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Home»Fan Fiction»Avneil Hate/Love (Chapter 18)
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Avneil Hate/Love (Chapter 18)

rockingangelsBy rockingangelsJune 5, 2017Updated:June 5, 201726 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hey guys Tysm for Ur comments…. AND Love U a Lot.. : D : )

Avni- U want to have Poha….

Neil was looking at the mouth watering Poha and din’t answer.

Avni lifted her eyebrows asking what???

Riya- I don’t think Neil will…

Neil- Yes of’course I’ll have

Neil goes and sits beside Avni and starts having the Poha

Avni- Aww… Tillu not fair that was for me

Neil (Mouth filled)- U have or else I’ll eat everything…

Avni- No way in hell

They both start having.

Ali goes to Riya

Ali- Riya…. Why is neil having yaar

Riya- I thought he won’t have…

DD- he loves Poha right!!!

Ali- But he hates Ananya right….

DD- Now they have become friends..

Riya- Seriously!!!

Ali looks on shocked

Ali- Thank god they wont fight from now on

Riya smiling- Yeah…

Avni shouts- I said this is for me

Everyone look at them

Neil- No its mine

Neil takes the Poha Avni holds his hand

Neil- Leave it bubby….

Avni- U leave it tillu…

Neil- No way in Hell

Avni- See again copying…

Riya- Guys just stop it…

Neil bites the poha

Avni glares at him

She pulls the Poha Again

Neil- Just leave it yaar

Avni bites his hand

Neil- Ahh…

Everyone looks on shocked

Avni stuck’s her tongue out at him And he looks on

Riya- Arey yaar what is this???

Ali and DD start laughing

Neil- Stop that!!!

Avni pats on his shoulders

Neil turns to see her showing half of the poha to him

Neil lifts his eyebrow Avni does the same

Neil’s POV
Wait why the hell does she do the same thing everytime. She just bit my damn hands and now acting as if nothing happened..???

Avni- U want or not?

Neil- I don’t want…

Avni- Fine then

Avni was about to eat

Neil- wait…

Avni lifts her eyebrows again

Neil- how can u have this I just bit this end na

He takes the poha from her hand

Neil- Give I’ll have it

He eats the poha

Avni looks on and Neil looks at her
Both burst out laughing

Riya- U guys na….

Ali and DD laugh

Riya- So U both have become friends right.

Avni- Kind Of

Neil nods

Ali- Did U like the Poha Ananya?

Avni- Yes I loved it Ali U making Poha and I don’t eat…

Riya- Wait isn’t this the first time U have having it???

Avni- Uh.. No this is the third time

Neil- 3rd…

Ali nods

Ali- Y..yeah she used to come to my cafe…

DD- Ohh.. So U both know each’other…

Ali- Yes I Mean no I knew her but dint know her name she was just a customer

Riya- So only I thought how U can love her so fast…

Avni looks on

Neil- Love… what???

Riya and Ali gets tensed

Riya- Love Poha I told U Ananya

Avni- U told her right???

Riya- I call Poha her/ She…

Neil- Her/She???

Riya- Why shouldn’t I call they have life no…Right Ananya…

Avni smiles

Neil looks at her

Neil- Why are U smiling now

Riya- Because she calls her headphones him/He…

Ali smiles

Neil looks at Avni…

Neil- Riya U don’t be with her she is mad even U’ll become like her

Riya smiles

Avni- Oye Tillu I’m not mad U are…

They start to argue

Riya gets a call she leaves

Neil- I know U are

Avni- I’m not jelly bean

Neil- U are Bubby..

DD- Wait whats this Jelly and Bubby…???

Avni- Jelly is his name

Neil- And bubby is hers

Ali- What kind of names do U people keep

Neil- My so called neighbor is annoying man

Avni- Oh ya I’m annoying what about U…U don’t even allow me to play songs

DD- U both are Neighbors

Neil nods

Ali- U live beside Neil’s house and I never saw U

Riya comes there

Riya- Guys lets leave my dadi is also calling me

Neil- Yeah even I and DD should leave we have work to do

Avni- Even me I have to go eat my choc’s

Neil rolls his eyes

Ali- U wait na Ananya…..

Neil- Ohhh… whats going on

Avni hits his hand

Avni- Just shut Ur mouth

Ali- U don’t have any work even I’m getting bored

Avni- No I really have some work so have to leave next time…

Ali- Pakka

Avni and Neil- Kaccha

Both laugh

Everyone leave

NIGHT 10:00 Pm

Avni opens her window

Avni- TILLU….

No Answer

She calls him

Neil- Hello… who is this?

Avni- Hello…Monkey Tillu where are U (she shouts)

Neil- Home Why?

Avni- I told U na we will have Ice cream….

Neil- Yeah! Coming near my house gate

Avni cuts the call

Neil- Hello..

Neil rolls his eyes

Avni comes near her house gate

Madhavi- Where are U going Ananya?

Neil comes over there

Avni- Woh… Mom going with my friend to have Ice cream

Madavi see’s Neil over there- Oh Okay fine

Avni- Come Tillu lets go

Neil nods and Leaves with her

ON THE ROAD

Avni- We should take right here or what?

Neil- I don’t know U are taking me right…

Avni- Accha fine come lets go this way

They reach a small Ice cream shop on the road

Avni- Yo bro how are U?

Ic’m- Fine sis same flavor right?

Avni- Obviously..

Ic’m- Who is this saab…

Neil looks on

Avni- He is my friend..

Avni smiles at Neil…

Avni- So which flavor U want Jelly bean?

Neil- Hmm… Chocolate

Avni- Do U like chocolate?

Neil- I love chocolate flavor!

Avni hugs him

Avni- Seriously We both love the same thing Tillu…

Neil smiles

Avni breaks the hug and smiles at him

Ic’m- Ur Ice cream

Avni and Neil take their Ic’s and sit

Avni- So Tillu…

Neil- Hmm…

Avni- Tell me about U.. Like we have become really close friends now or U can even tell best friends right

Neil- Yes I can tell U are My best friend

Avni- So I’ll ask U questions then U answer

Neil nods

Avni- So first is…Which is your fav colour?

Neil- Blue…

Avni- Blue even my fav color is blue….

Neil- And why do U like blue???

Avni- Is that even a question..

Neil- Just tell U should know why U like that

Avni- Hmm… Bcz U are Blue

Neil- I’m Blue

Avni laughs- Neil means Blue right…

Neil rolls his eyes

Avni- I was kidding….I don’t know why but I like blue maybe bcz my Best friend loves it

Both smile at each other

Avni- Second one is…When is Ur b’day? whats Ur age

Neil- I’m 22 years(sorry guys really don’t know their age, I guess its 28 or smtng According to the serial)

Avni- Same pinch

Neil- When is Urs?

Avni- Me I’ll turn 22 after a week

Neil- Ur b’day is next week

Avni nods

Avni- Accha fine next question…. is..

Neil- Wait its my turn now.

Avni- Arey I asked only 2 questions

Neil- Its okay

Avni rolls her eyes

Neil- So whom do U love the most in this world

Avni- Mom

Neil- Ohh… So Ur mama’s girl

Avni gets teary eyes thinking about Aisha

Avni- Yes I’m…

Neil- What about Ur BF so sad of him…..

Avni’s POV
Came straight to my so called BF…. GOD

Avni- I love him also….

Neil- Okay fine then

Avni- What fine then

Neil shook his head saying nothing

They keep on asking questions and get to know about eachother

Then they come home

Avni- Bye Tillu it was nice to know about U

Neil- Same here

Avni hugs him before going even he reciprocates (Just as friends : P )

Precap- Avni and Neil are at Riya’s house. Aman’s entry…..

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    26 Comments

    1. Shanaya on June 5, 2017 6:17 pm

      Nice chaper..rockingangels…..i like ur ffs too much

      • rockingangels on June 8, 2017 11:38 am

        Thank u shanaya

    2. Yammy on June 5, 2017 6:23 pm

      It was really great!!!???
      Awesome conversation between Avneil???????
      Loved it???
      Maybe next Avni’s attention will shift to aman….??
      So neil will get suspicious???
      Just guessing…??

      • rockingangels on June 8, 2017 11:39 am

        Thanks yammy

    3. Tanu145 on June 5, 2017 7:59 pm

      Awesome one girl….
      It was amazing
      Loved AVNEIL

      • rockingangels on June 8, 2017 11:41 am

        Thanks tanu

    4. DramaQueen1004 on June 5, 2017 8:12 pm

      Superb…. Loved it
      Pls post soon
      M very eager to know wat is going to happen next
      Love u

      • rockingangels on June 8, 2017 11:41 am

        Thanks bae and Love ya 2

    5. Zeenath on June 5, 2017 8:23 pm

      Nice chappy it’s fun to read ur ff eagerly waiting for next chappy

      • rockingangels on June 8, 2017 11:42 am

        Thanks da

    6. Manasvi on June 5, 2017 8:27 pm

      Awesome as usual..!!
      Dii, I m just in love with this story..
      Love you dii..!!??

      • rockingangels on June 8, 2017 11:43 am

        Thanks baby nd Love U 2

    7. Liara on June 5, 2017 11:25 pm

      Niceeee episode dear ????

      • rockingangels on June 8, 2017 11:44 am

        Thanks da

    8. Janavi on June 6, 2017 10:49 pm

      loved it bae keep rockin’

      • rockingangels on June 8, 2017 11:44 am

        Thanks JANU

    9. vidhi on June 6, 2017 10:50 pm

      Nice I love Ur ffs

      • rockingangels on June 8, 2017 11:44 am

        Thanks vidhi

    10. Avneil on June 7, 2017 1:54 pm

      Awesome episode ??

      • rockingangels on June 8, 2017 11:45 am

        Thanks da

    11. Sakshi on June 7, 2017 4:35 pm

      Plzzz update next part ???#waiting

      • rockingangels on June 8, 2017 11:45 am

        Thanks sakshiiii….

    12. Mihra-101 on June 8, 2017 7:12 am

      Nice ep

      • rockingangels on June 8, 2017 11:46 am

        Thanks Mihra

    13. Avneil on June 8, 2017 10:44 am

      Eagerly waiting for next chapter

      • rockingangels on June 8, 2017 11:46 am

        I’ll post it soon…sorry…

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