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Home»Fan Fiction»Beintehaa #kanchi fs #shot 1 by #Trisha
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Beintehaa #kanchi fs #shot 1 by #Trisha

Trisha139By Trisha139August 31, 201746 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hello guys …I am
Trisha here back with my first chapter shot of new story …
“Beintehaa”

First of all guys thankyou for your comments nd appreciation on my precious story…

It’s a sincere request to all of my readers as well as my silent readers please give your reviews about this new story …I am quite nervous with this fs…
And thts my 72nd post on TU …Nd not so soon but I am excited for the century ??
Sorry for being over excited but I was just kidding

Further let’s not waste more time …(I know I hv wasted lot of ur time ?) nd continue to the chapter ….!

………..SHOT 1…………..

A dark terrace is shown ….there a boy and a girl is standing ….!
Girl is wearing a long decorated gown with long metal earrings high heels nd loose hairs with light makeup….

Boy – I love u miss …will you marry me …?

He takes out a box with a diamond ring from his pocket nd extended his hand towards the girl nd himself bent on his knees ….!

Girl is having a stethoscope around her neck…!

Girl- yes why not …!

He makes her wear the ring ..

Boy- baby but pls take out this telescope !

Girl(angrily)- shut up ! Thts my first goal..so don’t dare !

He romantically holds her hand nd drifts towards him…

She- “sssh” first show me your mbbs degree …!

Boy- here it is !

He shows her his degree nd then….he leans on her towards her lips…

“Uthja chulbul pandey “…someone shouted at the peak ….immediately patting at someone’s cheeks ….

She works up with a gasp…

Nd yells…”what the hell yr u agin spoiled my first kiss u idiot”

And guess wht she too got the hath reply ….”babes kiss me !
But pls get up we have lots of things to do else that makeup queen will repeat her makeup as she did from last half an hr “…

(That “someone” is Saachi)
Saachi- yuk! Chiiiii! I will not kiss u ! Chiii !

Pragya- shut up ! I am asking on cheeks …duffer !

Saachi- oh then fine ….! Pls lemme sleep just 5 minutes pls only 1 kiss pkka!

Pragya- ok mt uth kumbhkran…i m deleting your shaadi dot com account….

Only to find someone shouting ….”nhiiiii” nd she again woke up gasping ….!

All got ready…they needed to pack their stuff that day as the day after that day wd their first day at sdch…time skips to the showroom …..

Saachi- nhi bhaiya show tht right one …this is so small…!

Isha- baby doll…r u planning to get fit into this ..!

Saachi- huh ! Atleast bag should have some space …!

Pragya- ishaaa understand yr she’ll buy gn acc to her amount of books …!

Shopkeeper shows them a bag as req by Saachi…!

Saachi- yes bhaiya this is perfect ….!

Before they could speak further someone came from backside looking at the bag…!

He- perfect …! Right krish ?

Krish(kabeers frnd)- of course ekdm jhkaas…!

Saachi- o mr…we choose that so look for something else !

Kabeer- never…! I take what I like !

Saachi- hd hai ! Hot ho that doesnt men u will do what u want…(she bites her tongue)

Kabeer- what ? Hot ?

Saachi- taaref chodke kisi or bag pr dhyaan do…!

Krish (whispered to kbeer)- pehli baar someone spoke infront of u my bro! Propose her today only !

Kabeer gave him a glare to shut him …!

Shopkeeper- sir; mam pls cooperate I don’t have the same size anymore this is the last piece !

Saachi- no problem bhaiya he will adjust …pls make our bill !

Pragya- haan bhaiy jldi kijiye…!

Kabeer- no way I will take this ….!(angrily)

Saachi- uncle pls take something else …you not fit into this …?

Kabeer was just enraged by her word “uncle”….!

Krish tried calm him but failed till then the girls cleared their bills nd moved outside….in the building of the mall nd then towards parking lot !

Kabeer just couldn’t handle this …Nd quickly followed them to the parking nd hold saachis hand before letting her sit in the car…!

Ish nd prgya had already sat in the car but they could see this nd same was for krish he was standing there trying to calm Kabeer…!

He jerked herself towards her …

Saachi- what the hell !

Kabeer- how dare u call me that ?

Saachi- uncle !

Kabeer- I know that …!

Saachi- kasam se I said truth …!

Kabeer was at first angry at her but seeing her antics even after his anger he was just lost in her ; their eyes met….Nd his anger just reached the delhi nagar nigams dustbin…!

After few seconds

Krish – ahm ahm !

Both came in senses nd felt awkward nd immediately left for their places…!

Precap- kanchi in front of each other…

Saachi- Amrish puri yhan ?

Kabeer- ye yhan? Stalking me ?

Pls pls give ur sweetest comments guys that really means a lot to me nd tata tc see u soon in next shot !
Regards
TRISHA

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    46 Comments

    1. Vasundhara on August 31, 2017 9:05 pm

      super trisha…i loved it…tooooooo good

      • Trisha139 on August 31, 2017 10:49 pm

        Thanku glad you liked it

    2. Anee on August 31, 2017 9:18 pm

      woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow Trishu amazing, mindblowing ,superbbb. aur batao kiya kahun main………………………………………..I was told you earlier that no words for you yaaaaar…….

      • Trisha139 on August 31, 2017 10:49 pm

        Awww thanku so much anee
        Ur comment made my day sweetie …

    3. kanchi on August 31, 2017 9:27 pm

      Chill sweetie as always it wss fab. And dont you worry about it . I realy loved it

      • Trisha139 on August 31, 2017 10:50 pm

        Thankyou sweetie …I am so happy you like it

    4. QVZRQE3M on August 31, 2017 9:31 pm

      Amazing Trisha sanchi nd kabir seem so different in it loved it to the core plzz post soon dear.

      • Trisha139 on August 31, 2017 10:51 pm

        Thanku so much dear nd thanks for liking this one

    5. kanchi on August 31, 2017 9:32 pm

      So funny cant stop laugh. And new type of ff attract alot

      • Trisha139 on August 31, 2017 10:51 pm

        Thanku kanchi that means a lot sweetie

    6. Neha7873 on August 31, 2017 10:26 pm

      Simply superb …

      • Trisha139 on August 31, 2017 10:51 pm

        Thankyou neha

    7. anu on August 31, 2017 10:36 pm

      What a starting …….it is just amazing….keep it up…… please please please update soon……????

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 6:21 am

        Thnku and sure

    8. Abhilasha on August 31, 2017 10:55 pm

      Wowww trishu congo for 72th post and this was really light hearted and nagae nigam dustbin was hilarious!!
      I loved it to value of pi!!

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 6:22 am

        Thanku abhilasha …I am glad u liked it sweetie

    9. Rajnandini on August 31, 2017 10:56 pm

      Soooo cute story yaar….maine to pehle title pe hi fidda ho gaye….its such a osm…title and outstanding fs…..and kabeer uncle!…thats not fair sanchi….loved it yaar….always great.waiting eagerly for next part..love u

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 6:23 am

        Awww thanku so much vrushti….ur words are honour so glad to see u as Hm reader …love u too

    10. Ashnita on August 31, 2017 10:59 pm

      Wowwww u again nailed it this is outstanding marvelous lovely awesome ravishing lovely amazing superb mindblowing and many more no words to say again . U stole my all words grand salute to u I can’t stop smiling kuch toh daya kardo it’s so amazing huggs and kisses to u and luv u very very much

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 6:25 am

        Thanku so much ashnita … I am so happy u liked it ….nd yes ur cmmnt made my day sweetie
        Return hugs nd kisses from my side to you ; lots of love to u ?

    11. Premamohan on August 31, 2017 11:09 pm

      Wowww good super duper good pls update next…

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 6:25 am

        Thanku nd sure

    12. niyaaa on August 31, 2017 11:19 pm

      Hey trisha episode iis woooooow spandabulous fantabulastic fantastic awsm start n m waiting for ur 100 update or century so fast update regularly hehehehe…..

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 6:26 am

        Thanku so much niyaa nd yeah sure hehe ???

    13. Divya on August 31, 2017 11:30 pm

      Wow Trishu this was awesome amazing fabulous mind blowing ur awesome sweetie

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 6:27 am

        Thankyou so much divya ????

    14. riya on August 31, 2017 11:52 pm

      wow, amazing update my Cutie pie…….what else can I say other than….it was a superrrrrrrr se uparrrrrrrr waala episode……..72nd post…….no, not possible……..feels like abhi hi toh padhna shuru kiya hai…………never ever want a break in this process………just keep writing………waiting for 100….200…..& so on posts……..& never ever want this to stop………u r such a great writer………. luv u a lot dear……….

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 6:29 am

        Awwwww thanku so much my chocopie nd sure sure I am always there for U guys…love u too my dear may god bless u ?

    15. Sana on September 1, 2017 12:23 am

      It’s really nice…..kanchi nok -jhok was just awesome…..

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 6:29 am

        Thanku sana

    16. Moonlight25 on September 1, 2017 2:49 am

      Sweetie, this was fab…i have to open my dictionary to look for words to describe you and your ff…amazing yaar…you are took good and can t wait to see your next epi…and congratulations for your 72th post….hmm 72 still too little? a writer like you should be 10000 right? I won’t bore you with my comment…love you dear ??

      • Moonlight25 on September 1, 2017 2:50 am

        And sorry for asking what does the title mean ..sorry dear I don’t know Hindi that much

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 6:34 am

        That’s absolutely ok sweetie …”Beintehaa” means “unlimited”; “without an ending” “to the infinity ” like “unlimited love “we can say or may be “beintehaa mohobatt “…!
        Sorry for being an boring explainer but I hope u got that else u can google it also …!

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 6:32 am

        Hehe ? of course nd thankyou so much tania…it is an honour to have u ; a great writer as a reader …Nd yes I can never be bored wd ur comment so chillax…lots of love to you too

    17. Palak.Sharma on September 1, 2017 9:16 am

      This is really good. Loved the uncle part ?!! Can’t wait to read more

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 10:40 am

        Thanku palak glad u like it

    18. Sanjukta on September 1, 2017 9:31 am

      Grt start yr…lovely content…post nxt part soon…

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 5:10 pm

        Thanku nd sure sanyukta

    19. RuCh23 on September 1, 2017 10:27 am

      First of all congrats on your 72th post ??? about the story amazing start dear and it was sooo funny??? how Kabir and Sanchi fought

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 10:41 am

        Thanku so much ruwani that really means a lot

    20. Tiya on September 1, 2017 11:01 am

      This story is really very good matlab thoda sa hatke hai… Good Trisha very nice.. ??????

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 5:10 pm

        Thanku tiya for commenting sweetie

    21. SIYA on September 1, 2017 12:31 pm

      ITS REALLY AN AWESOME STORY…………….IN LOVE WITH UR FF……………HOW CAN U WRITE SOMETHING SO LOVELY………….U EXPRESS YOUR IDEAS IN A BEAUTIFUL AND CLEAR WAY……….ITS AN INTERESTING PLOT…………..
      WAITING FOR UR NEXT UPDATE

      WITH LOTS OF LOVE
      UR SILENT READER
      SIYA

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 5:11 pm

        Thankyou so much siya … this is really an hnour to write something for u guys …love u too my dear

    22. AnahitaAnnie on September 1, 2017 8:04 pm

      I am laughing my hearts out after reading this “uncle” ?? was the most amazing part. U are such a creative writer.. A big hug for being such an amazing writer.. Totally in love with this story..

      • Trisha139 on September 1, 2017 8:59 pm

        Thnku so much annie . Glad you like it that really means a lot to me

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