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Home»Fan Fiction»Avneil Ff: Two Hearts Separated By Destiny Two Become One soul.# chapter 13
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Avneil Ff: Two Hearts Separated By Destiny Two Become One soul.# chapter 13

lillianaliebenBy lillianaliebenDecember 19, 20174 Comments9 Mins Read
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Hello lovely readers, after a long break I am all set to continue this ff. pointed to be noted- I am changing merliah’s name to ananya as the name was like foreign name (no intention to hurt anyone’s feelings) and I wanted pure Indian name so that’s why I am changing her name. now I won’t take much of your time, so here it goes…..

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**at philipiness palace**

It was morning. The sun was shining brightly and spreading its ray for happiness to be spread everywhere. Monisteirre peirrie and ananya came to prince neil’s palace. They were received by dd, the royal steward.

Dd: hlw ma’am and sir. wlc to philip. hope u had a nice journey. plz follow me to his highness’s room.

ananya and monistierre followed dd towards a long door through the long corridor. soon they reached in front of neil’s study room. dd knocked on the door three times and waited till neil asked to come in. neil’s room was beautiful as it was expected to be a prince’s study room. there was a nice sofa set with cream color with blue strokes down on the edges to give a beautiful texture. in the middle of the sofa set there was a glass table. it was decorated with a vase full of beautiful red, white, pink and yellow roses. there was teapot and some cups. the cups and sausors were snow white colored with yellow carvings type style printed from the bottom to top in a diagonally way with some flowers poking out of the line. near the window was neil’s table. he table was neatly kept. things in order as the were expected to b in a prince’s room. and on the other side sat neil on his soft velvet red armchair with a book on his hand and wore glasses.

**ananya’s pov**

oh, so neil wears glasses during reading. tht means he is suffering from hypermetropia but still he is looking hot. OMG. main pagal ho gayi ho. sach me. ananya yeh sab soch na bandh kar. loh neil mere samne ah gaya hai. bow u stupid girl, bow. i bow quickly. neil smiled at me and gestured us to sit down while sitting comfortably on one of the sofa. oh god y do i feel shy and feel myelf blushing whenever he grazes at me or smiles. oh now stop thinking and look wht they were looking. oh it was monistieere’s latest designs for the prince. hmmmm. they are lovely. oh neil said something.

neil: hmmm. they are lovely so which one u prefer i should were for the party.

monisteirre: i prefer u should wear this. it will be gr8. it is made up of velvet black with lace work on it to give a beautiful rose appearance.

neil: hmmm. ananya! which one do u prefer i should wear?

oh no. y me? kk let me see the designs nicely and tell my opinion. hmmmm. i looked at the options of the dresses and i felt my self growing hot and blush bcoz i was feeling neil intently looking at me. kk i decided which one. the other option. but should i tell my opinion or tell a lie. i looked at monisteirre who nooded and smiled at me. i sighed inside my mind. i don’t think i have any other option than to tell the truth bcoz if i tell a lie they will surely catch me bcoz i have never told a lie. kk speak ananya, speak. i tolg a deep breath and blabbered out.

ananya: i choose the other option. the one which sir suggested would look gr8 on his highness but i think it would be gr8 if he wear something simple like the blue suit. itsead of a bow tie there is a working of laces and color brilliant blue would look gr8. so my option is the 2nd on. thank u.

neil: excellent. love it. i was thinking of the 2nd option but since monisteirre was my designer who gave the opinions till now about the dresses which are quite appreciating. its good tht u came and i got too option in which one of aggreed so all ri8 i will like to have this one. thank u.

monistierre smiled brightly. i think he smiled bcoz he was feeling proud of me or ummm. kk he was feeling proud. tht sounds better than the 2nd option which i am….. nah was thinking. dd and neil looked at each other and nodded. dd took monisteirre with him to meet he king since he wanted to catch up with him. now neil and ananya was left all alone. neil took the teapot and poured some tea in a cup and offered me. i thanked him and took the cup. after wat look like several mins passed neil broke the silence.

neil: ananya, i want to say something. i want to talk about our recent meeting when i told u i want to tell u something.

i shivered listening to him. my hands trembled a little bit and removed the cup from the tip of my lips and stared at him blankly which made him to chuckle. i raised on of my eyebrow a little bit and i realized i should not do it since he is a prince after all we became gd friends. but b4 i apologize or pulled down my raised eyebrow he moved forward so fast i was for a moment froozed on my seat. his face was so close to mine i could feel his hot breath on my face. he tilted his head a bit and ranned his fingers on my face. he struck a hair strand on the back of the ear. after tucking it which he was looking while he was doing tht he dragged his eyes back to my face with his finger running down my chin. i closed my eyes and felt him. it was like i was longing for it for such a long time. i felt so secure. i don’t know wht is happening with me. whenever he is around me or touches me i feel shiver run down my spine and to say the truth. i…. ummm kinda like it. i njoy it. i never felt tht way like this b4 meeting neil. he chuckled little bit and came near my ear.he wisphered in my ear tht i am beautiful making me blushed. then he said tht the talk he wanted go do was tht he has to returned her fountain pen to me. i was a bit shocked to hear those statements. he then quickly moved back to his place and took out a fountain pen. i was feeling a bit embarass to think something else. he told me tht he founded it on the ni8 of the party. he tried to meet and talk to me, to returned it but couldn’t. so he is returning it to me. and i was some kind of stupid to think he did like to talk about some thing else. oh god. nthn can happen with me. i sighed inside my mind. just then monistierre and dd came. it was time to go and i felt relief to go as i was feeling myself burning more hot near neil. so we left the study room obviously with dd leading us. we reached our car and as i was about to enter inside car i felt someone grazing at me. i turned my head sideways towards the palace and moved my eyes searchingly whom i don’t know i was trying to locate. but soon my graze felt on neil . he was standing near his window grazing at me. our eyes met and we shared an eye lock which barely lasted for a second. his eyes. i saw love, trust and patience at the same time felt the pain he was feeling. maybe bcoz he lost his avni. i felt my heart ache when i thought he loved some one else but i brushed of my thoughts and smiled at him which he returned to me b4 i got inside the car. even though he have to get married to a princess but he will need a friend to share everything like he will share with his wife. i am having the strong desire to become his wife. but no it can’t happen and besides if i am able to meet him again i did like to ask him to become my best friends. i smiled at myself and though ahead of my life wht surprises are packed for me.

**end of ananya’s pov**

ananya smiled and went away back to their workaholic schedule. she didn’t knew wht surprises were packed for her in future nor she knew where her destiny is taking her. but she just wanted to njoy, to cherish this moment she is living ri8 now. the screen spilt into two. one with neil’s face grazing outside the window and one with ananya’s smiling face.

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finally i updated. so i hope u all like today’s episode. this is dedicated to my bestie @rheona_30. thnx for ur support dear. avu, u r really an ossum friend and author. guyz do chk her stories. they r ossum u will really love it(in wattpad). my lovely readers don’t forget to like and comment. till then stay happeeii, stay calm and do watch naamkaran from monday to friday at 9pm only on starplus. the current track is really ossum. u will really njoy it.

THNX FOR READING

LOVE YAH ALL

-LILLIANA LIEBEN

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    4 Comments

    1. fanofsomeone on December 20, 2017 11:39 am

      I want to ask u one thing will I have to write my ff from beginning if I join wattpad??

      • lillianalieben on December 22, 2017 1:45 pm

        yes. u have but if u have a copy of ur writing, then u can just copy paste it. or i think if u don’t have a copy of ur work then u can copy from telly updates also. i mean u can click the re edit button on ur ff and then copy it.

    2. christianadesouza on December 22, 2017 1:43 pm

      its merliah right?not ananya in ff

      • lillianalieben on December 27, 2017 2:43 am

        yeah but i changed it

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