Fan Fiction

AVneil OS: A Precious Birthday Gift.

Hello lovely readers, finally my xms are over and I will be regular with my works and also I rocked my xms. This OS is dedicated to @sonali0115. may u live everyday of ur life di. Hope this year was a success to u and also u made a lot of fans and friendz through ur ffs. Always be happeeii and always keep that beautiful smile of urs. Hope u like this small gift of mine. Tons and tons of loves, hugs, smiles and kisses from ur stupid sis ananya. Kk now I will switch off my chatterbox wala mode and i will meet u at the end of these OS. Buh bye.

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After dayavanti was caught red handed by avneil in the mandir. Avni not only got her brother aman but also her sister rhea who was forced to do bad things against avni but she didn’t intended to hurt her dear sister. After all she was the one who warned avni when she was thought to be dead by everyone. Neil said that neela, amol and riya will live with them for sometime.

**avneil’s room**

Avni: neil, don’t take stress everything will be alright. Kk. Here take this, go and get freshen up.

Neil: kk. (neil goes while avni sits in the couch).

**Neil pov**

Ri8 now I am infront of the mirror in the bathroom. So many things have happened. Before sometime dayawanti got arrested and I called home and explained everything. They accepted everything but I was shocked when they gave the news about kareena and maddy bua. I left from there and after trying a lot of things nothing happened. I was sitting in front of my car on the earth when I got a phone call. I was from my avni. I immediately received the call just to hear ali talking to avni claiming that now she is free and can leave neil. My blood boiled hearing such things and cut the call. I reached home. I tried to convince commissioner but he was not listening and cut the call. In frustration I threw my phone and all other things. I ran my fingers through my hair and then I saw her. My life, my lifeline, my heart for whom its beats. For whom I was living after juhi’s death (permenantly death so no chuhi return).

My dear dear wifey, AVNI. But I told myself that she is soon going to leave me soon. She picked up the vase near her feet and I told her I can do these things alone and kept everything back to place while she freshen ups. I sat on the crouch. She gave me clothes n told me to freshen up. I love her and I don’t want her to leave me wht shall I do. But I can’t do anything because she doesn’t love me.She picked up the vase near her feet and I told her I can do these things alone and kept everything back to place while she freshen ups. I sat on the crouch. She gave me clothes n told me to freshen up. I love her and I don’t want her to leave me wht shall I do. But I can’t do anything because she doesn’t love me. I will she too loves me.

**End of neil’s pov**

Neil changes his clothes and comes out of the bathroom. He looks for avni and finds her sleeping peacefully with a smile on her face. Neil went near her and knelt down before her. He caressed her face and said “finally u and ur mother got justice. This peaceful smile on ur face suits u miss ajooba. I hope those tears never would never cross ur paths.” He gently kisses on her forehead and went to the couch and slept.

After a good 30 minutes, avni snaps open her eyes and sits on their bed. She takes her phone and gets up from the bed. She comes near neil and checks whether he is still awake or not. She finds tht he is in deep sleep. She goes outside the room and calls someone. After sometime she returns and went near the cupboard. She pulls out a blanket and cover neil and says “u have done some much for me neil and it’s my turn to do something for u.” in her eyes there was a spark in her eyes. A sense of determination, a spark of a new motive.

**next day**

The sun is brightly shinning and disturbs our beloved neil from his sleep. He gets up and goes to the washroom. After sometime he comes out of the washroom and says, “avni, mera ghari aur wallet kaha par hai. Avni, kaha ho. Sun bhi rahi ho ki nahi. AVN!!” Suddenly neil realizes that avni was not in the room.

neil: were u really in such a hurry that u felt it was not necessary to wait for me to bid u good bye or let me look at u for one last time. anyways leave it. now u r gone so what’s the benefit of saying this things.

neil turns to leave the room when a sight caught his eye. there in the table lay a book no diary. nothing was new in it but was caught neil’s attention was the note written on the cover. On the cover was written “my best memories”.

Neil: (takes the diary in his hand) looks like it is avni’s diary. I think she forgot it. Shall I read it? Not it’s her personal diary but…. Let me read it. Maybe there might me something written about me. (neil starts reading her diary and gets shock. He closes the diary). Hmmm so this is the plan.

Neil goes down to have his breakfast with a smirk on his face but was also thinking how to save kareena and maddy bua. He reaches downstairs to see happiness and smiles on everyone’s face and much to his surprise avni was also there along with neela, amol and rhea and….. maddy bua and kareena.

Kareena: neil bhai. (She goes and hugs him which e returns her back).

Neil: kareena maddy bua u here. But how. I mean i…

Sweta: tillu this is all bcoz of our avni. (sweta likes avni a lot before rhea’s engagement).

Kareena: bhabi can we go to our room.

Avni: sure kareena go and take rest.

Avni, bebe along with kareena and maddy goes to maddy’s room. They talked about how khulbhushan treated them and all. Meanwhile kareena went to the washroom when suddenly lights went off and she shouted. Everyone gathers in front of the washroom. She says neil bhai plz save me. maddy says kulbhushan used to keep them in a chamber like this. Maybe it’s side effects caught kareena. Neil says we can’t do anything we have to break the door. Everyone plz step aside. avni says no neil, it will make kareena even more frightened. wait let me do one thing. kareena. kareena says bhabi plz save me. avni says ” kareena do as i say. i will do with u also. 1st take 10 deep breathes. 1, 2, 3………10. now slowly open the knob and push the door.” kareena comes out and hugs avni then maddy. maddy says “neil, where did u find her. she is too good.” kareena says “from now on, i will call u super bhabi.

neil smiles and thinks u r the best avni.

after sometime neil receives a call from neela who tells him that its avni’s birthday today.

**evening**

a grand party was arranged by neil and his family.

avni came down wearing a red gown which neil selected and gave prakash to deliver it.

avni came down wearing a red gown which neil selected and gave prakash to deliver it

when avni came down, the lights were dimmed and spot light was on avni.she reaches the downstair and says “neil, bebe, mummyji, papaji.”and then the lights came with everyone wishing her “HAPPY BIRTHDAY”. avni cuts the cake and feeds neil 1st and then the family members. neil grabs he mike and takes avni to the stage.

neil: my dear wifey. may u live everyday of ur life. u must be thinking why i am saying his or why i have not wished u happeii birthday. this is bcoz wishing some one happeeii birthday means making the person realize that he or she has come closer 1 year more to death. so that’s y may u leave everyday of ur life. now as a gift everyone gave u gift but i want u to give the most precious and special gift. (neil bends down on his knees and takes avni’s hand). one day i met a girl. she was very stubborn and i thought that i hated her but no i was wrong i fell in love in the 1st meeting. i always had her in my head and i thought that i was overthinking. it was just an attraction but no it was love. after marrying u i thought that love is not possible between us but i was wrong again. those fights, hugs and nok jhoks was just a was to fall in love with u more. avni all i want to say is I LOVE U. yes Mrs. avni ayesha neil khanna. i am madly in love with u. do u accept me as a lover.

avni by now had tears in her eyes. neil became shocked and stood up holding avni’s face.

neil: avni, y r u crying.

avni: stupid. these are tears of happiness and yes i love u.

saying so she hugs him tightly which neil reciprocates.

prakash: now let the love birds have a couple dance.

they danced on the song khoya khoya from hero very romantically. later everyone joins in and this was the chance to steal his avni from the party. he dragged her to a corner where no one will notice them and pinned her to the wall. his hands on either side.

neil: even though it’s ur birthday but i want a give from u i.e. a kiss.

avni: than take it na.

neil quickly captures her lips and kisses her with feelings to flow and avni equally reciprocating. after a good 5 mins the parted away due to lack of oxygen. avni was feeling shy and neil. huh he toh was like y it ended so soon.

neil: avni don’t blush or else i won’t be able o control my self.

avni: NEIL. (hits his chest playfully). btw how do u get to know tht i love u.

neil: from ur diary.

avni: hooo. u read my diary.(hits him).

neil: everyhing is fair in love.

neil and avni laughs and then again leans forward to capture each ohers lips.

THE END

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sonali di once again may u live everyday of ur life. hope u like his small gift from ur sis.

THNX FOR READING

LOTS OF LOVE, HUGS, KISSES AND SMILES

– LILLIANA LIEBEN

lillianalieben

where there is love there is a smile to make all things seem more worthwhile. instagram @ananya__avneilloverforever. wattpad @lillianalieben. forever avneil/ adiza.

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