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Home»Fan Fiction»Avneil Hate/Love (Chapter 19)
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Avneil Hate/Love (Chapter 19)

rockingangelsBy rockingangelsJune 11, 201728 Comments6 Mins Read
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Guys I’m really sorry. I dint have time to post my ff and yeah if U are a Swasan fan Plz read my ff “U smile like a sun that shines through the rain…THE LOVE OF MY LIFE”
Plz.. for me and ya again sorry na plz forgive me…

Avni waves at Neil and leaves

Neil smiles and goes to his house

Neil enters his house

Swetha- Oye tillu where were U. I searched U everywhere U left Ur phone also…

Neil- Mom I had work!!

Swetha- What work Tillu…U know Riya has called U 100 times!

Neil (casually says)- 100 times that’s it…

Swetha- Wait Ur saying it so casually “100 times”

Neil rolls his eyes

Neil’s Pov
Riya just called me 100 times that’s so normal. Or else atleast she would call me 200 times. I know I’m such a dumb person to say someone calling me 100 times is normal. Wow Jelly bean… Wait Neil… my name is NEIL right because of Ananya I forgot my own name.

Swetha- But see U have got such a nice fiance she called U 100 times Ur lucky number 100 right

Neil- Mom…

Swetha- Accha fine Btw I forgot to tell U Riya has Invited U 2morrow to her house

Neil- For what?

Swetha- Her brother is coming back from US…And they are organizing a party

Neil- Oh…

Swetha- Whats that party name where U wear costumes and go… That one is…

Neil- Halloween party

Swetha- Ah.. Ya that one. She said its only for youths

Neil looks on

Swetha- Arey how can they do this even We are small no

Neil- Yes mom Ur a way too small

Saying this Neil leaves from there

Swetha- Way too small….do I look that young..Aww…I’ll go and ask prakash ji

NEXT MORNING

Avni wakes Up soon

Avni runs to Neela

Avni- Mom…

Neela- Avni U got Up so early today

Avni- Ma today I’m going to meet him…

Neela- Aman!!! is he back

Avni nods and hugs Neela

Avni- I’m so happy today my Aman will be back

Neela- Then go fast get ready and meet him

Avni- No ma I cant go now, the party is evening

Neela- Oh so they have organised a party Manna padega Daya loves him a lot

Avni- Yes and Its a Halloween party

Neela- Halloween!!!

Avni- Yes and I want U to select the costume for meee…

Neela- Accha fine we’ll do it together!

Avni- Wait! I can take tillu’s help na.

Neela- Yeah U can.

Avni- No. He’ll be busy now… he’s a busy POLICE na!!!

Neela- U have really become close to Neil right

Avni looks on

Neela- He has really become Ur true friend.

Avni- Yes! He is a true friend I have enjoyed most of the time with him.

Neela- Fine now lets select costumes come…

Neela and Avni leave

IN THE SHOP
Neela and Avni reach the shop

Neela- See so many costumes are there over here U can select any!!!

Avni- Hmm…Lemme just take a look.

Avni looks at all the Mannequins kept there when she saw something and stood staring at it…

Avni- We’ll this one looks like Tillu…
She takes out her phone

Avni- Lemme just click a pic…
Someone holds her hand suddenly. She look on

Neil- Great now Ur thinking I’m a mannequin…
Avni blinks her eyes

Avni- Is that really U tillu!

Neil- Do I look like someone else.

Avni pinches Neil’s cheeks… While Neil shouts in pain.

Avni- So its really U
Neil rolls his eyes

Avni- Btw what are U doing here?

Neil- What are U doing here?

Avni- Hey I asked U first!
Neil- I asked U second.

Avni- So!!!

Neil puts his hand around Avni’s neck.

Neil- See 2 is greater than one na…

Avni- Hmm… yeah obviously!

Neil- So second is greater than first. So second id first and first is second did U Understand…

Avni glares at him
Avni- Understand My foot

She starts to hit him.

Neil- Hey fine I lose…

Avni- Dumbo!!!

Neil- I came here to nuy costume for me!

Avni- Same here…

Neil- Then lets buy it together.

Avni- Okay!

They start to look at the costumes.

Neil- I’m gonna buy a Police officer costume

Avni- Seriously. Joker’s costume will suit U more

Neil- Very funny

Avni- Btw why do U want to Buy the Police costume U may be having that

Neil- Yeah right

Avni rolls her eyes

Neil- But Riya called me this morning and told me to buy a prince’s costume

Avni laughs

Avni- PRINCE seriously!

Neil- Oh shut it! Tell me what are U wearing…

Avni- Don’t know maybe a princess…

Neil and Avni laugh
Avni- I’m Gonna become a vampire today

Neil- VAMPIRE!!!

Avni- Yes! See this one is cute na

Avni grits her teeth

Avni- Eeeeee……

Neil- Well wear whatever U want. I have to leave now meet U this evening

Avni- Yes Meet u this evening…. PRINCE

Neil rolls his eyes and Leaves

EVENING 6:30pm AT MEHTA HOUSE

Neil comes in a police uniform. Riya- Princess, DD- Sherlock holmes, Ali- Superman(Hehe dint have any other choice )

Riya- Neil I told U to become prince

Neil- Riya I dint get a perfect dress to wear….

Riya- Well How do I look in this dress

Neil- Nice Riya!
Ali- Btw Riya where is Ur brother they have kept this party for him right!!!

Riya- Wait He’ll be somewhere over there…

She starts looking and points at a boy standing wearing blazer and jean. Many girls surrounded him and He flirting with them

Riya- That’s my brother Aman!

Evreryone look at him and Avni standing behind them looking at him with teary eyes. Neil looks at Avni and goes to her

Neil- Hey Bubby I mean Vampy…

Avni doesn’t Answer Neil looks on.

Precap- Avni goes to Aman and extends her hand- “Hi amol nice to meet U”. Aman pushes her away. Avni is about to fall Neil holds her and Glares at Aman.

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    28 Comments

    1. vidhi on June 11, 2017 8:32 pm

      atlasssstttttt u posted it….
      loved it waiting for the next chap

      • rockingangels on June 17, 2017 3:54 pm

        Thanks vidhi

    2. Stuti on June 11, 2017 9:07 pm

      Awesome …Plz keep posting u dint post almost for a. Week plzzz keep posting

      • rockingangels on June 17, 2017 3:54 pm

        Thanks and sorry for being late quite busy…

    3. Shanaya on June 11, 2017 10:40 pm

      Superb…dear…plz …post next chapter as soon as possible…And again i must say its amazing and u too

      • rockingangels on June 17, 2017 3:55 pm

        Thanks shanaya and yeah I’ll try to post the next one soon

    4. Mihra-101 on June 11, 2017 10:42 pm

      Loved it ?

      • rockingangels on June 17, 2017 3:55 pm

        Thanks mihra

    5. Manasvi on June 11, 2017 11:15 pm

      Awesome chapter dii..!!
      Waiting for the next chapter..!!
      Loved this one..!!?

      • rockingangels on June 17, 2017 3:56 pm

        Thank U baby sis… will try to post d next one soon!!!

    6. Mishaal on June 12, 2017 3:29 am

      Superb! Loved it. ?

      • rockingangels on June 17, 2017 3:56 pm

        Thanks mishaal

    7. Rifa on June 12, 2017 5:34 am

      Thank u di…and superb episode.waiting for next episode

      • rockingangels on June 17, 2017 3:57 pm

        Thanks rifa

    8. Yammy on June 12, 2017 12:18 pm

      Waited so long…..???
      And now you posted???
      Plz post the next ff fast????
      BTW it was a nice episode…..??

      • rockingangels on June 17, 2017 3:57 pm

        Thanks yammy

    9. G@g@n@ on June 12, 2017 2:12 pm

      awesome loved it..

      • rockingangels on June 17, 2017 3:57 pm

        Thank U gagu

    10. Dreamgirl on June 12, 2017 3:30 pm

      It was superb…?

      • rockingangels on June 17, 2017 3:57 pm

        Thanks da

    11. Berry on June 13, 2017 11:55 am

      Itz awesome…actually I read all the episodes so late that I couldn’t comment in them bt the story so far is jst amazing..keep writing n post soon??

      • rockingangels on June 17, 2017 3:58 pm

        Thanks berry…

    12. manu1307 on June 13, 2017 8:43 pm

      itz awesome.
      actually i returned to this site few days ago . So just reqd this.
      riyasmiles told me about this.
      it is fabulous. mindblowing
      be happy

      • rockingangels on June 17, 2017 3:58 pm

        Thank U manu…

    13. Ayesha51 on June 14, 2017 3:50 pm

      awesome
      fabulous
      fantastic
      outstanding
      marvellous
      superb

      plz post soonest

      I was a silent reader
      recently I started commenting

      so don’t feel awkward regarding me

      • rockingangels on June 17, 2017 3:59 pm

        Thanks Ayesha that really means a loooootttttt to me….

    14. Sera on June 15, 2017 9:06 pm

      Even me too
      I am also a silent reader and i wud lyk 2 say u dat dere r a lot of us and dey too r a great fan of urs
      Plzzz post d nxt ff soon

      • rockingangels on June 17, 2017 3:59 pm

        Thanks sera…..

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