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Home»Fan Fiction»AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Episode 5
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AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Episode 5

ahk26barbieBy ahk26barbieAugust 1, 20175 Comments4 Mins Read
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Recap:Avneil entry.Raghu & Adarsh discussion about Avneil’s friendship.

Episode-5

Avneil were sitting on their bicycle.

Avni:How much time will take yaar?Its too much.
Neil:Please Avni.Wait for some time.
Avni:Yaar,Maa will wait for me.I need to leave.
Neil:Will you leave me alone?

Avni:Neil,don’t make me emotional.
Neil:Look,bhai reached.
Avni:Bhai,its too much.Why do you take this much time?
Neelesh:Yaar,I had extraclass.Sorry.Lets leave.
Avni:Come fast.
One sound:Hey guys…

They turned.Its Neelima.

Neil:Di…?
Avni:Di…here?
Neelima:Then where?Why you are late?
Neelesh:Di,I had extraclass.
Neelima:So why didn’t you inform?
Neelesh:I forget about that.
Neelima:Good.Come home brother.You’ll get balance from there.
Avni:Come.

They leaved in bicycle.On the way.

Avni:What will happen at home?What to say?
Neil:You say you are with your boy friend.
Avni:Oh!If I said it you must be came near God to met me.
Neil:Why?
Avni:My papa & maa would kill me.
Neil:What?They would kill you without my permission?
Avni:Did my parents want to take sanction letter from you to kill her own daughter?
Neil:Yes.
Avni:Really?

Neelima:Stop it.
Neelesh:Avni,you do one thing.You marry me then you both will never split.
Avni:Sounds good.But marriages are happening between humans not with foolish monkey.
Neelesh:Am I foolish.
Avni:Of course.
Neelima:Yaar Neelesh,if we fell in between them…so its gone.
Neil:Thanks for the complement di…
Neelima:Avni,did you get any news about your brother Aman?
Avni:No di..Where?How?What?Don’t know.Ran away from home so he must come back if he likes.

Avni become moodoff.Neil noticed it.He felt pain.

Neil:Avni…..Di,why are you asking this to her?

They reached at a 3 way junction.They stoped cycles.

Neil:Cheer up Avni.She was always like this.What about me if I saw you in this stage?Avni…..?
Avni:I’am ok.
Neil:Sure.
Avni:Yes.
Neil:So give me a hug with lots of love.

They hugged eo & parted.

Avni:Bye.
Neil:Bye but night abhi baakki hai.
Avni:Ok.Bye.

They spreaded.
Avni’s home.She parked cycle.

Avni:What can I say?

She entered inside.Ashish & Asha was sitting on sofa.They stood up sawing Avni.

Ashish:Avni….
Avni:Papa..?You are early today.Why come fast?
Ashish:Its not the time for that.Why you are late today?What is the time?
Avni:Papa…
Asha:Avni,answer.
Avni:Papa…Maa…My friend came at college insearch of her brothers.So I’am with her.
Ashish:She came insearch of her brothers so why you Avni?
Avni:Papa,She is a girl.Outside of college….Alone..You can understand.
Asha:Who is she?
Avni:She is Neelima di..Who is he?Neil…..?Yes Neil..Those who studies together with me from school.Is it Neil?

Ashish:Yes.
Avni:His sister.She studied with bhai.His classmate.So I know her.
Asha:With Aman?
Avni:Ya…
Ashish:Asha…?
Avni:What Papa?She can’t say about her son?I know why you get worried.Because of Bhai.One day like this he went to college.Then we heard that he ran away from here with a girl.Today you both thought me also….
Asha:No Avni no.

Avni:Yes Maa,I know it.You both think that I can do it?
Ashish:Avni,its nothing like that.
Avni:Like that.You gave me whole freedom after bhai ran away also.Only prevent friendship with boys.So what?Maa-Papa I love & respect you both than me.I know you both will do anything its for my good future.So,can I do this?

They nodded no.

Avni:So forgive me.Give forgiveness through a hug.

Avni hugged her parents together.Their eyes filled with tears.They parted.Avni climbed steps.She stopped & turned.

Avni:Maa-Papa….

They turned.Avni gave a flying kiss for them.They smiled.Avni reached at room.She tooked the family photo with Aman.

Avni:I’am sorry Maa -Papa.I said lie.I can’t leave Neil.Like that I can’t see pain in your hearts.

She hugged the photo.

Avni:And bhai you…Why you ran away from us?Did you see how much pain they are hiding?Because of you.

Avni left from there placing photo at table.The photo zoomed.
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Precap:-Avniel in Avni’s room.

Avni:How many years we are making them fools?
Neil:If we obey our parents we’ll lose our friendship.Avni,I know we’ll be caught oneday.We can stay together upto that time.We have 15 years of friendship.Do you need to break it?
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    5 Comments

    1. zaini on August 1, 2017 3:35 am

      it was an awesome part of story and i really liked it. keep on your good work

      • ahk26barbie on August 1, 2017 5:14 am

        Thank you so much Zaini.

    2. Sweetgirl7 on August 1, 2017 7:47 pm

      Dear og you will give me heart attack. So beautiful story chapters . Keep writing

    3. zaina on August 4, 2017 10:46 am

      what highlights ur ff is friendship… Luv u my frnds… Luv u avneil…

    4. TheVariga on August 4, 2017 3:07 pm

      M seriously very very much eager for ur nxt ff plz update soon ??

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