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Home»Fan Fiction»Our beautiful journey (swasan ts) part 1
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Our beautiful journey (swasan ts) part 1

RachnaBy RachnaFebruary 13, 201740 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hii guys I am new here and this is my first ss … hope so you guys like it… and plzz ignored my grammar & spelling mistake

#Our beautiful journey
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The story start with a guy ride a bike but suddenly his tires punchers…
“whenever, I went for Good work…always you spoiled my work” guy said to his bike…
Then started taking lift but no vehicles stop…he was very disappointed and he thinks today he not reach his destination…but suddenly his hope again rised..he saw a truck came and stop in front of him…

Guy: Can you drop me…ABC village??
Truck drive: nodded in yes ( then guy seat in truck)
Guy: hye.. I am Sanskar and you
Truck driver: ______(no rpy)
Sanskar: no rpy?? Are you dumb…
Truck driver: nodded in yes
Sanskar: ohh..!!! I am sorry,I don’t know
Truck driver: signal of okay( show thumb)
Sanskar: I am from Delhi but I live in USA because of my work…today I go for see a girl for marriage, for my mom sake, you know I can’t even see girl pic…
Truck driver silently hear all this…
Truck driver asked him where you want to go in village (in sign language )
“your stop, means where you want to go in village”sanskar said
Truck driver nodded in yes…
“ ohh..!!! Yaaa I forget to tell you …DEF house”
Suddenly truck driver stop driving … and say
Truck driver: what..??? You want to go here…(angry)
Sanskar(confused): you are dumd na, then how you speak…
Truck driver (same tune): take off from here…
Sanskar (confused): but how, I don’t know their house…
Suddenly truck driver Beard fall…sanskar see this and he was very confused..
Truck driver(monologue): he see my face, now what I do…
Sanskar (confused): you are girl…
Truck driver: take off from here, fast and I am giving free advice you go back your home, don’t go DEF house…
And truck driver left him alone on road…

After sometime
DEF house
Two girls are gossiping…
Sahil: how much you both talks… And Swara go your room… antra you go kitchen and see all the preparation…
Swara: Bhai I don’t go …
Antra: you know bhai, Swara di already see boy (tease her)
Sahil(confused ): how Swara interrupt…
Swara: bhai she is mad don’t listen her….. Then sahil left…
Swara: antra …. Now you have gone
AntrA monologue “run antra”
Swara run behind her.. Suddenly her legs slip she about to fall but someone catch her…
Swara slowly open her eyes and see one boy who hold her ….. Both looking each other…
Antra: dii, diii, diiiii
Then both came in sense and he help her and avoid their eyes….
Sahil: arre sanskar why you stand there, came inside…and you both go your room
Sanskar: hmm then he monologue “I see her, somewhere, but I don’t remember”
Sahil: where you lost, Sanskar
Sanskar: nothing sahil, I thought I see her…
Sahil: who…??
Sanskar: red suit wali
Sahil: swara
Sanskar: hmm but I don’t remember where…
Shekher(swahiltra father) : sahil, sanskar came here…??
Sahil: ha papa, he came
Sanskar go and about touch his feet..
Shekher hug him and say…
Shekher: beta our custom, children don’t touch feet..
Sanskar: but you are my elder sahil Interrupt …
Sahil: arre if you both talking like this then sanskar your work today not finish…
Shekhar: hahaha right beta…. And you sit here
Shekhar shouted Antra …antra
Antra: what happen pop…
Shekhar: bring Swara down…

Antra nodded in yes and go Swara room…
Antra: look someone thinks about her future hubby…(tease her)
Swara: Antra not again start… I have no mood to listen this (serious)
Antra: what happens di… and plzz don’t be angry with me (emotional)
Swara: nothing antra…
Antra (slap her head): I forget to tell you, why I came here… di papa called you..
Shekhar knocks her room door… then swatra both turned and see her papa standing there…
Shekhar: Princess, What happened you … why you both are crying…???
Swatra: we are not crying…
Swara: papa I don’t want marry .. Plzz send him back… I don’t want to leave you (emotional)
Shekhar(wipe her tears): shh… princess, one day always princess go her prince home then hug her…
Antra: look you both forget mee again (pout)
Swakhar: pagal then trio hug…
Then trio go down…

On hall
Sanhil both are sitting on sofa… suddenly Sanskar eyes fall on Swara …he memorized to see her
Swara wearing red color suit…
Sahil: they come..
Sanskar still look her..
Antra: jiju, we are also here if you done your work (starring) then talk with everyone (tease him)
Sanskar feel embraces…
Swara lightly beat antra, shehil both laugh silently..
Sanskar: uncle, can I talk her in alone…??(tension)
Shekhar: ha beta, Swara go with him in ur room…
Swara nodded in yes, then.. Both go Swara room…
Swara room
Both are silent… no one understand how to start speak.. then sanskar decided to speak
Sanskar: you are same girl na means truck wali …
Swara(shocked): no, I am not truck driver… then she realized what she told..
Sanskar: means you are same girl…
Swara nodded in yes…
Sanskar: why you drive truck means you can drive any others vehicle…
Swara: its my job… but you not telling my bro and father… both doesn’t know about this…
Sanskar: hmm means your sis know about this…
Swara: if you done can I say one thinks…
Sanskar: ya say it…
Swara: I don’t want to marry … can you say no to my family..
Sanskar: you want to I lie them…
Swara: lie them means
Sanskar: of course I like you..
Then antra knock the door…
Antra: di, papa calling you both … if you done your work
Swara: haa, we are coming
Then both go down and all of them just do chit-chat…

After sometime
Sanskar: uncle, now its my leaving time …
Shekhar: arre beta, you can live with us … this time where you go… tomorrow you go not now..???
Sanskar: arre no uncle , how can I live here..???
Swara: you can live with us, we have not any problem…
Antra: look even di said she have not any problem, then why you shy only for my night…(tease him)
Sanskar: okay but only for today..
Shekhar: Swara for today you sleep with antra and see him your room…
Swara nodded in yes.. Then Swara left for her room and Sanskar Left behind her…
Sanskar: means you say yes for marriage…
Swara: when did I say..
(Open door and picked pillow)
Sanskar: Arre then why you don’t go my home….
Swara: I know, you don’t know your home root…that’s why
Then she left for antra room..
Sanskar standing like statue…
Sanskar (monologue): how she know about this…
Then he also go behind her..
Sanskar: Swara one min…
But she go antra room and close the door..
Sanskar doesn’t know where is antra room and he walking corridor..
After sometimes
Sanskar go her room and thinking about all things whatever happens today…and then he sleep…

Precap: Swasan next meeting
Hope so you guys like it… and if you guys want any for me then surely you can and don’t forget to comment it how was the part….
If you want character sketch then comment it…
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    40 Comments

    1. Febi on February 13, 2017 9:03 am

      Just loved it dear

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 8:58 pm

        Thanks Dr…
        Glad you loved it

    2. KrsytleS on February 13, 2017 9:13 am

      Awsm Dr…update soon nxt part

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 8:59 pm

        Thanks Dr… I will try it soon

    3. Simi on February 13, 2017 9:14 am

      Nice.. ??

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:00 pm

        Thanks dr

    4. Anniya on February 13, 2017 9:42 am

      Nice…
      Update next part soon

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:01 pm

        Thanks Dr…
        I will try it

    5. chandu on February 13, 2017 9:42 am

      nice…!!

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:01 pm

        Thanks

    6. Kaur Daljeet on February 13, 2017 10:01 am

      Good

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:12 pm

        Thanks

    7. Somya sha on February 13, 2017 10:37 am

      Nyc..

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:14 pm

        Thanks

    8. Sus on February 13, 2017 10:40 am

      Hey nyc but different concept

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:15 pm

        Thanks ..
        Glad you like it

    9. srusti on February 13, 2017 11:30 am

      Awesome yaar n update nxt part soon dear…..

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:15 pm

        Thanks..
        I will try it

    10. AnuAnn on February 13, 2017 11:42 am

      Interesting dear

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:22 pm

        Thanks dr

    11. Navi on February 13, 2017 12:10 pm

      Superb..

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:22 pm

        Thanks ..
        glad you like it

    12. mica on February 13, 2017 12:27 pm

      uugghhh Racna ! where is ABC village ? i asked google and he didn’t find it huaaaaaaa…

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:27 pm

        Hehehe even I don’t know…
        Glad you like it …

    13. a on February 13, 2017 12:37 pm

      nice..

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:23 pm

        Thanks dr

    14. Arshaanya on February 13, 2017 12:47 pm

      Nyc

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:24 pm

        Thanks dr

    15. gayathri.visu on February 13, 2017 2:42 pm

      Interesting and nice… Post next part soon.

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:24 pm

        Thanks Dr…
        Glad you like it…
        I will try it

    16. praju on February 13, 2017 5:39 pm

      Nice

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:25 pm

        Thanks dr

    17. Kakali on February 13, 2017 5:55 pm

      Awesome…loved it sooo much..!! Post next one soon..!!We would love to read ur further parts..!! Welcome to SwaSan family..!! Thnk u.. ;-*

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:29 pm

        Thanks you…
        Glad you like it…
        I will surely try post soon…

    18. Shifa96 on February 13, 2017 8:46 pm

      Nice

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:25 pm

        Thanks dr

    19. priya on February 13, 2017 9:19 pm

      nice dear

      • Rachna on February 13, 2017 9:26 pm

        Thanks Dr …
        Glad you like it

    20. vyshu10 on February 14, 2017 6:11 pm

      nice

      • Rachna on February 14, 2017 7:42 pm

        Thanks

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