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Home»Fan Fiction»Beintehaa #kanchi fs #shot 6 by #Trisha #The proposal
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Beintehaa #kanchi fs #shot 6 by #Trisha #The proposal

Trisha139By Trisha139September 5, 2017Updated:September 7, 201743 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hey guys trisha here
Thanku for all of ur lovely comments nd pls keep commenting even silent readers too I saw some of silent readers commented so thanku so much for tht !

Sorry for not replying to all of ur cmmnts on last shot but I promise I will do on this one !
Nd I have seen views seriously reduced anyway not an issue coming bck to the track…

Nd a very happy birthday to you ashnita ?????????
May god bless you !

“Change the past

Nor do I want to

Every day is a new start

When spent with you

A beautiful journey

A road with no end

Is what life is, when

Lived with a real friend

Happy Birthday”

And this part is specially dedicated to ashnita ?

…………………SHOT 6…………..

It was next day nd time for Kabeer to complete his dare ….!

Saachi had just completed her few duties nd was heading towards cafeteria ….
While Kabeer had instructed waiters to just allow Sachi into the cafeteria ….so at that time it was only Saachi entered in the cafeteria trying to know wht was happening ? Why they weren’t allowing any other person to enter …. as the main door was half closed still no one was able to see anything inside the canteen area; waiters had already left ….!
Saachi entered nd turned around just to found dr Kabeer there …..!

Saachi-(mad stalker and khduus mentor )- sir ?

Kabeer – yes actually I wanted to tell u something important…!

*krish was watching them secretly from some point ….! *

Saachi – yes sir !

Kabeer- wo….actually…. that……he….!

Saachi – yes….whom sir !
(In mind- ab aya unth phad ke niche)

Saachi remembered how Pragya listened to krish nd kabeers conversation abt the bet to propose her …!

Krish (in mind)- say it idiot just do that !

Kabeer- I mean that dr Singhania ; do u know abt his patient ?

Saachi- oh yes I know that !
(In mind – how weird )

Kabeer-(in mind – oh God Kabeer don’t be shy just say that nd tell her that was a bet ; see its just a small thing just do )

Saachi turned to go nd again was stopped by his voice …!

Kabeer- Saachi ; wait a second !

Saachi- yes sir !

Kabeer – I wanted to say ….I mean something I wanna tell !

Kabeer-(fine Kabeer enough of ur hide nd seek just close ur eyes nd spit that else that krish will not stop blackmailing u )

He just closed his eyes nd said in one go…

Kabeer- Saachi ; you know we men ; just bent in front of three women ….one goddess Durga…. second our mother ….Nd third ….

Saying this he bent on his knees with his face bent too ….!

Nd stood after 3-4 seconds …!

He opened his eyes after standing straight nd unknowingly his eyes once again met her eyes !

At first she took that as a bet in fact that was a bet … still looking in his intense eyes …filled with so much feelings she could see the passion in his eyes for her ; for few seconds she felt like he was not lying at all ….it was what he really meant to say ….!

After few seconds they got in their senses nd looked around !

Kabeer – that….that was just a bet ! Hope u won’t mind !
And …and it was break time that’s why I wasn’t ur mentor here !

Saachi-(said like she meant that) r u sure ?

Her one question raised thousand questions in his mind but he needed to be ltient nd behave casual at that time !
She said “ok” nd turned to go ….
Being still turned in opposite side she remarked ” eyes speak louder than words …”

Kabeer – what ?

Saachi- is a good saying !

Nd she left !

Unknowingly he told of all three from her what she hd for him in her …. Nd replaced that with so much passion for him…both knew somewhere either that was a truth or was going to be a truth !

She got outside…

A group of three girls were standing there with their jealous faces nd specially of middle one ;”who else than riya!”

Riya – 2 din hue nhi aae nd she is trying to snatch my Kabeer from me!

Madhu- yes nd what they both were doing in cafeteria alone…!

Bala- u need to do something riya!

Riya fumes

Outside the cafeteria

Isha- show us fast !

Saachi – what ?

Isha- yr that spy camera that we placed in ur pendant !
(She bites her tongue)

Saachi – what ! Are u serious guys !

Pragya- ok leave na now pls show us pls pls…! Just one time that recorded video !

Saachi- no only this is ur punishment !

Both of them made puppy faces nd atlast she showed them that nd after that she deleted the video from that. Sd card nd kept with her in a secret chip !

Isha- by god yr it looked like he meant that !

Pragya- haan yr kasam se ! I say u should have said him yes !

Saachi- are you mad guys he’s our teacher !

Isha- then what u like her!

Saachi- enough of this topic guys ! Now from now onwards no one will talk abt him just concentrate on our goal .

On the other hand in kabeers cabin !

Krish- by god bhai you could have given these lines to me ; I would have 15-20 gfs by now !

Kabeer glares at him nd he shuts his mouth !

Kabeer- ur dare is done now u have to tell the truth to all ur gfs nd u can’t blackmail mom this time else be ready to be on my hands …!

The day passed normally both were feeling little embarrassed nd tried to ignore whenever they see or pas across each other…!

Saachi wa working normally in her ward examining the patients !

Veer comes from behind ;

Veer- hello miss golgappa !

Saachi- who’s she ? Nd who r u ?

Veer- don’t u know ? I am the most handsome nd cutest boy of this hospital nd u r miss golgappa !

Saachi- its dr Saachi !

Veer- no I like ur cheeks so I’ll call u miss golgappa from today!

Saachi- ur wish (still busy in her work )

Veer – by the way I listened u spoke in front of dr kapoor many times ; I mean how brave r u !

Saachi- can I do my work !

Veer- can’t u behave sweetly ! Huh !

Saachi- ok say !

Veer – I know ur secret !
But don’t worry I won’t reveal to anyone !

Saachi- what rubbish !

Precap- falling for him ?

So this was in this part guys
And I wanna ask u guys after this I will post next part of this nd then u guys want an os or next part ?

stay tuned keep commenting keep giving ur love nd lots of love to all my readers !
Regards
Trisha

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    43 Comments

    1. Palak.Sharma on September 5, 2017 8:33 am

      Dang… Sanchi got played by Kabir so easily… and the spy cam?. Amazing as usual

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 5:49 pm

        Thankyou palak . Glad u like it

    2. Anee on September 5, 2017 8:50 am

      Wow trishu amazing updates and yaa plz post os ???luv u dear

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 5:50 pm

        Thanku anee nd sure

    3. Ashnita on September 5, 2017 9:06 am

      OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww outstandinggggggggggggggggg amazingggggggggggggggggggg awesomenessssssssssssssßssss historic lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ravishing mindblowing fantastic marvelous fabulous again u nailed and thank you very very very much this best gift ever sweetie u killed me for giving me so much love i didn’t know i have many sweeties and u made me cry for showing so much love anyways lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so much sweetheart and waiting for next part or os

      • niyaaa on September 5, 2017 11:27 am

        Happy birthday ashnita may god bless u , many many happy returns of the day …luvvvv u and lots of kisses for u muahhhh..

      • riyarocks on September 5, 2017 5:20 pm

        sorry for being late dear, but anyways better late than never……..A very happy b’day to u Ashnita dear, wish u a happy & cheerful life ahead……live every moment today & alwz……..enjoy this date(& don’t eat too much cake without me……..haha……just kidding)….

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 5:51 pm

        Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thanku so much ashnita for this beautiful comment nd not to mention sweetie U r like my sister

    4. Dhruti on September 5, 2017 9:16 am

      i want next part
      and today ff is superb
      and happy birthday Ashnita god bless you dear

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 5:51 pm

        Thanku dhruti nd sure

    5. Priyanshi on September 5, 2017 9:53 am

      I’m eagerly waiting for next update.
      Nd if u don’t mind can u pls write both.
      Nd rest is urs choice ??
      Luv u trisha
      Ur silent reader
      Priyanshi

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 5:52 pm

        Thanku so much Priyanshi nd sure don’t worry both will be soon here

    6. Ashnita on September 5, 2017 9:53 am

      thank you Divya

      • QVZRQE3M on September 5, 2017 12:14 pm

        Hey dear many many happy returns of the day.

      • Sajnana900 on September 5, 2017 1:24 pm

        I wish u million smiles
        I wish u laughter
        I wish u million more moment to remember ur birthday for
        May every thing u want become reality
        May this day be the happiest day for you
        Happy birthday Ashnita may GOD gives u
        entire world’s happiness

    7. Khamoshi on September 5, 2017 10:24 am

      Trisha u r amazing. No more words can describe ur work. Good Job

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 5:53 pm

        Thanku so much khmoshi glad u like it

    8. Priyanshi on September 5, 2017 10:56 am

      This shot was awesome trisha.
      And my eagerly waiting for ur next ff or Os.
      And if you don’t mind then pls post Os first. But don’t update next ff late coz I’m eagerly waiting for next episode too.
      Luv u trisha ??
      Your sweet sister/friend
      Priyanshi

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 5:53 pm

        Thanku so much Priyanshi nd sure I will do that sweetie
        Luv u too loads
        Sweetie

    9. niyaaa on September 5, 2017 11:25 am

      Minblowingg marvellous episode as usual trisha i want nxt part of it too but ist os plzzz u r not update any os from lastfew days so ist os then nxt part nd rest on u keep it up dear luvvv u sweetie….

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 5:54 pm

        Thanku so much niyaa nd don’t worry both will be here soon

    10. alia on September 5, 2017 11:27 am

      Amazing

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 5:54 pm

        Thanku

    11. QVZRQE3M on September 5, 2017 12:16 pm

      Trisha what should I write now??? Literally don’t hv anything left to praise u nd ur work
      U know as usual it is amazing so no need to say it
      Bt I really don’t find anything to praise u dear
      I will only say one thing u r just “out of this world” …… this can only describe u dear.
      ????

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 5:56 pm

        Thanku so much dear for this beautiful comment ur cmmnt made my day sweetie

    12. Divya on September 5, 2017 1:08 pm

      OMG it’s amazing Trishu and what secret veer know wow it’s awesome and can’t wait now plss update it soon

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 5:56 pm

        Thanku divya that means so much to me

    13. Tiya on September 5, 2017 1:10 pm

      Os plus next part I want both… Superb episode Trisha… ?

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 5:57 pm

        Sure tiya nd thanku

    14. Amnaa on September 5, 2017 1:14 pm

      Nice story

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 5:59 pm

        Thanku

    15. Moonlight25 on September 5, 2017 1:15 pm

      Sweetie, I was speechless after reading your part….it was so good the way Kabir proposed her….was the best…..and the spy camera….tooo good….i don’t have any words to describe you…actually I would like both….but since you haven’t uploaded any OS for some days….plz upload that or if you can both…keep up the good work

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 6:01 pm

        Thanku tania ur comment made my day nd don’t worry I will post both but with a little time difference as os will be huge

    16. Sajnana900 on September 5, 2017 1:26 pm

      Hey trisha the epi was super duper hit u again nailed it
      I cant understand what to say u r jzt a best ever best writer

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 6:02 pm

        Aww thankyou so much sanjana

    17. SIYA on September 5, 2017 1:43 pm

      OH MY GOD………..IT WAS FABULOUS……………..JUST LOVED IT…………..SANCHI’S REPLY WAS AWESOME…………UR WRITING IS SIMPLY FLAWLESS…………..YOU ARE SUCH A GREAT WRITER………….AND THE PRECAP SAYS ‘FALLING FOR HIM’………………..WHO IS HIM HERE…………..KABIR OR VEER……………….DON’T KEEP THIS A SUSPENSE……….I CANT WAIT TO KNOW…………..UR STORY IS FANTASTIC………………..
      PLZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE SOON

      UR READER
      SIYA

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 6:03 pm

        Thanku siya nd I don’t think after reading the epi u should be confused but I like love kanchi so I guess u know sweetie
        Luv u

    18. Sana on September 5, 2017 2:41 pm

      Oh my gosh it’s just superb……Trisha u just made me speechless

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 6:03 pm

        Thankyou so much sana

    19. riyarocks on September 5, 2017 5:25 pm

      trisha dear, yet again…another superrrrrrrrr se uparrrrrrrrr waala update……..u r simply amazing, mind blowing………what can I say about this…kuch bachaho toh kahu naa………like hamesha u keep writing osm updates……..& leave me spellbound as usual…….luv u a lot my dear cutie pie………….

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 6:04 pm

        Awwww thanku so much riya nd u know me too love sonarika bhadoria a lot luv u loads sissy nd my chocopie

    20. Abhilasha on September 5, 2017 9:08 pm

      Superb episode trishu dear and really proposal was so wonderful……. Loved iit!!

      • Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 9:51 pm

        Thankyou abhilasha glad you like it

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