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Home»Fan Fiction»AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Episode 1
Fan Fiction Naamkaran

AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Episode 1

ahk26barbieBy ahk26barbieJuly 29, 20178 Comments2 Mins Read
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Night time.Infront of a labour room of a private hospital.In three sides of it the chairs are arranged.An old man was sitting on the chair which arranged attached to the wall of labour room.On the opposite chair a man was sitting.In between the side of these two an another man was sitting with a 5 year old boy.

Old man(OM):Is your wifes are inside?
1st man:Yes.My wife is inside.
2nd man:My wife also.
OM:It was on your face.What are your names?
1st man:I’am Prakash Khanna.
2nd man:I’am Ashish Mehta.Why you are here?
OM:I came with my daughter.I’am not allowe in the ward.So here..
Prakash:Oh!
OM:Did you need a girl or boy?
Ashish:Nothing like that.Only must watch how take care of them.This is my son.He needs a sister.
OM:Why child?
Boy:Uncle,My parents already had a son.So they must know how to take care a daughter.
OM:Oh!What about you Prakash?
Prakash: I haven’t any difference between them. Childrens are similar to God.So to see difference on them is wrong.I already had a daughter & son.

Nurse came out.
Nurse:Who are Ashish Mehta & Prakah Khanna here?
P.A:Yes,we..
Nurse:Your wife is Aasha Mehta?
Ashish:Yes.
Nurse:& yours Shwetha Khanna?
Prakash:Yes.What happened?
Nurse:Nothing.Congratulations Ashish Sir, daughter was born for you & Prakash Sir,a son for you.
Sister went back.

Prakash:Congracs Ashish.
Ashish:Thanks.For you also congracs.
Prakash:Thanks.
Boy:What happened Papa?
Ashish:A sister was born for you as like you said
Boy:Papa,I want to see her.
Ashish:Wait.She’ll come soon.
Two sisters handovered childrens to them.
Boy:Papa,I need to see.
Ashish:Ok Baba.
Ashish sat on chair.Boy looked at her sister.
OM:Congratulations.
P.A:Thank you.
OM:You must do their NAAMKARAN.Child,whats your name?
Boy:Aman Mehta.
OM:So give a NAAM to your sister & also you for your son.
Ashish:AVNI MEHTA….
Prakash:NEIL KHANNA…
OM:Whats?
Ashish:AVNI…
Prakash:NEIL…
OM:Good.AVNI…NEIL… AVNEIL…
………………………………………………………………………

Precap:Avni girl:Friends?
Neil boy:Friends.
They shaked hands.
At Avni’s home.
Ashish:Don’t try to talk to that boy from tomorrow.Ok?
Avni:Ok.
At Neil’s home.
Prakash:You can make so many friends as you like.But only with boys.Ok?
Neil:Ok.

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How was my first eps?Pls continue your comments.Hope you all are enjoyed it.Thanks to all those who commented at my intro.Forgive my mistakes please.

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    8 Comments

    1. Sweetgirl7 on July 29, 2017 11:24 am

      Nicest chapter barbie

      • ahk26barbie on July 29, 2017 2:17 pm

        Thanks yaar

      • Sweetgirl7 on July 29, 2017 6:19 pm

        Welcome dear friend. Which standard are you in? Me in 7th

      • ahk26barbie on July 29, 2017 9:53 pm

        I’am BA 2nd year dear

    2. alia on July 29, 2017 4:04 pm

      awesome

      • ahk26barbie on July 29, 2017 5:45 pm

        Thank you.

    3. zaina on July 30, 2017 8:47 am

      Hi… Barbie…. adipoli episode….

      • ahk26barbie on July 30, 2017 9:29 am

        Thanks for the poli comment

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