Hello everyone!!!
I am new to this page. Basically I never watched Manmarziyan while it aired on star plus. However, I had heard of it’s huge fan following so just thought of giving it a try. I recently finished reading all the updates on TU, and I was amazed but also a bit sad that I could never watch this serial on TV. Had to resort to hotstar. But just fell in love with it. ?
I have previously written an ff on ek mutthi aasmaan but had to end it abruptly due to the very few comments on it. I hope to get some comments here. They will really encourage me. ☺
Ok, so much of this nonsense. Will start writing now.
Also, I will try my best to comment on all your FFs, but now my end semester exams are going to begin so forgive me if I don’t comment. It won’t make your FFs less good. And yeah, just to tell you, read a few FFs, you all are just superb!!!! How I wish MMZ had never ended. Or maybe SP should bring back MMZ 2 with ardhika and nesam.
So here I start, and please forgive me for any typos.?
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Radhika gazed out of the window. She wondered what her mother Mala was up to. She had, after all, not allowed her to come downstairs, telling her that a surprise awaited her. However, Radhika could not understand the reason behind the “surprise”. Her birthday had already passed, and nor had she recently won any award. Sighing, she pulled out her phone and called up her best friend, Samaira.
Sam was in the gym. She had her headphones on so could not hear the phone ringing. By the time she was over with her exercises, she had 22 missed calls from Radhika. She wondered what had happened.
Here, Radhika was given a dress by her mother and asked to come downstairs when asked to. She did not know how to react to the news of a boy’s family coming with a marriage proposal. Could her apprehension be true? Did he still remember her? As in, could the family be his? No. Radhika did not even want to think about it. She heard her phone ringing and automatically said, “Hi Sam, had been trying to contact you for so long. Are you crazy? You scared me like hell. What do you think of yourself? Where are you?”
Radhika heard a deep throaty laugh at the other end. The call was cut. But she could not muster enough courage to look at the number. She knew it had been him. She could recognise his voice from a distance of a thousand miles.
She finally willed herself to look at the number. She felt lifeless. The soul had been sucked out of her body. “NO!!!!!!” She screamed. She felt as if she would faint the very next moment. No, this could not be happening.
Or maybe it was. Yes, he was coming. He was coming for her. And this time, it was for ever. He had kept his promise of torturing her for all her life. Radhika knew what this phone call meant.
For her, it meant the beginning of a life of destruction. For him, she was his trophy, and he had once said he hated losing. Yes, he had been right. He was going to win this battle too. He was going to make her life miserable as hell.
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So, how was it? Please please please comment, your one comment can help encourage someone to write! Do tell me how is it? And also, positive criticism is welcome too.
Till then, bye and take care.