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Home»Fan Fiction»AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Last chapter
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AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Last chapter

ahk26barbieBy ahk26barbieNovember 24, 20179 Comments6 Mins Read
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Today I’am ending my ff.You all requested me to continue but I thought its better to end the ff than make it worst in upcoming.Thanks to all for supporting me through comments & reading.Thanks to all silent readers & other readers.It was my first ff.But you all welcomed me with heart.So thank you.Here the last chapter of my ff.
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Recap:Neil was kidnapped by Laksh.

Episode:45:-

Next day Police came to home.

SI:Good morning Sir.
Ashish:Morning take your seat sir.

They sat.Everyone came.

SI:We came for a enquiry.
Prakash:,Carry on.
SI:When he became missing?
Shwetha:He was not here from morning.
SI:Did he or you all had any enimies?
Nithin:No Sir.
SI:Did any call came asking money?
Prakash:Not upto this.

Avni was silent.A call came for her.It flashed unknown no..She scared.

Avni:Excuse me.

She left for outside.Aryan was playing in mobile phone outside.They didn’t saw eachother.

Avni:What are you doing?Whatever you want ask me.
Otherside:You want to see Neil na?
Avni:Yes.
Other side:So come here which i’am going to say.

Aryan saw Avni.

Aryan:Mamma looks desp.Come let’s see.
Avni:OK.I’am coming.

Avni left when Aryan came near.

Aryan:Where is Mamma going?

Avni left on car.She reached on godown.She came inside.

Avni:Neil…Neil…Is anyone here?Ne….

Avni saw Neil was sleeping in chair.She ran towards him.

Avni:Neil..Neil…Wake up..Its me Avni..Neil..

Neil wakes.

Neil:Avni…

Avni touched his cheek.They became teared.

Avni:Who did this?
Neil:He..He..Laksh..

Avni shocked & took her hands back.

Avni:What?Laksh?Laksh can’t do this.
Neil:Why not?Why don’t you trust me?
Avni:You didn’t identify him after meeting him?
Neil:I didn’t saw his face because of mask.Just he said.
Avni:And you trusted.Neil,Laksh can’t do this to you because he is your….
A voice:Brother Neelesh.

They turned.It’s Neelesh.Avneil become shocked.

Neil:Bhai…
Avni:Laksh,what are you doing?
Neelesh:Can’t you see?
Avni:Why are you doing this?
Neelesh:Because of you Avni.Only for you.
Avni:For me?Why for me?
Neelesh:Because I love you..

Avneil stunned.

Avni:What?You know what are you saying?
Neelesh:I know.Why?I can’t love you?I don’t know when I started to feel for you.You know when I said something before 6 years when we came back from college.

FB starts.

Neelesh:Avni,you marry me.After that you both never be parted.

FB ends.

Neelesh:Everyone laughed at me.You know I pit your photos in front of your home.Because I knew that I’ll never get Avni up to you with her.

FB starts:-

Studio.Neelesh in a black jacket.

Neelesh:Bhai,yesterday’s photos..
Photographer:It is as you said 2 copies.

He took this & smirks.Then he put it imfront of Avneil’s home.

FB ends.

Neelesh:But the whole college stood with you & my plan failed.Then parents send me with Di.After that they made plan against you both.They planned your marriage.I felt list hearing that but I became happy after hearing your plan.I thought when Neil marry Reina I can get Avni.You saw someone in yiur room is me Avni.But..You fell in love with her.And Avni suicided in front of me.I nevercfelt that you died.So I came in search of you & found.Then I male yiy against family.Because I feared parting from you.

Neil was in anger.He picked chair with angry.

Neelesh:Then you wished to go back.But your family said that they can afford only one.Truth is this that I never talk with them about it.Its my words because I knew that you’ll send Aman Bhai instead if you.But Neil came in search of you & you both became one.But I never allow so I kidnapped you.Its for you Avni.For our love.

Avni:Just shut up Laksh.How chaep are you?You saw na?You tried up to this but we are one.We are AVNEIL HAMESHA SAATH SAATH.
Neelesh:Oh!

Neelesh slapped Neil.

Avni:Laksh stop it.Leave him.
Neelesh:No I’ll kill him.
Avni:Laksh,you can’t do this.He is your brother.
Neelesh:No.He is my enimie.If anyone stood against my love I’ll kill him.

Neelesh pointed Neil with a gun.

Avni:No.Leave him.What you want?
Neelesh:Marry me.

Avneil became shocked.

Neil:How dare you?
Neelesh:Just shut up.Be silent.If you marry me I’ll leave Neil.Otherwise I’ll kill him & comitte suicide.Think Avni..
Neil:Avni,no..I can die.But you can’t marry him.
Neelesh:Think Avni,otherwise..

Neelesh pointed gun to Neil.

Avni:I’am ready.

Neil become shocked.Avni cried.

Neelesh:Good come.

Neelesh made fire.He pulled Avni forcely for taking pheras.They took 5 rotations.While taking 6th someone pulled Neelesh.He fell down.Its Neil.

Avni:Neil..?

Avni looked back.Aryan was standing there.

Avni:Aaru?

FB starts.:-

Aryan:Where Mamma is going?

He sat on dickey & came inside.He saw everything.While the time of pheras he made Neil free.

FB ends.

Avni:Aaru..
Aryan:Mamma..

A fight happened between Neil & Neelesh.

Neil:Did you want Avni?My Avni..She is mine.Only Neil’s.

Neil pushed him.He fell near Aryan.He took Aryan on hand.

Avni:Aaru..
Aryan:Mamma…Mamma..

He cried.

Avni:Laksh no.
Neil:Bhai,leave him.
Neelesh:No you want to hit me..slap me..Come on.
Avni:Please leave him.
Neil:Avni,only one thing he can’t see.Our love.Come & give me your love..
Avni:Love?Neil..
Neil:Come on Avni.We hadn’t any other option.

Avneil came near.

Neelesh:No..No..

They came near to kiss.Someone pulled Neil.Its Neelesh.They fights.Avni hugged Aryan.

Avni:Are you OK Champ?
Aryan:Yes Mamma.

Police & family arrived there.They picked Neelesh.

Avni:How this?
Aryan:I called at home.Papa’s phone was with me.
Prakash:Neelesh,you did this?

Shwetha slapped him.

Shwetha:Against your brother???
Prakash:Take him.

Police left with Neelesh.

Neelima:None can make you both part.
Aman:Yes.Friendship to love.
Neil:I got my Punjabi girl back.
Avni:And for me my Punjabi boy.

They hugged.After 4 years.Shore if a sea.A boy & a girl sitting together.The boy was desp.

Girl:Swaroop,when you feel sad come near me.
Boy:I’am always coming Swathi.

The girl stood.

Swathi:oh!You destroyed.If you can’t say dialogue correctly go to hell.

The boy also stood up.

Swaroop:You shut up.You are always taking mistakes.
Swathi:Papa,see he was blaming me.
Swaroop:No Maa,she started first.

Avneil was standing together a little far away.

Neil:Both are dramebaaz like your Mom.
Avni:Oh!Sir..you are best always na?Best in worst..
Neil:Excuse me mind your words.
Avni:Can’t you do this?
Swathi:Shut up.
Swaroop:We called you to console us & you both are worst than us.
Avni:What did you say?

Avneil chased the children.They took them on hand.Avneil came to kiss them.But children move down & Avneil kissed each other.

Neil:Its cheating.We are not playing with you both.
Swathi:Papa,you are child than us.
Avni:You are cheaters & also changing matter.
Swaroop:Maa,we failed in childish in front of you.
Swathi:No cheating.
Swaroop:Come.

They hugged & kissed.

A voice:Excuse me.

They looked forward.Someone tooled their family photo.
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THE END
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Hope you all enjoyed the last chapter.Thanks to all who read,commented & supported my episodes.Sorry for the mistakes.Muss you all.Love you all.Keep smiling,keep loving,keep blessing.Here I’am Athira signing off.Bye.

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    Nothing permanent than your memmories.

    9 Comments

    1. Aisha on November 24, 2017 1:45 am

      Love it please post another ff I’ll miss your ff good luck

      • ahk26barbie on November 27, 2017 12:52 pm

        Thank you Aisha.Miss you toooo.

    2. Barun on November 24, 2017 6:29 am

      it’s a wonderful & outstanding episode ever. I am just loving the every moment of your storyline. 1st the way avni got to know about neil & came to search for him & fighting between brother against brother all scene are really interesting. The way you making photo stealing suspense from the beginning & make our confusion clear at the end that’s just remarkable. At the you very beautifully show a happy family where there two child of avneil. Overall you are trying to give your best to make this last episode a long lasting happy chapter which is just mind blowing. I wanna go but only now I can remember all those beautiful moment. I hope that it’s not last talk of my end. your last episode is too good to attractive. All well that ends well. Best of luck my dear sister. Love you a lot.

      • ahk26barbie on November 27, 2017 12:54 pm

        Thank you Bhai.Thank you sooo much.

    3. zaina on November 24, 2017 6:45 pm

      ????????? yaaaaar sanju….. U r awesome… I loved ur suspense. Swati nd swaroop rocked. I don’t know what to comment. Gonna miss ur ff badly. Try to write a new one soon after ur xams. Kyunki hame tumhari ff ki aadath pad gayi hai. Yaar write more… U r very talented. Best of luck yaar for ur bright future and coming xams.
      Today’s epi is a memorable one. I can’t forget this chapter ever. Because it is a package of emotions. Luv u sanju…… Luv u………..?????
      Its for u.. Ur fav dairy milk…..???

      • ahk26barbie on November 27, 2017 12:55 pm

        Thank you Fasy.Love you a lottt my bestie.

    4. Pavithra1616 on November 24, 2017 11:34 pm

      Chechi… What was it?? There r no words to explain… Because everything was perfect in the chapter.. The suspense was unbelievable!!! Loved it very much… Will miss this ff so much… More than that will miss u chechi.. Ummaaa??

      • ahk26barbie on November 27, 2017 12:57 pm

        Thank you Pavi.Thanks a lot.

      • Pavithra1616 on November 27, 2017 5:47 pm

        Are u going to deactivate Chechi?? Missing u a lot…??

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