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AVNEIL FF: LOVE chapter 16

chapter 16
next morning morning shweta came to Neil room to put his clothes on the wardrobe. When she saw the way Neil was sleeping

Shweta: this guy always sleepings anyhow. She moved near him and placed Neil’s pillow properly and covered him with a blanket when she saw something on his chest.

Shweta: what’s this she said confusingly and carefully moved it from Neil’s chest and turned that photo around to see juhis picture

Shweta eyes got tears she always loved juhi but fate had other plans. She remembered one of her convo that she had with juhi when both were joking about and talking

Flashback

Juhi: shweta aunty i am just in love with your pasta

Shweta: don’t worry juhi I will also teachs u how to makes pasta like this for your Neil she said elbowing juhi who blushed

Neil: what’s going on here

Juhi: nothing just learning how to make pasta

Neil: what? U don’t know how to make pasta he said in dramatic way

Juhi: no is that a crime

Neil: of course it is what will I tell my colleagues that my love doesn’t know how to cook

Juhi: really then y don’t u do one thing?… find someone else she said playing along with Neil

Neil: not a bad idea he said in a thinking mode

Juhi: aunty I’m going. So do one thing start searching for another girl for this IPS officer.

Neil: where do u think u r going he said holding her hand

Juhi: to look for another guy.

Neil: don’t even think about it u won’t find anyone better than me

Juhi: really self praising your self.

Neil: of course. Don’t u ever think about leaving me… shweta smiled seen them like that… juhi moved towards shweta and hugged her from the back

Juhi: really? What if something happened to me then? Aunty do one thing look for a good girl for this guy.

Neil gave a serious look to Juhi

Neil: nothing is going to happen to u. So stop saying stuff like this.

Juhi: oh hello I was only joking. Not fair mr khanna u can joke but I can’t. Neil was about to answer back when he got a call and left the two ladies in the kitchen

Shweta: Juhi y do u say stuff like this

Juhi: I just said it in a joking way aunty but Promise me one thing

Shweta: what

Juhi: if I’m not with Neil then make sure he moves on in life.

Shweta: Juhi u started agains

Juhi: I’m just saying it for my satisfaction aunty u never know what can happen in the future

Shweta: everything wells with happen. U don’t worries.

Flashback ends

Shweta: that time u said u were only saying things like that but look here I am trying to fully your
Promise and trying to make Neil move on. She placed the photo back in the drawer and left the room.

At the airport Neela arrived and waited for someone to come. She was moving from one place
To another and finally saw a man coming out. She smiled and went to hug that man… breaking that hug after few mins

Neela: how r u ?

Man: all good and u. He said cupping her cheek.

Neela: fit and fine

Man: u didn’t tell anyone about my arrival right?

Neela : nobody knows… let’s go I want to see how they react seen u.
The man smiled seen how excited Neela was and both left the airport to go home.

Meanwhile at the parikh house nanno was in the garden it was 8am

Nanno: where is Neela usually she would be up early and meet me in the kitchen but today there is no sign of her. … Fatima u r stupid try calling her… she said to herself

After few rings Neela answered

Nanno: Neela .. beta where r u ?

Neela: maa I’m just coming home now

Nano: but where did u go so early in the morning

Neela: maa u will know once I come home ok bye. She cut the call before nanno can answer her more

Nanno: everyone is the same nobody bother to inform anything to each other she said getting irritated

Aman: hey nanno why r u mumbling to yourself

Nanno: your maa went out without telling anyone and when I called her she says she will talk when she comes home

Aman: out so early

Nanno: that’s what I’m wondering

Aman: nanno here have some tea he said giving her a cup but nanno put it down angrily

Nanno: ‘no I won’t be able to have it without your maa. I have got so use to having my cup of tea with her that it feels odd drinking it without her … avni came and heard nanno say that

Avni: awww so much love between u and mama she said teasingly

Nanno: so she is my daughter after all nanno said proudly,

Few mins later they saw Neela walking in with a smile on her face

Nanno: Neela where did u go without telling and when I ask u , instead of answering u say u will speak when u come home

Neela: maa relax I’m sorry I had to go without tell u all. But if I told u then there would be no fun in the surprise

Avni/aman: surprise they said looking at Neela and then at each other

Neela: close your eyes she said to avni and aman… maaa u as well Fatima shook her head and then closed her eyes

Neela went in and bought the person in the garden…Neela went to nanno and whispers to her to open her eyes . Nanno looked at Neela irrationally and then Neela told her to look ahead . When nanno looked ahead she was surprised and then smiled

Neela: aman, Avni open your eyes bacha both slowly opened their eyes… aman was happy and ran to the person and hugged him tightly.. while avni stood there

Avni: nanu she whispered.

Hemant: won’t u come and hug your Nanu beta. Avni smiled she had slight tears in her eyes and ran to hemant and hugged him

Avni: how r u?

Hemant: all fit and healthy

Avni: r u taking your tablets on time

Hemant: hmm

Avni: no junk food

Hemant: nope

Avni: stop lying she said holding hemant hand where he had crossed his fingers

Hemant: come on Avni a little bit of junk food can do

Avni: nope from now on I will make sure u eat properly and take your medicine on time

Nanno: Avni r u going to ask all questions here at least let Hemant ji rest

Avni: sorry come Nanu I will come and take u to your room.

With that avni wrapped her arms around hemant and took him inside followed by aman

Nanno: Neela thank u so much she said holding Neela hand

Neela: maa y r u thanking me

Nanno : for loving moi Avni so much.. the way u and hemant ji accepted her and aman I am really thankful

Neela : maaa please don’t thank me . In fact I’m proud that I have two loving children and a mother like u

Aman : nellu maa , nanno what’s taking u so long to come in he said coming to the garden again

Neela: nothing beta coming

At the khanna house

Neil got ready for the day and went straight to Bebe room

Neil : so how is my sweet girlfriend he said walking in to see Bebe siting on arm chair reading a book

Bebe took of her glasses

Bebe :feeling a little better tillu

Neil: don’t worry u will be fine soon as I know how to make u forget all your stress Bebe had a smile on her face but inside she was curious as to what Neil was talking about as she has to pretend to be unwell until she doesn’t convince Neil into getting married

Bebe : really let me also know what is it

Neil: u will find out by this afternoon till then just relax without any stress. With that Neil left the room.

Bebe:I wonder what this guy has planned before this ill drama goes in vain I will have to convince Neil.

Neil was driving to the airport when he received a call from Ali. He turned on his Bluetooth

Neil: everything ok ali? He asked a little concerned as he and his team was still tracking the drunk goons who attacked the cafe

Ali: yes everything is ok but i needed to know if u r free tonight

Neil: I guess I am… y what happened?

Ali: nothing we all planned to go the club so just wanted to know if u want to join

Neil: not a bad idea but what time

Ali: well the doors will open around 7

Neil: cool and what club

Ali: tiger tiger(sorry I don’t know any clubs name in india so just named one from the uk)

Neil: ok then see u later on

Ali: bye.

After about 30 mins Neil finally reached to the airport. He was looking around when he suddenly heard his name and turned around to see his cousin and aunty walking towards him

Kareena: Neil bhaiii she said running towards Neil and hugged him tightly

Neil: Karenna calm down he said keeping his balance due to the sudden hug

Kareena: nope I cant as I missed u loads

Neil: same here. Maddy bua he said moving Towards her and took her blessing and then hugged her

Neil: how r u bua

Maddy: for now all good she said giving a sad smile and Neil understood

Neil: y don’t u leave him

Maddy: he already left me… anyways how comes u called us here all of a sudden.

Neil : actually Bebe is not feeling well for the past few days and doctor uncle said she is probably stressing about something. So I thought y not call u and Kareena here for some time so that Bebe will feel better

Maddy: how can Bebe feel better when she has shweta bhabhi around her all the time making mistakes she thought to herself

Neil: bua what happened where r u lost

Maddy: nothing u did the right thing by calling us

Neil dragged the Trolley which had their luggage and placed it in the car and three headed to the khanna mansion

Neela was with Hemant in his room… looking at his reports

Neela: baba what is this your diabetes got high last month

Hemant: Ariel that’s nothing it just that I had a little bit of sweet food but the doctors wrote on the report that it got very high

Neela: u really become a kid when it comes to giving explanation… till your diabetes is not in Control no sweets for u.

Hemant: but look at my other reports they r showing good things for instance my cholesterol and blood pressure and

Neela: no means no ok

Avni: nanu here try some halwa

Neela: bacha here I am stopping him from eating sweet things and u r bringing him halwa.

Avni: mama relax nanu try this she said moving the spoon into hemant mouth

Hemant chewed on it and

Hemant: Avni beta this is amazing

Avni: I know she said with a small smile. She looked at Neela who gave her a disapproving look

Avni : maa don’t give me that look

Neela: Avni… bacha.. baba diabetes is not In control and u r giving him this sweet dish full of sugar

Avni: god u really think I would do that. I didn’t add any sugar
Hemant: what?

Neela: u think he would eat a unsweetened dish like that and say its amazing

Avni : yh because I added some sweet mango in it. Nanno new recipe u see .. Neela looked amazed and hemant laughed

Hemant: and u were accusing my granddaughter of feeding me sweet dish he said taking the bowl of Avni savouring the taste of the halwa

Neela got up and kissed Avni on the forehead

Neela: sorry

Avni: don’t be .., anyways I’m going to leave now

Neela: what time will u and aman leave

Avni: where ? She asked confusingly forgetting that she had agreed to go to the club

Neela: u all planned to go to the club

Avni: around 7 she said non interestingly

Neela: Avni at least show some sign of been a girl who gets excited of going out

Avni: I do wear girls clothes, have long hair, wear ladies accessories what else sign do u want me to show u. Neela shook her head getting the same answer

Neela: don’t worry one day u will understand go now

Avni: bye Nanu she said to hemant who looked up and waved Avni bye while getting busy into eating his halwa again.

At Khanna mansion
Bebe was downstairs looking for shweta everywhere but there was no sign of her she asked one of the worker only to find out shweta went out an hour ago

Bebe sat on the sofa and after 10 mins saw shweta walk in with few bags in her hand

Bebe: oh madam Madonna where did U go? Do U know I was looking for u everywhere.

Shweta: sorry Bebe actuallys had to gets few things for our homes so forgot to informs u

Bebe: shweta we need to convince Neil as soon as possible

Shweta: what happens Bebe y do u seems worried

Bebe: because our tillu has decided to surprise me with something that would make me stress free

Shweta: but Bebe y do u stills have to worry even if tillu has planned a surprise u still can convince him later on

Bebe: when ? After I say yes I’m feeling a little better. I will do one thing tomorrow itself I will pretend to faint and this time falling on the floor I don’t want to risk it by delaying this anymore. I don’t want Neil to doubt us on any way

Shweta: hmm i guess u r rights bebe.

Bebe: I will go back to my room tillu said he will be back in the afternoon.

So guys here is chap 16 sorry for no avneil scene but promise they will be in one frame in the next chapter. Which is already written.

Thank u to those who left their wonderful comments for the previous parts and also those readers who liked it.. this seriously means a lot

I look forward to read all those lovely comments. And don’t forget to press the like button

Sorry for any spelling or grammar mistake
Love Sonali patel

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