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Home»Fan Fiction»Avneil Hate/Love (Chapter 17)
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Avneil Hate/Love (Chapter 17)

rockingangelsBy rockingangelsJune 3, 201742 Comments9 Mins Read
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Neil was shocked to know Avni was his neighbor whom he used to hate

Neil- Seriously..!!!

Neil drives his car to his house

IN AVNI’S HOUSE

Madhavi- Then U got Ice cream from Ali also

Avni- Yeah….First Tillu bought me Ic’s and chocs then Ali

Neela- Who is Tillu?

Avni- Tillu…

Avni laughs- He is Neil Riya’s fiance. His mum calls him “tillu”. He is good actually but is no fun U know…..

Neela- Now everyone wont be like U right

Madhavi- Absolutely right…

All laugh.

Avni- By the way kaki what did U prepare today

Madhavi- Ur favorite come with me…

They leave to the dining hall

IN NEIL’S ROOM

Neil looks out of his window and see’s Avni’s room window

Neil’s POV
Her window is always open. I used to get angry when she plays songs and I close my window. So I never got a chance to look at her. I guess even she doesn’t know I’m her neighbour whom even she hates literally.

Neil- I can’t believe that annoying “bubby” is Ananya….Wait I’m telling as if she isn’t annoying. She is really annoying man….

Flashback…
One day Avni starts to play songs loudly.

Neil holds his ears…

Neil- GOD someone kill me…
He goes near his window

Neil shouts- Excuse me can U stop the music…

No answer the music was really loud

Neil calls his servant

Servant- Yes sir

Neil- Just go and tell that Bubby to shut her mouth and the music….

Servant leaves from there

Neil’s POV
What did I just call her “Bubby”. whatever…

Servant comes to Avni’s House

“DING DONG”

Avni opens the door

Avni- Yes…

Servant- Bubby saab said U to stop the music and shut Ur mouth…

Avni- Wait what did U just call me

Servant- Saab told Ur name as Bubby..

Avni- Go and tell that Jelly bean to fall in some well

She bangs the door

IN NEIL’S ROOM

Servant- Sir…

Neil- Yes why dint she reduce the volume yet..

Servant- She told “Go and tell that Jelly bean to go fall in some well”

Servant leaves from there

Neil- Jelly Bean…. I hate her.

FLASHBACK ends

Neil smiles and closes the window

IN AVNI’S HOUSE

Avni- It was damn tasty kaki

Neela and Madhavi smile

Neela- Now go and take rest U must be tired

Avni nods and leaves

Avni comes to her room

Avni- Today Jelly bean’s window is closed… Then lemme enjoy

She goes and turns on the music loudly

IN NEIL’S ROOM

Neil- Not Again man

He goes and opens the window and looks at Avni dancing

Neil smiles- She will never change

He leaves from there

IN AVNI’S ROOM

Avni- Wooohhh…

Neela shouts from down- Avni I’m going to my room I have some work….

Avni- Okay MOM

Avni’s POV
Mom never tells me to reduce the volume she puts headphones so that she cant hear this songs…

“DING DONG”

Avni- Obviously I’ll be that stupid servant…

Avni goes to hall

Avni- Madhavi kaki U stay lemme open

Madhvi- Okay beta

Avni comes and opens the door

Avni- Arey Bhai… Tillu…

Neil looks at her his arms crossed

Neil lifts his eyebrows Avni does the same

Avni- What are U doing here Tillu

Tillu- Can U plz stop the freaking music

Avni- Wait to tell me to stop the music U came till here. I know U live in this area is my music so loud…..

Neil- Yes It is….
Avni- See now even U have problem with this just like that Idiotic Jelly bean

Neil- “Jelly Bean “

Avni- Yeah , By the way I’ll Not reduce the volume so do whatever U want

Neil- What if Jelly Bean comes here and tells

Avni- He is a lazy donkey he sends his sevant everytime…. And yeah I’ll not stop this music!!!

Avni starts to close the door Neil stops it

Neil- Just stop the music Bubby…

Avni- NO WAY IN HELL
She bangs the door

Neil- She is a way too stubborn man

Neil turns and starts leaving

Avni – WAIT….

Neil turns and see’s Avni standing near the door

Neil- What now Ananya?

Avni- What did U just call me

Neil- Ananya…

Avni- No no U called me by some other name

Neil- Ur name is Ananya I’ll call u Ananya only know

Avni- GET LOST

Avni turns

Neil- Bubby…

Avni turns back …

Neil- Bubby right….

Avni goes near Neil

Avni- Did that stupid Jelly bean send U…

Neil looks on

Avni- Maybe Ur his friend. Just go and tell him to…

Neil- Go and fall in well right
Avni looks on

Avni- Absolutely right

Neil smiles

Avni- Now why the hell do U smile simply…

Neil- U can tell “Jelly bean” to go fall in well on Ur own

Avni- But how I don’t even know him… Maybe he looks like U

Neil- Like me???

Avni- Yeah see now U are so annoying and get Angry on whatever I do

Neil rolls his eyes

Avni- By the way do U know that fellow

Neil- Yes I do, I know him very well

Avni- Oh and what’s his name

Neil- Why should I tell U

Avni- Fine… Don’t say I don….
Neil- Neil.

Avni- I know Ur name is Neil…No its Tillu

Neil- His name is Neil

Avni- Seriously even his name is Neil.

Neil pinches avni’s cheeks

Neil- Grow Up lil Ananya

Avni looks on and Neil smiles

Neil’s servant comes there

Avni- Look he has sent his servant. Now he’ll tell “ Bubby madam saab told U to shut Ur mouth”

Neil looks on

Servant- Sir madam is asking for U…

Avni- By the way bhaiya where is jelly bean he sent U again Uh?

Servant looks at Neil

Avni- Why are U looking at him?

Servant- He is my saab

Avni gets shocked

Avni- Wait I dint get u.

Avni looks at Neil

Avni- U are…

Neil- The so called Jelly bean

Neil- And U are the…

Avni- The so called Bubby

Both start laughing

Avni- Hello Neighbour

Neil- Hi…Bubby

Avni smiles at Neil

Avni- U think I’m Ur so called Darling/Sweetie/Doll…

Neil- I just got that name and just called u. But U call me jelly bean what does that mean…
Avni- I don’t know actually I called u just like that..

Both laugh

Avni- Thanks Tillu no wait jelly bean…U tell me which name do U prefer

Neil- None

Avni- Oh come on now U r my Neighbour friend

Neil- No..

Avni- Accha fine leave that U tell me will U come with me

Neil- Where?

Avni- To eat Ice cream every night

Neil- Everynight…

Avni nods

Avni- See eating Ice cream in night is just awesome U know

Neil- Well whatever I’ll come

Avni- Pak..
Neil- Kaccha!!

Avni- Wah..U told before me

Neil- That’s me

Avni rolls her eyes

Avni- So I’ll call U from my window

Neil- Okay what if I’m not there

Avni- Hmm I’ll take Ur phone number

Neil- I don’t give my number to strangers

Avni- Yeah right U think I’m a stranger not Ur friend

Neil- Take my no fast

They exchange their no’s

Avni- So I’ll call U

Neil- Only if I’m free

Avni- Okay…….

Neil- Fine then bye bubby

Avni- Bye Tillu jelly

Neil glares at Avni and she smiles

Servant- Shall we go sir

Neil- Ur still here… come lets go

Neil leaves from there

Avni locks the door and goes to her room

NEXT MORNING

IN AVNI’S HOUSE

Avni- So ma I’ll tell Madhavi kaki is my mom

Neela- Got it

Madhavi- yeah…

Avni- Actually If he finds out Ur my mom then guess I’m gone…

Neela- Don’t worry nothing will happen

Avni- BTW I’m Happy that he is my Neighbour I can go out with him whenever I get bored

Madhavi- Yeah yeah that’s true

Neela nods

Neela- But be careful

Avni- He isn’t dangerous

Neela looks on

Avni gets a call

Avni- Ali…

She picks the call

Avni- Hello…

Ali- Hello how are u?

Avni- Totally fine.

Ali- U r free today

Avni- Yeah why?
Ali- U can come to the cafe

Avni- Cafe I’ll pakka come

Ali- Then see u there…

Avni disconnects the call

Avni- Ma I’m getting ready have to go to cafe

Neela- be carefull

Avni- Okay.

Avni gets ready in her room and goes to close the window She see’s Neil sitting with his laptop

Avni waves Neil doesn’t see

Avni- stupid…

Avni shouts- Hey Tillu….

Neil looks at her and rolls his eyes

Neil shouts stop calling me that

Avni shouts- Okay Jelly
Neil glares at her Avni laughs

Swetha comes near Neil and see’s Avni

Swetha- Ananya she is our Neighbour

Neil- Yes mom

Swetha waves at Avni- Hi

Avni waves back

Neil- Mom now stop that I have to go meet Riya

Swetha- Fine go…

Avni leaves to meet Ali

Avni comes to the cafe

Avni- ALI.. . Where are U

Ali comes there and smiles

Ali- Come with me

Avni- Where?
Ali- No questions

Avni goes with Ali

He shows a bench in which poha is kept

Avni- POHA

Ali nods

Riya and DD come there and smile

RIya- Ali U made this for Ananya

Avni- Riya U here come have

Riya- No It was specially made for U. U should have it

Avni- DD U

DD- No no he has made that with so much of love for U

Neil comes there

Neil- Poha…

Avni- Come have Tillu

Riya, Ali and DD look on

Precap- Avni and Neil have Poha together. Riya says- I thought he wouldn’t have it.Ali looks at them.
In night Avni and Neil go out to have Ice cream and enjoy.

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    42 Comments

    1. janvirocks on June 4, 2017 12:08 am

      Awesome chap baby

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:22 am

        thanks jaan….

    2. Gulnaz on June 4, 2017 12:13 am

      Superb…. update next episode toooooooo……… superbly written….

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:23 am

        thank u

    3. Ovb on June 4, 2017 2:38 am

      This is beautiful can’t wait for next episode. Pls update it fast. ?

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:23 am

        Thanks da

    4. Rifa on June 4, 2017 4:22 am

      Amazing…superb. …..waiting for send episode….

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:24 am

        Thanks Rifa

    5. Mihra-101 on June 4, 2017 4:48 am

      Nice ep ?

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:24 am

        Thanks da

    6. Zeenath on June 4, 2017 7:48 am

      It’s amazing as others 🙂

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:25 am

        Tq zeenath

    7. Aparna on June 4, 2017 8:16 am

      Awesome and superb chapter. Jellybean part was funny. Waiting for next one eagerly.?????

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:25 am

        Thanks Aparna

    8. Shanaya on June 4, 2017 8:51 am

      Fabulous chapter….again nice chapter by nice writer

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:26 am

        TQ Sh@n@y@

    9. Maryam Réshma on June 4, 2017 8:54 am

      Nyc epi..hope avniel patch up soon..nd da story turns interesting n a sweet love…

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:26 am

        Tq maryam

    10. Manasvi on June 4, 2017 10:03 am

      This one was awesome..
      Jelly bean and bubby are really so cute names..!!?
      Loved it dii..!!
      Waiting for the next chpter..!!
      Love you??

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:28 am

        Thanks baby, btw loved ur story too… it was Aesome…Swasan my jaan….
        I know being a lil over dramatic but fine…
        AND “YA LOVE U 2”

      • Manasvi on June 5, 2017 12:47 pm

        You’re welcome..!!
        And thanks.. Swasan are my jaan, actually my everything..!!??
        For SwaSan, I m also over over over over dramatic..??

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 12:51 pm

        : ) : D I know right…..

    11. vidhi on June 4, 2017 10:32 am

      GOD bubby and Jelly bean cute name…..

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:29 am

        Thanks vidhi btw how was Ur results???

      • vidhi on June 5, 2017 10:00 am

        Okay I guess got 81%

    12. Liara on June 4, 2017 12:15 pm

      Sooooo cute Bubby jelly ??? nice episode ???

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:29 am

        Thanks bae

    13. Shaneya patel on June 4, 2017 2:20 pm

      Awesome plzz update next epi very soon

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:30 am

        Tq SOOOO much

    14. Rithika on June 4, 2017 2:21 pm

      Awesome plzz update next epi very soon

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:30 am

        Thanks da

    15. avneil on June 4, 2017 2:42 pm

      very nice episode please update the next episode soon

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:30 am

        Pakka and thanks

    16. Arshi on June 4, 2017 4:37 pm

      Very nice episode……..cute bubby and jelly bean…..???…plz update next episode soon

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:31 am

        TYSM da

    17. Yammy on June 4, 2017 4:51 pm

      It was a great episode….
      Really loved it????
      Too hilarious?????? and too cute?????
      Plz post next episode fast …
      I am eagerly waiting?????
      Well done????
      You are such a great writer????

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:31 am

        Thank u Yammy….: )

    18. alia on June 4, 2017 5:38 pm

      awesome

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:32 am

        Thanks Aliaaaaa….

    19. G@g@n@ on June 4, 2017 7:46 pm

      AWE…. SOME bae just loved it……

      • rockingangels on June 5, 2017 1:32 am

        Thanks bae… and hw r u?

    20. tanu145 on June 5, 2017 3:58 pm

      Awesome and so cute names

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