AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Episode 10


Recap:Avneil tour celebration & Avni met Aman.


On bus.Teacher got a call.

Teacher:Hello….What?I’am coming back.On the way.Yes..I’am coming.

Teacher hanged the phone.

Teacher:Students,I have to leave here on the way.My father was hospitalizing.So I must reach home fast.I’am sorry to say that I can’t join you upto college.Did anyone need help.Please say now.
Avni:No Ma’m you can go.
Teacher:Ok.Tomorrow is holiday for you all.
Neil:Why did you stop me?
Avni:Then?This is her father’s matter.If we say,she will stay with us.If tomorrow something will happen to him did we sleep patiently?
Neil:But Avni…
Neil:Ok,I can understand.

Teacher leaved on the way.The bus reached at college.The students get down from the bus.


They hugged & parted.Avni came out with fear.

Neil:I need to help Avni.I can’t leave her alone.What can I do?….,Idea.

Prakash was taking luggages.Neil made Prakash fall with his leg to see Avni.


Neil catched Prakash before falling.

Neil:Dad,are you ok?
Prakash:Yes.Why this girl standing alone here?
Neil:So what?Lets go.
Prakash:Wait.I’ll come.

Prakash walked towards Avni.

Neil:Yes.I know you’ll help Avni.Sorry Dad.I can’t leave Avni.

Prakash came near Avni.

Prakash:Why you are here Child?
Prakash:Are you Avni?Ashish’s daughter?
Avni:Yes Dad…I mean yes Uncle.
Prakash:No problem call me Dad.
Avni:Ok uncle…Ok Dad.
Prakash:Where is Ashish?
Avni:Dad,actually I didn’t inform at home.They are not taking calls.
Prakash:Oh!No problem.I’ll drop you.
Avni:No Dad.Its ok.
Prakash:What ok?Its night…you are a girl alone in the street.Not ok.Come.I also had a daughter like you.
Avni:Neelima Di…I know.
Prakash:So what problem.
Avni:Thank you Dad.

Neil was smiling watching this.They get inside car.

Prakash:You know Neil…we fixed Neelima’s marriage.
Neil:What?Its not fare Dad.I’am her brother,but you didn’t inform me?
Prakash:Overacting Shop stop it.
Prakash:Avni,inform your parents that one day we’ll come to invite you for Neelima’s engagement.
Avni:You are always welcome Dad.
Neil:Why do you want to invite them?
Prakash:Ashish is my friend Neelima is Avni’s.So why not?

The car reached infront of Avni’s home.The lights onned on home.


They came out.Asha opened the door.

Asha:Avni…..How much time I told you Ashish to go to college?
Ashish:With whom you come?
Ashish:Prakash,Thank you so much.
Prakash:Its ok.So bye.
Prakash:Bye Avni..
Avni:Bye Dad.

Avneil said bye with eyes.They smiled.They left.Inside home.

Avni:Why you both didn’t take my calls?
Asha:Your fathers phone was lossed.The phone at home destroyed on yesterday’s thunder.
Avni:Its ok.
Asha:Go & sleep.We’ll continue talk tomorrow.

Neil’s home.


Neil hugged at Shwetha.

Neil:Congracs Di..
Neelima:Thank you my Bhai…
Neelesh:How was the tour?
Neil:Its ok.
Prakash:Ok?Your face says what is the meaning of ok.
Neil:I’ll take luggages.
Prakash:Why you?Neelesh go.
Neelesh:No no I can’t.
Neelima:I’ll take.
Neil:No problem.I’ll do it.

Neil opened the dickey.He saw the drawned pic there.

Neelesh:Whats this?
Neil:I think this is that girl’s.
Prakash:Avni..No one came to pic her.So I dropped her to home.Keep it care.
Neil:Yes Dad.

Next day.Avni’s home.Calling bell was heard.

Asha:Avni,go & see who is that?
Avni:Ok Maa…

Avni opened the door.She became supershocked to see Neil there.He was smiling.

Avni:Neil,You here….why?

He looked inside.Avni turned.She became shocked to see Asha & Ashish infront of her.

Ashish:Neil,Come inside.

Neil came inside.He passed Avni.

Neil:Actually Papa..Oh!Sorry uncle.
Ashish:You can call us Papa & Maa.Everytime you are suffering.
Neil:Ok.Actually Papa..I came here to give this pic to you.I think your daughter forget it in our car yesterday.

He handovered the pic.

Neil:So I’am leaving Papa.
Asha:How can you go like this?You must drink tea.
Neil:No Maa.I’am in a hurry.So please.Bye.

Neil leaved.Avneil smiled.

Ashish:What is this Avni?
Avni:Open it.

They opened the cover & saw the pic.

Avni:How is it?It is Bhai’s gift.
Ashish:Did you saw him?
Avni:Yes.At Punjab.
Ashish:What did he said?Why didn’t you call him back?
Avni:I called.But he ignored.I think he can’t face you both.
Ashish:Ok.If he didn’t want to come back.So we’ll never call him.But we’ll wait for him.

Avni hugged them.They cried.
Precap:Avni’ room.

Neil:Avni,You are my best friend.I love the most in this world is you.If Neil didn’t do anything for his Avni..So Neil living fo what?
Avni:Yey!Don’t make me senti.
Neil:Ok.So come & give me a hug with lots of love.

They hugged.
Happy independence day Guys.I hope you are enjoyed the episode.Thanks to all those who read,commented & supported my previous episode.Sorry for the mistakes.Keep reading,keep commenting,keep loving.

  1. Sweetgirl7

    Barbie oh you gave suvh an episode . So sweet. And that ‘my sami’s request ‘ comment was adorable . I blushed reading that. Thanks for giving such a fantastic chap barbie

    1. Ahk26barbie

      I really meaned your every coment Sami.You are a good friend here for me.Thanks for your support & happy to be your friend.

    2. Sweetgirl7

      Me too happy to be your friend and happy that u are my friend. Oh sorry u are my bestie.

  2. happy independence day 4 u guys.. lovely epi.. how old r u barbie

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thank you Zenisha.I’am 19.2nd year BA.What about you?

    2. i am 16 and iam from maldives studying in 11 standard .. this month i will turn 17..

  3. Superrr……..Lovely……… episode…..Eagerly waiting for the next update……..

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thank you so much Priya.

  4. Lovely episode…..keep writing……..waiting for ur update……

  5. Good one dear waiting for the next part.

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thank you Shalini

  6. Wow awesome read all parts in one
    It’s awesome story.??..beautifully written ?? and different too? ….
    Update soon can’t wait ?
    Jash-ne-Azaadi Mubarak ?
    Jai Hind! ❤️

    Lots of love ?

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thank you for the wish Fathima & also for your inspirable comment.

  7. Zaina

    sanjuuuuuuu…. I luved ur shock treatment very much. From today Avneil wont get troubled in calling dad and ma. They got approval… yipeeeeeeeee…. Its the time for celebration. Neelima’ s engagement….. waiting…. luv u sanjuuuuuuuuuu…….luv u avneil……..

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thank you Fasy.Wait for parent’s permission for Avneil’s friendship.Its not so far.

  8. It was very nice didi.Kya Avneil ko pyaer hoga ya yeh sirf friendship story hai..I loved reading it.post next part soon

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thank you Ananya.Its a friendship lovestory.Wait & read to know how Avneil’s friendship changes to love.I think you get the answer.

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