Hey guys.. i have written a drabble, it was very challenging as i have to convey my idea in approx 100 words.. but it was fun too.. hope you like it..
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In the church, avneel are getting married. Everything is going smooth, so much happiness. But maybe destined is not in their favour. Because when they exchanged rings neel’s phone rang and he runs from there leaving avni at the alter.
Avni couldn’t take this scene and faints.
Family took her home and doctor came to check her. She told its stress.
Later neel comes. To everyone’s shock door is locked now. He breaks it to find avni laying on the bed with a bottle in hand and a note on bed that says ‘goodbye stay happy with juhi’ neel screams ‘No’
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How was it.. comment and like..
Should i make it a os or is it good be just a drabble.
Thank you
Love you
Mehak
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Don’t worry.. see the next part of it
Not at all nice…
Thanks for sharing your views.. btw check out the part 2
Nyc
Thank you so much dear.. 🙂
Nice make it an OS continue please
Thank you so much dear.. will try soon 🙂
Hey .. This is the first fiction I m reading about Avneil .. pl. make it an os .. it was superb
Hey.. Thank you so much dear.. will try soon .. 🙂
Shocking & thrilling update. Twist & turns makes interesting to read your episode. Always you think to start with something new & different concept that’s your speciality as a writer. All the best Mehak.
Thank you so much.. thank you.. thank you 🙂
Make it os and complete it
I wrote a drabble and completed it..