After a break.I’am back.I hope I can post regularly.The last days I’am busy with my house waming & onam.Now I think I’am free.Not sure.Please forgive me guys.I want to move storyline fast.
Recap:Aleena & Neil love.
Episode:17:-
Haldi day of Neelima.Peoples are coming.Avni & family was also there.Haldi was sended from groom’s home.Everyone applied it on Neelima’s face.
Neil:Didi is looking glamourous than old with this Haldi.
Neelesh:Yes Neil.
Neelima:I’ll kill you both.
She chased them.Everyone smiled.
Shwetha:Stop it child.You are a bride.
Neelima:What Mom?They both…
Shwetha:I’ll take care of them.Go.
Neelima sat.Neil hit Avni.By mistake Haldi applied on her face.Avni looked at Neil angrily.He shocked.She applied to him.They made a fight.
Ashish:What’s happening here?
Neil:Look Papa,what she did with me?
Prakash:Today is Neelima’s Haldi not yours.Go & wash.Go.
They left.The weighter gave juice to everyone that day.Everyone dranked it.They became sleepy mood.Avneil also.
Avni:What a joy?
Neil:Lets go to room.
They reached at Neil’s room.
Avni:Is it your room?
Neil:Yes.Why?
Avni:You are coming to my home everyday.There is no window to come inside here like this & also no space to hide also.
Neil:Why we hide?Everyone know about us.
Avni:Yes.
They smiled.Next day.Neil wakes up & get up.He touched at head because of headache.He looked around for water.He became shocked to see something.Avni is sleeping near him.
Neil:Avni…near of mine…God…Avni…Avni…Get up…Avni…
Avni get up.She also touched head.
Avni:Why you are in my room at morning?
Neil:Its not yours its my room
Avni:Yours?What happened yesterday?I can’t remember.Why this head aching this much?
Neil:Avni,yesterday we together..
A voice:Avni,….
Avni:Coming Maa..I’am leaving.
Neil picked her hand.
Neil:I want to talk to you.
Avni:Will talk later.I must go.Bye Neil.
She left & came down.
Avni:Yes Maa..what happened yesterday?
Ashish:Someone mixed Lassy with juice.
Asha:Where were you yesterday?
Avni:Me?At Di’s room.
Neelima:My room?
Neelima came down.Avni gave a sight to Neelima.
Neelima:Yes..I can’t remember.
Evening.Sangeeth day.Avneil & Neelesh danced for the song Bole chudiyan from Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham.Everyone clapped.After that Avni was walking.Someone take her to wall.Its Neil.
Avni:What Neil?
Neil:I want to talk to you something.
Avni:Say..
Neil:We slept in one bed together last night.
Avni:So?
Neil:So?Without concious something..
Avni:Happened between us..Is this?What happened to you Neil?You are thinking that our relation is strongless this much.Nothing will hapened between us in concious & unconcious.
Neil:But Avni?
Avni:Don’t be strongless Neil.I trust our relation so much.How much problem in slept together?There is not only meaning to slept together.We stayed how many nights together?
Neil:Yes I know.But….Ok.But say onething you didn’t felt doubt on me for atleast onetime?
Avni:Neil,I’ll doubt if anyboy lie with me.If its you I’ll never think about it for onetime.We are Avneil.Hamesha Saath Saath.
They hugged eo.Neil took her & rotated.Someone was observing them.
Avni:Neil,leave.If anyone see then
Neil leaved her.
Neil:I love you Avni.God send us for becoming friends.They hugged.Next day marriage also happened grandly.
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Precap:Neil came at Avni’s room at night.Darkness all around.Only moonlight.Neil came near Avni.She is sleeping peacefully.Hairs are falled on her face.Neil take hair from her face.Their hairs are flying with wind.
………………………………………………………………………Sorry.I should moveon the storyline fast.So I made Neelima’s wedding as short.Sorry for that.Thanks to all those who read,comended & supported my previous episode.Sorry for the mistakes.Keep reading,keep commenting,keep loving.
7 Comments
Its amazing dear can’t wait for another chapter plzzz update soon . It mind blowing
Thank you Alia.I’ll try to update today night.
Wow, It’s outstanding. The way you think & the way you express your concept about the story are really mind blowing. From the beginning Avneil were always together & still now they are together. That’s prove the significance of your title of the story which is very easy to understand. Strong bond between Avneil can be seen always in your episode that gives me satisfaction to read your update. Keep writing like this way that makes visible to reader’s eye. All the best sister.
Thank you so much my dear Bhai.You always giving intresting coments.Thanks for that.
Hey barbiw. I am not back but to read ur ff i am crazy. I loved the significance of ur syory title and avneil. It is matching. Lovely chap. And no soryy thank u from now. U can extend the storyline or shorten as u like. Coz we are liking ur story. Sorry loving
Where are you Sami?I send msgs in our private account.But you didn’t saw that.I searched your ffs.Its also missing.Where were you?I miss you so much.Thanks for your supporting dear.Why you left TU?Come back.
Barbie i never saw messages now of anyone. It is not coming. Also inever left Tu. Just that I was late so i commented late. That’s why i was saying that i come back late. Supporting. No i am loving u and ur ff behen and also only one ff is theee . It is Tu dhadkan mere dil ki. Wajah tum ho. Episode 1