Sorry for the long delay.I know you all are angry with me.I was busy on my sister’s engagement.As a Keralian the coming days I’am busy with ONAM celebratiin.I’ll try to update regularly.So lets start.Oncemore sorry.
Recap-Parents agreed for Avneil’s friendship.
Episode:16:-
After somedays.Neil’s home.Avneil came there.Parents was sitting there.
Neil:What plan going on here?
Ashish:Avni,why did you came here?
Avni:I knew that you both are here.So….
Ashish:So lets go.
Prakash:You can leave now.But you all must be here next week.
Avni:Sure Dad.
Neil:Avni girl shut up
Prakash:Then like us said.
Ashish:Ok.
Avni:What like said?
Shwetha:Its discussion between parents.
Avni:Sorry lets go.
They left.Next day college.
Neil:Avni,can I ask you something.
Avni:Yes.
Neil:Look our classmate Aleena.
Avni looked at Aleena.Aleena is looking at Neil hiding.
Avni:Yes Aleena..
Neil:She was looking at me everytime from somedays before.I need to know why?
Avni:Why?Whats in your mind?
Neil:Is it love?
Avni:In you or in her?
Neil:In her.
Avni:If she loves you then..did you love her?Do it.Why not?
Neil:Cheap.Are you a friend?
Avni:Oh!Then you ask to her directly.
Avni:Avni,please..please..you are my Bff.Please.
Avni left.She talk something with Aleena.Neil looked at them.She came back.Her face was desp.
Neil:What happened?
Avni:She loves a boy.I felt sad when I heard his name.He is a fool,losser,angrybird.
Neil:So its not me.How bad boy?Nothing good in him.
Avni:He has..Only onething.He is the bff of this glamourous,cleverest Avni Mehta…Neil Khanna..
Neil:Ok….What?Me?Love?….Am I fool,losser?
Avni:Oh!I did a big thing.Then hear what I said.No questions.Now whats your reply?
Neil:I’ll say to her.
Neil left.Avni showed fake anger then smiled.Neil came near Aleena.
Aleena:Neil?
Neil:I love you.
She smiled.
Aleena:I love your heart than your face.Your friendship to Avni.I don’t know I fell for you.
Neil:I didn’t know anything about you.One request.I can’t sacrifice my friendship for our love.Avni is my behalf.Without her I can’t leave.Then no Avneil.
Aleena:No Neil.I’ll never make you far,I’ll make you both near.
Avni:Means?Sorry I came between you both.
Aleena:Its ok Avni.I mean I’ll never came between you.Friendship is precious than love.So bye.
Aleena left.
Avni:She is very good.
Neil:Not than you.You are the first person in my life which I love the most.
They hugged.Aleen-Neil’s love was started & continued.
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Precap:Morning.Neil’s room.Neil wakes up.He get up from bed.He picked on head.
Neil:What I drank yesterday?Head is breaking.
Neil looked around.He became shocked.Avni was sleeping in his bed near him peacefully.
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How is it?Don’t be angry because of Aleena’s entry.She can make love in Avneil.Image Shritama Mukherji as Aleena.Did I spells correct?Thanks to all those who read,commented & supported my previous episode.Sorry for the mistakes.Keep reading,keep commenting,keep loving.
17 Comments
Hi i know its soo long but really amazining i didnt understand one thing is rwleally in luv with aleena ??
Thanks yaar.Everything is connected for a big twist.Aleena’s love,Avneil’s love & life.I said that Aleena’s love can make Avneil love.So wait & watch.
It’s very long time to read your story. I understood your situation. The way you express the feelings & emotions are very beautiful. Your perfect elaboration about episode is really visible to me. It’s no doubt interesting that you came back with a indomitable strategy. It has some new twist & turns that makes me curious about your storyline. Please carry on your writing like this way which will prove your generous ability. I am eagerly waiting for the next episode. All the best sister??????
What a words Bhai?Really inspiring.There are many twist & turns are waiting to reveal Bhai.So keep waiting,keep loving.
Its nice.great work dear
Thank you Khayathi.Thanks a lot.
I feel like it’s somewat similar to a movie in malayalam…liked it…please update d next soon….
Are you talking about the movie “NIRAM”?.Their friendship is like that but storyline is different.You can find it in upcoming story route.I’ll try to update soon dear.Are you a malayalee?I’am a Malayalee.So happy onam.
Waiting for the upcoming updates…I am also malayalee….Wishing you the same….So Happy onam….
I only told that i felt some similarities…
Hi I’ve been a silent reader of your ff I love it a lot waiting for the upcoming twist plz update soon nd me too a malayali Happy Onam to all …
Thanks for comenting yaar Neha.I came here from a silent reader.So I can understand.Happy to hear that you are a malayalee.Happy Onam.
loving it.. m 2 a silent reader.. EID MUBARAK To alll
I reached here from a silent reader yaar.Thanks for comenting.
Hi barbie so u came back. Loved this too. I loved the new character ofaleena. And i know avneil ccan’t separate because the name of ur ffis u know. HHamesha saath saath. And i can imagine the different twists coming up. Do read my other ff too. I have already messaged the name to u
Hi Sami.Thanks for comenting.
Welcome barbie