Fan Fiction

Avneil Hate/Love (Chapter 16)

GUYS I’m really sorry for d late update…. SORRY…!!!

Avni goes to Neil and holds his hand

Avni- Now come on…It’ll be awesome…

Neil- I don’t want to…

Avni pulls his hand

She pulls him out and leaves his hand

Neil- U r really…

Avni looks up at the sky and closes her eyes

Neil looks on

Avni- Just close ur eyes tillu

Neil closes his eyes

Avni opens her eyes and see’s Neil closing his eyes and smiles

She starts dancing

Avni- Come on tillu now stop sleeping

Neil opens his eyes and see’s Avni dancing and smiles at her

Avni- Dance with me…

Neil- no

Avni- U R NO FUN

Neil rolls his eyes

After sometime they get in the tent as it stops raining

Neil gets 2 towels and gives Avni one

Avni takes the towel

Avni- It was good right…

Neil- no it wasn’t

Avni- I knew it

Neil- I got fully wet only because of u

Avni- oh now don’t be a child u are a police….

Neil- Yeah right….Achoo…

Avni laughs

Neil- Stop laughing…Achoo…

Avni- U are so sensitive…Achoo…

Neil looks at Avni

Neil- Even U…

Both start to laugh

Avni gets up

Avni- I’ll get the tabs U wait here

Neil looks on

Avni gets the a tablet from her bag and gives it to Neil

Avni- Take have it U’ll be fine

Neil- What about Ur’s

Avni- Mine I don’t need it… Achoo…

Neil- It doesn’t look like that

Avni- Listen I have only one so have it or else I’ll have it

Neil gives the tablet back to avni

Avni- Why???

Neil- U have it I don’t need it….

Avni- Sure…

Neil- Sure….

Neil gets up and leaves

Avni looks

Avni- If he doesn’t need then fine…

OUTSIDE THE TENT

Neil keeps on sneezing

Neil- Uh all of this is because of Ananya..Achoo..

Avni comes there and keeps hand on Neil’s shoulder

Neil turns back

Neil- What are U doing here go take rest…

Avni gives him a bottle and tablet

Neil- Why did U get it here U go and have it

Avni- See I took half of the tablet

Neil looks at the tablet which was broken into half

Neil- But….

Avni- Oh god now take this my hand is paining

Neil takes it from her hand

Avni- So GN tillu

Avni leaves from there

Neil looks on

Neil’s POV
I don’t think she is that Annoying actually. Maybe she accepted me as a real friend. So even I accept her as my real friend

Neil smiles

IN THE MORNING

Avni and Neil get ready and leave from the tent

Avni- So today we have to find the treasure Uh

Neil- Yes

Avni and Neil start walking as per the map and clues

After some time they reach a place and see a flag put on the ground

Neil- V should take d flag and search for the treasure now

Avni- But what will v get in the treasure

Neil- Don’t know….

Neil goes and takes the flag

Avni- Maybe we’ll get chocolate or Ice cream

Neil rolls his eyes

Neil- And if we get that I’ll give everything to u.

Avni- pakka..

Neil nods

Neil- but for that we have to reach the treasure fast or else anyone else will take it…

Avni starts running

Avni- Now come fast…

Neil goes behind her

After 30mins they reach some place where they see many people searching for the treasure

Avni- So many people…

Neil- I told u now come fast…

They start searching…

Ali and riya come there

Ali- Look Neil and Ananya…

Riya looks at Neil and Avni searching for the treasure. they go to them

Ali- So totally forgot us

Neil and Avni look at them

Riya hugs Neil and then Avni

Ali- So searching for the treasure ?

Avni nods

Neil- She wants chocolates and Ice cream in the treasure…

Ali smiles

Riya- yeah yeah search u’ll get

Ali- Even I’ll search if I get I’ll give U my part

Avni smiles

Neil’s POV
Seriously will we get chocolates and Ice creams in the treasure

Riya and Ali leave from there

Neil- Ananya…

Avni- Hmm…

Neil- What if U don’t get Choc and Ic’s in the treasure

Avni looks at him

Avni- I wont do anything I just wanted to have that because its been 2 days since I had that

Avni starts searching

AFTER 20 mins

Neil and Avni get a box

Avni- Is this the treasure

Neil- Think so…

Ali and Riya come there

They open the box and find trophy inside it

Neil looks at Avni

Avni smiles at him- We won Tillu

Neil- Ur choco…

Avni- Leave that I can even have it after going home

Neil smiles

Riya- I’m so happy we won

Ali- But U couldn’t get the chocolates

Avni- It’s Okay Ali

Sakshi and DD come there

Sakshi- Congrats U have won

Avni cheers

Neil gives the trophy to Avni

Avni- Why are U giving it to me

Neil- Because U found the clue

Avni gives it back to him

Avni- No I don’t need it…

Neil looks on

Riya- Ananya come lets go and pack things

Avni nods and leaves with Riya…

Ali- Come lets leave to pack the things

Avni and Riya keep walking

Avni- Fine I’ll go to my tent and get my things

Riya- Even me and then We’ll meet near the entrance

Avni nods and leaves

Avni walks to the tent and gets in

Avni- Now have to pack the things, I guess Tillu left

She starts packing her things

Neil comes over there

Neil- Why U said U don’t need it

Avni turns back and see’s Neil

Neil lifts his eyebrows Avni does the same

Neil smiles

Avni- Why are U smilling like a mad

Neil- Why did U say U don’t need this trophy

Avni starts packing the things

Avni- Simply…

Neil comes to Avni

Neil- Even U deserve this..

Avni- All credit goes to u tillu U found the treasure…

Neil- U found the clue

Avni gets up

Avni- What do U need now

Neil- I want U to take the trophy

Avni- I can’t

Neil- Why??

Avni- Because I dont take good care of this trophy. U can keep it in Ur office. And think this is the Remembrance/Token of our friendship…

Neil- Token of our friendship

Avni nods

Neil- Fine then….

Avni- And don’t break it it’ll be as if our friendship is broken

Neil- Do U seriously believe that

Avni laughs and starts packing the things

Neil also packs the things

NEAR THE JEEP

Riya and Ali are waiting over there

Riya- So did U talk to Ananya?

Ali- No I dint get a chance to talk to her.

Riya- So lets start the 1st plan

Ali looks on

Riya tells him about the plan and Ali smiles

Ali- Are U sure I can win her heart

Riya- Pakka Ananya will like U

DD comes there

DD- Ananya!!!

Ali and Riya are shocked

DD- so u like Ananya….

Ali- N..No

DD- But she has a BF right

Riya- Plzz DD stop it she doesn’t love her BF.

DD- Oh…

Riya- And Ali loves her so I’m helping him

DD- U love her man

Ali nods

Riya- Please no one should know that except us

DD- But Neil sir…

Riya- No he’ll get angry knowing we are doing this…

Ali- Doing what?

Riya- Planing to make her fall for U

DD- I promise Neil sir and Even Ananya will not know

Neil- What I’ll not know

Riya, Ali and DD get shocked seeing Neil and Avni over there

Avni- Yeah what we wont know

Riya- U’ll not know that we….

Neil- Fine leave that lets leave Its getting late

Everyone nod

They leave in the car

At 4:00 Pm

They come at Mehta house

Everyone get down

Ali pulls Avni aside

Ali- Where do U leave and how do I contact U

Avni- I’ll tell u all that u just take my no

They exchange their phone no

Riya calls Avni and Avni leaves

Riya- Ananya Ur going home

Avni- Yeah why?

Riya- We can meet at the Horniman circle garden at 6:00 Pm

Avni- Garden Why?

Riya- See u and Neil have won so we’ll keep a small party

Neil- no need of that riya

Riya- no its needed so everyone will be there

Riya leaves from there

Ali- Fine then meet u ppl this evening

Ali leaves

DD- So even we’ll leave okay

Avni nods

Avni looks at Neil and waves a him.

Avni- Bye

Neil- Bye…

Avni turns back to leave

Neil- Uh.. Ananya…

Avni- Yeah…

Neil- How are U leaving?

Avni- In my car why?

Neil- I just asked…

DD- Okay sir lets leave

Avni smiles at Neil and leaves in her car

Avni reaches the her house gate

Avni- This next house people always send their bai to scold me when I play loud songs.” saab told U to reduce the volume of Ur speaker and Ur mouth”. Idiot if I see him once na I’ll pakka kill him.

She leaves

Its 5:00 pm

Avni- Ma seriously I don’t even know the directions to that garden

Neela- U book a cab na

Avni- Cab…

Neela- Yes

Avni- Fine lemme see

Avni leaves to her room taking her phone.

ON THE OTHER SIDE

Neil comes out of his house taking his car

Neil- How come today she din’t play songs. GOD her songs and her voice. I send my servant to ask her to stop she tells the servant ” Go tell Ur boss to fall in well”. Seriously if I get her once I’ll teach her a good lesson to stop making noise.

Neil leaves in his car

IN HORNIMAN CIRCLE GARDEN

Avni comes there first

Avni- Seriously Its 6:15 pm now and no one came yet

Neil comes over there

Avni- Even U came

Neil- Yeah

Avni- See no one came yet why the hell did they call Us

Neil- I got U something

Avni-ME…!!!

Neil nods

Avni- And whats that….

Neil- Close Ur eyes

Avni closes her eyes

Neil takes her to a bench in the garden

Neil- Now open

Avni opens her eyes and is stunned

Avni- ICE CREAMS and CHOCOLATES

Neil- Yes U wanted that right

Avni- Thank u so much tillu

Avni starts having everything

Avni- Come even U have

Neil sits on the bench and has Ic’s

They finish having that….

Neil- Now come lets go there Its 6:30 they may have come

Avni- Yeah…And thank u friend

Neil- No telling thanks to a friend

Avni smiles

They leave

ON THE OTHER SIDE

Ali DD and Riya were waiting

Neil and Avni come there

DD- U both came together

Avni- We came here early U ppl din’t come….

Neil- Yeah…

Riya- Fine leave that…

Ali goes to Avni

Riya smiles

Avni- What happened Ali…

Neil looks on

Ali- Take this I got U Ic’s and choco’s because U wanted to have those

Avni and Neil gets shocked

Avni- For me

Ali nods

Riya- Soo cute Ali U got it for her

DD- Yeah yeah

Avni- But what was the need

Ali- U wanted that right a real friend cares about his friend right

Avni looks at Neil and smiles

Ali gives it to her

Avni- Thanks

She takes everything out and gives it to everyone

Riya Ali and DD look on

Avni- All of us will have it

Ali- But…

Avni- No Buts

She goes to Neil and gives him one

Avni- Thanks for making me Ur true friend

Neil- Ur my friend

Avni- Forever and Always

Neil smiles

Avni gives him Another one

Neil- Why the hell are u giving me another one

Everyone look at them

Riya- What happened?

Avni- Even U are My friend right take another one

Neil makes faces

Riya- OH GOD U GUYS

After 1 hour

Riya- I guess we should leave its already late and dadi is calling me

Ali- Yeah even I’ll leave

Ali comes to Avni

Ali- Bye Ananya

Avni- Bye

Ali leaves and even DD

Avni- Fine Bye Tillu I’ll leave

Neil- Okay Bye…

Avni leaves

ON THE ROAD

Avni has her phone in her hand

Avni- Arey yaar what the hell my Internet isn’t working. I think I should go in taxi….

Some guy comes over there and start shouting

Guy – Ohhh look someone is here

Avni- Dare U come near me

The guy comes closer to her

Neil comes there in his car and is shocked

She takes out her pepper spray and spays it in his eyes

Guy- Ahhh…

Neil comes out of the car and holds the guy and hits him

Neil- U guys should be put in jail

Some people come there and start hitting him

Neil calls his constables and ask them to take the guy

Avni laughs looking at the guy

Neil- Now stop laughing….

Avni- Oh come on wasn’t it funny

Neil glares at her

Some lady comes there

Lady- Are U fine

Avni- Yeah I’m fine

Lady- Its all Ur fault that U r wear such short dresses

Avni looks on

Neil looks at Avni wearing a short frock

Neil glares at the lady

Avni- Fault is not….

Neil cuts Avni’s sentence- U mind Ur own business did U get that

The lady leaves from there

Neil glares at Avni

Avni lifts her eyebrow

Neil’s POV
Why does she always does that as if nothing happened

Neil- Why dint U go home

Avni- How will I go I dint even get my car.

Neil- How did U come here

Avni- Cab

Neil- Why cant U book it now

Avni- GOD tillu my internet isn’t working get me Ur phone I’ll use it

Neil- No….

Avni- No… U will leave me alone in this road

Neil- I will not I’ll just drop U to Ur home

Avni- U don’t have any work…

Neil- No

Avni- Pakka

Neil- Kaccha

Avni- See again copying my words

Neil- No I don’t

They argue

Neil- Now come lets leave u show me the way

After 10 mins

Avni- And then right

Neil- U leave in my area

Avni- U leave here

Neil- Yeah

Avni- By the way U leave in my area

Neil rolls his eyes

Avni- Here left then right

Neil looks on

They reach Avni’s house

Neil gets shocked

Avni- Thanks Tillu

Avni gets down and waves at him

Avni gets in her house

Neil- She leaves here in the sense she is my Neighbor who I hate because she plays songs loudly and I never saw her….

Precap- Avni plays songs loudly. Neil comes and rings Avni’s door bell. Avni is shocked to see Neil there.

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