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Home»Fan Fiction»AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Episode 7
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AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Episode 7

ahk26barbieBy ahk26barbieAugust 10, 20179 Comments4 Mins Read
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Recap:Avneil discussions.

Episode-7

Avni reached at the 3 way junction which yesterday they parted.

Avni:Today also.

She closed the eyes.

Avni:Tik tik-1,tik tik-2,tik tik-3,tik tik-4,tik tik-5…

She opened her eyes.A riding boat passed through nearby stream.The man waved hands for Avni.Avni also replied.

Avni:No.1 boat rider.

Avni closed eyes oncemore.

Avni:Tik tik-1,tik tik-2,tik tik-3,tik tik-4,tik tik-5..

Avni opened her eyes.A guy with bouquets passed.He smiled at Avni.Avni also.

Avni:No.2 flower boy.

Avni closed eyes oncemore.

Avni:Tik tik-1,tik tik-2,tik tik-3,tik tik-4,tik tik-5…

Neil reached there suddenly on bicycle.

Neil:No.3 Neil Khanna…
Avni:You haven’t any shame.Everyday late.
Neil:Sorry yaar.

He was taking deep breath.

Avni:Where is Bhai?
Neil:He was gone.Come lets go.
Avni:Ok.

On the way.

Neil:Did any discussion happened at home about yesterday noice?
Avni:No.I think they forgot it.
Neil:Thank God.
Avni:You know,yesterday I hadn’t locked the door
Neil:What?Did they saw?
Avni:I don’t think so.

They reached at college.They parked cycles.They walked to classroom.

Voice:Avneil….

They turned.Its their gangue.Avneil had some
more friends.They are Vineeth, Gaurav, Sukanya,Meera.Avneil went near them.

Avni:Why you are here?Hadn’t class?
Vineeth:No…
Neil:No?Means?
Meera:Because of tomorrow’s tour 3rd years hadn’t class today.
Avni:So lets go to the home.
Gaurav:No the tour members must be here.
Neil:What was happening yaar?
Avni:Suddenly a study tour.They never disclose anything about the place.Said that surprise & today.
Neil:Getting bored yaar.Atleast can say the name of that place.
Avni:Oh!God.
Neil:What happened?
Avni:Papa…
Neil:Papa?

They looked forward.Ashish came out from car.

Neil:Yes Avni.
Avni:Leave.

Everyone parted.Avni went near Ashish.

Avni:Papa…
Ashish:Avni..
Avni:Why you are here?
Ashish:Management called me.
Avni:For what?
Ashish:To talk about the tour.
Avni:Ok come.
Ashish:Hey!Neil.

Neil looked at Ashish.He came near them.Avneil donot look eachother.

Ashish:Your father doesn’t came?
Neil:No.Why Papa?

Avneil & Ashish became shocked.

Avni(in mind):Oh!no.Neil what did you say?
Neil(in mind?:Oh!God.

Ashish looked at him.

Neil:I mean why Uncle?
Ashish:Management informed us to come.
Neil:Oh!Sometimes he is on the way.
Ashish:Ok bye.
Neil:Bye uncle.

They parted.

Ashish:Why did he call me Papa?
Avni:Sometimes he’ll called you remembering his father.
Ashish:Oh!
Avni:You are very doubtful Papa.
Ashish:Why not?I’am staying with your mother.
Avni:Oh!I’ll inform this to Maa.
Ashish:Avni…..

Meeting.

Principal:So tomorrow the college conducting a tour.I know its a sudden discussion.We never disclosed about the place.Its Punjab.

Avneil’s become surprised.

Avniel(in low voice):Punjab?
Principal:Yes Punjab.Everyone must reach hear at 5am with their parents.Mobile phone is allowed.We arrive after 2 days.So thank you.

They came out.

Prakash:I’am leaving.What about you?
Neil:Me too Dad on cycle.
Prakash:Ok bye Tillu.
Neil:Dad….ok bye.

Prakash left.On the other side.

Ashish:Can I drop you Avni?
Avni:No Papa.I have cycle.
Ashish:Ok.As you wish.Bye.
Avni:Bye Papa.

Ashish also leaved.The gangue came back together.

Vineeth:Atleast it is revealed…Punjab….
Gaurav:What was the speciality for Punjab?
Avni:You did’t know?
Gaurav:What?
Avni:It is Punjab…PUNJAB.
Neil(In low voice):Drama started by Punjabi girl.
Sukanya:How you know?
Avni:Why not?
Neil:Avni,stop it.
Avni:You stop.
Neil:Avni…
Avni:Ok.Sorry.I love Punjab & Punjabians.Their dress,culture,tradition,slank…more than that Gurudwara & Babji.What a colourful nature.You know?I wish……
Neil:If I has a second birth I want to take at Punjab.

Avni stared at Neil in fake anger.

Avni:This is my dialogue.
Neil:Iam hearing this everyday.Come lts go.

They leaved.On the way.

Neil:Avni,What happened to you?Say something.

Avni was mute.

Neil:Stop.

They stopped the cycle.

Neil:What happened?Say something.Ok sorry..really sorry.If I didn’t laugh at you so towards whom?You know I also love Punjab.After that….

Avni was still silent.

Neil:Oh!So…you never talk.You know about Punjabi boys.They are very strong.If you still silent….then…

Neil took Avni up.

Avni:What are you doing Neil?Make me down.
Neil:No.If you didn’t forgive me.I’ll stay like this.
Avni:Ok.Forgived.

Neil make her stood.

Neil:Sorry Yaar.Without Avni Neil is incomplete.
Avni:Sorry Neil.
Neil:I love you.
Avni:I love you too.

They hugged.
………………………………………………………………………
Precap:Neil’s room.Neil,Neelesh & Neelima.

Neelesh:What did you think if you went outside at night noone will see?
Neil:Where I’am going.
Neelima:We are also asking that.

Neil become shocked.They looked eachother.
………………………………………………………………………
Thanks to all those who read,commented & supported for my ff.I love Punjab so much.So I included it.Sorry for the mistakes.Keep reading,keep commenting,keep supporting.

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    9 Comments

    1. Alia on August 10, 2017 8:05 pm

      Awesome

      • ahk26barbie on August 10, 2017 10:08 pm

        Thank you

    2. Sweetgirl7 on August 10, 2017 9:20 pm

      Barbie babes you are increasing my curiousness for the nexy episode . Thanks for giving us so good chapters

      • ahk26barbie on August 10, 2017 10:09 pm

        Thank you so much Sami.Your encouragement is my inspiration to write.

      • Sweetgirl7 on August 11, 2017 6:01 pm

        Welcome barbie

    3. guna cotton on August 10, 2017 9:46 pm

      Such a wonderful nd different story Yaar..keep updating

      • ahk26barbie on August 11, 2017 5:11 am

        Thank you so much.I’ll try my level best to post daily.

    4. zaini on August 10, 2017 11:20 pm

      i loved it. truly your ff is just awsome. there is no word to describe it. each time i read i become more attracted to this ff. Amazing work and keep up it like this.

      • ahk26barbie on August 11, 2017 5:13 am

        Thank you so much for your support Zaini.Keep loving.

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