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Home»Fan Fiction»BABUL! ( RAGLAK / RAGSAN ) CHAPTER 14
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BABUL! ( RAGLAK / RAGSAN ) CHAPTER 14

Richa19By Richa19June 11, 2017Updated:June 11, 201766 Comments8 Mins Read
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Recap: Birth of ANSH, raglak’s baby!!

After four long years……..

Ap: ANSH….. ANSH…… Where r u beta??? Drink this milk….. ANSH……

Laksh comes there…

Laksh: ansh’s father is here ma… wht happened ??

Ap: ansh has totally gone on u incase of drinking milk….

She said complaining. Laksh took the cup from her and looked around sipping from it. ap beats him.

Ap: wht r u doing lucky????

Laksh: don’t worry ma u go i’ll come…..

He goes from there while ap nods her head in disbelief.

Laksh bends down and finds ansh sitting under the table. Laksh clicks his fingers in front of him.

Laksh: hey buddy wht r u doing here??

Ansh ( cutely adjusting his specs.): arre dadi was finding me to give milk n I don’t like milk so I was hiding here….

Laksh: do u want muscles like me??

Ansh: yes…

Laksh: do u know how I got these???

He asked showing his muscles!

Ansh: by drinking milk…

Laksh: So u also hv it… N then lets see who does more push ups…

ANSH nods and drinks the milk and then they both do push ups… Laksh acts like he lost and then picks up ansh and tickles him……

********

Ragini: ansh…. ANSH….. Its time to sleep now!!

Laksh : y r u calling him?? Ma will make him sleep..

Ragini nods. He was working on the laptop.

Ragini: lucky…. Stand up….

Laksh: ginni….. Wht happened???

Ragini: arre stand na….

Laksh compiles and stands up. Ragini brings a sweater from behind her back.

Ragini: see I hv made this sweater for u….

Laksh: aww…. Chalo pehna do mujhe…..

She makes him wear it.

Laksh (: looking at himself): ginni do one thing take me to a farm and place me there….

He shows her the oversized sweater. Ragini pouts.

Ragini: I don’t know anything…..

Laksh: of course u know…. U know how to keep me happy…. N look this is big for me…. N this will b small for buddy….. But… ( he pulls her by her waist and wraps the sweater around her ) but it’ll b perfect for us…..

Ragini blushes and hides her face In his chest. He picks her up and _____________________

After few days…. Ragini and laksh comes towards ap and dp! They all sit.

Laksh: ma u called us!??

Ap: yeah after 3 days its ansh’s 4th birthday so I was thinking to have a grand party… ANSH is growing up so he’ll also enjoy…..

Ragini: yeah grt idea…

Laksh: but ma tomorrow only I’m going to London…

Ragini: dekho na papa he doesn’t care abt family……. There will be no party.. .

Laksh: chashmish… aisi koi baat nhi hai… n y there will b no party.. Of course there will be… I’ll go attend the meeting n will come asap….

Ragini ignores him.

Laksh: buddy…..

He signs him to help him.

Dp: beta… The thing is that he’s going to sign a very big n important deal…. Once the deal is sealed then there are parties n parties only…….

Ragini: okay but u hv to come before the party…

Laksh: promise….

N the next day laksh flies to london!!!? These two days ragini spend the time with ansh and dp…. They played they talked and also miss their buddy and lucky! While ap was busy preparing for the party………….

In London laksh is still In the meeting when his pb rings. He excuses himself and takes the call.

Laksh: hello chashmish….

Ragini: hello…. When is ur flight???

Laksh: I’m still in the meeting yaar… These ppl are eating my brain. …

Ragini: wht??? U haven’t left till now??

Before laksh could say something she cuts the call angrily. Dp comes to her.

Ragini: see na papa he hasn’t left till now….

Dp ( caressing her hair.): beta nothing is important for my buddy more than ur happiness so be happy he’ll come…..

Ragini nods and they both go to see the preparations…..

Next Evening, the hall Of the mansion is greatly lit and decorated. The guests have started arriving and ansh is playing with his friends….. Ragini is arranging candles on the cake.. She looked beautiful in blue lehnga saree ( which she wore in serial.)

Shomi: ginni y is ur mood off???

Ragini: don’t ask mummy lucky just don’t care abt me….. ( her phn rings ) look it’s his phn only…….

She picks up the call.

Laksh: how r u my chashmish??

Ragini: where r u??

Laksh: at airport???

Ragini: wht??? Till now u r in London only?,,,

Laksh: no janeman I’m at Mumbai airport!

Ragini: wht really,? Come fast na lucky…..

Laksh a yeah i’ll reach soon…….

Ragini happily tells everyone that laksh has reached. Everyone smiles looking at her excitement. Omi starts playing the music when dp follows him…

Dp: Ga Re Maan Piya Piya Re Ga Re Maan
Har Nazar Hai Kab Se Bekarar
Har Kisi Ko Tera Intezaar

Har Nazar Hai Kar Se Bekarar
Har Kisi Ko Tera Intezaar

Sanse Kahe Rahi Hai Tujpe Jaan-O-Dil Fida
Ga Re Maan Piya Piya

(( Dp dances and indicates to ap and ragini who seems to be waiting for laksh eagerly… He hugs them… ))

Aa Jaa Na Tujhe Pyaar Pukaare
Saansoka Har Taar Purake 2

Bin Tere Kuch Nahi Saaajna

(( ragini comes forwards and dances beautifully like Rani Mukherjee…. Everyone smiles…..))

Yaad Aane Lagi Hai Phir Teri 
Meri Aankhen Hai Muntazir Teri

Shamma Bhi Roshni Ki Pyasee Hai 

Bin Tere Har Taraf Udasi Hai 

Shamma Jal Ke Pighal Na Jaye Kahin 
Raat Suhani Dhal Na Jaye Kahin
Tera Rasta Takte Takte

Meri Jaan Nikal Na Jaye Kahin

[Tu Na Kar Deer Aaj Aane Mein 
Rang Bhar Mere Aashiyane Mein ]2

Tu Nahi Too Zindagi Ye Zindagi Hai Kya

Ga Re Mann Piya 2

Aaja

Aa Jaa Na Tujhe Pyaar Pukaare
Saansoka Har Taar Purake 2

Bin Tere Kuch Nahi Saaajna

Zikar Tera Hai Sari Mehfil Main

Teri Tasvir Hai Mere Dil Main 
Tere Dam Se Hai Zindagani Hai 
Tu Mere Pyaar Ki Kahani Hai 2

(( laksh is seen stucked in traffic……))

Sabke Hoton Pe Bikhara Jaye Hasnsi
Sab Ke Ruh Pe Nikhar Aa Jaye

[Tu Meri Jaan Mera Lakhte Jigar
Tujhpe Kurban Mere Shamo Sahar ]2

Umrr Ho Daraza Teri Hai Yehi Dua

Ga Re Man Piya Piya Re Gare Piya Piya

Piya Piya 

Aa Jaa Na Tujhe Pyaar Pukaare
Saansoka Har Taar Purake 2

Bin Tere Kuch Nahi Saaajna 

Aaa Bhi Ja Aaa Bhi Ja….

(( Dp ap and ragini forms a circle around ansh and dances….. He goes from there to call his buddy….. ))

Ansh: hello buddy where r u??

Laksh: I’m coming buddy…. ( he moves out of the car and tells the driver to drop his luggage to his house) u count till 10 n i’ll be there…

ANSH: okay buddy…..

ANSH is counting while ragini moves round n round dancing gracefully… Laksh while talking on phone with ansh crosses the road but _____________________________ BOOM ‘!!!!!??????

Ansh: hello buddy…. Buddy….

Ap comes there.

Ap: wht happened ansh???

Ansh: buddy is not talking to me…

Ap: He’s coming ansh then u talk as much as u want….

That side ragini is dancing in joy and dp is adoring her. Someone comes to dp and says something in his ears. Dp looks shocked and sees towards ragini. He slowly moves towards her and stops her from dancing. She looks confused.

Dp tells her that laksh had an accident. Ragini gets away from him and runs outside. Dp runs after her. Dp tells everything to ap and she hand over ansh to Omi and they all move to hospital……

********

Ragini: lucky lucky……..

She runs inside the hospital… Dp holds her and hugs her to console her.

Laksh is in the operation theatre and is being operated. Dp consoles ap and ragini and prays to god to keep his buddy safe…..

After two days………

Doc: Laksh wants to meet u three……

Dp moves inside the ward followed by ap and ragini. They come inside and are distorted to see laksh lying on the bed with all the bandages covering him, the needles pierced in his hands and his face covered with the oxygen mask.

They all came near him. He was breathing heavily. ….

Laksh: bu. . Buddy…… Maa…… Ginni….

They all looked on. Their eyes had a layer of tears.

….. Sa.. … Sa………saa……..

N he breathed his last and closed his eyes FOREVER!

****************************************

Today I’m giving sad chapters right?? ? but I hope u all like it…… Pls do tell me ur take on the story…… sanskaar will be back may be in next or next to next chapter…… N I’m really sorry for all the raglak fans as the raglak session ends here only…………………

So guys how was it pls do tell me… I’ll be waiting till then take care and keep smiling always!!! ???

PS – ASRA di, PRIYA ( SPP ) akka, FAIRY di, FIZO and SHRI di are being missed!!!! ? ?

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With Love
Richa

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    66 Comments

    1. Rasha on June 11, 2017 5:44 pm

      am really unhappy with this type of date dear.. starting when to changed pair with ragsan to raglak it was sad but still loved coz raglak been so adorable & even waited for sanskar part but now it hurting by ending Laksh part & making sanskar reentry..

      • Fairy on June 12, 2017 2:21 am

        Dear i know u r feeling bad .. bt Richu jst tried to give us a treat by giving raglak n ragsan pair in d same story….u have seen raglak part n now it’s tym for ragsan…sanky had always loved ragini….now u”ll see how he”ll get his love ..actually raglak loved eo ,bt unfortunately laksh died…. Ragini is so young,laksh don’t want her to live her life like a widower…even laksh dad also don’t want ragini to suffer after laksh death…so now he”ll try to unite ragsan…just for raginis n ansh better future…
        U”ll surely love dis story dear…jst have patience….Richu is one of the fab. Writer…she”ll surely make u love dis story…jst stay connected plz?
        Loatz of love…N sry if u don’t like my replying on ur comment…
        I consider each ragini fan as my family so dats y jst replied…love u?

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 12:52 pm

        Thank you so much fairy di for your support!!! ? ? ?

        N meri itni tareef kar ke aap mujhe sir pe chada rahe ho….. Still thank you so much ‘!!!! ? ? ?

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 12:51 pm

        I’m so sorry rasha dear that I’m ending raglak part…. .. But as fairy dear said that ragini is young n cant live like a widower…. .. But don’t worry I’ll try to do something…… I guess I hv a surprise for all the raglak fans in the sequel of this story ( if happened!!)

        Keep reading dear!! ?

    2. lovely7 on June 11, 2017 5:56 pm

      Nice but feeling bad for raglak

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 12:53 pm

        Thank you lovely!!! ? Keep reading!!

    3. Sreevijayan on June 11, 2017 6:09 pm

      Dats so sad..GOSH…evvnthough knew dt dis is gona happen bt stil made me in tears..awesome

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 12:53 pm

        Thank you so much sree!!!! ? N I’m sorry to make u cry!! ??

    4. mk on June 11, 2017 6:51 pm

      feeling bad for laksh but i want only RAGSAN. LOVE U FOR MAKING RAGSAN. POST SOOOOON

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 12:54 pm

        Thank you so much mk!!! ? ? love you too!!! ? ?

    5. vini on June 11, 2017 6:53 pm

      aww poor lucky thanks for ragsan

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 12:55 pm

        Thank you vini and u r always welcome!!! ? ?

    6. maha on June 11, 2017 7:08 pm

      Nice waiting for ragsan moment but at the sametime feeling bad for raglak

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 12:56 pm

        Thank you so much maha!!! ? sanky will be back soon.. ..keep Reading!! ?

    7. Asw on June 11, 2017 7:24 pm

      Nice yaar keep going

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 12:56 pm

        Thank you asw!!! ? ?

    8. asra on June 11, 2017 7:30 pm

      richu dear me too miss you….now am back na definitely comment ur ff’s….
      it’s as usual awesome dear…loved it…omg laksh died so sad dear…waiting for Sanky entry….tkcr dear…

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:02 pm

        Thank you so much asra di!!! ? ? missed you so much….. N now I’m so happy that u r back….. Muaaah.!!!!!! ? ? N yup sanky will come soon…. stay tuned…

    9. Lahari on June 11, 2017 7:45 pm

      Fimnally it will be ragsan…..raglak fans plz dont scold me about my comment..plz forgive this mad ragsan fan

      • Fairy on June 12, 2017 2:22 am

        Hehehehhe don’t wry nobody wl bash our beloved lahari? hahahah?

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:04 pm

        Yeah coz raglak fans are not like __________ fans who will poke their nose in every ff….. ?????? u understood na di??

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:03 pm

        Yeah ragsan story will start soon di!!! ? thank you!!!

    10. keerthi on June 11, 2017 7:49 pm

      awesome u make me cry with ur 2 updates am crazy fan of RAGSAN but i like laksh too

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:04 pm

        Thank you so much keerthi!!! ? ? ? ? N I’m so sorry for making you cry!! ??

    11. vani on June 11, 2017 7:56 pm

      awesome

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:05 pm

        Thank you vani!!! ?

    12. Krishi on June 11, 2017 8:05 pm

      Feeling sad for laksh but I’m super happy that now ragsan will be there…… Post soon…..

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:05 pm

        Thank you so much krishi!! ? ?

    13. Sanam on June 11, 2017 8:08 pm

      Awesome update yaar…. Pls bring back sanky soon…

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:06 pm

        Thank you sanam!! ? yeah he’ll come soo…. Keep reading..

    14. sug on June 11, 2017 8:12 pm

      Superb i too want ragsan but i don’t want laksh to die. Post soon yaar waiting for sanky

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:07 pm

        Thank you sug!!! ? I’m so sorry but he has already died… But if u r raglak fan then don’t worry I hv thought smthng….. Keep reading!! ?

    15. nive on June 11, 2017 8:30 pm

      Awesome sissy waiting for RAGSAN LOVE STORY

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:08 pm

        Thank you so much nive!! ? ?

    16. aleeza on June 11, 2017 8:45 pm

      Awesome

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:08 pm

        Thank you alee!!! ? ?

    17. Anisha on June 11, 2017 8:48 pm

      awesomely written sis.Is Laksh trying to mention Sanskaar’s name?i felt like that

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:09 pm

        Thank you ani!!! ? Keep reading n u’ll know….

    18. Jayanti on June 11, 2017 9:13 pm

      raglak story was going sooo good…I love both the pairs to the core and choosing one of them is really tough….but the episode was so emotional…….sanskaar’s entry soon

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:11 pm

        Thank you so much jayu ( di? ) ???? keep reading!!!

    19. A12345 on June 11, 2017 9:27 pm

      Nice

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:12 pm

        Thank you aliya / ashfa!!! ? ?

      • A12345 on June 12, 2017 9:21 pm

        Hehe dont get confused its aliya…
        Ashfa she went to aunt house to secure her higher studies..

    20. Mahima on June 11, 2017 9:29 pm

      Awesome

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:13 pm

        Thank you mahi!! ? ?

    21. sethidisha002 on June 11, 2017 11:14 pm

      Nice

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:13 pm

        Thank you disha!!! ?

    22. raguzz01 on June 11, 2017 11:34 pm

      Nice…..

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:13 pm

        Thank you dear!!! ?

    23. Fairy on June 12, 2017 2:26 am

      Ufff!!!finally m commenting richu…hayy!!!!kitne Dino baad….vo v itne emotional episode me..uff!!!rula deya bhn …tune sacchi rula diya….Laksh??????although I knew dis is gonna happen bt still…it’s paining me… D way u have written it ..uff!!richu hatts off to u my talented bae? hatts off to u…..such a finest writer u are litterelyy!!!!
      M feeling so bad thinking about ragini’s condition after laksh death..oh gawdd!!poor she…
      Plz plz make sanky’s ntry soon….
      Letss see how ragsan wl fall in love….
      How sanky wl hold n support her..N wl bring her out of dis situation n depression….
      Waitng eagerly for nxt part..keep rockng n stay blessed sweetypie????love u sooo muchh baccha????

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:16 pm

        Thaaaaaankkkkk youuuuuuuuu soooooooooooo much didu!!!!! ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? N I’m really sorry for making you cry!! ? ? but as u said this has to be happen…. …..

        Sanky will come soon di!!!! Keep Reading!!! ? ? N itni tareef matt kia karo meri…. Aadat ho jaegi mujhe!!! ???

        Still thank you so much!!!! ? ? ? ? ? love you so much!! ????

    24. hafsana on June 12, 2017 4:51 am

      Feeling sad for RagLak but i am sure sanskar will lobe ragu and ansh sooo much?❤Awesome part dear???You made both RagLak and Ragsan fans happy ?? Keep Rocking sis ❤?

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:17 pm

        Thank you so much hafsana di!!!! ? ? ? ? with ur first comment itself u mad emergency so happy!!! ? ? ? I’m glad that u liked it!!!! ? ? ? ?

    25. hafsana on June 12, 2017 4:52 am

      Feeling sad for RagLak but i am sure sanskar will love ragu and ansh sooo much?❤Awesome part dear???You made both RagLak and Ragsan fans happy ?? Keep Rocking sis ❤?

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 1:20 pm

        I hv thought smthng abt raglak for the second season of this ff if it happened….. Lets see…. Stay tuned…..

    26. Vk on June 12, 2017 1:14 pm

      Awesome

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 8:32 pm

        Thank you vk!!! ?

    27. SPP on June 12, 2017 2:54 pm

      Awesome Superb Fantastic Fabulous Mind Blowing Amazing Emotional one
      Today only I read both the ff and the remaining parts and commenting now
      Missed u too dear alot
      And yeah I was waiting for Sangini update
      U rocked as always u do
      Waiting for the next one……………….

      • Richa19 on June 12, 2017 8:33 pm

        Thaaaaaankkkkk youuuuuuuuu soooooooooooo much akka! ‘!!!!!!! ? ? ? ? ? I missed you sooo very much!!!!!! I’ll update sangini soon…. Thank u ‘!!!!???

      • SPP on June 13, 2017 8:51 am

        U r always welcome Dear ???

    28. shikha on June 13, 2017 12:27 am

      awesome

      • Richa19 on June 13, 2017 11:26 am

        Thank you shikha!! ?

    29. Tani on June 13, 2017 12:19 pm

      Out of dis world

      • Richa19 on June 13, 2017 1:48 pm

        Thank you so much tani dear!!! ? ?

    30. hemalattha on June 14, 2017 8:45 pm

      Richu You made me cry today so much. Feeling bad for raging. Waiting for sanskaar’s entry.

      • Richa19 on June 14, 2017 11:09 pm

        I’m so sorry dear to make you cry!!!! Pls forgive me…… Do check out the next update…..

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