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Home»Fan Fiction»Being with my so called kidnapper # episode 30 # Kidnapped
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Being with my so called kidnapper # episode 30 # Kidnapped

Aisha08By Aisha08August 13, 2021157 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello peeepies aagyi me..

If u r disappointed with riansh seperation then plz wait for upcoming chappies..the story is gonna take 360Β° turn

I am thoda sa disappointed comments are declining day by day ..kyu bhai psnd ni ara kya .. isn’t the story is good..

Bs na kitna bolte ho tum logπŸ™„πŸ˜œ

Let’s start

Scene 1

Somewhere

A big mansion is shown.. covering by 100 body guards..

Suddenly a car stop at the entrance and two men came out ..

One is walking wearing black tuxedo with shades

Other man is walking behind him covering him with so many body guards

His pov

I am back… it’s gives so much peace to come back to ur land..

I guess my land and people were missing their god..

Yes..i am god..their god..the god whom they fears..the god whom they worship..

Even people trembles hearing my name from 100 km away..

I don’t even remember how many peopleΒ  died while deceving me..

A single mistake by them and I won’t mind reducing the useless burden from the earth..

The world should also know..who am i

Pov ends

Man (smirking)- The king is back to his territory..

Scene 2

Inside the mansion..

A girl is lying on bed unconscious..in a room

Her pov

Aaaaaahhhhhh!!! I opened my eyes with difficulty and my head is aching badly..

I fluttered my eye lashes to grasp the view around me..

Where am i..as far as i remember i was walking on road and then…aaaahhh!! Think riddhima think..

But this room.. this room seems luxurious..

I moved my eye balls in every direction..the room is 5 times bigger than our whole house in shimla…

ShimlaπŸ˜₯..my vanshu..what he must be doing..is he crying for me..i am sorry jaan..

But where am i..and how i ended up here..

I got up from bed and walked few steps suddenly the door opened and a woman in her mid forties enter holding a tray in her hand..

Seems like she is some staff as her dress seems to be formal..

But whose house is this..

She smiles at me and i blinked my eyes looking at her confusingly..

Pov ends

Riddhima (stammering)- Where am i..and who are u

Lady -D ‘souza.. my name is Mrs D’Souza..i am the most old staff here..

And God has given me charge to take care of u..

Riddhima (confuse)- God???

D’Souza – Yes..god..our master our boss..

Nobody can deny him neither i nor u..

He is our god..

Riddhima’s pov

What the heck?? is that man mad..how can he considers himself god..

Now my head is badly spinning..

I looked again to that lady..she seems kind and sweet..

She placed her hand on my head and said “No need to be scared dear..i am here for u only..and u are absolutely safe here”

Safe..i can’t be safe if my vanshu is not around..he must be missing me na..

I masked my expression again and smiled sadly at her..

Pov ends

D’Souza – My child!! Get ready God will be here any time and he wanna meet u..

He doesn’t like unpunctual people..

Riddhima -But i don’t have anything..to change

D’Souza – God has arranged everything for u .. just go to closet and get ready…

Riddhima’s pov

D’Souza leave leaving me all alone in this extremely big room..

Who is this god..and why do he cares for me..

I am not getting good vibes here..my heart is beating so fast as if something big is gonna happen today..

Shrugging my thoughts i walked towards the closest with trembling legs..

My whole body is shaking in fear.. thinking about who is this god..where my vanshu is..is he searching for me.. etc etc

As soon as i opened the closet my eyes pop out in shock..

Is this closet..this is for whole mumbai i guess

I never sawo this types of expensive and designer clothes..

Almost everything for me is here.. including dresses footware inner wear and makeup also..

But to my surprise everything is according to my taste..

Is this mere coincidence or what..i choosed a light weight dress for me and moved to washroom

Another shock..god do u want me to die here by this much shock..godπŸ™„..hufff!! Not again..i am getting agitated now by hearing god..bappa where am i struck..

Is this bathroom..my whole shimla can fit into these..

I am feeling as if i am dreaming its like movies only..

I am not habitual of this much luxury..for me the house of Vanshu was also big and this is beyond my imagination…

I removed my clothes and stand beneath the shower..as soon as hot water touched my body..i felt my all nerves calming down one by one..

Heaven..this is all i could muttured..

I picked the towel and dressed up in baby pink floral floor touch kurti with minimul makeup and big jhumkas..

As soon as i stepped out of washroom i found D’Souza standing there with a bright smile on her face..

Pov ends

D’Souza – you are looking like fairy my child..god must be happy seeing u like this..

Let’s go downstairs..

Riddhima’s pov..

What . happy..why..gosh why this is so confusing i wish my vanshu could be here with me..but i was the one who left him..

I stepped out of the room with D’Souza and here comes the another shock..

Is this even house..this is mansion for god’s πŸ™„no no no..not again..for heaven’s sake..yeah this is much better

I moved my eyes in every direction adoring the beautiful mansion..

This is just amazing..but what am i doing here..

I asked D’Souza as soona as we stepped on first stair..

” Why am i here D’Souza”

“You are kidnapped by the person who owes you..

Who brought u from your step father..” said D’Souza..

f**k!!!Β  means they caught me..

No no no..i am gone he will kill me he is very dangerous..

I started crying hitting my forehead with my palm..

D’Souza tried to make me calm but in vain..

I pushed her slightly and started running in the direction of main door..with the hope that i can escape although my inner consions know i can’t..

I ran ..as fast as i could.. if i would have run in shimla like this i am sure i would have cover the whole shimla till now..

But this mansion is soooooooo large..

Finally..i got the main door.. D’Souza ran behind me but i ran like milkha singh..and that old lady..i feel petty for her but right now my focus is on saving my life from that devil..

I cried and ran towards the door suddenly the door opened automatically and a man appears from nowhere in front of me..

A lone tear again escaped from my eyes but with a smile

Pov ends

Riddhima (smiling)- Youuu!!!!

Done done dana done βœ…

Who is the man?

Who is god?

So much questions na..i m not ur teacher so i m not gonna answer 😜

Comments tapka dena

Lob u all

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    Well i m not so good at writing ff as i m shayar and i love to pen down my thoughts in shyri..and here i m exploring my writing skills

    157 Comments

    1. Akshara on August 13, 2021 9:10 am

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:49 pm

        Thnq

    2. Palak on August 13, 2021 9:11 am

      Amazing episode ❀️loved it 😍 post soon πŸ”œ that can be vansh by the way first πŸ˜…πŸ’ƒ

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:49 pm

        Tysm dear πŸ’..

    3. AarushiSoni on August 13, 2021 9:14 am

      Superb di excited to know who is he?! 🌺

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:50 pm

        Tysm dear πŸ’–..

    4. Sneha on August 13, 2021 9:15 am

      Amazing…
      Please post soon ❣️❣️

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:50 pm

        Thnq..

    5. Tanya K on August 13, 2021 9:16 am

      Merko lagta hai kuch yo gadbad hai daya kuch to gadbad haii🀣🀣. Amazing epi loved it. God humare vanshu to nhi🀣

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:50 pm

        Tysm dear πŸ’ž..

    6. Anannya07 on August 13, 2021 9:16 am

      Amazing update di . Is that Vansh πŸ€”…Post soon

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:51 pm

        Tysm dear..

    7. Prabhleen 😊 on August 13, 2021 9:20 am

      Fabulous episode✨. Loved it 😘. Man and God both are same person only and the person is Vansh. Agar sahi hua to virtual money please. Post soon.

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:51 pm

        Tysm dear..

    8. DDD on August 13, 2021 9:26 am

      Awesome dear loved it πŸ₯° I think the man is Vansh 😍

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 7:09 pm

        Tysm dear ❀️..

    9. Tanvi_5117 on August 13, 2021 9:33 am

      Fabulous πŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ’š!!!
      Hope he is Vansh 🀞

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 7:08 pm

        Tysm

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 7:08 pm

        Tysm ❀️

    10. Hina on August 13, 2021 9:35 am

      Fabulous.. Loved it

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 7:07 pm

        Tysm dear ❀️..

    11. Tamannah on August 13, 2021 9:36 am

      Nice

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 7:07 pm

        Thnq dear 😍❀️..

    12. Liakshy on August 13, 2021 9:36 am

      Awesome. Post soon dear

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 7:06 pm

        Tysm dear πŸ’ž.

    13. Jiaa on August 13, 2021 9:37 am

      Too Good

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 7:06 pm

        Thnq..

    14. Gehna on August 13, 2021 9:37 am

      Super exciting

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 7:06 pm

        Tysm

    15. Kanika on August 13, 2021 9:38 am

      Loved it.. Post soon.. Eager to read what happens next

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 7:05 pm

        Tysm dear ❀️..

    16. Gauri Pandey on August 13, 2021 9:48 am

      Uffffffff yaaaarrr yeh kahan end kar diya episode 😒😒. Kya likhti ho aap πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ‘ŒπŸ’―πŸ’― It’s actually beyond Comprehension ❀. I was expecting this episode only as soon as I turned on my phone in morning and, I’m obliged to read the Best story 😊. Story is getting more and more interesting ✌ Soo don’t think too much πŸ˜‰. Waiting for the neXT episode πŸ™Œ Please Aap bhi use jaldi tapka denaπŸ˜‚. Tab tak ke liye Take Caree and chillaxxxx Aur ho sake toh please double update kar dena πŸ˜œπŸ’•…………………!

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 7:05 pm

        Tysm dear ❀️

    17. Varshini on August 13, 2021 9:48 am

      Amazing episode dear ❀️

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 7:05 pm

        Tysm..

    18. Mennahussein55 on August 13, 2021 9:52 am

      What an episode yaar?!!!!
      Mind blowing!

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 7:04 pm

        Tysm dear 😘..

    19. Manya on August 13, 2021 9:59 am

      Hapoe wo hamara vanshi because he only have mrs.dsouza as staff

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 7:04 pm

        Tysm

    20. Siddhi panchal on August 13, 2021 10:12 am

      Ara apna vansh hai

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 5:44 pm

        Yups

    21. Acchu on August 13, 2021 10:42 am

      Amazing EP😍, I think he is vansh, i am so disparate to know who is he, please please post soon😘

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 5:43 pm

        Tysm

    22. RianshπŸ₯° on August 13, 2021 10:46 am

      Fantastic episode
      I Hope he is vansh please post next one soon

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 5:42 pm

        Tysm

    23. Ruhiii on August 13, 2021 10:57 am

      Wowww awesome 😝😝😝 he is Vansh for sure , ❀️

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 5:42 pm

        Tysm dear πŸ’—..

    24. Salma on August 13, 2021 11:00 am

      Awesome episode…. πŸ₯°ye vanshu hi hona chahiye…

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 5:41 pm

        Tysm

    25. Sweet Angel on August 13, 2021 11:03 am

      Amazing
      Must be vanshuuu

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 5:40 pm

        Tysm

    26. Zara on August 13, 2021 11:53 am

      Amazing ❣️

      • Riansh fan on August 13, 2021 2:29 pm

        Amazing

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 5:39 pm

        Tysm

    27. Parita on August 13, 2021 12:24 pm

      Amazing episode di!
      The God must be Vansh only….but he had bought her?
      Very excited for the next one❀

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 5:39 pm

        Tysm dear..

    28. Sumisha on August 13, 2021 12:25 pm

      Awesome dear 😍😍

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 5:38 pm

        Tysm dear ❀️…

    29. Anisha on August 13, 2021 12:44 pm

      Amazing ep pls post asap

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 5:38 pm

        Tysm

    30. Sneha.M on August 13, 2021 12:54 pm

      Intezaar hai next post kai liye, super excited

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 5:37 pm

        Tysmm

    31. Cutuuu on August 13, 2021 2:23 pm

      Awesome ❀ He is Vansh only I guess πŸ§πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ’™πŸ’™

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:52 pm

        Thnq dear..

    32. Ria on August 13, 2021 2:30 pm

      Excited for the update
      Post soon

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:52 pm

        Tysm dear…

    33. Rishi on August 13, 2021 2:33 pm

      Eagerly waiting for the update
      Plz post soon

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:53 pm

        Thnq dear..

    34. Avni on August 13, 2021 2:33 pm

      Superb

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:53 pm

        Thnq …

    35. Anu on August 13, 2021 2:34 pm

      Waiting for vr’s swag vaala entry😎😎😎😎

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:53 pm

        Thnq dear 😍..

    36. Aakruthi on August 13, 2021 2:34 pm

      Fantastic

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:53 pm

        Tysm..

    37. Anju on August 13, 2021 2:35 pm

      Fabulous

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:54 pm

        Tysm dear πŸ’“..

    38. 🀫🀫🀫 on August 13, 2021 2:36 pm

      πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:54 pm

        😍..

    39. Unknown on August 13, 2021 2:37 pm

      I am damn excited…
      Post asap
      If you are freeeee then one more update plzzzzzz

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:54 pm

        Tysm dear..
        Bs free hi to ni hu jiwan me

    40. Keerthi on August 13, 2021 2:39 pm

      Nice epi…..
      Post asap

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:55 pm

        Tysm dear ❀️..

    41. Kaira on August 13, 2021 2:42 pm

      Amazing

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:55 pm

        Thnq..

    42. M on August 13, 2021 2:42 pm

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:55 pm

        Tysm…

    43. Krithi on August 13, 2021 2:44 pm

      Fantastic

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:55 pm

        Thnq..

    44. Misty on August 13, 2021 2:51 pm

      Fabulous

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:56 pm

        Thnq..

    45. Kripa on August 13, 2021 2:52 pm

      Superb

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:56 pm

        Thnq..

    46. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ on August 13, 2021 3:37 pm

      Nice

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:56 pm

        Tysm dear πŸ’•…

    47. Diya on August 13, 2021 7:49 pm

      Amazingg

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:57 pm

        Thnq…

    48. Priyanka Thakur on August 13, 2021 8:43 pm

      Awesome episode Aishu I think the man is Vansh only eagerly waiting for next update

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:57 pm

        Tysm dear πŸ’“..

    49. Jayashree on August 13, 2021 8:52 pm

      Wow amazing 😍😍❀️😍❀️
      Thanks for updates 😊😍
      Keep rocking πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯
      Congratulations πŸ‘πŸŽ‰πŸ‘πŸ‘

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:58 pm

        Tysm dear πŸ’•..

    50. Priyadharshini on August 13, 2021 8:54 pm

      Super πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:58 pm

        Tysm dear πŸ’“..

    51. JJ on August 13, 2021 8:54 pm

      Wonderful 😊😍❀️😍❀️😍

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:58 pm

        Tysm..

    52. Vkjhp on August 13, 2021 8:55 pm

      Wow fabulous ❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:59 pm

        Thnq..πŸ’“…

    53. Sree on August 13, 2021 8:55 pm

      Fantastic episode πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜πŸ˜β€οΈπŸ˜β€οΈπŸ˜β€οΈπŸ˜

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:59 pm

        Thnq..

    54. Cutie pie 😁😁😁 on August 13, 2021 10:02 pm

      Amazing

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 8:59 pm

        Tysm dear..πŸ’“…

    55. Kichu on August 13, 2021 10:02 pm

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 9:00 pm

        Tysm…

    56. Miya on August 13, 2021 10:03 pm

      Fantastic

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 9:00 pm

        Tysm

    57. Maya on August 13, 2021 10:03 pm

      Fabulous

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 9:00 pm

        Thnq..

    58. 😘😘😘😘😘 on August 13, 2021 10:04 pm

      Super excited

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 9:01 pm

        Thnq…

    59. 😍😍😍😍 on August 13, 2021 10:04 pm

      Nice epi
      Post asap

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 9:01 pm

        Tysm dear πŸ’“..

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 9:01 pm

        Tysm dear πŸ’“…..

    60. Jaanvi on August 13, 2021 10:05 pm

      πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 9:00 pm

        πŸ’“πŸ’“…

    61. Deepika on August 13, 2021 10:05 pm

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 3:03 pm

        Thnq

    62. Divya on August 13, 2021 10:05 pm

      Fantastic

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 3:03 pm

        Tysm..

    63. Jiya on August 13, 2021 10:06 pm

      Lovely

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 3:03 pm

        Thnq

    64. Preeti on August 13, 2021 10:06 pm

      Amazing

    65. Preeti on August 13, 2021 10:07 pm

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 2:49 pm

        Thnq

    66. Jiya on August 13, 2021 10:07 pm

      Fantastic

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 2:49 pm

        Thnq..

    67. Payal on August 13, 2021 10:08 pm

      Superb

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 2:48 pm

        Tysm..

    68. Priya on August 13, 2021 10:08 pm

      Eagerly waiting for the next update
      Post asap

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 2:48 pm

        Tysm 😘..

    69. Pragya on August 13, 2021 10:08 pm

      Post asap

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 2:48 pm

        Thnq..

    70. Shalu on August 13, 2021 10:09 pm

      Suspense queen…
      No words for u…….
      Amazing dude
      Post asap

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 2:47 pm

        Thnq dear…

    71. Silent on August 13, 2021 10:10 pm

      Amazing

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 2:47 pm

        Tysm..

    72. Surya on August 13, 2021 10:10 pm

      Superb

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 2:47 pm

        Tysm…

    73. Sneha on August 13, 2021 10:11 pm

      Fantastic

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 2:46 pm

        Thnq

    74. Siya on August 13, 2021 10:11 pm

      Fabulous

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 2:46 pm

        Thnq..

    75. Punya on August 13, 2021 10:11 pm

      Awesome
      Eagerly waiting for the next update
      Post asap

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 2:45 pm

        Tysm dear πŸ’˜..

    76. Alisha Roy on August 13, 2021 10:57 pm

      Amazing

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 2:45 pm

        Tysm..

    77. Neetu on August 13, 2021 11:37 pm

      Awesome episode I think he is vansh

      • Aisha08 on August 14, 2021 2:45 pm

        Tysm

    78. Chhavi on August 15, 2021 10:07 am

      Lob u too, cant wait to read next so running for next one and ya he is vansh i know

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