on March 20, 2017 10:59 am

      awesome loved it

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 4:28 pm

        Thank you dear

    6. Simi on March 20, 2017 11:08 am

      Simply superb ??

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 5:22 pm

        Thank you simin

    7. Swasan on March 20, 2017 11:36 am

      Awesome ???????????????????????????????????????

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 5:24 pm

        Thank you dear?

    8. Romaisa on March 20, 2017 12:05 pm

      Wow loved it welcome to tu

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 5:26 pm

        Thank you dear

    9. independent on March 20, 2017 12:48 pm

      awesome dear come back soon with other stories we r waiting

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 5:27 pm

        Thank you dear…I will surely come up with new work..if time permits

    10. rabia0032 on March 20, 2017 1:05 pm

      Awesome dear it’s truly nice is ❤❤

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 5:28 pm

        Thank you dear. …I am glad u like it

    11. Seebu_s on March 20, 2017 1:18 pm

      Firstly welcome to our tu swasan land?n this os is awesome???swasan romance???me blushing???

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 5:25 pm

        Thank you so much dear Seebu….I am glad u like my work….And I was also blushing while writing that…?

    12. AnuAnn on March 20, 2017 1:47 pm

      Simply awesome

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 5:29 pm

        Thank you dear

    13. Kakali on March 20, 2017 2:30 pm

      Ayesha, a healthy welcome to our family dear.!! You have done correct choosing to write something. Trust me dear it’s very very good and beautiful to read..!! It’s your 1st attempt na. You write so well..! !i would like to read your further works.! Do continue soon..!!
      Thnk u.. ;-*

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 4:30 pm

        Thank you dear kakali….thank you so very much..ya actually I was thinking from quite a long time to write something..today I got time so thought to pen down my story….I will surely continue with my work if time permits

    14. Kaur Daljeet on March 20, 2017 3:08 pm

      Nice

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 5:27 pm

        Thank you dear

    15. Simin on March 20, 2017 3:47 pm

      Awwww thats soooo cute

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 5:29 pm

        Thank you dear. ..N I am Glad you liked my work

    16. Abdul hafiz(Uma) on March 20, 2017 4:41 pm

      Oh God,it’s so amazing.. Loved it to the core of my heart…Swasan moments are so cute and sweet??.. You described their emotion and feeling perfectly.. Keep writing like this dear..
      Take care
      Keep smiling?

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 5:23 pm

        Thank you dear..I am glad u like my work….Will surely Write if time permits

    17. sanu on March 20, 2017 4:50 pm

      waaaw its toooo good dear loved it…vaiting for next…tc

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 5:30 pm

        Thank you dear. …I hope I won’t make u wait for long..

    18. praju on March 20, 2017 5:12 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 5:31 pm

        Thank you dear

    19. Febi on March 20, 2017 5:32 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 5:54 pm

        Thanks dear

    20. Pramudi on March 20, 2017 6:38 pm

      Ayesha, this is simply awesome. Loved it.
      Do write more dear.

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 6:54 pm

        Thank You so much dear….
        I will surely write more if time permits

    21. vyshu10 on March 20, 2017 6:46 pm

      Awesome….welcome to TU

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 6:55 pm

        Thank You Dear

    22. pooja26 on March 20, 2017 8:02 pm

      hiii dear !!!!!!
      welcome to tu !!!!!
      howz u ??
      amazing piece of work/////
      loved it !!!!!!!
      keep writing…….

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 9:00 pm

        Thank you so much dear…I am glad you like it….

    23. Arshaanya on March 20, 2017 9:26 pm

      Loved it ayesha…
      Bt one thing sanky was not her second true love… he was swara first true love ??

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 11:17 pm

        Thank you much dear….N yes Sandler was Swara”s TRUE LOVE be it second. .but it was true…what Swara felt for Liksh was not Lovebirds was a infatuation. .so basically you are right

      • Arshaanya on March 20, 2017 11:25 pm

        Yup sanskar was swaraz true love be it second..
        As her first love was not even love it was jus infatuation..
        Bt u wrotr second true love which meant laksh as first true love…my point was dat only laksh was nvr her love ?????

      • Ayesha123 on March 21, 2017 1:41 pm

        Oh!!Thank you Dear. ..My Mistake…I was not able to Show what I felt. ..Actually I wanted to write Swara Second True love in a sense that Swara Second But True love…
        That “But” causes a mistake. ..Thank u for correcting me..I will make sure this won’t happen again. ..??

    24. sri on March 20, 2017 10:15 pm

      nice os☺

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 11:18 pm

        Thanks

    25. Aashi on March 20, 2017 10:39 pm

      As a first attempt, it was brilliant… You potrayed the emotions very well!!

      I would suggest you to write a next part of it, where they will unite!!…
      If possible do write ?

      <3

      • Ayesha123 on March 20, 2017 11:18 pm

        Thank you so much dear..I am glad u like it..
        it was a OS dear..so it’s it end…
        I will come up with a new story

    26. Sus on March 21, 2017 12:16 am

      Nyc

    27. Shifa96 on March 21, 2017 8:01 pm

      Awesome..keep writing.

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