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Home»Fan Fiction»Bachpan mai PYAAR tha…Abb NAFRAT hai… (part 1)
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Bachpan mai PYAAR tha…Abb NAFRAT hai… (part 1)

Akshaya_13By Akshaya_13March 17, 2017Updated:March 17, 201710 Comments2 Mins Read
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Hello…back again with my first chapter ever.!! So I’m first gonna go in detail with how the couples fell in love n bcz of what they got separated will be a suspense n will be revealed after a leap. The oberoi family is same n negatives in the family for now are positive but bcz of smthng they’ll get back as IB characters….n in my ff anyone are not against early relationships..like of smaller ones…….

Here’s the first part..hope u enjoy :

A huge mansion is shown….inside everything is not so clear to be seen… after few turns someone (along with whom we’re exploring!)enters a big room…there was a big bed with 5 kids sleeping with sunset styled blanket draped upon them…back of the bed was a beautiful wallpaper of night sky….

The person comes n tries to wake’em up…but no use…the person got a naughty idea…he went, bought something n threw on them….(guess what?? Ofc WATER!!) All the five woke up with a jerk and shouted: Fhat the wuck!! We’ll not leave you!!
They ran behind the person and at last caught and shouted: PAPA!/CHOTTE PAPA!!

Person: baacho(softly) it’s SCHOOL TIME!! (Shouting)
All together: OH NO!!ABB TO GAYE!!
Child 1:yeh sab tumlogon ki wajah se….God…

Child 2: just stop your blame game bhaiya!!

Child 3:oh really? U just shut up k!

Child 4:haan! Ye sab aapki wajah se hua hai bhaiyya!!

Child 5:tum ladte raho…main to jaa raha hun tayyar hooney….byee(in a teasing tone)

Everyone except C 5:RUKO!!

Child 1: aaj toh mujhe uss ladki ko samjhaana hi hoga ki she can’t be my GF!
All (except C1): ek aur! Ek to accept karley yaar! !

Other side(both scenes were happening simultaneously )

5 CHILDREN were getting ready…for their day of school..

Child 1: come on….hurry up!

Just then someone comes and says: it’s too EARLY BETA!

Child 2: dii…just chill yaar…yeh ham pehli baar school nahi jaa rahe….

Child 3:gadhe! Tuney mera paratha khaa liya! !

Child 4: parathe ke alaawa kuch soojta hai aapke dimaag mein! Wear your tie n belt first!

Child 5: dii! Uska ek aur latter!!

Child 1: phirse nahi! In mind: sorry chameli! Aaj tujhetootna hi padega….

Screen freezes on both the Child 1s.

How’s it?and THANK YOU DO MUCH FOR WHO EVER COMMENTED…and do guess which gangs are each of them…..next epi on the way n sorry for updating too late….

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    10 Comments

    1. shabnam on March 17, 2017 2:03 pm

      Awesome keep writing next update soon

    2. Lilly on March 17, 2017 2:09 pm

      Nice epi ….

    3. shivika on March 17, 2017 2:15 pm

      Nyc

    4. Shrutika on March 17, 2017 2:29 pm

      Waiting for the next part. Fabulous.

    5. Bhavana on March 17, 2017 3:26 pm

      Nice

    6. Sslachu on March 17, 2017 3:49 pm

      Nice . Keep writing

    7. Surbhi Sharma on March 17, 2017 4:06 pm

      Awesome

    8. nikitajai on March 17, 2017 4:13 pm

      It is nice one dear

    9. shuklarashi on March 17, 2017 6:04 pm

      Awesome i they are anika family

    10. misspoetess on March 17, 2017 8:39 pm

      1st group= oberois
      2nd group=vadheras

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