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Home»Fan Fiction»BABUL! ( RAGLAK/RAGSAN ) CHAPTER 4
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BABUL! ( RAGLAK/RAGSAN ) CHAPTER 4

Richa19By Richa19November 5, 201667 Comments9 Mins Read
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Hey guys I’m back with another chapter ‘! Thank you all for supporting me…. Thanks to silent readers also…..

So Hope you all will like it. Also….

Link for previous chapter

 

 

http://www.tellyupdates.com/babul-chapter-3-raglaksan/

 

 

recap : raglak’s friendship

 

 

That  day evening , RAGLAK again met in a restaurant .

 

Laksh : y don’t u try coffee today ??

 

Ragini : no chance .. i’ll hv tea u see wht u want ….

 

Said ragini shrugging .

 

Laksh ( to impress her ): waiter .. two masala tea please ….

 

Ragini smiles . after having tea they both sat on the beach enjoying the sunset .

 

 

Ragini : do u know lucky ,… i hv never liked seeing sunsets ….

 

Laksh : y ??

 

Ragini : see na they always bring darkness and dullness .. i don’t really like it when this darkness over shadows these beautiful bright colors ……………

 

Laksh ( cutting her ): ………. so that a new day a  new sun will bring more happiness , life in our lives .

 

Ragini looks at him amazed .

 

Laksh : ginni … naye din ko aane k liye purane din ka khatam hona bhi toh zaroori hai na ………..

 

He holds her hand and they both share an eye lock …………………………………………………………………………………………….. . . . . .

 

 

 
The next day 

it was a bright summer morning . laksh and ragini arrived at the golf course . it was almost a week since ragini was teaching him this game and laskh was least interested but still tried to focus .

 

ragini gave him the golf stick and placed a ball in front of him .

 

ragini : now hold the stick like that n hit the ball slightly towards the hole ..

 

she said giving him the directions nd laksh was busy staring aat her .

 

laksh then hit the ball and thankfully after so many attemplts finally the ball went to its place .

 

ragini came towards him clapping and giving him the widest smile she can .

 

ragin ?: finally u did it lucky…… i hope now u r getting interested in this game …..

 

she said coming near to him and taking the stick from him …….

 

laksh ( starig at her ) : i don’t know abt the the game but im surely interested in the teacher who’s teaching me ……….

 

ragini looked at him surprised .. laksh winked at her making her blush ………. she ran from there smiling followed by laksh.

laksh started whistling  ……….



laksh : Keh rahaa hai dil diwaanaa jaane jaa khaake kasam – 2

Hum ishq main mar jaayenge kuch bhi sanam kar jaayenge

Chodenge naa daaman yaar kaa ((wada raha – 3) pyaar kaa) – 2

 

 

( he comes behind her and hugs her )

 

 

Ragini : Keh rahaa hai dil diwaanaa jaane jaa khaake kasam

 

 

( ragini goes away from him and runs from there … he whistles )

 

 

Laksh: Dooriyaan naa ab zaraa ho jaanaa, saanso ke ye darmiyaan

Chhedati hai dhadakano ko pal pal mausam ki narmiyaan

 

Ragini :To aaja chahato ki shabanam pi le,

lamho main sadiyon ko ji le

 

Laksh : Keh raha hai, pal suhana, jaane jaa khaake kasam

 

 

( they are roaming in a park holding hands and side hugginng each other … laksh kisses her on her forehead )

 

 

Ragini : Tu khayaalo ke hansi saaye mein rehata hai raat din,

Kuch nahi hai zindagaani meri, ab tanhaa tere bin

 

Laksh : To aaja janmo kaa bandhan jode, thaam ke baahen naa chhode

 

Ragini : Keh raha hai, har phasaanaa, jaane jaa khaake kasam

 

 

Ragini comes close to him whistling .. laksh smiles at her …

 

 

Laksh : Keh raha hai dil diwaanaa, jaane jaa khaake kasam

 

Ragini : Hum ishq mein mar jaayenge

 

Laksh :kuch bhi sanam kar jaayenge

 

Ragini : Chhodenge naa daaman yaar kaa,

 

Raglak :((wada raha – 3) pyaar kaa) – 2

 

 

( they are so much in love with each otherr ….. holding hands , kissing, roaming , talking , laughing …………… two days have gone n they are totally in love forgetting rest of the world ……….. laksh decides to tell ragii abt his real identity in coming days ……..)

 

 

After a magnificent date , ragini returns home all the way smiling and thinking about her love , laksh .

 

 

She enters her room . some scares her suddenly making weird sounds from behind . ragini gets scared she turns around to find who was it but stumbles and falls on the bed holding someone above her .

 

Her eyes are closed due to fear and the person above is staring at her so lovingly and has a cue smile on his face ………………..

 

He suddenly burst into laughter . ragini opens her eyes and finds her best friend , sanskaar laughing with his eyes closed .

 

 

Ragini starts beating him . sanskaar stops laughing , he holds her hands and they have a deep eye lock .. they are still in the same position . ragini is breathing heavily . sanskaar gets up from her and turns his face , blushing .

 

Ragini too gets up and starts beating him ..

 

Sanskaar : arre ginni wht are u doing stop it yaar ..

 

He said while protecting himself .

 

Ragini : stop it haan ?? u said u’ll be back in 2 days n now see its almost 2 weeks …… huh im not talking to u …….

 

She said fully annoyed and sat on the rocking chair .

 

Sanskaar sat in front of her holding her hands .

 

Sasnkaar : i’m sorry na baba .. but there was so much work na … i’m sorrry … i was working on my new album …

 

He holds his ears and cutely pouts … ragini pulls his cheeks and smiles ..

 

Ragini : okayy . so as im very happy today so i’m forgiving u …. acha tell me wht hv u brought for me ??

 

Sanskaar : ahh dont worry i hv brought many things for u … u say na y r u so happy ??

 

He said sounding excited .

 

Ragini stands and turns towards the window such that her back is facing him …

 

Ragini ( blushing ); voh … sansku … actually i’m in love ………..

 

Sanskaar gets eager to know the name as he also loves her so he wished that may be the distance between them had made her realise that she also loves him ………….. but …………

 

Ragini : i love him sansku .. i love him so much ….

 

 

 

Sanskaar stumbles , his expressions completely changed from happy to sad , from excited to heartbroken , he was surprised , shocked , hurt and wht not …………………………………..

 

But he composed himself as ragini turned around telling her love story to him , to the person who loves her more than his life …………

 

He pasted a fake smile with tears forming in his eyes … he clenched his fist controlling his emotions listening to the love story of his love …………

 

Luckily his phone rang stopping ragini to proceed further .. he quickly excused himself and ran out of her house even though that was not an imp call …………………………….

 

Sanskaar straight away went to his room and fell on the bed crying … he didn’t know how to react …

 

He opened the suitcase which was filled with lots of gifts and chocolates ….. he took out all the things and at the last was kept a beautiful i love you card ………….

 

He cried seeing it ..

 

He opened and it read out the confession written on it ..

 

Sasnkaar ( crying ): i dont know ragini when , how and where it happened .. but it just happened ginni ………… i love you very much .. will you marry ur idiot friend and support him throughout his life ???????

 

He cried reading it and collapsed on the floor …………. he then got up tore that card to the hundred pieces and burnt it ………………………………….

 

He then took a beautiful diamond ring from the suitcase and locked it forever in his cupboard  with his feelings for her ……………………………………………………….

 

 

He cried all night thinking abt his ginni and her love ………………………..

 

There at MM …………

 

Laksh was talking to omi ..

 

Omi : are u sure lucky ??

 

Laksh : of course yaar i don’t have any coice .. i’ll tell abt myself to ginni ….. i don’t want that she shld get to know this from somewhere else .. i cant losse her .. ill tell my identity to her tomorrow …………………..

 

 

 

The episode ends with smiling face of ragini , crying face of sanskaar and determined face of laksh …………

 

 

 

 

{  i hv told u  that sanskaar works in a company and owns a art gallery .. right ???

 

Its not like that he is a singer and is famous .. his many albums have released and were successful hit……………………  }

 

I’M REALLY SORRY FOR ALL THE CONFUSION !!!

 

 

So do tell me through ur comments how was the epi ?? i’ll be waiting .. till then keep smiling .. girlies !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 ********

N yeah I would like to ask one more thing.. Actually two more…

Firstly would u like me to continue this ff with ragsan story also.. I mean it’ll be my story… Do tell me please????

N

Second I want to ask wht is this ” APS CREATION ” from where u get ragsan edits!! If anyone can tell me then t’ll be really thankful…. I’m finding it but can’t get so if anyone can help…….

Thats all pls guys comment n tell me…….

*******

 

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With Love

Richa

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    67 Comments

    1. Sindhura on November 5, 2016 11:08 pm

      Nice
      Both loves ragini equally but feingvsad for sansky
      Is it ragsan ff

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 10:44 pm

        Thank you!! Firstly it’ll be raglak and then Ragsan!!

    2. silent_writer on November 5, 2016 11:11 pm

      Woooow itssss superbbbbb poor sankyyy loveddddddd him yrrrrrrrr hope his heart heal soon ?????

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 10:44 pm

        Thaaankk you so much dear!!! ?

    3. Jayanti on November 5, 2016 11:13 pm

      awesome episode Richa19…. I was waiting for this ff of yours… thanks for posting it. superb

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 10:46 pm

        Thank you so much dear!!! N sorry for making u wait… ?

    4. Vk on November 5, 2016 11:38 pm

      AWESOME episode and i will be very happy if u continue this ff as ragsan story with ur creation

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 10:47 pm

        Thank you so much!!! ?

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 10:50 pm

        Thank you so much dear!!!
        … ?

    5. Sreevijayan on November 5, 2016 11:42 pm

      Awesome update dear…really loved it soo much..yes pls continue wid ur ragsan story also

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 10:50 pm

        Thank you so much sree!!! ?

    6. Fairy on November 5, 2016 11:58 pm

      Wohoooo reallly emotionallll episode dear!!!! Feeelng reallllly sad for sanskaaar!!!oh god pooor he……????? bt d update ws zabardast yaar richu…totallly loved d way u have described each emotions of every charecter…..waitng eagerly for nxt part…keeepockng n stay blesssed sweety????
      N yes yes! Plz cont. Dis ff wid ragsan story …??? love u dr …take care?????????

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:09 pm

        Thaaaankkk youuu so much fairy dear… I’m glad u liked it… Keep smiling sweety!!! ???

    7. Ragz_teju on November 6, 2016 12:37 am

      it’s amazing.. I loved it to the core… please continue

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 10:53 pm

        Thank you so much dear !! ?

    8. CrazygirlS.P on November 6, 2016 1:50 am

      Awesome but feeling sad for Sanky❤️❤️

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:10 pm

        Thank you dear!!! ??

    9. Aliya on November 6, 2016 6:16 am

      Who is paired to ragini?

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:11 pm

        Now its laksh later it’ll be sanskaar!

    10. lovely on November 6, 2016 6:46 am

      https://www.facebook.com/Tevar.Ragsan.BFF/
      This is ragsan page, you can find ragsan edits of aps in this page,
      If you are interested to post your stories in fb we are happy to have you as an editor in tevar page

      Amazing story

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:13 pm

        Thank you so much dear lovely for telling me….. ?
        I don’t use fb now a days.. But if u want u can post my stories….

    11. Ashnoor on November 6, 2016 9:10 am

      Awesome

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:13 pm

        Thanks!!

    12. A.xx on November 6, 2016 9:49 am

      fab but feel soo bad for my Sansku continue RagSan as u mentioned they had a deep eyelock so there is obviously something between them…
      and what is Lakshya’s truth and wonder how she’ll handle it and how will Lakshya handle RagSan closeness that’ll be good to see so continue/xx

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:14 pm

        Thank you dear!!! ?

    13. fira on November 6, 2016 10:19 am

      Awesome epi…..poor sanskar…pls unite ragsan…..

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:15 pm

        Thanks for!!

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:16 pm

        *fira

    14. j on November 6, 2016 10:29 am

      superb

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:17 pm

        Thanks j!!!

    15. Asw on November 6, 2016 10:41 am

      It’s nice yaar keep continue sad for sanskar

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:18 pm

        Thank you dear!!! ?

    16. SPP on November 6, 2016 11:31 am

      Awesome Superb Fantastic Amazing
      Waiting for the epi
      Thanks for updating it
      Feeling sad for Sanky
      Please continue with Ragsan story DEAR
      Waiting for the next one………………

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:19 pm

        Thank you so much dear spp!!!! ??

    17. suhani on November 6, 2016 12:46 pm

      Nice epi…feeling bad for sanskaar…waiting next part..

    18. dharani on November 6, 2016 5:28 pm

      awesome i will be happy if u continue this ff with ragsan story i read all the episodes in one go all episodes are awesome

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:22 pm

        Thank you so much dear !!!! ?? I’m glad you liked it!!

    19. nikky on November 6, 2016 6:02 pm

      hi awesome but plzz change story like lakshya return or lakshya jealousy to make diff story from raglak

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:38 pm

        I’ll see to it dear.. Thanks for reading..

    20. asra on November 6, 2016 6:24 pm

      awesome dear….loved it…feeling bad for Sanky…plz continue with ragsan dear…and unite them….eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:39 pm

        Thank you so much dear!!!! ?

    21. aishwarya on November 6, 2016 6:58 pm

      Both ragsan n raglak scenes were awesome!!

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:39 pm

        Thank you so much dear!!!! ?

    22. kirti on November 6, 2016 6:59 pm

      Sad epi n pls continue with ur story also

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:40 pm

        Thanks!

    23. isha on November 6, 2016 7:10 pm

      Nice epi

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:40 pm

        Thanks

    24. janya on November 6, 2016 7:41 pm

      Mind blowing epi but so sad for sanky unite ragsan

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:41 pm

        Thanks!!

    25. Akshata on November 6, 2016 10:11 pm

      i am so happy for raglak but sad for sanskar. awesome update

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:47 pm

        Thank you dear!!! ?

    26. aradhana on November 6, 2016 10:48 pm

      Awesome but feeling sad for sanskaar but raglak scene was superb

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:48 pm

        Thank you!!

    27. Ammy on November 7, 2016 12:14 am

      Feeling sad for sanky.sure plz continue this ff with ragsan story also

      • Richa19 on November 11, 2016 11:49 pm

        Thank

    28. chahat on November 7, 2016 2:08 pm

      superb

      • Richa19 on November 12, 2016 10:36 am

        thanks

    29. disha on November 7, 2016 2:09 pm

      wonderfulllllllllllll

      • Richa19 on November 12, 2016 10:38 am

        thank you!!

    30. ragii on November 7, 2016 2:13 pm

      heartbreaking epi

      • Richa19 on November 12, 2016 10:38 am

        Yeah ik… Thanks for reading..

    31. sweetie on November 7, 2016 2:18 pm

      awwww feeling sad for sanskaar he really loves her but ……………………………………………………….. good epi

      • Richa19 on November 12, 2016 10:39 am

        Thanks

    32. arshia on November 7, 2016 11:02 pm

      Good one.. Waiting for the next part

      • Richa19 on November 12, 2016 10:39 am

        Thanks!!

    33. tani on November 10, 2016 2:43 pm

      Outstanding

      • Richa19 on November 12, 2016 10:39 am

        Thanks

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