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Home»Fan Fiction»Being with my so called kidnapper # episode 13 # won’t let you go
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Being with my so called kidnapper # episode 13 # won’t let you go

Aisha08By Aisha08July 18, 202175 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello peeepies aagyi me.. u must be wondering ki aj me jldi kese ajati hu.. actually i am jldi uthing from kuch dino se..

If u are going to start reading this chappy plz first pass a silent prayer for menna’s well being..

She has a very important place in my ❀️.. the very 1st person on TU i had interacted..

Let’s start…

Scene 1

Riddhima’s POV

I was chit chatting with mummy..okok angre’s mummy..when vansh appeared out of the blue yelling my name ..

Now what happened to him.. sometimes i feel he is bipolar..

I am feeling as if some mad dog bitted him but why on the earth vansh will bite himself πŸ˜‚lmao for my rubbish..

He held my hand and drag me to the car..

I looked at aunty with pleading eyes but she gave me the signal to go with him..

Pov ends

Vansh’s POv

Even the mere thought of her leaving hitched my breath.

Angre pressed my wrong nerve..i dragged riddhima with me to the car..

Whole journey she was shouting like a mad women ..

Why she cares for me this much yr ..

She didn’t care of my anger she was asking me to calm down..

Kudos to my lady!!

Pov ends

Riddhima (concerned) – Vansh!! What happened tell me na..

Why are you so pissed off did i do anything wrong..

Riddhima’s POV

I am barking here like a doggy and he didn’t even bother to look at me..

He kept his driving continue untill we reached our home!!

I unbukuled my seatbelt and step out of the car for taking few steps towards him but he came to me like thunderstorm …as soon as i blurted out i am not gonna talk to you if you keep doing this..

Pov ends

Vansh’s POv

Now she also pressed my wrong nerve..

I didn’t wanted to hurt her in my anger but as soon as she utter that bullshit i lost my calm and marched towards her like a thunderstorm..

I pinned her to the car in anger holding her from shoulder..

A sudden fear crept in her eyes which didn’t go well with me ..and iΒ  tighten my hold on her..

Pov ends

Vansh (angry) – You can’t go away from me..did you get that..

You are not going anywhere..i won’t let you..

If you want to go also..i am not gonna permitting you to leave..

Riddhima’s POV

A lone tear escaped from my eyes not because he is angry or shouting at me..

The way he is holding like i will vanish in air..the way he is commanding me not to go away from him..my heart flutter with utter happiness..

But why he thought that i will go..

His eyes is having an unknown fear..which I don’t like..

Pov ends..

Vansh’s POv

As soon as a tear slipped from her eyes i loosened my hold on her thinking i might have hurted her..

But this lady is beyondΒ  my imagination..

She hugged me instantly..hugged me like their is no Tomorrow..

She kept rubbing my back until my breath become normal..

My all anger vanished just my her mere touch..

Pov ends

Riddhima (rubbing his back,) – Shhh!! Vansh relex..no one is going away from you..

Vansh (breaking the hug) – I don’t want no one i want you…

Riddhima’s POV

This man didn’t know what i am feeling right now .i am feeling as if i am the most lucky girl in the whole universe..

I holded his arm like a kid clinging to his mother and take him to the room

Making him sit on the bed i gave him a glass of water..

While drinking his adam apple is moving in a rhythm my heart badly wanted to lick his wet lips..but i controlled myself any how..

Bending to his knees i sat down holding his hand

Pov ends

Vansh’s POv

She sat near my knees!! Silly women she deserves to be my queen she has whole right to sit on my head even..

I holded her from shoulder and make her sit beside me ..

Cupping my face..she stroked my hairs few times..

Pov ends

Riddhima – Vansh!! What happened..why are you angry..see i am here only..kahi nhi ja rhi hu me (i am not going anywhere) your baby panda is always with you..

Vansh (innocently like a kid) – Promise you won’t leave me ever..

Riddhima (smiling) – Promise..

Vansh – Sorry i did gussa on you!!

Riddhima (smiling) – Its ok!! Tumhe haq hai (you have right)

Now let’s sleep..

Riddhima’s POV

I lay him down on bed covering with duvet..

Stroking his hairs i snapped my palm in front of his eyes to close them..

He looks like a cute baby while sleeping having a angry pout on lips..

He is holding my hand like a scared kid..

I bend down to his face and kissed his forehead with all the affection i had for him..

Pov ends

Vansh’s POV

After my mother’s demise i never got this much peace in someone’s arm..

She is taking care of me like my mother used to do..

When i used to come home late nobody was there to ask me how am i..

But she takes care of myΒ  every possible need..

She kissed my forehead and the moment her lips touched my skin i wished it would have my lips in place of my forehead..

I drifted into deep slumber.. thinking about her..

Pov ends

Scene 2

Next day..

In evening..

Vansh’s POV

I am driving back to home from office alone..

Sweetheart wasn’t feeling well she was having a little fever so i told her to stay at home..

I decided to make a hot chocolate for her after reaching home..

Without her the journey seems so long..but when i am with her the homes comes in the blink of eyes..

Pov ends

Riddhima’s POV

I am making some light dinner for us as i know he won’t eat something special because i can’t have that now due to fever..

I was humming the songs inteha ho gyi intezar ki..ayi na kuch khbr mere yaar ki.. with a smile on my face..

Life seems beautiful with him..

Imagining a day without him is now impossible

This guy called me in almost after every half an hour to check whether i am ok or not

I went to his room to keep his clothes inΒ  cupboard …

Pov ends

Vansh’s POV

I parked my car in haste as the eagerness to meet my sweetheart was on it’s peak..

Its been whole day i didn’t see her although we talked on a call but my heart can’t get peace without seeing her..

Opening the door of hall i cursed her under my breath to be so irresponsible..

How can she keep the door open..what if someone ..no no no!! The thought is itself so horrible..

Entering into my room the sight took my all the eagerness and excitement in a sec..

My blood boiled..and i shouted on top of my voice..

Pov ends

Vansh (angry) – riddhimaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!😑

Done done dana done βœ…

Word count :1192

Comments tapka dena bs..

Guys see mennu mam replied to my comment.. khushi charam sima par hai meriπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ bs ab Rra sir krde to jiwan safal ho jaye

Lob u all…

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Aisha08

    Well i m not so good at writing ff as i m shayar and i love to pen down my thoughts in shyri..and here i m exploring my writing skills

    75 Comments

    1. Aisha08 on July 18, 2021 7:39 am

      Guys i messed up chp number..its 14 not 13

    2. @Mj on July 18, 2021 7:48 am

      Amazing❀

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 7:56 am

        Thnq..

    3. RianshπŸ₯° on July 18, 2021 8:03 am

      Wow Amazing episode post next one soon

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 7:56 am

        Thnq..dear..

    4. DDD on July 18, 2021 8:06 am

      Awesome episode dear 😁😊

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 7:57 am

        Thnq…

    5. TG on July 18, 2021 8:08 am

      Amazing

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 7:57 am

        Thnq..dear..

    6. Chhavi on July 18, 2021 8:08 am

      Lob u too and again suspence on riiddddhhhhiiimmmaaaaaa, eager to know what happened. Wb menna’s surgery and how she is

      • Akshara on July 18, 2021 9:40 am

        Awesome

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 7:57 am

        Lob u too dear
        Well she is not fine just keep praying for her

    7. Angel Rose on July 18, 2021 8:26 am

      Why ? You always left the episode in twist😦.Nice episode.

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 7:58 am

        Fav kam h meriπŸ˜‚
        Tysm

    8. AarushiSoni on July 18, 2021 8:39 am

      Amazing!! I think she did all the work na.. so maybe he’ll about?!
      Suspense me marjawan!!!
      ❀️..
      Di, I love u…

      Post soon

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 7:58 am

        Tysm..lob u tooπŸ₯°

    9. Salma on July 18, 2021 9:05 am

      Wow beautiful… Thnks daily update ke liye..

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 7:58 am

        Tysm..dearπŸ₯°…

    10. jaskiranarora0605 on July 18, 2021 9:08 am

      Awesome episode ❀😍πŸ₯°

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 7:59 am

        Tysm…😘

    11. Varshini on July 18, 2021 9:20 am

      Amazing 😍❀️. Why he shouted like that

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 7:59 am

        Thnq..dear..πŸ₯°

    12. Cutuuu on July 18, 2021 9:37 am

      Awesome β€πŸ’™πŸ’œ

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 7:59 am

        Tysm…

    13. RiansHLoveR on July 18, 2021 9:42 am

      Amazing episode..loved it.. post soon❀❀

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:00 am

        Thnq…dear..

    14. Rianshlover. 13 on July 18, 2021 9:52 am

      Amazing di
      Will be waiting for the next one
      Post asap
      Love you di
      Take care
      Get well soon menna di

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:00 am

        Tysm..dear..πŸ₯°πŸ₯°..

    15. Mennahussein55 on July 18, 2021 10:08 am

      It is awesome dear.
      I’m so thankful to you for your love and care.
      It means so much to me.
      I know that by all your prayers I will be fine soon.

      • Sneha on July 18, 2021 1:01 pm

        Get well soon dear..

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:00 am

        Thnq dear..
        U will be fine soon..

    16. Tanya K on July 18, 2021 10:29 am

      Amazing episode, suspense or chhod diyaa lekin🀣🀣 ( suspense ki devi ). Congoooo!!!!!

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:01 am

        Thnq dear..
        Dhnaywd πŸ₯°

    17. ANSZLKH on July 18, 2021 10:34 am

      Suspense 🧐🧐🧐🧐
      Amazing ❀️😘😘

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:01 am

        Thnq…dear…πŸ₯°

    18. Priyanshi_13 on July 18, 2021 10:57 am

      Amazing 😍

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:02 am

        Thnq…

    19. diya on July 18, 2021 11:01 am

      awesome

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:02 am

        Thnq..

    20. Aishwarya Wanjari on July 18, 2021 11:07 am

      Awesome episode post next soon

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:02 am

        Thnq..dear..

    21. Acchu on July 18, 2021 11:22 am

      Amazing EP😍

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:03 am

        Thnq…dear..

    22. Anannya07 on July 18, 2021 11:24 am

      Amazing episode di and what happened to Menna di

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:03 am

        Thnq dear.
        Menna had undergone a surgery she is not well

    23. Attractiveuser on July 18, 2021 11:36 am

      Amazing episode ❀️❀️.
      Congratulations πŸ₯³.
      He shouted because she opened his almirah??

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:03 am

        Tysm dear..
        πŸ₯°

    24. Tanvi_5117 on July 18, 2021 12:05 pm

      Wonderful πŸ’šπŸ’™
      Kyu chillaya?

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:04 am

        Thnq dear..
        Posted next do read

    25. Priyanka Thakur on July 18, 2021 12:51 pm

      Awesome episode Aishu eagerly waiting for next update

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:04 am

        Thnq..dear..

    26. Neetu on July 18, 2021 12:52 pm

      Amazing

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:04 am

        Thnq..dear..

    27. Priya Singh on July 18, 2021 12:53 pm

      Oye teri congress..wo din bhi dur nhi jab tumhari ye next wish bhi puri hogi don’t worry jaana..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ let see what the next move play destiny the rrhul sir comments or not..😜😜

      Achha toh h chalte hai….😘

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:05 am

        Ha yr i m waiting for that day..
        Let’s see ..what fate has stored for me..

    28. Sneha on July 18, 2021 1:03 pm

      Awesome…
      Post soon..
      He shouted on her because she do all the work

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:05 am

        Tysm dear..

    29. Prabhleen 😊 on July 18, 2021 1:04 pm

      Amazing episode✨. Loved it 😘. Phir se suspense mein chod diya. Suspense mein marjawaa. Post soon.

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:06 am

        Thnq dear..
        πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    30. SUMISHA on July 18, 2021 1:35 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:06 am

        Tysm..dear ..

    31. Parita on July 18, 2021 6:50 pm

      Amazing episode!!
      Suspense again di….pls post soon!❀
      Congratulations!!πŸ₯³

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:06 am

        Thnq so much dear

    32. Annoyinguser on July 18, 2021 8:24 pm

      My wishes to mennu di for getting well asap.
      Suspense hehe awesome Episode vansh ko kya hua ab

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:07 am

        Tysm dearm.keep praying for menna

    33. Jayashree on July 18, 2021 10:13 pm

      Wow amazing πŸ˜πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—
      It’s a wonderful
      Thanks for updates 😊❀️
      Keep rocking πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:07 am

        Thnq dear…

    34. Priyadarshini on July 18, 2021 10:13 pm

      Super πŸ’žπŸ’ž

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:07 am

        ThnqπŸ₯°

    35. JJ on July 18, 2021 10:13 pm

      Wonderful πŸ’—πŸ˜Šβ€οΈπŸ’—β˜ΊοΈ

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:08 am

        Tysm…dear…

    36. Vkjhp on July 18, 2021 10:13 pm

      Wow fabulous πŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ˜πŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿ

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:08 am

        Thnq..dear…

    37. Sree on July 18, 2021 10:14 pm

      Fantastic episode 😍😍😍😍

      • Aisha08 on July 19, 2021 8:08 am

        Thnq..dear..πŸ₯°

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