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Home»Fan Fiction»AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Episode 39
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AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Episode 39

ahk26barbieBy ahk26barbieNovember 15, 20176 Comments4 Mins Read
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Recap:Avni came to her own home.

Episode:39:-

Days passed.One day night.Avni was in her room.She got a call.It flashed as Laksh.Avni sat on bed.

Avni:Laksh,how many days passed?You are calling now?
Laksh:What was going on there?
Avni:Like I said.Only love love love.I ‘am getting bored.I asked to them 6 years.I wish to saw my family that I lossed one day.But no.
Laksh:You must give them a chance.
Avni:I’am giving.But they didn’t need it.So what can I do?I want my those 6 years which had love,happiness,sadness,comedy,quarrel,angry.But….
Laksh:Bye..All the best.I’ll call you later.
Avni:Bye dear.

Neil overhears all this.

Neil:So it is Madam’s plan.Tomorrow you watch Avni what was going to happen with you.

Next day.Avni came down.

Asha:Avni,eat food.
Avni:No..I don’t want..
Ashish:How can you..
Avni:I told you na?

Ashish make her sit on dining.

Avni:I don’t want.
Ashish:Hey!When you ignore what we did always?

Avni didn’t understood.Asha feed her forcefully.Avni began to talk but Asha feed her before that.Avni remembered the olden days that Asha feed her like this.
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Asha feed her.

Avni:I’ll die stop it Maa..

Avni remembered what she called.Avni left.Asha & Ashish smiled.

Avni:I’am going out.
Ashish:Wait.See this.

They showed something to her.It was her old bicycle.Asha & Ashish left.Avni went near it.Avni remembered something.She turned.

Avni:Ma…Maa..Papa..

They turned.Avni gaveca flying kiss to them as like before.Avni left.

Ashish:Our daughter returned.

They stood together.Avni came some distance through bicycle.Neil was waiting for her on road.

Neil:Boat rider & flower seller left.You are late of 6 years.Why this much?

Avni was still looking at him.

Neil:Avni..

She came to sences.

Neil:Let’s go.
Avni:Where?
Neil:Avni didn’t had trust in Neil?
Avni:Trust?
Neil:Yes.Trust.Avneil’s trust.Come.

They left.Neil stopped in front of college.

Neil:Guys..

Avni’s face shined.

Avni:Sukanya..Meera..Gaurav..Vineeth..

Avni hugged at them.

Avni:Guys.
Meera:Shut up.Why are you talking with us?
Gaurav:We should take your autograph today.
Sukanya:We are your fans.
Vineeth:You become nervous to your family & became Avnith the popstar.
Neil:Leave it.She is not Avnith Mitra.She is our Avni.

Neil sidehugged Avni.She looked at him.Atvthat night.Avni on phone.

Avni:I don’t know Laksh within one day what happened to all?Those which I asked they are giving me that.
Laksh:Its good na?
Avni:But Laksh.it will became drama.
Laksh:I don’t know.Those which you wantvto do you go on.I’am with you.

Avni heard some noice.Avni looked.Neil was trying to come inside through window.

Avni:Neil?Laksh,I’ll call you back.

Avni hanged the phone & came near him.Then helped him to come inside.

Avni:Have you losted?
Neil:6 years passed.So small difficult.
Avni:What are you doing here?
Neil:You asked for 6 years..So..
Avni:So..
Neil:So what I came.What will do?Come let’s talk.
Avni:In this night?I want to sleep.
Neil:No.You must hear me.

Avni turned to leave.Neil pulled her back.She fell on his hands.They had an eyelock.She stood up.They sat on bed.Neil started to talk.First Avni feel sleepy & she fell.At that time Neil make her awake.After that she started to hear his talk.She smiled.They slept.
Days passed.One day morning.Avni came down.

All:Surprise..Happy b’day to you..Happy b’day to you..Happy b’day to our dear Avni..Happy b’day to you.

Avni smiled.

Aryan:Happy b’day Mamma..
Avni:Thank you little champ..

Avni take him hugged & kissed him.Avni remembered something.

Ashish:We know go.

Avni left in bicycle.Neil came opposite of her.They ran towards each other.But stopped.But Neil hugged her.Kaun tujhe plays from MS Dhoni.

Neil:Happy b’day Avni.
Avni:Happy b’day Neil.

They parted.They left.After sometime.Avni was on garden.Aryan came there.

Aryan:Mamma,its for you.

He gifted a trophy to her.In it was written that “World’s best Mamma”.

Avni:What is this little champ?
Aryan:You are not my Maa.But you are Mamma.I know you are my Papa’s sister.But my Mamma also.Best Mamma.Everyone has one mother.I have a Maa & a Mamma.Reina Maa & you.World’s best mothers.Isn’t it?
Avni:Yes.
Aryan:I’am going to school.Bye Mamma.Come Reina Maa.

They left.Avni liked at them.Aman came.

Aman:Are you feeling jealous?
Avni:Why?
Aman:Because Aryan loves Reina also.
Avni:Bhai you?I my absence someone was becoming his mother.Its happiness for me.How can I feel jealous in it?
Aman:Not bad.

Avni got a call.She speaked something & hanged.

Avni:Bhai,I’am going out.
Aman:Avni..
Avni:Yes.
Aman:You are getting your 6 years back.So don’t leave us.

Avni left with a smile.
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Precap:(Author’s note:6 episodes are left)

Neil pull Avni towards him.

Avni:Leave me.

He put his finger in his lips.They looked each other.Their faces are very close to each other.Avni closed her eyes.Neil kissed in her cheek.
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Hope you all enjoyed the episode.Thanks to all those who read,commented & supported my previous episode.Sorry for the mistakes.Keep reading,keep commenting,keep loving.

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    6 Comments

    1. Barun on November 16, 2017 6:54 am

      It sarikkum maneaharaman. Nan at snehikkunnu. The way you think to create the moment with different emotions related with the past that is just mind blowing. very beautifully you express to recalling the memory back of avni which makes your concept more beautiful. Last portion makes me curious about the next episode. Look like interesting things are going to happen on next chapter. I adbhutakaramaya riti peale atine suksikkuka. Gud lakk saheadari. bhaviyil ninnalute svapnam satyasandhamayirikkanamenn agrahikkunnu.

      • ahk26barbie on November 16, 2017 9:20 pm

        Thank you so much Bhai.

    2. Ladalee on November 16, 2017 7:29 am

      Awesome dear…. It’s great to be reader of such a great writer… Continue to write and post nxt part as soon as possible

      • ahk26barbie on November 16, 2017 9:19 pm

        Thank you Ladalee..Thank you so much.

    3. zaina on November 16, 2017 4:39 pm

      Polich mole…… Gonna miss ur ff badly….. Luv u al oooot

      • ahk26barbie on November 16, 2017 9:17 pm

        Thank you Fasy.I love you a loooottt..

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