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Home»Fan Fiction»Avneil Ff : Blissful life (Chapter 1)
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Avneil Ff : Blissful life (Chapter 1)

LakshmilafanBy LakshmilafanAugust 31, 201715 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hi! am sakshi

Herez the the chap 1 of my new ff its already posted on IF

Chapter One – Home Sweet Home…

“So…Finally We are home…Did you like it?” Neil asked enthusiastically carrying Avni in Bridal Style and stopped near the threshold.

“I will be able to look around the house, only if you put me down Neil.” Avni said trying to wriggle out of his grip, to eager to get inside their love nest.

“ok-okay! Easy Wifey! Easy.” He said putting her down but instantly stopped her from stepping a foot inside. “Wait Avni…”

“What happened now?” Avni asked with a pouting face.

He didnt reply but went inside and came quickly with a Kalash of rice and Alta, while Avni waited outside dumbfounded.

“Neil?” Avni asked choked glancing at the things he carried.

“You know a bride always does Grapravesh before entering the house as a sign of wealth & prosperity, I didn’t believe in it…But since you are the Laxmi of this house, you have to be welcome pompously.” He replied geniuely while Avni could only perform the rituals with glistening eyes, admiring her husbands thoughfulness and her luck.

“So Now…Hows the home? I know its not too big but I tried to furnish according to your liking.” He asked backhugging her, now in their room, as she finished the tour of the house.

“Its beautiful…Thank you.” She smiled leaning onto him.

“Hmm…Only Thanks? Nothing else?” He asked gesturing for a kiss.

“Hmm…Wait.” she said playfully going dangerously close to his lips, while he closed his eyes in anticipation, they could play this game she thought.

For a good second or two Neil waited anxiously for his wifes lusicious lips to capture but instead something soft landed at his face. He opened to see his wife a few feet away laughing at his plight and a pillow at his feet.

“Avni…Wait…I will not leave you…Where will you go?…wait.” He yelled in frustration running behind her as the home resounded with his frustrated yet playful screams and her occasional giggles…

At Last he was able to catch hold of his notorious wife, sealing their lips forever Embarrassed…going a trance of ultimate bliss…bliss of being away from conspiring Mehtas, Nagging mother in law and obsessed bbf of your wife…It was just the start of their blissful life…

Okay! So this was chap one…Hope you like it…As you can clearly notice …Avneil have shifted to a new home separately…So the story basically revolves after arrest of Dayawanti…The reason for the spilt…Realisation of love…their newly confessed love…Married life…and not to mention Shweta,Riya and Ali would be there too…

Hoping for a positive review!

Bye!

Sakshi

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Lakshmilafan

    A nerdy, reserved yet fun loving teenage girl…I like mythology, romance, action thriller and humor kind of stories…Active on wattpad too.

    15 Comments

    1. Khyathi on August 31, 2017 9:25 pm

      It’s good.please continue.nd will you update daily???

      • Lakshmilafan on September 3, 2017 3:17 pm

        Hey thanks…will try n update regularly

    2. shalini on September 1, 2017 12:12 am

      Good one dear please continue

      • Lakshmilafan on September 3, 2017 3:18 pm

        thanks shalini ?

    3. nikitansx on September 1, 2017 10:50 am

      Good, continue

      • Lakshmilafan on September 3, 2017 3:20 pm

        thanks ?

    4. Sweetgirl7 on September 1, 2017 12:51 pm

      Oye pagli thanks for uploading ur ff here too. Also do post choices ff too. Me i am sami. Remember?

      • Lakshmilafan on September 3, 2017 3:22 pm

        Hehe!! I posted here only for u Sami…How cud i forget u..☺..Choices? Yes after I decide its furthur storyline…?

      • Sweetgirl7 on September 3, 2017 4:23 pm

        Thanks pagli sakshi. And do decide its story soon.

    5. naira on September 1, 2017 1:31 pm

      It’s was awesome…..keep going dear….?

      • Lakshmilafan on September 3, 2017 3:23 pm

        Thank u ❤❤

    6. me6104 on September 1, 2017 6:10 pm

      Lovely sounds gud !! Cont …

    7. me6104 on September 1, 2017 6:10 pm

      Lovely sounds gud !! Please update daily

      • Lakshmilafan on September 3, 2017 3:23 pm

        Yup will try to ?

        thanks ❤

    8. luvIBN on September 3, 2017 3:41 pm

      Whooooo kool lakshman and Urmila fan ? keep writing and reading ffs

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