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Barrister Babu— 21st Century Version (Chapter 4)

HermioneBy HermioneFebruary 16, 2022176 Comments8 Mins Read
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CHAPTER 4: A NASTY BREAKUP

 

Bondita was panting and huffing, trying to catch her breath after completing a run of 5 kilometres. Sweating profusely, she sat on a swing in a park nearby. She sat and admired the early morning aesthetic beauty of the environment, manifested in the form of a park around her.

As she swung on the swing, numerous thoughts and questions swirled through her mind. The most prominent one being, why everyone thought that she had to hide herself.

Why did SHE have to go away, when the wrongdoer was most certainly someone else? He was in jail, serving his punishment of a year. But why did she have to leave home? Wasn’t it like a punishment for her?

Bondita didn’t want to leave her mother alone, with those greedy wolves, who called themselves her Mama-Maami and the caretakers of her and her mother.

She couldn’t wait to become an adult, so that she could be fully independent and earn a living for her and her Maa, on her own.

She remembered her Baba. Life was so beautiful when he was there. When she and her parents were a happy little family, everything was so blissful. Why did Dugga Maa take it all away from her?

The early morning sunlight glistened upon the lone tear that had rolled down her cheek and she quickly wiped it away.

Life was difficult. Life was a pile of rubbish. Life was messed up. But she had to live. And why she had to live, was another question… She had so many questions. But who was going to answer them? Even that was a question.

Chuckling, she got up, and made her way back home.

On reaching home, she saw her Mama-Maami discussing something, in hushed tones.

When she came in, both of them looked at her exasperatedly. Bondita just rolled her eyes and went into the washroom to freshen up.

———————–

Anirudh was waiting for Saudamini in the café, holding his coffee mug so tightly, it might break if he applied more pressure. He was in deep thinking. His furrowed eyebrows indicating his nervousness and anxiety.

His head was busy in imagining different scenarios that could ensue after the breakup. And none of them, gave him the hope of a good conclusion.

How he wished everything would be fine. He had spent a whole hour, carefully reading all the instructions given in the guideline of ‘How to break up, without causing a ruckus’, step by step, from Google.

He didn’t want to upset Mini. She was his childhood friend. She had always stood up for him; been there for him. But she had become too invested in this relationship. She had become somewhat possessive.

Anirudh didn’t want to destroy his relationship with her. He wanted to retain their friendship. It was precious to him. And that was why, he had to finish THIS relationship, before it became toxic. It was necessary and the right thing to do.

And the right path, is never the easy path. But Anirudh was not someone who would not do the right thing, just because it was hard and difficult. He always had, and always would, choose the right path, however difficult.

“Ahem, ahem”, someone cleared their throat from behind, breaking his chain of thoughts.

He looked back to find Saudamini looking down at him, a pretty smile playing upon her lips.

“Hey! What’s up?”, she asked, sliding into the chair, opposite to his. She took the coffee mug that he had already ordered for her.

“I hope you don’t mind that I pre-ordered your coffee before you came. Want to eat something?”, Anirudh asked, smiling politely.

“No. Nothing for now. And Anirudh, honestly tell me. What’s wrong? I know something is up with you”, she asked him, giving him a look that clearly said, ‘don’t you dare lie to me’.

“Oh… Nothing. Just…”, Anirudh started saying, when Mini cut him off, and said, “Look, no one knows and understands you better than me. I perfectly know something’s wrong. Is it your Kaka not agreeing for our marriage, Anirudh?”.

He looked at Mini. This was wrong. Wrong on so many levels. He couldn’t do this to her. She was building castles in the air. Here she was, thinking about their marriage and he was thinking about how to break up with her peacefully. He couldn’t take it anymore.

“Weshouldbreakup!”, he said in one short breath, his eyes shut tightly.

Why wasn’t Mini responding?

He slowly opened his eyes to find her looking at him, evident confusion etched upon her face.

“Sorry? Anirudh, what do you want to say? Please be clear!”, she asked exasperatedly.

Taking a deep breath, he strengthened his resolve. He looked at her, staring straight into her eyes, and said, “I think… I think we should probably break up. It’s for the best”, he said.

He had expected Mini to get mad at him; laugh disbelievingly, but he only got a prolonged silence.

Not wanting to miss the chance, he started explaining, “Mini, look we both have different goals and ambitions. You want to settle down abroad. I want to live here, with my family beside me. I want to do good for people. I want to make my life useful for others. You know my plans. I’ll be a law teacher for a year or two. Then I will pursue independent barristry. I would have a busy life. I won’t be able to give much time to you or to us. And you deserve someone who can do that. We won’t work well together, Mini. Now, please don’t be mad at me. Try to understand”.

All of a sudden, Saudamini stood up. Anirudh followed and stood up too. Both stood facing each other, one staring into the other’s eyes. Anirudh with guilt in his eyes, and Saudamini with hurt and anger.

“Are you out of your mind, Anirudh? Have you lost it?”, Saudamini asked, rather loudly. Anirudh looked around to find a few people starting to turn around to look at them.

“I thought you were different! You were better!”, she shrieked.

“Different? Better? From whom, Mini?”, Anirudh asked, looking utterly confused.

“From all other men, who are afraid of commitment. From all those heartbreakers”, Mini said, sniffling dramatically, tears flowing down her eyes.

“You are no different Anirudh! You played with my heart and my aspirations!”, she yelled, pointing her finger at him.

By now, almost all people in the café had turned to look at both of them. Some of them, especially the women, were giving disapproving glances to Anirudh.

“No Saudamini. I didn’t play with your dreams. In fact, I didn’t want to give you false hopes and dreams. But, I want us to remain friends, Mini”, he said, looking at her beseechingly.

“Shut up! Just shut up Anirudh!”, she yelled, angrily wiping her tears. “You are a blo*dy moron”, she accused him.

Anirudh just stared at her, too confused and surprised to say anything.

And then, Saudamini strode forward and slapped him across his face. Anirudh stumbled, holding onto the table for support.

He stared at Mini, open-mouthed and wide-eyed. He was way too taken aback to even say something.

And out of nowhere, two women at the nearby table started clapping merrily, as if they’d just witnessed a great climax to a blockbuster movie at the theatre.

“Damn you!”, she yelled.

Anirudh felt someone tap his shoulder from behind. Recovering from his shock, he turned back to look at a tall man staring at him, sympathetically. He was the café manager.

“Look mister, we can’t have this kind of behaviour here. Take her out of here, please”, he said.

“Damn you as well!”, Saudamini shouted at the manager and stormed out of the café. Anirudh just sighed and hurriedly paid the bill.

“You can get out as well”, the manager said, nodding solemnly.

“Yeah, yeah. I’m not planning to settle down here. I’m going”, Anirudh grumbled and rushed to follow Saudamini.

“Mini! Mini! Listen to me, please! Look, I don’t want things to end between us, this way. I still want your friendship”, he pleaded.

“Well, you should have thought about that, before you broke my heart, you damn… I don’t even have words for you!”, she shouted at him.

“TAXI!!”, she called, and boarded the taxi.

Anirudh sighed, stroking his now bruised cheek. The breakup went just as he had imagined.

 

Author’s Notes (A/N): How was the chapter? Was I able to write the breakup nicely?😁

How was Bondita’s predicament?

Comment and let me know your valuable suggestions and opinions☺️… 

Tell me what else you would like to see in this story… I will try to include everyone’s ideas 😇…

Love you loads 💙💛…

 

 

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    1. Sreya Susan Roy on February 16, 2022 8:22 am

      Nice episode
      Anirudh googled “how to break up without creating a ruckus”
      That cracked me up🤣

      I know it will difficult for mini and her reaction is justified ,but Anirudh and Mini are not meant for each other🥲

      • Hermione on February 16, 2022 9:32 am

        Thanks a ton, Sreya Di ☺️… Glad you found the episode nice🧡…
        I cracked up while writing that, too😂😂…
        Hmm, you’re right. It’s difficult for Mini and so, she reacts in that immature way. But what can we even do?🙂… They ain’t meant for each other 😶…

    2. Moon light on February 16, 2022 11:11 am

      Hello fam
      Good morning
      How are you all?😘💖💖

    3. Moon light on February 16, 2022 12:08 pm

      Anyone??????

    4. Sakeenah
      Sakeenah on February 16, 2022 2:25 pm

      Beautiful episode choti I love it ❤❤❤❤❤… I don’t know break up can happen this way 😅😅😂😂… Really nice dear 😘.

      • Hermione on February 16, 2022 4:04 pm

        Thanks Di ❣️… Why can’t breakups happen this way?🤪… Anything can happen in fiction 😝😜

      • Sakeenah
        Sakeenah on February 16, 2022 4:19 pm

        Yeah anything can happen in fiction 😂😂😂.

    5. Moon light on February 16, 2022 2:31 pm

      Hi baby
      How are you?🤗💞

      • Sakeenah
        Sakeenah on February 16, 2022 3:29 pm

        Am fine dear 💙💙… How are u doing and how is the wound under your eye I hope is better now.

    6. Moon light on February 16, 2022 3:51 pm

      Completely cured baby 😃💞
      Only stigma is there

      • Hermione on February 16, 2022 4:04 pm

        Glad to know, sis♥️

      • Moon light on February 16, 2022 4:26 pm

        🥰🥰🥰

      • Sakeenah
        Sakeenah on February 16, 2022 4:20 pm

        Good 💜💜💜.

      • Moon light on February 16, 2022 4:26 pm

        💖💖

    7. Sakeenah
      Sakeenah on February 16, 2022 4:20 pm

      Hello Hermi choti how are u 💞💞💞.

      • Hermione on February 16, 2022 4:34 pm

        I’m absolutely fine Saki Di 😇… What about you?

    8. Moon light on February 16, 2022 4:22 pm

      Hello everyone 😄

      • Hermione on February 16, 2022 4:35 pm

        Hii siss!!😃🤓

    9. Moon light on February 16, 2022 4:56 pm

      Hi babes 😃
      How r u?🤗💖💖

      • Hermione on February 16, 2022 5:03 pm

        Superrrb Chaandni dearest ☺️❤️… How are you?♥️

      • Moon light on February 16, 2022 5:16 pm

        Iam good 😊💖

    10. Sakeenah
      Sakeenah on February 16, 2022 5:06 pm

      Am fine Hermi sis 😊.

      • Hermione on February 16, 2022 5:09 pm

        😇♥️

      • Sakeenah
        Sakeenah on February 16, 2022 5:13 pm

        💞💞💞💞💞

      • Sakeenah
        Sakeenah on February 16, 2022 5:13 pm

        💞💞💞💞💞.

    11. Sakeenah
      Sakeenah on February 16, 2022 5:11 pm

      Her is sis and Moon sis what’s up are u guys watching Anchal’s new show???….. If yes how did u fine it??

      • Moon light on February 16, 2022 5:18 pm

        Yeah Iam not watching in tv
        Just reading the written update on tu😅
        the show is superb 🤗
        But here anchu character is more innocent 🙂

      • Sakeenah
        Sakeenah on February 16, 2022 6:27 pm

        Yeah she’s very different from our Bondita..

      • Hermione on February 16, 2022 7:37 pm

        I’m also not watching on TV. I just caught up with episode 1 on Voot🤓… And first episode was good, to be honest 🙂

      • Sakeenah
        Sakeenah on February 16, 2022 8:13 pm

        Hermi sis I think is going well but I really hope we get to see Pari to be strong and bold with time.

      • Hermione on February 16, 2022 8:22 pm

        Hmm… Absolutely. Character development is a thing that many ITV serials don’t portray properly 🙃… I hope it happens here

      • Sakeenah
        Sakeenah on February 16, 2022 9:19 pm

        Let’s hope so..

    12. Sakeenah
      Sakeenah on February 16, 2022 5:12 pm

      💞💞💞💞

    13. Sakeenah
      Sakeenah on February 16, 2022 9:41 pm

      Good night 🌚.

      • Moon light on February 16, 2022 9:45 pm

        Good night 💙💙

      • Hermione on February 16, 2022 10:00 pm

        Good night Di 💙🤍…

    14. Moon light on February 16, 2022 10:53 pm

      Good night guys 💙🤍

    15. Barbie on February 17, 2022 12:24 am

      Hi my dearest sisters!!🤓🤓🤓
      How’re you all? Hope everyone’s doing great!!!

      .
      .
      Ummm…. I need a help please…😛😛
      .
      I googled a lot about this, but didn’t get any solution, so thought to ask my sisters….
      Because, I don’t think anyone will guide me better than you all..🙃🙃🙃🙃
      .
      .
      Actually, I’ve to make an EVS project on the topic “Water Scarcity”. This project is really very important for board.
      It’s of 50 marks and the page limit is only 5 pages!
      So, I’m quite confused as what should I write in that…😕😕
      There are many points to write on water scarcity, but I’ve to write it in a concise way.
      .
      As I said earlier that this is very important for my boards percentage, so I want this project to be the best!!
      So, kindly suggest me what should I write…🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
      .
      .
      Same thing is for PE. The topic is “Exercise: Scientific view”.
      This is also for 50 marks, and we’ve to write in 5 pages only.
      .
      .
      And, they’ve just given us the topic, no format is given…
      .
      Please please please suggest me how should I write it…..
      Even if you suggest me the main points to be covered, I’ll be able to write it and would be very grateful to you!🙏🏻🙏🏻
      Hoping to receive a positive response..🙂
      Thank you so much!!❤❤❤

      • Barbie on February 17, 2022 12:25 am

        And yesss, I’m really missing you all endlesslyyyyyy….💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞

      • Hermione on February 17, 2022 9:10 am

        Hi Barbie sisss!! I’m fine ☺️… How are you? Though I know it’s useless to ask😛. Coz you must be busy and tensed with the ongoing assignments and exams 😅
        .
        Water Scarcity- Hmmm… Organize everything in a chronological format. Now, since they haven’t given a format, maje your own😌…
        Firstly, talk about the importance of water. Then define water scarcity. Then talk about the practical root causes of water scarcity. I prefer you combine one or two points and make a strong point, wherever possible. And then write a brief explanation about it. Then, write about the consequences of water scarcity. The harmful effects that, not only the human race, but all living beings and the environment faces. Don’t forget to write about the remedies; the possible solutions of the water scarcity problem. Also mention the hotspots, i.e., the places which face a lot of water scarcity. And write something especially regarding water scarcity in India.
        Another thing: I don’t know whether you are going to do it or not and whether it’s allowed or not, but do try to add some visual representations. Like diagrams and charts and tables and pictures. You can add graphs about the levels of water scarcity and all.
        Also, try to research from books. Because books have authentic info, that Google doesn’t. Search the names of books on water scarcity, and then go through the books, if possible.
        .
        The same format goes for scientific view of exercise. Talk about the biological benefits of exercise on human body, and the chemical reactions that exercises induce in our body. Here also, add pics, diagrams, etc., if possible. Andddd, even in this case, use books for research, instead of Google. Much more convenient and authentic…
        .
        Sis, you study at a much higher level than me. You know these things best. What possible guidance can I provide you?🙃🙃🙃… Still, I’ve tried. I know these are vague points. Buttttt… This is all I can say, right now. Really sorry, if my points were of no use to you😶…
        .
        And I miss you toooooo 💕… Phir milenge chalte chalte 😌☺️❤️

    16. Hermione on February 17, 2022 12:30 pm

      Good Afternoon sisters!!😃😃😃…
      Wanted to inform you all about something.
      .
      .
      .
      :THE ROAD NOT TAKEN:
      They were probably destined to be together forever. Years ago, tragedy had brought them together. And now, years later, another tragedy brought them closer. Years later, fate decided to give them another chance at happiness.
      .
      Anirudh Roy Chowdhury and Bondita Das had always loved each other, albeit unknown to one another. In a way, that no one ever has. But they did nothing about it, and married different people, breaking each other’s hearts.
      .
      Years later, after tragedies, death, divorce; and in the midst of the journey of raising their kids, Anirudh and Bondita decide, after all this time, they deserve a chance to be together. A chance to give a closure to the tale of their unconditional love.
      .
      The Road Not Taken- A tale of happiness and contentment; of tragedy; of heartbreak and of limitless, timeless love, that knows no bounds……..
      .
      NOTE*: This story is based on the modern day. Not the 1900s.
      .
      .
      .
      This is an ff, that I have recently started. Today only, to be precise 😁… The prologue is already out on Wattpad. Do check it out.
      If you do, then kindly vote and comment.

    17. Moon light on February 17, 2022 5:36 pm

      Wow! Cutie 😃😃
      Waiting 🤗🤗🤗
      But send me the Wattpad link pls

    18. Moon light on February 17, 2022 5:43 pm

      Very sorry pari didi 😔
      I didn’t know about this
      If I get anything about ur project
      Surely I will say🙂

    19. Hermione on February 17, 2022 7:36 pm

      https://www.wattpad.com/story/301950251?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=WriterHP&wp_originator=3qnsSI8IQ4TXWyEyAysjmmW%2BxhBm9bS20bMmM3azofeZ2UQHDeX5K8h8z4KS05w1DSo6P2YEBAukDOK4l0cDhjIVQ0s542xc8BQ3XDd9dbd0a2T411hBdsRRGkinHUuN
      .
      Link to “The Road Not Taken”….
      Do read and vote, if possible ☺️… And definitely comment😇

    20. Moon light on February 17, 2022 8:56 pm

      Superb babes👏👏
      Eagarly waiting 🤗🤗
      And thumbnail is awesome 🥰🥰

    21. Moon light on February 17, 2022 8:57 pm

      Babes!
      U will not continue your previous ff?😟

      • Hermione on February 17, 2022 9:04 pm

        Of course I’ll continue it 😁… That’s going to run for a long time, sis😌… This one was just an idea. It’ll be over in about 15-20 chapters. But the BB 21st Century will still get updates ☺️♥️

    22. Hermione on February 17, 2022 9:09 pm

      Glad you liked the prologue Chaandni dearest ☺️❤️… And super happy to know that the thumbnail was good enough 🥰🧡

      • Moon light on February 17, 2022 9:57 pm

        Iam super happy that you will continue ur’s previous ff😃😃

      • Moon light on February 17, 2022 9:57 pm

        😋🤗

    23. Sreya Susan Roy on February 18, 2022 11:34 am

      https://www.instagram.com/reel/CaG4AhJPuLi/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link

      Adura sapna of BB fans🤧
      BARRISTER BONDITA ROY CHOUDHURY× BARRISTER ANIRUDH ROY CHOUDHURY

      It would have been superb if this sequence was real🥲❤️♥️

    24. Sakeenah
      Sakeenah on February 18, 2022 5:55 pm

      Hello fam

    25. Sakeenah
      Sakeenah on February 18, 2022 5:56 pm

      Hi Hermi dear it’s really a nice idea u gave Barbie 👌👌👌👌…. And your new ff is amazing 💞💞💞💞.

      • Hermione on February 18, 2022 7:43 pm

        Thanks a ton, Saki Di 🥰❤️…
        How are you?
        And before you ask, I’m absolutely fine 😁💕…

      • Sakeenah
        Sakeenah on February 18, 2022 7:50 pm

        Lol 😂 😂… Am absolutely fine dear how was school today.

      • Hermione on February 18, 2022 7:53 pm

        Have exams from Monday. So… No school 😁…

      • Sakeenah
        Sakeenah on February 18, 2022 7:58 pm

        Wishing you all the best with your exams dear 💕💕💕💕💕.

    26. Moon light on February 18, 2022 7:55 pm

      Helloooo🧐🧐

      • Hermione on February 18, 2022 7:56 pm

        Hiii sisss!!🤓

    27. Hermione on February 18, 2022 8:04 pm

      Thank youuuuu for your best wishes Saki Di 🥰💕💕

    28. Moon light on February 18, 2022 8:06 pm

      Hello babes 😃😃
      Epadi irukinga 😊💕

      • Hermione on February 18, 2022 8:09 pm

        Naan nalla irrukiren 😁… Epadi irrukinga, Chaandni dearest?☺️🧡

      • Moon light on February 18, 2022 8:10 pm

        Naan migavum natraga iruken 😊💖

      • Moon light on February 18, 2022 8:11 pm

        *nantraga

    29. Moon light on February 18, 2022 8:15 pm

      Anybody??????????👀👀

      • Hermione on February 18, 2022 8:19 pm

        I’ll come after 9:30. My phone has 3% battery left😂…

      • Moon light on February 18, 2022 8:20 pm

        Ok😂😂

    30. Sunshine on February 18, 2022 8:39 pm

      Hello fam….❣❣how r u all?

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