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Home»Fan Fiction»Avneil FF: Love me forever (Teaser)
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Avneil FF: Love me forever (Teaser)

MehakBy MehakSeptember 17, 201718 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hey guys, I have come up with a new FF. Guys my mind is overflowing with new ideas and I am penning it down even though it is crazy and I have four more ideas in stock. Will write them too soon and will continue my previous work also very soon. Tell how it is?

also = = is for song.

Author’s note: guys i have asked you again about but no one replied whether i should write about juhi’s feelings. So finally i think i shouldnt write it as almost 50 percent people were against it. if you think that my thinking is wrong then tell me. also you can tell me if you dont like my idea of this ff, i will discontinue it.

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In the park (in night)

Avni is facing the moon and talking to someone very happily over phone. Someone arrives in the park and stands behind avni at some distance.

“Avni” that stranger shouts, avni turns and sees him standing few metres away with a bouquet in his hand. Avni smiles and runs towards him.

“Happy anniversary ali, is this for me” avni says

Ali smiles and says “happy anniversary my baby, and yeah this is for you, beautiful flowers for my beautiful girlfriend” and he hands it over to her, she takes it and smells it. She hugs him and he hugs her back. When she breaks the hug and starts to separate slowly, she feels immense pain and a low scream escapes her mouth. Tears starts to escape her eyes. It feels like she is tearing apart, the pain is very much. She looks in ali’s eyes, her eyes are filled with my questions, she is still in shock. She didn’t know that her happiness was so short lived. She again screams because of pain.

= Beparwaiyan, =

Ali moves backwards taking each step slowly. Avni sees a knife covered with blood, her blood, in his hands. Avni touches her abdomen from where blood is coming out. She fells on the ground, lying on the ground crying while watching ali walking to his car.

= Beparwaahiyaan Kar Na Tu Yaara
Mainu Tu Ae. =

Years Later (In 2017)

Avni comes to the cliff and sits on the barrier. She looks sees the view and starts to talk to herself. After speaking out what’s in her heart, she feels light. She stays there for few more mintues and then she gets up. She gets shocked seeing a man standing behind her, and in this shock she takes a step back and falls. That person seeing her about to fall tries to grab her hand but loses his balance and falls with her.

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I know it is short so sorry about that. But its a teaser, I hope that it made a place in your heart. Hope you guys like this, if yes don’t forget to hit the like and comment down below please. I love comments, so please comment and don’t forget to hit the like button who so ever read this, its a humble request.

Also give me your valuable suggestions.

Sorry for any grammatical error or any other error.

Thank you for reading

Love you all

Mehak

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    18 Comments

    1. nikitansx on September 18, 2017 4:20 am

      This is ducking legit, you better continue this because this is amazing

      • Mehak on September 20, 2017 8:59 am

        Thank you so much dear.. i will continue

    2. Pinky on September 18, 2017 5:16 am

      Nice continue yaar

      • Mehak on September 20, 2017 9:00 am

        Thank you so much dear.. will continue

    3. naira on September 18, 2017 11:59 am

      It’s nyc me mehak continue it & better if you post it daily?

      • Mehak on September 20, 2017 10:02 am

        Thank you so much dear.. will continue.. can’t promise daily as i am very busy these days

    4. me6104 on September 18, 2017 12:30 pm

      Nice mehak … continue yaar ….!

      Pls continue your old ffs ..tooo. missing

      • Mehak on September 20, 2017 10:07 am

        Thank you so much dear.. will continue.. not able to write anything as i am very busy these days .. even me too missing writing

    5. me6104 on September 18, 2017 12:31 pm

      Nice mehak ..plz rite your old ff missing it

      • Mehak on September 20, 2017 9:15 am

        Thank you so much dear.. even i miss writing.. will try to write asap.. very busy these days

    6. Barun on September 18, 2017 12:38 pm

      You are delivering very different & unique storyline that’s to interesting too read. Your teaser is full of twist & turns that makes me curious a lot. Please carry on your writing like this beautiful way.

      • Mehak on September 20, 2017 10:09 am

        Thank you so much dear.. thank you.. will continue soon..
        Lots of love

    7. guna cotton on September 18, 2017 2:48 pm

      Hi Mehak…it’s really exciting nd interesting FF Yaar..Im missing ur ffs Yaar..plz update regularly if possible…love u dear…keep writing …

      • Mehak on September 20, 2017 9:13 am

        Hey.. thank you so much dear.. even i miss writing.. cant promise to update daily as i am very busy these days..
        Lots of love..

    8. Diya on September 18, 2017 4:17 pm

      I am very excited to read your ff. The story line is very interesting. Pls do write daily.

      • Mehak on September 20, 2017 9:10 am

        Thank you so much dear.. will try my best.. actually very busy these days

    9. Alia on September 24, 2017 6:51 pm

      Superbb

      • Mehak on September 25, 2017 5:21 pm

        Thank you so much

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