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Home»Fan Fiction»Be With Me (Part 1)
Fan Fiction Swaragini

Be With Me (Part 1)

cutepieBy cutepieNovember 28, 201642 Comments4 Mins Read
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A group of 5 guys are talking and sipping their coffee’s at the mall’s food court. They all met after a long time and were very happy to see each other and continuously pulling each other legs.

Suddenly a girl came their and she saw all of them laughing and she dialed a person’s mobile number eagerly waiting that they should lift the call.

The guy attended the call and he said hello. When the girl asked the particular person about his where abouts he lied very smoothly that he is busy in meeting and he will be late to come home.

The girl moves towards the table of the 5guys and holds her phone in hand without cutting the call standing at the back of that one guy.

While all the other guys looked suspiciously at her, where 2 of them recognised her and they was about to warn that person but she glared at them. They silently put their heads down and busied themselves with eating icecream.

The girl uttered “oh you are seriously busy, am sorry to disturb you.  You finish your work and come. I will take care of mom. Ok bye” saying this she cut the call.

The guy smirked thinking how she believed and he escaped from his duties.

All of a sudden his smirk vanished when she poured a jug of cold water on his head. He shouted and looked at her. She was looking at him furiously giving a look clearly saying ‘he is dead for today and she won’t leave him’ . The guy gulped and before he can take any step she started beating him with her hands.

All the people who are present their looked at them where some laughed and some were awestruck.

The guy took hold of her hands and made sit her in his lap. She wiggled but he kept his grip firm and was continuously asking sorry and to relax.

She replied “don’t bhai, how can you leave me alone??  Mom was giving so much work as we shifted newly to the city and we should rearrange the house, decorate rooms and all.  But you idiot. You nicely escaped saying you got meeting. Wait i will inform mom about your cheating”.  She huffed and got up to go.

The guy let her go and challenged her saying “she will not believe you, she loves me more than you. you know that right and by the way do you have any proof that am cheating”.

“bhai, am your sister and i have proof that too hd video with nice clean pic clarity”.  Saying that she showed her phone where she recorded him and his friends.

The guy stood up suddenly and pulled her elbow, made her sit in the seat beside him “am sorry sweety, baby, teddy plz forgive me. I will buy you whatever you want. Plz don’t tell to mom. Pretty plz”

“you will buy me whatever i want” she asked once again to confirm what she heard was true. Where the guy nodded. She replied with an attitude “for now i need a hot choclate and what about pizza. Come on go and get it now”. He left from their cursing her sister.

The girl laughed at his brother and she turned to look at his friends. Rahul, dev greeted her and she smiled warmly at them. Where as the remaining guys waiting for her proper introduction.

Rahul introduced the girl to laksh and sanskaar. She said their hello to them and busied herself in talking with dev. Occasionally answering rahul’s questions.

After some 20 mins the guy appeared their and took his seat next to her sister and placed her choclate and pizza.

She got excited and started eating it without offering him he looked at her dangerously,  she smiled sheepishly and offered him where he refused with attitude. She gave ‘go to hell’  look and continued her munching.

Suddenly laksh said something shocking all of them and the girl to choke on her food and she coughed vigorously. Where the guy furiously looked at laksh ready to kill him, but seeing her sister’s condition, she patted her head and handed her water.

She looked at him with anger filled eyes and stomped his foot on his leg. Laksh shouted and she dragged her brother with him.

******

Keep guessing who was that girl????

and what laksh had said which make the guy to get furious????

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    About me....Am a student and I love to write stories. I hope u like my stories too. I love chocolates and doing fun :)

    42 Comments

    1. A.xx on November 28, 2016 8:53 pm

      fab loved the first part and i think the girl was ragini….
      can’t wait to find out what he said to her and why she got angry…
      amazing so post soon.xx

      • cutepie on November 28, 2016 9:49 pm

        Tq dear. I will update soon 🙂

    2. Sindhura on November 28, 2016 8:54 pm

      Awesome yar

      • cutepie on November 28, 2016 9:50 pm

        Tq dr 🙂

    3. Simin on November 28, 2016 8:56 pm

      I think the girl is our shona
      And lucky as usual some lame joke

      • cutepie on November 28, 2016 9:50 pm

        Sry yaar. I didn’t made like that plot in my mind. So wait to know more 🙂

    4. Jessica on November 28, 2016 9:09 pm

      seems interesting

      • cutepie on November 28, 2016 9:55 pm

        Tq dear. Stick to it. U vl lik it 🙂

    5. lisa on November 28, 2016 9:22 pm

      i want it to be ragini but i know that is swara b/c all ur ff are swasan

      • cutepie on November 28, 2016 9:56 pm

        Their is raglak too in my ff 🙂

    6. Soujanya on November 28, 2016 9:34 pm

      Awesome…..?

      • cutepie on November 28, 2016 9:57 pm

        Tq dr 🙂

    7. IQRA222 on November 28, 2016 9:49 pm

      awesome
      i think the girl is our ragoo doll
      pls continue

      • cutepie on November 28, 2016 9:58 pm

        Tq dr 🙂

    8. Ashnoor on November 28, 2016 10:02 pm

      Awesome

      • cutepie on November 28, 2016 11:08 pm

        Tq yaar?

    9. Aasthu on November 28, 2016 11:06 pm

      mi8 b swara……..but wud be happy if it was ragini…….I prefer raglak than swalak……

      • cutepie on November 29, 2016 10:59 am

        Tq dr 🙂

    10. lovely on November 28, 2016 11:07 pm

      Ragini

      • cutepie on November 29, 2016 10:59 am

        🙂

    11. Asw on November 28, 2016 11:12 pm

      Nice yaar I think that girl is Ragini quite interesting keep going

      • cutepie on November 29, 2016 10:59 am

        🙂 tq dr

    12. Arshaanya on November 28, 2016 11:15 pm

      Wow its something intrstng…
      Hope its swasan..

      • cutepie on November 29, 2016 11:00 am

        Tq dr

    13. Moni_ragz on November 28, 2016 11:19 pm

      Loved the epi. Waiting 2 knw who was she nd wt laksh said..

      • cutepie on November 29, 2016 11:00 am

        I will update soon dr 🙂

    14. Ragz_teju on November 29, 2016 9:58 am

      awesome

      • cutepie on November 29, 2016 11:01 am

        Tq yaar 🙂

    15. anu on November 29, 2016 11:48 am

      nyc

      • cutepie on November 29, 2016 2:27 pm

        Tq dr?

    16. Anniya on November 29, 2016 3:04 pm

      Awsm one…
      Tnx for informing me..
      About girl I am of stressing my mind…
      Waiting for next part

      • cutepie on November 29, 2016 6:21 pm

        Next part updated darln??

    17. Abdul hafiz(Uma) on November 29, 2016 3:21 pm

      Interesting concept dear.. Plz continue..
      Take care
      Keep smiling?

      • cutepie on November 29, 2016 6:21 pm

        Updated next part hav a look?

    18. jazzy on November 29, 2016 7:41 pm

      the girl is raguni i think

      • cutepie on November 29, 2016 10:49 pm

        Updated second part dr. Hav a look 🙂

    19. asra on November 29, 2016 10:00 pm

      awesome dear…i think the girl s ragini…anyways waiting for ur nxt update…tkcr dear….

      • cutepie on November 29, 2016 10:49 pm

        Updated next part dr. Tq yar 🙂

    20. Sreevijayan on November 29, 2016 10:08 pm

      Awwww..that was an amazing start dear..loved it sooo much…..

      • cutepie on November 29, 2016 10:50 pm

        Tq dr 🙂

    21. hemalattha on November 30, 2016 2:35 pm

      nice yar

      • cutepie on November 30, 2016 5:19 pm

        Tq dr 🙂

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