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Avneil Love Story (Episode 2)

NikkiTa2By NikkiTa2March 23, 20177 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey Guys! I am really glad to be the 1st one to write a fan fiction of AVNIEL!!! Thankyou for the lovely comments, it makes my day! ??? Enjoy Reading! ??
Link to my last episode –
Episode 1

Episode Starts with Avneil at the forest..
Avni: NEIL!!!!!!!!!
Neil: What!!!
Avni: You have the treasure map?
Neil: Oh Shi*, I forgot man!
Avni: Man!!! You think I’m a man? Oh if you need to go Shi* then go back to the toilet!
Neil: Avni, calm down! I thought you were going to get the map!
Avni: Shut Up!! Just because, I’m a girl doesn’t mean I have to get it
Neil: No, of course I didn’t mean that! I mean like you were standing next to the table, where the maps were kept
Avni: So you are blaming me?
Neil: No!

Avni: Well, it looks like you are blaming me!
Avni gets angry at starts to leave, Neil holds her hands and they both fall on each other
Neil: Damn, I never knew you were that spicy?
Avni: SPICY??
Neil: Don’t get it the wrong way! I mean like you got so angry so that’s why I called you spicy!
Avni: Neil, look I’m sorry! Look, I always react!
Neil: Avni it’s ok!
Neil and Avni tries to get up from the ground but they realise, Neil’s shirt button is stuck to Avni’s hair
They try to untie it, they have an EYELOCK

Karthik disturbs them
Karthik: Oh hoooo, sorry for disturbing your romance
Avni: Shut up Karthik, this is not romance, we fell!
Karthik: Oh, if you guys fell, here is a tip for you, THEN GET UP!! It’s your choice if you wanna romance, I’m not stopping you guys!
Neil: Shut up, Karthik! My shirt button got stuck with her hair!
Karthik: You’re looking HAPPY!!!
Neil: You think I’m happy??
Avniel unties it and they were successful ?
Avni: We don’t have our map with us
Karthik: Hahah bad luck! See I told you Neil, Kahani mein twist hai, bhot sare twist!
Karthik winks
Avni and Neil gets angry
Karthik runs
Avniel starts to chase him
Avni falls
Neil realises and runs to her
Neil: Look Avni, I’m really sorry, are you ok?
Avni: I guess, I mean, I twisted my leg
Neil worries!
Neil carries Avni

Neil started to walk carrying Avni for 5 hours
They sat down in a bench
Avni: My leg is ok now!

Neil: Good, I’m glad you’re feeling nice now
Avni: Thanks
Neil: I’m sorry about Karthik, he is like that
Avni: No problem, I know him for 7 years now, he is crazy

It started to rain
Neil saw a hut so he held Avni’s hand and took her there ❤
They went inside
Neil noticed that Avni was feeling cold so he took of his coat and made her wear it
Avni noticed that Neil’s finger was bleeding

She saw a first aid kit and picked it up
She opened it and grabbed some gel and bandages for Neil’s finger
They sat close to each other, Avni took Neil’s hander and starting messaging Neil’s finger with the gel. While, Neil looks at Avni!
Neil: Ouch!
Avni: I’m sorry, really sorry
Neil: No it’s ok, continue
Avniel finally came out the hut and started to find their way to their home

At 9:00
Diksha: Finally, Avni and Neil you’re back, are you guys ok?
Avni: Bua? What are you doing here?
Diksha: Oh, I was also invited but I came late, and Saya told me to stay
Avni: oh
Diksha: Ok hurry and come in

At Night Sleeping Time
Avniel thinks about each other
Neil: Why am I thinking about her, what’s so good about her? Omg I’m soo crazy
Avni: Why am I thinking about him, what’s so good about him?? Omg I’m soo crazy
They smile and go to sleep
They both are having the same dream
Dream:
They kiss underneath Eiffel tower
Dream ends
They both wake up suddenly
Avni: What kind of dream was I dreaming?
Neil: What kind of dream was I dreaming?
Avni: Neela mom is right, I’m crazy
Neil: Mom is right, I’m crazy
They both smile and go back to sleep

Preacap: Avni’s coffee date

Sorry for the short episode, I know its not good like the 1st episode but I’m trying hard! Thanks for the lovely comment you guys send! ❤???

My Instagram ACC’s:
@lopaonfleek
@avnielholics

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    7 Comments

    1. fenil on March 23, 2017 11:54 am

      Nice
      pls update soon
      waiting for next

    2. Isha on March 23, 2017 1:02 pm

      Super cute episode…I loved it …plz update ASAP as the precap looks cute & romantic… 🙂

    3. shruti on March 23, 2017 4:40 pm

      nice yr. but who is kartic?

      • NikkiTa2 on March 25, 2017 12:44 am

        Neil’s friend

    4. rashiverma2199 on March 23, 2017 5:25 pm

      Awesome episode ….Loved it Nikita….Pls post soon…. Awesome….Ur an amazing writer….????

    5. rashiverma2199 on March 23, 2017 5:27 pm

      Avneilholics is an. Awesome account…Thanks for this amazing FF….
      U r the first one to write avneilholics FF….???

    6. Barbie on March 23, 2017 6:17 pm

      Oh!What a superb episode.I love it.Friendship with Romance wow!Continue Nikki.Go ahead.You are awsome and always ZAIN U ROCK MY JAANU.

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