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Home»Fan Fiction»AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Episode 8
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AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Episode 8

ahk26barbieBy ahk26barbieAugust 12, 2017Updated:August 14, 201711 Comments3 Mins Read
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Recap:Tour discussion & Avneil’s knock jhok

Episode-8

At night.Avni’s room.Ashish & Asha was paching for Avni.Avni came there.

Ashish:All set.Anything else?
Asha:What are you saying Ashish?We know better than her.Even she didn’t help us a bit.
Avni:That is because Maa,if you both did packing.It is trustfull for me.
Ashish:Oh!

Neil’s home.

Shwetha:Neil,come & eat food.Then go to sleep.
Neil:Coming Mom.

Neil sat on dining chair.Everyone was there.

Prakash:Did you pack eveything?
Neil:Yes Dad.
Neelesh:How much happy?I think tomorrow you will blast bus with joy.
Neelima:Or anything more?
Neil:Di…
Shwetha:Keep quiet & eat food.
Neelima:If I said anything it will be problem.
Shwetha:I said it for everyone.
Prakash:Get ready early.
Neil:Yes Dad.Mom I’am leaving.Good night all.
Everyone:Good night Tillu.

Neil leaved after washing hands.After sometime Neelesh & Neelima came there.

Neelesh:Neil..
Neil:Yes Bhai…Di also.What happened?
Neelima:Why you didn’t like?
Neil:I never said it.Its night.Suddenly…
Neelesh:You was not here everynight.So…
Neil:Means?
Neelima:What do you think if you went outside hidely none will see you?

Neil become shocked.

Neil:Where I’am going?
Neelesh:We are also asking that,where are you going?
Neil:I didn’t went anywhere.
Neelesh:Lie to us.Ok.What will happen if we told Mom-Dad about Avni & yours friendship?
Neil:No….Ok.I’am going near Avni?Where any?
Neelima:At night?Neelesh,its not friendship.
Neil:You both will think like this.But we know eachother.Trust eachother.

Prakash & Shweta came there.

Prakash:Whats hapening here?
Neil:Look Papa.They are not letting me to sleep.
Shwetha:Neil is going tomorrow early.You both leave.
Neil:Go go.
Neelma:Noone love us.
Prakash:Keep it up.
Neelesh:Come Di..

They left.

Prakash:Go & Sleep Neil.

They began to leave.

Neil:Mom-Dad

They turned.Neil hugged them.

Neil:Sorry Mom,Sorry Dad.

They parted.

Prakash:What do you done?
Neil:I know it means nothing.
Prakash:Go and sleep.

They left.Neil stood looking at them.Next day 4:45am.Avni’s home.

Ashish:You take care.
Asha:Don’t forget to call.
Avni:Ok.Ok.
Prakash:Lets go?
Avni:Come with us Maa…
Asha:I?
Avni:Why you are staying alone.Come.
Ashish:She is wright.Come on Asha.
Asha:This Daughter & Father?

At Neil’s home.

Neil:Bye Mom…bye Di…bye Bhai…
Everyone:Bye Tillu.
Prakash:Come.

They get inside car.They waved hands eachother upto the car disappeared from vision.

Prakash:Stop it Neil.
Neil:Dad it is better to be emotional before joy.
Prakash:Oh!

They reached at college.

Teacher:All are arrived?I’ll call the names.
Avni:Bye Papa.
Teacher:Vineeth…Sukanya.
Ashish:Bye Avni.
Asha:Maa’s sweet daughter.

They hugged & parted.

Teacher:Avni Mehta…
Avni:Yes Ma’m.

Avni getinside bus.

Teacher:Gaurav…Neil Khanna.
Neil:Ma’m here…Bye Dad.

Avneil sat in different window seats.

Teacher:Meera….

Teacher went inside the bus.

Teacher:All set.Lets go.

Bus moved.Aveil waved hands to the parents.Neil came & sat near Avni.

Avni:Oh!arrived.
Neil:Yes.
Vineeth:Bhai play the music.
Teacher:No its night.
Neil:So what Ma’m?We are going for tour.We want joy.Driver Bhai,play the music.

Driver onned the music player.They danced.

Teacher:These children?

Morning 10:30 am.Bus reached near a hotel.

Teacher:Come out.

Everyone came out.

Sukanya:Which is the place?
Avni:Amritsar?
Neil:Amritsar.
Teacher:Yes Amritsar.What?
Avni:Nothing.
Teacher:Come lets go inside.
Avneil(In excitement & in low voice):Amritsar…

They went inside.Avni got a key of the room which their gangue got.They get freshen up & went to corridor.Everyone was there.

Gaurav:What a beautiful place?
Neil:Its Punjab.Fully greenish.
Teacher:Listen.Did you all had an idea about Punjab?
Avni:Yes.
Teacher:I don’t think so all had it.Lets go outside to see the heart of Punjab.Come.

They walked forward avoidind Avneil.Thet ran backwards.

Avni:The work success.
Neil:Now can proceed…
Avneil:Our Plan.

They jumbed.
………………………………………………………………………
Precap:Avni is taking rotation at a Gurudwara.Avni stood watching someone.

Avni:Bhai….

He turned.It is revealed as Aman-Avni’s brother.

Avni:Bhai…
Aman:Avni…

They stood looking eachother.
………………………………………………………………………
Thanks to all those who read,commented & supported my ff.Thanks for true love.Sorry for the mistakes.Because I’am very tired today.Keep reading,keep commenting,keep loving.

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    11 Comments

    1. zaina on August 12, 2017 11:45 am

      Wow… Supwerb .. AvNeil is on tour… Precap is much interesting…..Add more and more avneil scenes…. Luv u Sanju…..luv u avneil..

      • ahk26barbie on August 12, 2017 6:51 pm

        Thank you.v

      • ahk26barbie on August 12, 2017 6:53 pm

        Now Avneil are friends.I’ll add romance when love begins.

    2. Sweetgirl7 on August 12, 2017 12:49 pm

      Oh barbie. Please update the next chapp. This one was pleasant

      • ahk26barbie on August 12, 2017 6:54 pm

        Thanks Sami.

    3. alia on August 12, 2017 2:21 pm

      Amazing I always wait for ur update . It Awesome dear

      • ahk26barbie on August 12, 2017 6:57 pm

        Thanks Alia

    4. shalini on August 12, 2017 10:52 pm

      Good one dear

      • ahk26barbie on August 13, 2017 11:23 am

        Thank you Shalini

    5. Ananya on August 13, 2017 5:48 pm

      Lovely

      • ahk26barbie on August 13, 2017 10:36 pm

        Thank you.

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