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Home»Fan Fiction»Avneil FF: Tum Mile – Episode 8
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Avneil FF: Tum Mile – Episode 8

MehakBy MehakDecember 25, 20176 Comments7 Mins Read
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hey guys, merry Christmas. so here on this Christmas i am giving double update with one chapter of tum mile and with one chapter of love me forever. hope you like it.

also which story do you want me to do update next.

and one more thing guys, i am thinking to write celebrity fan-fictions on demand. recently i loved reading Siddharth nigam fan fiction, so thought to write some celebrity fan-fictions. so if you wanna read some one-shots/fan fiction on a particular celebrity, please tell me by either commenting or by PM.

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In Khanna house

Avni comes home, she is very angry. Bebe and Shweta are following her, trying to calm her down. But their efforts are going in vain.

Neel and Prakash are in hall and are discussing something when they see avni, burning with anger.

Neel and Prakash gets up and neel says “oh somebody is burning, but who”neel is worried by finds an opportunity to tease her.

Avni glares at neel who is laughing.

Prakash says “neel stop teasing her”

Neel says “sorry dad”

Neela comes in the hall and says “what happened avni”

Neel says “yeah tell what made you a tigress again”

Avni glares at neel and says “there was a girl, and she was even more annoying than you”

Neel faked anger and says “you called me annoying”

Avni says “yeah are you deaf, cant you hear properly that you keeps on confirming everything”

Neel says “you!!”

Neela says in between “keep quiet both of you”

Avni says “ma but”

Neela says “avni”

Avni pouts and neel shows his tongue to her. And Shweta sees this and pulls his ears.

Shweta says “if neela scolded her it doesn’t give you a right to tease her”

Avni laughs looking at neel.

Neela says “same applies on you avni”

Shweta releases his ear . bebe says “no more fighting”

Prakash says “avni tells us what happened why are you so fed up”

Avni says “I was just helping a small girl, then out of nowhere a mad girl came and started shouting on me, mene bhi bol diya, jyada bakwas mat kar, tujhe jutti utar kar badi maarongi (I also told her, don’t utter so much nonsense else I will beat her with my sandels) and she went”

Neela says “in detail”

Avni says “okay”

*******FLASHBACK****

(Author’s note : Bebe, Shweta and avni reaches temple and goes inside. There many aunties hugged avni and smiled at her. All this confused avni very much, but Shweta was trying to keep people away from avni when they tried to talk to avni. But the limit of avni’s patience crossed when a lady talked to her rudely and blamed her. When people, avni doesn’t know, tried to be so friendly, she thought that might be she is with bebe so they talked to her but when the lady came to talk to her, it doesn’t made any sense to avni. Look what happened)

avni’s phone rings, she sees the phone

Avni says “unknown number, I should pick it but its noisy here”

Avni taps on bebe’s shoulder and says “I just come” and bebe nods and she lets her go. as she is involved in the prayer and shweta doesn’t know that avni left.

Avni comes out of the temple to answer a phone call.

When she is about to pick the call, it ends but at that moment a little girl comes and hugs avni.

Avni pushes her a bit and bends on her knees. she holds the girl by her shoulders.

Avni says “what happened, why are you crying?”

Avni wipes that girl’s tears and that girl hugs her.

That girls says “angel, angel”

Avni says “please tell me what happened so that I can help you”

That girl says “where were you, why did you left me with devil, I don’t wanna go with her. She is very bad”

Avni gets confused and says “devil, ”

Before avni could say more, a lady comes and shouts “Mishti”

That little girl turns and sees that lady.

That girl whispers to avni “devil devil, save me angel”

That lady shouts “avni”

Avni gets up but mishti is still hugging her.

Lady shouts “mishti come here”

Mishti nods no.

Lady shouts “mishti”

Avni shouts “who are you, how can you shout on a kid like that”

Lady says “I am her mother”

Avni says “first, go and learn manners before calming to be her mother”

Lady says “avni don’t give me lecture, you are the one who destroyed my life”

Avni says “me?”

Lady says “don’t act so innocently like you don’t know what have you done. You took my place in neel’s life. I was the one to be mrs neel Khanna but no you came in between us. He doesn’t love me anymore, and all this happened because of you. And you ask what have you done. You are so selfish and so clever. You are a devil that taught my daughter bad things. You have spoiled my life”

Avni cant take this nonsense, she said “shut up just shut up”

And juhi gets scared seeing this avni, she thought that avni will feel guilty and will go forever. but she doesn’t know its not weak avni rather its bold ananya verma who is standing infront of her.

Avni gets so angry listening to juhi that without even thinking much she says “you are stupid that you say I destroyed your life. Its not me but you who destroyed your life. Idiot. You say that its because of me that neel lost interest in you, wow, amazing. You are blaming me that he changed his mind. It is his choice in whom he is interested in. I don’t care what you think. also you said i taught your daughter bad things when in reality you taught her behaving so badly. stupid.”

That lady says “avni listen”

Before she could complete, avni says “jyada bakwas mat kar, varna tujhe me apni jutti utar kar bahut maarongi, tere chehere ka vo haal karongi ki koi tujhe pehchan nhi paega. Dafa hoja aur doobara mat aaio mere saamne (don’t utter so much nonsense else I will beat you very much with my sandals. I will disfigure your face so badly that no one will be able to recognize you. Get lost and don’t you dare to come to me)

Juhi touches her cheeks while imagining future and then she comes near avni and pulls mishit with her.

Mishti says “I don’t wanna go”

That lady says “come”

And they went.

Then bebe and Shweta comes, Shweta ask avni”what happened”

Avni says “nothing just had a fight with an idiot, please can we go home”

Bebe nods.

And they comes home.

*****END OF FLASHBACK*****

Neel thinks ‘juhi I will kill you’

Neela says “where were you bebe and Shweta”

Shweta says “actually we were in the prayer, avni asked bebe and I don’t get to know that she is going else I would have accompanied her”

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precap: avni says “why are you staring me like that”

neel says “i wasnt”

avni says “liar”

neel think ‘uff she someday will kill me by her hotness”

neel says “come inside now and also i have a surprise for you tomorrow”

avni says “okay and mr, do you like me”

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hows it?

comment and vote please. also should i write a celebrity fanfiction and on whom

thank you

love you

Mehak

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    6 Comments

    1. Aisha on December 25, 2017 1:38 pm

      I read this ff on watt pad their I’m a silent reader plz plz update you ff over their
      Thx i appreciate your efforts

      • Mehak on December 30, 2017 3:34 pm

        thank you so much!!. i update on wattpad first.. thank you

    2. Aman on December 25, 2017 2:40 pm

      LOVed it!!! Update the next one soon❤️❤️

      • Mehak on December 30, 2017 3:35 pm

        thank you so much, will do soon

    3. Khyathi on December 25, 2017 10:42 pm

      It’s nice to read this

      • Mehak on December 30, 2017 3:44 pm

        thank you so much

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