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Home»Fan Fiction»Being with my so called kidnapper # episode 47 # Maid Vanshu
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Being with my so called kidnapper # episode 47 # Maid Vanshu

Aisha08By Aisha08September 7, 202193 Comments6 Mins Read
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Aayi..aayi ..aayi..me update layi..layi ..layi..

Hello peeepies aagyi me .

Finally i wrote the chappy..

Yr i came at home at 9 pm..but i tried to wrote and did..

Let’s start

Scene 1

Next day

Kitchen

Riddhima’s pov

I was sitting on kitchen slab munching some chips and my not so pyara hone wala pati is cooking Chinese for me..

“Vanshu add that one ketchup “i said munching another chips

“I know how to cook.. don’t pass orders sitting idle here..” he said glaring at me..

“You wanna die and make me vidhwa before our marriage by eating food made by me..” i said rolling my eyes

“Ohh yes!! How can i forget i have the best chef that too niche se ” he said cutting onion..

_____

“Yummmmm” i moaned in pleasure as food made by vanshu is heaven..

“Will u stop moaning” he asked whinning like a baby..

Oh..my desperate raisinghania..have some sabar..

I was missing this moments like hell .

My care free Vanshu .. just like a normal couple..

It was literally horrifying seeing him smirking all the day..

Pov ends

Scene 2

Riddhima’s room

Vansh’s pov

“Vanshu pink one”Β  she said sitting on bed pointing towards her dressing table

I instantly grabbed the pink nail paint kept there..

“Not this one..i want that one pink ” she said pointing towards another bottle

“Are they even different” i asked examining both the bottles carefully

“You boys are useless … color blind.. can’t u see this one is cherry pink and this one is chrimson pink” she preached me showing both the bottles seperately

Still I can’t distinguish between the two..

Can u imagine the great VR ..mafai god of asia is applying nail polish to a lady ..

Love is not blind..lover is blind..

My riddhu baby made me do the most weird things in the world..

No body will believe i am the same God VR whom people fear just by listening his name..

“Vanshu apply properly don’t smudge” she asked pointing towards her feet

” Or kuch ” i asked glaring her..

“Will u do nail art for me ” she asked smiling sheeply at me…

“I wanna do some other art” i said moving towards her lips..

Her lips always attracts me.. holding her face between my palms i leaned to her lips just to taste them..

“You smoked yesterday don’t kiss me now” she said keeping her plam between my hand and her lips

“But i smoked yesterday na baby” i said with dog eyes.. c’mon man..from which angle i look like a puppy..

My baby panda made me kutta only..

” Can u leave smoking for me ” she said in a serious tone..

I can even leave breathing if she asks..then what’s this smoking is..

“Off course baby i can leave..i will never smoke again ” i said kissing her forehead

Pov ends

Riddhima’s pov

“What kind of a man u are..if u can leave smoking then what’s the guarantee that u won’t leave me ” i said twisting my face😏..

Karwa li bejjati..aagya swad..his expression clearly justified this lines..

Trying to be a gentleman..hahhaπŸ˜‚ended up being popat raisinghania..

I burst into laughter seeing his fallen face

” That was a bad one”, he said turned his face showing me his fake anger..

I encircled him from behind with my arms and kissed his cheeks …

“Awww.. don’t be angry bird..i am not gonna pacify u ” i said and ran quickly showing my tongue to him

“Youuuuu!!” He shouted from behind and ran to catch me..

Pov ends

Scene 2

Afternoon

Vansh’s pov

We are having our lunch..oops sorry.. i am having my lunch..she is only playing with her food..

“What’s the matter sweetheart” i asked straightly

“Umm..wo..wo..i want..”she stammered playing with the food in her plate..

If that food have participated in any competition it would have gotten first price for playing this much..

Poor food!! Rest in peace..

“Speak” i said in hope that she won’t ask for any weird demand which I won’t be able to fullfill..

Pov ends

Riddhima’s pov

I am hell nervous.. don’t know what he will say .

Whether he will allow me or not..

“Speak jaan”, he said softly

“Iwanttomeetmanyata” i said in one go.. closing my one eye

“Did your mouth participated in marathon” he asked rolling his eyes..

Ok fine !!!i huffed in annoyence

“I want to meet Maanyata” i said and his expression changed..

“Why” he asked wiping his mouth with tissue..

“She must be feeling alone na..plz na vansh..i too want to see her ” i said pleading to him …

Pov ends

Vansh’s pov

Her puppy eyes!! How can i resist them..

Although i didn’t want her to meet Maanyata but i agreed giving up to her demand..

“Get ready in evening” i said and left the place not to increase her demand more..

_______

”Β  How far your penthouse is ” she huffed in anger sitting in car from past one hour

“Just few kms more” i said ruffling her hairs..

“Vanshhhh!!! “She said stretching my name more..

Congratulations vansh.. something weird is on the way..

Pov ends

Riddhima’s pov

“Hmm” he said looking straight from the car..

“Don’t u think angre should move forward in his life ” i said looking outside the window

“And why so” he said scrunching his brows

“I know you two are best buddies but he also has his personal life na .

Like u are with me..u can share everything with me although u don’t..but u can..

The place of life partner is different na ..” i said playing with my fingers..

“Hmm right but he never looked at any girl..what can i do.”, He said rolling his eyes

” What if he has but didn’t tell u ” i said chuckling

“Never.. angre can’t hide anything from me” he said with full confidence..

“Let’s see…what will happen” i said and looking outside the window enhaling the fresh air..

Pov ends

Vansh’s pov

I stopped the car in front of my penthouse..

It is situated in outskirts of mumbai..

Opening the door for my queen i passed my hand to her..

Clinging onto my arm she literally ran shouting like a kid admiring the beauty of house..

It has the same rose garden which my shimla’s house had..

I plucked a flower and tucked it in her hairs .

We smiled reminiscing the our first rose moment in shimla..

“Gulaab for my gulaab” i said and kissed her forehead..

Entering to house..i saw the gate open..

Who the hell kept this door open..

We both strolled into the house searching for Maanyata

Our legs automatically halted outside the kitchen seeing the sight in front of us..

I looked at riddhima with horrified expression who was always looking at me with a amused face..

Pov ends

DoneΒ  done dana done βœ…

Hope u all like it …

Ps:merko boring lga

Comments tapka dena

Lob u all

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Aisha08

    Well i m not so good at writing ff as i m shayar and i love to pen down my thoughts in shyri..and here i m exploring my writing skills

    93 Comments

    1. Prabhleen 😊 on September 7, 2021 9:09 am

      Fabulous episode✨. Loved it😘. Suspense mein chod diya . I guess unhone Angre aur Maanyata ko saath mein dekha. And it wasn’t boring at all.

    2. prapti0809 on September 7, 2021 9:10 am

      Aisa kya dekh liya jo inki aakhien bahar aagayi Haan,πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ dekhte hain guess sahi hai ki nahi mera
      Amazing di loved it

      • prapti0809 on September 7, 2021 9:11 am

        Kahin angre or manyata ka kuch chal to nahi raha hai🀨🀨

    3. Japjot Kaur on September 7, 2021 9:17 am

      Wonderful di
      No di it is not boring

    4. Tanya K on September 7, 2021 9:34 am

      Fantastic loved it very very very nice❀❀❀❀

    5. Akshara on September 7, 2021 9:36 am

      Awesome

    6. Mennahussein55 on September 7, 2021 9:38 am

      Awesome

    7. RIVAN on September 7, 2021 9:43 am

      AMAZING

    8. Anannya07 on September 7, 2021 9:46 am

      Amazing update di loved it ❀

    9. AarushiSoni on September 7, 2021 9:47 am

      Naah not boring.. u made me laugh before my examπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      Amazing ❀️
      Pkka Manyata aur Angre ka kuch toh chakkar hai!!
      Let’s see.
      Amazing Di, I repeat, don’t exhaust urself πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»

    10. RianshπŸ₯° on September 7, 2021 9:56 am

      Superb episode
      Its not boring at all also I was missing it so badly

      Post soon πŸ˜ƒ

    11. Liakshy on September 7, 2021 10:04 am

      Amazing… Angre ka chakkar kahi Manyata se toh nhi.. Oye Hoyeeee

    12. Jiaa on September 7, 2021 10:05 am

      Superb

    13. Hina on September 7, 2021 10:06 am

      Very nice

    14. Tamannah on September 7, 2021 10:07 am

      Fabulous

    15. Disha on September 7, 2021 10:09 am

      Awesome

    16. Niharika on September 7, 2021 10:10 am

      Amazing

    17. Gehna on September 7, 2021 10:11 am

      Nice.

    18. Thakur Priyanka on September 7, 2021 10:20 am

      Awesome episode Aishu again you ended with suspense eagerly waiting for next update

    19. DDD on September 7, 2021 10:22 am

      Awesome dear loved it very much πŸ₯° I think angre or manyata are having some scene. And take care of ur self ❀️πŸ₯°

    20. Riansh fan on September 7, 2021 11:10 am

      Amazing

    21. Ria on September 7, 2021 11:10 am

      Awesome

    22. Rishi on September 7, 2021 11:10 am

      Superb

    23. Avni on September 7, 2021 11:11 am

      Fantastic

    24. Anu on September 7, 2021 11:12 am

      Fabulous

    25. Aakruthi on September 7, 2021 11:12 am

      Wonderful

    26. Anju on September 7, 2021 11:13 am

      Nice

    27. Anshitha on September 7, 2021 11:13 am

      Lovely

    28. Unknown on September 7, 2021 11:14 am

      Mind blowing

    29. Shalu on September 7, 2021 11:14 am

      ❀️❀️❀️❀️

    30. Silent on September 7, 2021 11:19 am

      What an episode man……..
      It was a cute epi….
      I am happy that you gave a companion for our angre
      Manyatha ko bhi thum ne raaste se hata diya
      Hats off to you
      Post when you are free
      Even though I am eager to read the next epi, I don’t want to see you exhausted
      Lots of love ❀️❀️❀️❀️

    31. Surya on September 7, 2021 11:19 am

      Amazing

    32. Supriya on September 7, 2021 11:19 am

      Awesome

    33. Sneha on September 7, 2021 11:20 am

      Superb

    34. Siya on September 7, 2021 11:20 am

      Fantastic

    35. Srishti on September 7, 2021 11:21 am

      Fabulous

    36. Sumisha on September 7, 2021 11:21 am

      Amazing dear

    37. Sreya on September 7, 2021 11:21 am

      Wonderful

    38. Misty on September 7, 2021 11:22 am

      Nice epi

    39. Mithra on September 7, 2021 11:22 am

      Lovely

    40. Miya on September 7, 2021 11:23 am

      Mind blowing

    41. M on September 7, 2021 11:23 am

      ❀️❀️❀️❀️

    42. Maya on September 7, 2021 11:25 am

      It was good epi dear
      Thanks for adding such cute scenes ☺️☺️☺️
      Eagerly waiting for the next update
      Post soon

    43. Maadhu on September 7, 2021 11:25 am

      Amazing

    44. Keerthi on September 7, 2021 11:26 am

      Awesome

    45. Kaira on September 7, 2021 11:26 am

      Superb

    46. Kripa on September 7, 2021 11:26 am

      Fantastic

    47. Krithi on September 7, 2021 11:30 am

      Fabulous

    48. Kichu on September 7, 2021 11:32 am

      Wonderful

    49. K on September 7, 2021 11:33 am

      Nice

    50. Tillu on September 7, 2021 11:34 am

      Lovely

    51. Preeti on September 7, 2021 11:35 am

      Mind blowing

    52. Payal on September 7, 2021 11:36 am

      πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

    53. Priya on September 7, 2021 11:38 am

      Aaj bhi suspense mein khatam kar diyaa…….
      Kya yaar soch soch ke meri hosh udne vaala hain….
      Angre aur Maanyata ke beech mein koi chakkar hai kya?????
      Agar aisa hai tho I am the happiest person…
      Eagerly waiting for the next update
      Post asap
      πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

    54. Pragya on September 7, 2021 11:39 am

      Amazing

    55. Punya on September 7, 2021 11:40 am

      Awesome

    56. Piya on September 7, 2021 11:41 am

      Superb

    57. Deepika on September 7, 2021 11:42 am

      Fantastic

    58. Diya on September 7, 2021 11:45 am

      Wonderful

    59. Drishti on September 7, 2021 11:46 am

      Nice

    60. Fidha on September 7, 2021 11:46 am

      Lovely

    61. Gayathri on September 7, 2021 11:47 am

      Mind blowing

    62. Hima on September 7, 2021 11:48 am

      πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

    63. Riya Dhar on September 7, 2021 11:51 am

      ❣️

    64. Jiya on September 7, 2021 11:52 am

      Vashi ko maid bana diyaa thumne……..
      It was super cute epi…..
      Ab Angre ka saath ek aur bhi hogi sandwich ban ne kaliyeπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€
      Eagerly waiting for the next update
      Post soon

    65. CharuSharma on September 7, 2021 11:54 am

      That was amazing……but why you left it at suspense πŸ₯°πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜’

    66. 1234Aayu on September 7, 2021 12:10 pm

      Wonderful di☘️
      It’s okay u can take break but don’t exert yourself much!
      Take care…

    67. Mahi sharma on September 7, 2021 12:27 pm

      Awesome update dii I loved it 😘😘

    68. Fatima on September 7, 2021 12:58 pm

      Awesome episode Aisha Di I was missing your writing for a long time since I finished reading your first ff……. Visited your profile and I got this ff there……. Its marvellous…you are amazing Di… It took me a week to read this ff and today I finished reading……. You are Fabulous Di and your ff’s are also amazing…… Love you β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️

    69. Cutuuu on September 7, 2021 1:12 pm

      Awesome ❀ Take care and proper rest πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

    70. Neetu on September 7, 2021 1:50 pm

      Nice

    71. Zara on September 7, 2021 3:35 pm

      Fabulous ❣️

    72. Lima on September 7, 2021 8:06 pm

      Amazing

    73. Jaanvi on September 7, 2021 8:07 pm

      Awesome

    74. Cutie pie 😁😁😁 on September 7, 2021 8:07 pm

      Superb

    75. 🀫🀫🀫 on September 7, 2021 8:08 pm

      Fantastic

    76. Vamika on September 7, 2021 8:08 pm

      Fabulous

    77. 😍😍😍😍 on September 7, 2021 8:09 pm

      Wonderful

    78. 😘😘😘😘😘 on September 7, 2021 8:09 pm

      Nice

    79. V on September 7, 2021 8:10 pm

      Lovely

    80. Vani on September 7, 2021 8:10 pm

      Mind blowing

    81. Vinu on September 7, 2021 8:10 pm

      πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

    82. Bantu on September 7, 2021 8:11 pm

      Super cute
      Amazing
      Awesome
      Post soon

    83. Nia on September 7, 2021 8:12 pm

      Fantastic
      Fabulous
      Wonderful
      Eagerly waiting for the next update
      Post asap

    84. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ on September 7, 2021 8:13 pm

      Nice
      Lovely
      πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

    85. Parita on September 7, 2021 10:47 pm

      Amazing episode di!
      It was so cute❀

    86. Jayashree on September 7, 2021 10:55 pm

      Wow amazing 😍😍❀️😍
      Thanks for updates Lovely updates 😊😍
      Keep rocking πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

    87. Priyadharshini on September 7, 2021 10:55 pm

      Super πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

    88. JJ on September 7, 2021 10:56 pm

      Wonderful ❣️❣️😍❀️😍❀️

    89. Vkjhp on September 7, 2021 10:56 pm

      Wow fabulous 😻😻❀️😻❀️

    90. Sree on September 7, 2021 10:57 pm

      Fantastic πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜πŸ˜β€οΈπŸ˜β€οΈ

    91. Acchu on September 8, 2021 8:48 am

      I think angre fall in loveπŸ™ŠπŸ™ŠπŸ™Š

    92. Varshini B on September 8, 2021 4:42 pm

      Amazing 😍❀️

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