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Home»Fan Fiction»Being with my so called kidnapper # episode 28 # date
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Being with my so called kidnapper # episode 28 # date

Aisha08By Aisha08August 10, 2021135 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello peeepies agyi me..

Hope u are liking the story but i am feeling i lost the charm of my writing with this story..plz let me know ur PoV also..

If u r reading this chappy while standing then plz sit down and if u r sitting them plz tie ur seat belts as u are gonna witness a shock at the end

Let’s start

Scene 1

Vansh’s pov

What… that’s the only question i was worried about..

What should i say now.. neither i can lie nor i can say truth..

What if she will leave me..after knowing that i had flings..

No no…no.. i can’t let her go..

I composed myself saying ” Sweetheart i will tell u but promise me u won’t leave me after listening my answer..”

Pov ends

Riddhima’s pov

My heart beat stopped for a sec ..

Why is he saying like this..

Means he..had..means i am not his first..

My vanshu was with some other girl before me..

But shrugging all my thoughts i holded his hand assuring him that i am not gonna leave him at all..

Pov ends

Vansh- Riddhima ..Jaan..i don’t want to lie..

I had 2 flings before..and i had one night stand with them..

But jaan trust me that was just flings i never loved them..

I was emotionally weak at a point of my life and i just needed someone to fullfill my inner void..

But i love u only..their is no one in my life except u jaan..

Trust me..plz don’t leave me..jaan your vanshu will die without u…

Their is no vansh without riddhima..

Riddhima’s pov

Although my heart badly wanted to smash his face for being with some other girl..

But then i thought that was his past..and i m his present..and i will give him a very amazing death if he won’t make me his future..

I hugged him tightly kissing his forehead..

Holding his hand i said ” Vansh that was ur past..and i m ur present ..and that matters to me..

You and your love is everything for me..

But make sure u won’t go to any other woman otherwise this baby panda of yours can become a hungry lioness also..”

Pov ends

Vansh’s pov

I was on cloud nine seeing her possessiveness for me..

I chuckled seeing my baby panda threatening me..

I kissed her forehead assuring her ” i promise jaan..i won’t allow even a shadow of other woman on me..then being with someone is far away”

She smiled and hided her face in my chest..

I kissed her crown and murmered “i love u jaan” getting a instant reply “i love too vanshu”..from her

——-

1 week later

Scene 2

Riddhima’s pov

It’s been one weak after that day And in this one week my vanshu never left a chance to caged me in his love..

If this is cage na then i am ready to be caged by him for my next seven birth..

He took me out from my dark life..he is ray of hope in my life..

I was dead he gave me life..i was butterfly he gave me wings..

I was body he gave me soul..

Now i won’t keep him in dark ..i will keep my whole life in front of him today..

Then we will start our new life.. without any secret..

Although i am scared what will be his reactions but i am sure he won’t leave me..

I planned a date for him tonight and i will tell him everything today..

Pov ends

Vansh’s pov

I was checking some files in my cabin suddenly i got a parcel..

I opened it and a big smile crept on my lips..

My baby panda send me a gift asking me for a date..

Wohooo..she is becoming more romantic day by day..and why won’t she after all her boyfriend is Vansh raisinghania 😎..

In this one week i never left a chance to mark her mine..

She asked me to come home at sharp 7 pm for our 1st official date..

And i am hell excited..i instantly orderd angre to arrange the best designer outfit for both of us that too of her fav colour..”red”

Today i will pour my heart out in front of her..i will reveal my past to her.. surely I won’t let her go..but she is my queen and she deserves to know my dark life..

Pov ends

Angre’s pov

Am i dreaming..i rubbed my eyes to assure whatever i am seeing is true..

My boss…my boss the great Vansh raisinghania is showing his cavity like a mad man..

He ordered me to bring red color attire for him..like seriously red..is he bride that he is gonna wear red on 1st date..

I ran from there in order to save my life before he kicked my ass and throw me out of his cabin..

Because according to him..i am the villian of his romance..but the truth i was cupid in their story..

I made both the dumbos realise they love each other.. otherwise they would have been roaming in whole shimla with 2 children saying we are just Friends..

Pov ends..

Riddhima’s pov

Its 6 pm now..and i am getting ready as my vanshu will come soon

I prepared my speech sorry sorry..my truth..how i m gonna reveal everything..

Shhh!! Shant riddhu shant!! He loves me so much he will understand me..

I wore a beautiful turquoise gown Which is obviously his fav color..

I did my last touch up.. suddenly my phone rang..

Picking up the call i was checking the last moment arrangements of our date

Pov ends

Vansh’s pov

Now i am driving with full speed with my eagerness on its peak to see my sweetheart..

As soon as i stepped the entrance of my house..my heart flutter with happiness..

The whole garden is decorated with fairy lights and red roses..

I walked on the path full of red rose petals.. and searched for my sweetheart..

My eyes were continuously searching her but all i could found was a letter kept on table..

I picked the letter and started reading..

A lone tear escaped from my eyes ..

The letter slept from my hands and i thuddd on the floor shouting “Riddhimaaaaaaaaaa”

Done done dana done βœ…

Hope you like it..

Ps : Shock to ni lga na kisi ko..be ready for more heart attack in ur kidneys..

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    Well i m not so good at writing ff as i m shayar and i love to pen down my thoughts in shyri..and here i m exploring my writing skills

    135 Comments

    1. Tanvi_5117 on August 10, 2021 8:28 am

      OMG yeh kya hua??
      Wonderful πŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’œ
      It’s not boring at all I am enjoying it. It’s nothing that you lost your charm. It’s better than perfect.
      AngreπŸ˜‚
      Don’t be demotivated. I am loving it πŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’œ

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:18 pm

        Thnq dear..

    2. Salma on August 10, 2021 8:40 am

      Amazing πŸ’•…

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:19 pm

        Thnq🀩…

    3. Sneha on August 10, 2021 8:43 am

      Kya hua..
      Please post soon

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:19 pm

        Tysm dear🀩…

    4. prapti0809 on August 10, 2021 8:44 am

      Amazing di. Aapko shock dene main itna kya mazaa aata hai. Loved it post soon . Story is just perfect ☺️☺️

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:19 pm

        Tysm dear..🀩

    5. Prabhleen 😊 on August 10, 2021 8:59 am

      Yeh kya hua. Suspense mein chod diya. No you didn’t lost charm in your writing. It’s wonderful. Loved it 😘. Post soon.

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:20 pm

        Tysm dear..🀩

    6. diya on August 10, 2021 9:08 am

      fabb….itnaa suspenseee…….wait nhi hota

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:20 pm

        Tysm dear..

    7. Akshara on August 10, 2021 9:14 am

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:20 pm

        Thnq dear…

    8. Varshini on August 10, 2021 9:48 am

      Amazing 😍❀️

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:20 pm

        Thnq dear 🀩…

    9. Devanshi8 on August 10, 2021 9:54 am

      Superb loved it😘😘😘
      Waiting for next

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:21 pm

        Thnq dear..🀩…

    10. DDD on August 10, 2021 9:57 am

      Awesome dear loved it πŸ₯°πŸ˜Š. You are the suspense queen πŸ‘Έ. The store is not boring at all ❀️

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:21 pm

        Thnq dear🀩🀩….

    11. Mennahussein55 on August 10, 2021 9:59 am

      Wow it is awesome yaar!!!
      But what?!!!!!
      What will happen then?!!!!!!
      My cute little heart will not bear such heart attack πŸ˜…πŸ˜…
      So excited for the next episode

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:21 pm

        Tysm dear take care..,😘😘

    12. Cutuuu on August 10, 2021 10:26 am

      Awesome ❀ Neither the story is boring nor you are losing charm Okay?? Dare to say it again!! Heart Attack aate aate reh gaya…🀩🀩🀩🀩

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:22 pm

        Thnq dear..
        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    13. AarushiSoni on August 10, 2021 10:42 am

      Dids… Kya bolu, 😐😐😐
      Suspense ki dukaan meri cliffhanger didi 😌😌😭
      Post soon!!!!
      Helllllll excited😒😒

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:04 pm

        thnq

    14. Riansh fan on August 10, 2021 11:09 am

      The story is not boring man…
      It’s awesome…
      Kyum heart attack de rahi ho thum????
      Post asap

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:05 pm

        Thnq dear..

    15. Rishi on August 10, 2021 11:10 am

      Awesome man…..
      Mera suspense queenπŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™
      Post asap

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:05 pm

        Tysm dear…

    16. Ria on August 10, 2021 11:12 am

      Kya Yaar mujhe maar ne kaa sochaa Hain kyaa???
      Ithna BADA suspense math daal ……
      Mujhe heart attack ho jayegaa man…..

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:05 pm

        Tysm dear🀩

    17. Avni on August 10, 2021 11:13 am

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:06 pm

        Thnq…

    18. Anu on August 10, 2021 11:13 am

      Fantastic

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:06 pm

        Thnq..

    19. Aakruthi on August 10, 2021 11:13 am

      Fabulous

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:06 pm

        Tysm..🀩…

    20. Anju on August 10, 2021 11:14 am

      Superb

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:07 pm

        Tysm..

    21. Unknown on August 10, 2021 11:15 am

      Suspense queen πŸ‘‘πŸ‘‘πŸ‘‘
      Post asap

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:07 pm

        Tysm 🀩

    22. Keerthi on August 10, 2021 11:16 am

      Eagerly waiting for the next update
      Post asap

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:07 pm

        Thnq dear..

    23. Anannya07 on August 10, 2021 11:27 am

      Amazing update as usual

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:18 pm

        Tysm dear..🀩…

    24. Sumisha on August 10, 2021 11:28 am

      Awesome dear ❀ 😘
      Suspense πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:17 pm

        Thnq..🀩…

    25. Chhavi on August 10, 2021 12:11 pm

      Meri kidneys bhot choti hain heart attack seh nhi paayengi and plz suspence ki devi kabhi toh suspence mat daalo.lob u too

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:17 pm

        Tysm dear..

    26. Sajal Ali on August 10, 2021 12:13 pm

      Amazing episode ❀, loved it. Phir se suspense baab re. Your writing skills are amazing no doubt so please don’t say like that ki you lost your charm.

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:17 pm

        Tysm dear πŸ₯°

    27. Parita on August 10, 2021 12:15 pm

      Not at all boring di
      It was amazing…but jhatka laga!
      What happened? SuspenseπŸ˜‚β€

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:16 pm

        Thnq dear..🀩…

    28. Akansha roy on August 10, 2021 12:17 pm

      Awesome and dare to say boring ,waise aisha do u want to be the second suspense queen or u want to kill us haa? Well jokes apart , am very excited for the next part eagerly waiting dear plz post soon

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:16 pm

        Thnq dear..who is the 1st queen

    29. Acchu on August 10, 2021 12:39 pm

      Amazing EP😍, but u always leave us in suspense,eagerly waiting for next EP❀

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:15 pm

        Tysm dear 😘

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:15 pm

        Tysm dear 😘..

    30. Zara on August 10, 2021 12:43 pm

      Amazing … Post asap dear eagerly waiting for the next episode ❀️

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 7:15 pm

        Thnq

    31. RianshπŸ₯° on August 10, 2021 1:21 pm

      What yaar
      Supspense again

      One request
      Please never separate them
      πŸ₯Ί

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 6:32 pm

        Thnq dear

    32. TG on August 10, 2021 2:13 pm

      Awesome
      Shock op
      Post asap

    33. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ on August 10, 2021 3:58 pm

      Nice

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:08 pm

        Thnq

    34. Priya singh on August 10, 2021 5:29 pm

      β€οΈπŸ’•

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:08 pm

        🀩🀩…

    35. Kaira on August 10, 2021 7:25 pm

      Amazing

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:09 pm

        Thnq

    36. Kripa on August 10, 2021 7:26 pm

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:10 pm

        Thnq…

    37. Priyanka Thakur on August 10, 2021 7:47 pm

      Awesome episode Aishu again you ended up with suspense eagerly waiting for next update

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:10 pm

        Thnq…

    38. Krithi on August 10, 2021 8:07 pm

      Fantastic

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:10 pm

        Thnq

    39. Mithra on August 10, 2021 8:16 pm

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:11 pm

        Thnq

    40. Miya on August 10, 2021 8:16 pm

      Fantastic

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:12 pm

        Thnq..

    41. M on August 10, 2021 8:16 pm

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:12 pm

        Thnq

    42. Maya on August 10, 2021 8:17 pm

      Superb

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:13 pm

        Thnq…

    43. Jiya on August 10, 2021 8:17 pm

      Fabulous

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:13 pm

        Thnq….

    44. Jaanvi on August 10, 2021 8:17 pm

      πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:13 pm

        🀩🀩….

    45. Divya on August 10, 2021 8:18 pm

      Fantastic

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:13 pm

        Thnq…

    46. Deepika on August 10, 2021 8:18 pm

      πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:14 pm

        Tysm…

    47. Shalu on August 10, 2021 8:19 pm

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:14 pm

        Thnq…

    48. Silent on August 10, 2021 8:19 pm

      Fantastic

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:14 pm

        Tysm..

    49. Siya on August 10, 2021 8:19 pm

      Superb

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:14 pm

        Thnq…

    50. Surya on August 10, 2021 8:20 pm

      πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:15 pm

        🀩🀩…

    51. Sneha on August 10, 2021 8:20 pm

      Dear suspense queen…
      Eagerly waiting for the next update
      Post asap

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:15 pm

        Tysm dear 😘

    52. Supriya on August 10, 2021 8:21 pm

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 9:15 pm

        Thnq…

    53. Cutie pie 😁😁😁 on August 10, 2021 8:21 pm

      πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

    54. 🀫🀫🀫 on August 10, 2021 8:21 pm

      Fantastic

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 11:04 pm

        Tysm…

    55. 😘😘😘😘 on August 10, 2021 8:22 pm

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 11:04 pm

        Thnq

    56. Payal on August 10, 2021 8:22 pm

      Fabulous

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 11:04 pm

        Thnq

    57. 😍😍😍😍 on August 10, 2021 8:23 pm

      ❀️❀️❀️❀️

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 11:03 pm

        🀩…

    58. Priya on August 10, 2021 8:23 pm

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 11:03 pm

        Thnq

    59. Pragya on August 10, 2021 8:23 pm

      Fantastic

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 11:02 pm

        Tysm..

    60. Preeti on August 10, 2021 8:24 pm

      Fabulous

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 11:02 pm

        Thnq

    61. Kichu on August 10, 2021 8:24 pm

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 6:32 pm

        Thnq

    62. Jayashree on August 10, 2021 9:17 pm

      Wow amazing 😍😍❀️😍❀️😍. Thanks for updates 😊😍
      Keep rocking πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

      • Jayashree on August 10, 2021 9:19 pm

        Suspense really interesting very interesting ☺️☺️☺️

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 6:24 pm

        Tysm dear…

    63. Priyadharshini on August 10, 2021 9:17 pm

      Super πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 6:23 pm

        Tysmm..

    64. JJ on August 10, 2021 9:18 pm

      Wonderful 😊😍❀️😍❀️😍

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 6:23 pm

        Thnq…

    65. Vkjhp on August 10, 2021 9:18 pm

      Wow fabulous πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 6:22 pm

        Thnq

    66. Sree on August 10, 2021 9:18 pm

      Fantastic episode πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜πŸ˜β€οΈπŸ˜β€οΈ

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 6:06 pm

        Tysm..

    67. Neetu on August 10, 2021 10:32 pm

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 6:06 pm

        Thnq

    68. Aisha08 on August 11, 2021 6:05 pm

      Amazing πŸ’“πŸ’“

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