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Avneil SS: We Are One part 6

hlw lovely readers, i am back with the 6th episode. i am really sry for the late update. actually i was out of station for an emergency work which my dad gave and also i had o take granny for her chk up. i was in my uncle and house and imet with a small accident but luckily i didn’t get enough injuries. well now i have returned home and also fully recovered. i will hae my final xms result tomorrow and my tuition teacher had called me and my friends to start our tuition classes from tomorrow onwards. seriously 9 standard sucks but i am having my winter break now so i will be able to be regular so now worries but i may be irregular after 9th january 2018 since i will have much more studies bcoz of pre board xms. now i will stop her and will meet u at the end.

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**neil’s pov**

i am here standing in front of the mirror adjusting my sherwani. “tillu” i heard my mom shouting. ”coming mom” i replied. i sigh. so much have happened in just few days. sand now i am here getting ready for my marriage. i don’t know even after so much happened i am feeling so happeeii. she has again made a comeback in my life. the bangles clinging on her hand making the sound so cheerful when i heard it for the 1st time. her beautiful black coloured orbs and her eyes whenever i look at them they only show pure love and honesty. crystal clear. **neil**. i heard my dad calling my name. he took my hand and let me towards the mandap where i am to mark her as mine.

while neil was thinking all this a girl is shown inside a room getting ready for her wedding. she was wearing a red wedding lehenga. some girls were doing her make up. she opened her eyes which were beautifully painted and her eyes could make anyone fall in love with her. the girls leaved her alone since she was insisting them to leave her. she applied red lipstick on her lips and the smiled. her smile was so beautiful thn anyone would like to kiss and taste her rosy red lips. she wore red bangles the one which punjabi married women wears. she was all ready. just then sweta came inside and smiled at her and took her with her to the mandap and she was ready again to be marked by him. one and only by him.

**neil’s pov**

the pandit was chanting mantras but i was eagerly waiting for my bride to come and as soon as possible mark her as mine. i remember her laughter and calling my name with her most sweetest voice. remembering her made a smile crept on my face. she was the most beautiful dream i ever had. the sweetest heart i ever saw and met.she was my world. my chain of thoughts were suddenly broken by the pandit’s voice asking them to bring the bride. i looked towards he staircase. she looked beautiful. even though so many months have gone bt she didn’t forget to look beautiful. i looked at her as she descended through the stairs. will i was looking at her, admiring, our eyes met and she blushed not able to handle her shyness. she is really making me crazy. i smiled myself and then i heard aman telling me not to die before she is marked as his, making her Mrs. Neil Khanna. i blushed. this word was really the best word i ever heard. she came to the mandap and sat beside me and looked towards me and smiled.

i returned her smile. we had an eyelock and through that eyelock we made a communication bu we were disturbed by the pandit ji. and thus our wedding ritual started. it was soon time for he pheras. i took hold of her hand and we started to take the wedding vows. soon the marriage ended and it was time to take our elders blessing. we took blessings and it was time for the bidaai. soon this ritual also ended and hewn the grahprabesh was done. i took her in my arms and carried her inside the house. well after entering the house, bebe told th tere was one more ritual o be done. i was really frustrated bcoz i wanted to spend more time with my newly wed dear wifey. somehow i think mom got sensed of it and said, “tillu don’t worry it’s just a small rasaam.” i flushed and from corner of my eyes i can also she her blushing. then we did a rassam which i don’t no the name (actually i only don’t know) where a ring was dropped inside the a tub full of milk and rose petals in it. we were asked to search the ring.

we dipped inside our hands in it and were trying to find the ring. suddenly my hand brushed her hand and i saw her blush. i caught hold of her hand making some water splash and bebe scolding to leave her bahu’s hand. well reculantly i have to do it bt soon we found out the ring at the same time and pulled out the ring holding it from both he sides. bebe said, “tht means u both will live equally. no one will be servant of anyone of u.” i smiled since i remembered her saying tht we both are equal. 3.5 wedding vows her and other 3.5 is mine. i heard my mother say, “bt then bebe who will wear this ring.” it suddenly struck my mind and i pulled out a ring and made her wear it and she made me wear that ring which we both found out. after tht mom took her to my room and i went to the other room to change.

**end of neil’s pov**

**neil’s room**

sweta comes with her bahu and makes her sit down and leaves. she gets up and goes towards the window and looked towards the moon. she heard the noise of opening of the door and smiled bcoz she was eagerly waiting for him. neil came near her and back hugged her. neil said tht she was looking beautiful and he couldn’t take of his eyes from her. she blushed and turns towards him and hugs him burying her face in his chest. neil smiles and holds her chin and makes her to look at him. she slowly lifted her eyes to look at him and neil leaned forward and kissed her. she too reciprocate it. bt it didn’t last long since the were disturbed by her nose ring. they broke the kiss and neil was having tears in his eyes. the girl took him to the cough and made him lie on her lap while she carressed him. neil couldn’t bear more and hugged her very tightly.

girl: neil everything is all right see. i am fine. u r fine. misti is fine and our marriage got over without any hurdle.

neil: but avni i was scared if u didn’t came on time thn… then…. (guyz wht did u thought eho she was. chuhi? nah i would love to die rather than see her and neil’s marriage).

avni: but nothing happened right. everything went smoothly as we planned.

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hey guyz, i hope u enjoyed today’s episode. it will be ended in 2-3 chapters. don’t forget to like and comment.

THNX FOR READING

LOVE U ALL

-ILLIANA. A. SPENCER

lillianalieben

where there is love there is a smile to make all things seem more worthwhile. instagram @ananya__avneilloverforever. wattpad @lillianalieben. forever avneil/ adiza.

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