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Avneil OS: Cafe Time

lillianaliebenBy lillianaliebenDecember 19, 20172 Comments5 Mins Read
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a boy wearing a blue shirt with rolled up sleeves and a black jeans with a blue cap is seen. he is clearing a table. he has a muscular and strong hands. the nerves under his skin can be seen. someone shouted ”NEIL”. the boy turned around. he had a handsome face and light beard. his eyes were so beautiful tht any girl can’t withstand to fall in love with him.

boy: neil, a girl came to table 6. go there and ask wht she wants.

neil goes near table 6 and he gets lost in her beauty. she had fair skin and beautiful warm eyes. her lips were soft and smooth with a light shade of pink. she was wearing a white knee length dress with persuien blue flower shaped patterns. she was avni.

avni: hlw, r u new here. i am avni.

neil: hi. yah i am new here. i am neil nice to meet u. wht do u want to have miss.

avni: a cup of coffee. thnk u.

neil: ri8 away. (he smiles at her which she returns and goes to fetch her tea).

after sometime neil serves her tea and after avni drinks it. she pays for it with a tip and leaves from there bidding gdbye to neil. neil takes the diposable cup and keeps it in his locker there.

days went by and avni as a regular customer she was at the cafe came there and sat on her usual table 6 and as always neil would come and serve her favourite coffee. by now he not only collected a large amount of cup of her but also many photos of her which he secretly took from fb, insta and by himself also. one day avni came to usual table but some boys were sitting there. neil asked them to go and sit somewhere else since it was for her which to much relief they accepted it and went from there. their bonding became strong day by day drawing them much closer.

one day on her table some boys were sitting and avni came there and hugged one boy. he was vidyut. neil her broked bcoz he thought tht he was her boyfriend. she sat with them and chatted. neil came there and served avni her usual coffee and took orders of others. he went back and after sometime he came back with some drinks. he tripped on something and the juice fell down on vidyut’s clothes. vidyut roared with anger and grabbed neil’s collar.

vidyut: how dare u?

avni: leave him, vidyut. it’s not his fault.

vidyut: yeah ur, ri8. it’s not his fault. he is been brought up by some cheap family tht’s y.

avni: vidyut.

neil left from there with fresh tears flowing from his eyes. he didn’t wanted o create a mess so her left from here. he opened his locker and took the cups and one of avni’s photo and say there on the bench with his locker open. avni came there and she found him sitting on the bench with her cups. she looked in his locker and smiled. she came and sat beside him. took the cups and photo and kept them aside.she took his hands in her and apolozied him from her friends behavior. after she explained him everything and neil told her that it was kk. no prblm. they share a deep and long eyelock b4 leaning forward to kiss each other with their eyes closed each other.

**DING DONG**

neil who was reading a letter, removed his graze from his letter and looked at a photo beside him. it was of avni and her daughter. he smiled and went to the door. he opened it and a small girl jumped up and down b4 hugging neil. avni smiled at them. they were vidyut, neil and avni’s daughter anusiya.

vidyut: kk ACP sahab. appki amant appke hatho may. ab may chata hu. (he leaves).

neil takes anusiya oh his arms and she was like all, papa u know this and tht and all. neil hugged avni on one side and he moved inside their house.

neil who was now a well known and a respectable and favourite person in mumbai, the ACP was staying in mumbai in his apartment. he moved the b4 six months and avni with their daughter anusiya moved there recently. since neil didn’t want avni and anusia to have trouble so he asked vidyut to drop them.

who thought that a cafe working boy would fall in love with a customer girl and their love will bloom. it is true tht love has no boundaries and love can happen with any one. love doesn’t happens by judging looks, money, religion etc, etc. it just happens. and when it happens it is the most beautiful disease which can only be cured by true love not by the doctors who pescribes medicines or surgeons who operates.

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this OS is dedicated to my dear dear sis and friend @SakshiJoshi9. may u live everyday of ur life dear. hope this year was a gr8 success with u and also hope tht u made many pagal and friends friends and bro sis. may god bless u. hope u like this small gift of mine. love u tons. life can give us hundred reasons o cry! but, friends can give thousands of reasons to smile. and u r that friend. love a lot di. i hope i have brought a smile on ur face whenever i talk to u. don’t forget to like and comment.

THNX FOR READING

LOVE YAH ALL

-ANANYA KACHARI.

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    where there is love there is a smile to make all things seem more worthwhile. instagram @ananya__avneilloverforever. wattpad @lillianalieben. forever avneil/ adiza.

    2 Comments

    1. UF3355 on December 19, 2017 1:24 pm

      AWESOME CUTE EXCELLENT FABULOUS GREAT HEART TOUCHING MIND BLOWING PERFECT ROMANTIC SUPERB???????????????
      Take care and stay safe ?

      • lillianalieben on December 19, 2017 1:57 pm

        thnx dear.

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