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Home»Fan Fiction»Being with my so called kidnapper # episode 43 # mocked
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Being with my so called kidnapper # episode 43 # mocked

Aisha08By Aisha08August 31, 202183 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello peeepies aagyi me..

This epi is so emotional..dil se kamzor log sirf comment krke ja sakte hai..

Guys i am unable to reply to your comments but i read them all..and i am sooo happy 😍…

Few of readers were not liking the track..so all i can say is have patience guys.. I can’t reveal everything in one go.. just trust your author and i will serve u best

Lets start

Scene 1

Riddhima’s pov

It’s been night and Mr.latenight raisinghania didn’t come yet..

Hufff!! I am sleeping now..

Pulling duvet over me i lay down on bed but sleep was far away from my eyes..

Suddenly i felt some movements in my duvet .

My brain cells who were resting in peace few minutes ago got alerted ..

Jai hanuman gyan gun sagar…bhut pishach nikat nahi aave..jai bajrang bali..

I chanted whatever hymns came in my mind

I felt hot breath on my neck..

“Sweet-heart” a whisper came from my back and shouted jumping on bed

Bhoot bhoot..bappa bachao..bhoot agya..

“Riddhima..riddhima relex..its me.
Vansh” vansh said pulling me in his lap

Realisation hit me hard and i passed an instant glare to him…

“What was that..u scared me..Mr.ghost raisinghania ” i said almost shouting at him

Pov ends

Vansh’s pov

I was laughing obviously in my mind..

How my little Fierce kitten got scared..

I just wanted to bite her chubby cheeks..

Sbr vansh..sbr..first u have to pacify her..

“Sweetheart i was missing u..so i came to see u ” i said with innocence dripping from my voice

“Wow vansh..u should get an national award for lying that too on my face” she said getting down from my lap

“Riddhima i am not lying” i said trying to calm her down

“Why didn’t u come since morning ” she said and i left speechless

What should i say to her now..

Where was i..and what i was doing..

“Riddhima.. listen to me jaan” i tried not to shout on her

Pov ends

Riddhima – You know vansh..you think that i am dumb.. I can’t understand things that’s why u keep hidding everything from me..

And what were u saying u were missing me..

You come to me when u feel like..u don’t bother to know about my feelings

Vansh – Sweetheart..i ..

Riddhiima (shouting)- Don’t u dare… don’t u dare to call me sweetheart ..

SometimesΒ  i really wonder you are my Vanshu or not

Vansh- Jaan..i m your vansh only..

Riddhima (crying)- Nooo…you are not my vansh..you are The great VR..

The god of mumbai..who keeps bossing around everyone

My vanshu was loving caring..he used to love me..but u ..u just keep hurting me..

Its not like i don’t understand u..its like u don’t want me to understand u..

U can’t be my vansh…u can’t 😭

She broke down in front of him

Vansh – we love each other na jaan..

Riddhima (chuckling sadly)- Love…where that came from ..

Sometimes i really wonder do we really loved each other or not .

How could i not recognise your true colors..

Vansh (shouting)- oh yes…u don’t love me right.. that’s why u left me on our date night..hena ridhima

Vansh’s pov

My blood boiled listening her bullshit..

How could she doubt our love so easily..

Whatever i did i had my own reasons..she just can’t simply disrespect our love like this..

I shouted cluthching her shoulders tightly but seems like she is in something else mood today

Pov ends

Riddhima’s pov

“You want to know na why i left u that day ” i said shouting on him

” Yes i want to ” he said with equal intensity

” I got to know that day that the person the VRΒ  to whom my father sold me..is in shimla..

He is searching for me..i was worried for u..

I was not worried for my life but for u..

I couldn’t let them harm u..

To save u i ran away..but i didn’t know that the danger to which i was running was with me only..

I ran to save u from yourself only..

And see what destiny gave me..The VR..the god mafia abducted me..he abducted his own girlfriend..” i said all in one go..

He left speechless seeing my misery..

“You used me vansh ..u simply used me.. tell me how much price u paid for me..kitne me kharida tha mujhe vansh did u just buy a whore for urself “i said and i broke down turning my face..

Not getting any response from backside i turned only to see the room empty..

He left..again he left without answering my questions..

Whatelse can i expect more from him..

I said too much today but that was necessary..

He has to break this shell..

Just open up once vansh..i promise i won’t leave u ever..

Pov ends

Vansh’s pov

“Kitne me khrida tha mujhe vansh” her words keep echoing in my mind..

I left without saying anything to her.. because first time in my life i felt i ran out of words..

She considered herself a whore..how could she..

Kimat..like seriously i will pay for my love..i will pay for that love i was finding since ages..

“Boss” angre said passing a glass of water to me..

I threw the glass in frustration and collapsed on the floor

“Why always me angre..why..why my loved ones misunderstand me..

Don’t i deserve some love..

She ran away to save me and what i did..hurted her..but i was forced na angre.. u knowΒ  everything..na tell her na..i love her..i love her so much..”i said hugging angre who was consoling me..

Pov ends

Angre’s pov

The person who protected me like a shield whole life is lying on floor..

Why god!! Why are u so cruel towards him..

He didn’t cope up with one wound and u gave another

“Boss plz shant ho jayeye..bhabhi is just angry right now but she loves u alot” i said trying to soothe him

” I also love her alot angre..apni jaan se zada pyar krta hu me riddhima se.. you know na who is she..what she meants for me😭” he said and passed out in my arms

Tucking him to bed i left the room to do an important work…

Pov ends

Scene 2

Riddhima’s room

Riddhima’s pov

I was crying clutching the pillow cursing myself for hurting my vanshu..

No matter how wrong he is..he is mine..i love him..

Suddenly i felt the door of my room opened

“Vanshu” i whisperd happily thinking he must have come to see me..

“Angre ” i said in disappointment as i saw him standing on door with tears

“May i come in bhabhi” he said and i nodded in yes giving him permission

“I don’t have any right to say anything in your personal matter..

But once i was cupid in your relationship and its my duty to tell u guys that you are doing wrong

You know bhabhi some stories remain incomplete because they don’t have love in them..

But just look at your story..you both loveΒ  eachΒ  other immensely

And what u both are doing.. hurting each other..” he said looking at me

“What do u think i hurt him only” i said averting my gaze

” I am not saying you are wrong and he is right .

But just think for once..what your heart felt for him can be false..

The love the care u saw in his eyes can be false ..

I was like a baby to him..he protected me like a father..

And right now i witnessed the same strong person breaking down in front of my eyes

You are his world bhabhi.. don’t shatter his only happiness ” he said wiping his tears

“Why is he doing this” i said in hope that i will get some answer

“All i can say is..there is much more in the story which u don’t know..

Don’t hurt him plz..he needs u..and he won’t be able to stand this time if he falls” angre said and left the room

Did i do wrong by hurting him..

Shittt!! Why this things are getting so much complicated day by day..

I slept hugging his picture close to my heart thinking about him..

Pov ends

Done done dana done βœ…

Hope u all like it.

Comments tapka dena

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Aisha08

    Well i m not so good at writing ff as i m shayar and i love to pen down my thoughts in shyri..and here i m exploring my writing skills

    83 Comments

    1. Japjot Kaur on August 31, 2021 9:11 am

      Wonderful dear

    2. Akshara on August 31, 2021 9:12 am

      Awesome

    3. Prabhleen 😊 on August 31, 2021 9:16 am

      Emotional episode. I Trust you di . In fact the track is superb. Loved it. Eagerly waiting for knowing what is bothering Vansh.

    4. 1234Aayu on August 31, 2021 9:23 am

      Amazing! ☘️

    5. Mennahussein55 on August 31, 2021 9:52 am

      Awesome

    6. i roopanshi on August 31, 2021 10:00 am

      Kya baat hai , but missing ur shayrisπŸ’πŸ‘

    7. Acchu on August 31, 2021 10:02 am

      Awesome 😍

    8. RianshπŸ₯° on August 31, 2021 10:11 am

      Wonderful episode
      Post soon πŸ˜ƒ

    9. Ruhiii on August 31, 2021 10:19 am

      I’m impatient now uff u will kill it πŸ’―βš‘
      Awesome 😎

    10. Mahi sharma on August 31, 2021 10:23 am

      Amazing πŸ‘ update dii ….. I am mahi and I love your ff β™₯❀

    11. Hina on August 31, 2021 10:27 am

      Emotional one..Waiting for the true revelation.

    12. Tanvi_5117 on August 31, 2021 10:48 am

      Loved it ✨
      Amazing πŸ’™

    13. Mahi sharma on August 31, 2021 11:01 am

      Amazing πŸ‘update dii …

      I love it …. and I live your ff’s

    14. DDD on August 31, 2021 11:10 am

      Awesome episode dear loved it πŸ₯° now I am eager to know what is the connection between Vansh and Riddhima. ❀️πŸ₯°.

    15. Alisha Roy on August 31, 2021 11:12 am

      Wonderful

    16. Riansh fan on August 31, 2021 11:27 am

      Awesome

    17. Ria on August 31, 2021 11:27 am

      Amazing

    18. Rishi on August 31, 2021 11:28 am

      Superb

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      Fabulous

    21. Aakruthi on August 31, 2021 11:29 am

      Wonderful

    22. Anju on August 31, 2021 11:29 am

      Nice epi

    23. Unknown on August 31, 2021 11:30 am

      Lovely

    24. Shalu on August 31, 2021 11:30 am

      Mind blowing

    25. Silent on August 31, 2021 11:31 am

      πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

    26. Surya on August 31, 2021 11:33 am

      Such an emotional episode man………
      Now I am impatient to know the entire story.
      I trust u man ….go with the flow
      Post asap
      πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

    27. Sneha on August 31, 2021 11:33 am

      Awesome

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    37. Kaira on August 31, 2021 11:43 am

      Amazing episode Yaar
      Tumne mujhe emotional bana diyaa
      Aaj ka update mujhe aur impatient bana diya…..
      I know that you are busy and finding some time to update,
      Thank you for the update 😊😊😊😊
      Jaldi karke yeh track garab math karnaa, I trust you man……
      Go with the flow and make it awesome
      Eagerly waiting for the next update
      Post asap
      Lots of love ❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

    38. AarushiSoni on August 31, 2021 12:15 pm

      Amazing
      It was very emotional and portrayed beautifully di!
      Mind blowing ✨

    39. Maanvika on August 31, 2021 12:41 pm

      You greatly portrayed this episode, ….damn emotional
      and touched heart……loved itπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ˜˜
      Keep rocking dear!!!
      Waiting for next…

    40. Vibhuti on August 31, 2021 12:46 pm

      My favourite story and superb

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    53. Deepika on August 31, 2021 3:01 pm

      Wow Yaar
      What an episode………
      You portrayed each and every character so beautifully………
      It’s awesome
      Waiting for the next update
      Post soon
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      Wow!!!!!
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      Thanks for spending time for us…..
      Post asap
      πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

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    75. Jayashree on August 31, 2021 9:47 pm

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      Thanks for updates 😊❀️
      Keep rocking πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

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      Awesome episode Aishu eagerly waiting for next update

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