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Home»Fan Fiction»AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Episode 13
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AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Episode 13

ahk26barbieBy ahk26barbieAugust 20, 201713 Comments4 Mins Read
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Recap:Avneil’s b’day & surprise.

Episode:13:-

Next day evening.Avni’s home.

Ashish:Avni….Asha….

They came on hall.

Avni:What happened Papa?Why you are making so much noice?
Ashish:Surprise….
Avni:Wow!dress….

Ashish gave the box to her.

Asha:But why?
Ashish:After 3 days it is the engagement of Prakash’s daughter.So I think…
Avni:So why for me?
Ashish:You are also coming with us.
Avni:Papa,are you serious?
Asha:Avni,its an engagement day.You always keep in memory.

Avni put dress on sofa & also sat near of it with angryness.

Avni:I’am not coming.
Ashish:But why?
Avni:You both have doubts on me upto now.
Asha:Dear,I didn’t meaned like that.
Avni:Oh!everytime you both will say something like this.Then “nothing like that” at the end.Maa- Papa,if you both hadn’t doubts I’ll come otherwise no…
Asha:We trust you.Completely trust yo.Sorry mother…
Avni:Ok daughter..
Ashish:Now please have a look on the dress.

Avni looked it.Its a beautiful blue gown.

Avni:Its so beautiful Papa..Thank you so much.You are so cute.

Avni picked Ashish’s cheek & ran inside.At night.

Neil:What is the happy matter?
Avni:I’am coming to Neelima Di’s engagement.
Neil:Really?
Avni:They said yes.
Neil:Its not a single matter Avni.Its a great surprise.

Engagement day.Avni’s home.She got a call.

Avni:Papa…
Ashish:Hello Avni…
Avni:Maa-Papa,where are you both.I’am waiting for you.
Ashish:Avni,do onething.Come to Prakash”s home.We’ll reach there with gift.
Avni:But Papa…
Ashish:You come.We are there.

Avni hanged the phone.She was shining in blue gown.

Avni:This Papa..

Avni left.Ashish & Asha reached on Neil’s home.

Prakash:Who are this?Welcome.
Ashish:Everyone not arrived.We came early.
Prakash:Its ok.
Shwetha:Where is your daughter?
Asha:She is coming.We went for an outing & came here directly.Where is Neelima?
Neelim:Aunty..

Neelima came there & took blessings of them.She is in a rose lehenga.

Ashish:Live happily.
Asha:Its from us.

She gave a gift box to her.

Shwetha:What is the need of this?
Asha:Its ok.
Neelima:Aunty Avni?
Asha:She is coming.
Neelima:Ok.
Neelesh:Di…

Neelima left.The people was started to arrive.

Neelesh:Where is Neil?
Neelima:He was getting ready.
Neelesh:He took so much time.
Neelima:Hero entered.
Neelesh:And his heroine also.

Neil came from stairs.He was in the blue dress in the pic.Avni came inside.

Prakash:Neil came.
Ashish:Avni also.

Avni was coming.A man with flowers was came from left.Avni hit with him.She lossed her balance.

Asha:Avni….

The flowers flied to up.She began to fall.BOLNA from KAPOOR & SONS plays.Someone picked her.She fell on his hands.Avni looked up.Its one & only our NEIL.The flowers fall on them.They had an eyelock.Their hairs are flying with the wind.Neelesh & Neelima smiled & otherside their parents was shocked.Avneil came to senses.Avni get up.Avni came near parents.

Avni:Sorry Maa…
Asha:Why Avni?Its not your mistakr.If you fall it will become for laughing.Are you ok?
Avni:Yes.
Neelima:Avni,come with me.

They went up through stairs

Neelesh:Di…please come.Just a minute.
Neelima:Ok.Avni you wait.I’ll be back.

Avni nodded yes.She left.Someone picked Avni to a room.Its Neil.

Avni:Neil..?
Neil:Yes.
Avni:Why do you take me here?
Neil:To take some photos.

They took photos together with a camera. Someone noticed it.

Avni:What are you doing Neil?
Neelima:We want to ask same question.

A man came.

Man:My camera..
Neil:Yes Bhaiya.Some photos are in it.Never gave this photos to anyone.In these 4 someone will collect.
Man:Ok.

He left.

Avni:This is risk.
Neelesh:Yes.
Neelima:What happened at down sometimes before?
Neil:Di..?
Neelima:A hero & a heroine.Villain is missing.
Neil:Who will be the villain?
Avni:Neelesh,can you?
Neelesh:Me?No..no..no..
Neil:The look was matching.
Neelesh:Ok.I’ll be the villain & show you attitude also.But my attitude is a child.
Neelima:Because your brain was not growing.
Neelesh:Yes…what?

They smiled.

Shwetha(from down):Neelima,its getting time.Come down.
Neelima:Yes Maa…

They came down.The groom also came.His name is Nithin.They exchanged their rings.Everyone clapped.Engagement completed.
………………………………………………………………………
Precap:At college.

Neil:Where is the photos?
Neelesh:Someone took the photos.
Avni:How many time I told you that this is risk?Who get that photos?
A Voice:We get it.

They turned.They became shocked to see their parents there.
………………………………………………………………………
Hope you all enjoyed the episode.Thanks to all those who read,commented & supported my previous episode.Sorry for the mistakes.Keep reading,keep comenting,keep loving.

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    13 Comments

    1. Barun on August 20, 2017 12:58 pm

      Wow It’s too good to remember easily. the way you describes all the scenes are fascinating. your episode is interesting. please keep writing like this. I am eagerly waiting for your next chapter.

      • ahk26barbie on August 20, 2017 8:36 pm

        Thank you so much Barun.Your words are inspiring.Welcoming once more to our wtsap group.

    2. Sweetgirl7 on August 20, 2017 1:41 pm

      Barbie oh you rock. You give extraordinary chapters and i love ya and love the way u write. In love with your writing.

    3. Sweetgirl7 on August 20, 2017 1:42 pm

      Update soon . #barbierock #AvNeilrock #girls rock

      • ahk26barbie on August 20, 2017 8:46 pm

        Thank you so much Sami.You are my sweet hearty girl.I miss you on our group Sami.

    4. zenisha on August 20, 2017 3:05 pm

      its beautifulll.. waitin 4 next..

      • ahk26barbie on August 20, 2017 8:47 pm

        Thank you Zenisha.I’ll post next soon.

    5. zaina on August 20, 2017 3:49 pm

      Wow !!!!!!
      Superb as usual yaaaaar…….
      Twist in the precap…
      Waiting….

      • ahk26barbie on August 20, 2017 8:50 pm

        Thank you Fasy.Its the time for villain & also for informing parents.So I did it.

    6. Avneil angie on August 20, 2017 4:03 pm

      Wow really nice …… Seems next chapter is more interesting …………..
      Nice I just love Avneil story…..

      • ahk26barbie on August 20, 2017 8:52 pm

        Thank you Angie.I hope the story never make bore.

    7. me6104 on August 20, 2017 4:51 pm

      Awwwwesome !! U r just faboulous one of my fav avniel ff .. ??

      • ahk26barbie on August 20, 2017 9:00 pm

        Thank you so much yaar

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