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Home»Fan Fiction»Arjun and Radhika Crazy Love (Episode 16)
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Arjun and Radhika Crazy Love (Episode 16)

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Starts with arjun and rads reaching farmhouse,arjun gets down from car and ask rads to come out,rads refuses to come,arjun opens t side door for rads and offers his hand and ask her to get down,rads looks at him and says,no i cant come,pls drop me in clg….arjun says get down orelse,rads says no,i wont,arjun holds her hand forcily drags her out from car,he lifts her in his arms and take her inside his home,rads is pleading with him to leave her….arjun puts her down and looks at her,rads says y ru torturing and forcing me like this,pls drop me at clg…i have to go,arjuns says no i cant…rads says ok u need not have to drop me,i myself vll go and start to leave,arjun rushes before her,shuts the door,and start to walk toward her looking at her,rads step backwards and fell into sofa,arjun locks her with his arm and says,u have much to practice,till u dance properly u cant go anywher,is that clear babe….rads pleads with him to leave her…arjun ask wats is ur problem babe….y are u afraid of me,do u think i vll romance with you…rads gets shocked,,,arjun notice her reaction and bring his face close to hers,she gets tensed….suddenly arjun phone rings,arjun says oh…oh…onesecond babe,he goes upstairs….rads is in deep thinking,aftsometime arjun calls her to come upstairs,he guide her the way to come to his room,rads goes there,he tells her to take rest for sometime,aftat vll continue our practice….its that done!!!rads nods ok…arjun sleeps on couch

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After taking rest,they began to practice,they keep on practicing and finally night arrives,they were lost into eachother and din notice tat its night,arjun and rads have eyelock during their dance,suddenly the power goes,rads gets afraid,then only they realise its night,arjun ask her to wait,he goes to bring candles.

Arjun brings candles and lights the whole room,rads also helps him,while lightening the room,they din forget to share eyelock,it start to rain,rads forgets that she was in someone elsehouse,she runs to balcony to enjoy the rain,arjun follows her to balcony and is mesmerised too see her playing in water like kid,he cant able to take of his eyes from her,he stares her like hungry lion waiting for his food…rads din notice him,she s busy playing in water,arjun walks to her.

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Arjun stand close to rads,he take his hand to touch her shoulder,she turns and see him,there is thunder,rads gets afraid and hugs him out of fear…arjuns hormones get increased…rads break from hug and looks at him,his s*xy scaned eyes and seducing breath make her to shiver,rads tries to go,arjun holds her hand pulls her near him,she tries to escape again,he held her waist firmly not leaving her to go,sizzling eyelock between two…finally arjun carrie her to bed,puts her on bed,he removes his shirt and looks at her,tere-mere song plays in bg.

Precap
arjun getting intimate with rads

Credit to: Deepa

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39 Comments

  1. Muskan on September 28, 2015 5:02 am

    Deepa wat to say yaar what a epi…First u made romantic by making them enter into farm house then,suddenly current gets off and then rain starts too,and then thunder too…day by day u r making it a Hot love ❤ story yaar…
    Good going..Honestly I haven’t read such a hot love story till now…i am in shock…
    Can I ask u a question y ur updates get posted at late night yaar…I was waiting.anyways Waiting for next epi..hugs for u by ur fan…

    • Deepa on September 28, 2015 1:32 pm

      Hi muskan,hru buddy…..

  2. Aparna on September 28, 2015 5:20 am

    What a sizzling romance. Fabulous. I think no writer have such romantic ideas. Luv the story too much.

  3. Brity on September 28, 2015 5:24 am

    Oh my god….
    What a episode…
    Damm sweet romance…
    Love you Deepa for your story…

  4. akhi on September 28, 2015 7:11 am

    Awesome deep
    U r simply superb

  5. nandhini on September 28, 2015 7:20 am

    OMG I never expect this from arjun ethna julthi?
    Now I am getting afraid of radhika…
    I don’t know how to express my feeling
    awstruck

    Deepa you glued the mouth of audience.
    Good Job

    Don’t make any revenge story behind arjun’s motive

  6. Anu on September 28, 2015 7:30 am

    Wow whts a story yaar ………beautiful i like so much every epds r awsome keep going deepa and luv u dear…………

  7. Anwesha on September 28, 2015 7:54 am

    Really very nice … I follow your story from the episode 1 commenting for the first time really great job.. We r loving it.. U r keeping manmarziyan alive really nice… Waiting for the next episode …

  8. Hayathi on September 28, 2015 8:22 am

    Hi deepa super episode but one thing yaar if arjun break rads heart if it was a game of arjun then rads cant handle it

  9. happy on September 28, 2015 9:03 am

    sry deepa…………….i dont want this much fast…………..i need more moments of ardhika……bt not this way…………..clge scene……….friendship scene……………bt this much romantic within this short period of time……….i cant accept that……………….its good………..bt i need this part after their love confession…………………..bt i think there is something unknown motive from behind this………………………

    • Deepa on September 28, 2015 1:34 pm

      Hi haapy,,,just wait and read yaar u itself vll understand buddy.

    • happy on September 28, 2015 6:49 pm

      thanks for replying……………………i am waiting only…………..expected your next episode………after my work…….i came home and took my laptop to see ur update………disappointment…….pls we r waitng…..pls update soon………………..

  10. Mira on September 28, 2015 12:59 pm

    I totally agree wid happy
    This is too fast… Sorry deepa:(

  11. Devi on September 28, 2015 1:15 pm

    Hey deepa mindblowing story love it

  12. Twinkle on September 28, 2015 1:28 pm

    I am gettin addicted to ur stories deepa please updates soon. Desperate for o know and make the episode longer. So hotttttt

  13. swara on September 28, 2015 2:05 pm

    i love your story deepa keep rocking dear.

  14. Natasha on September 28, 2015 3:33 pm

    Deepa i always like collage based story and so i like urs very much

  15. sriti on September 28, 2015 3:37 pm

    Deepa which is d song played at last

  16. akhi on September 28, 2015 3:38 pm

    Deepa update ur next story fast can’t wait for it

  17. Susmi on September 28, 2015 3:42 pm

    Deepa ur story was awesome I am addicted to it please give some more story in one episode this is so short I can’t wait even one hour I need ur story

  18. bidz on September 28, 2015 3:57 pm

    wow! waiting for the next episode

  19. Thena on September 28, 2015 4:19 pm

    hey Deepa dear…..seems lik u ve added some more spice hahaha…good work…..keep going girl…luv u loads…

  20. nisha on September 28, 2015 4:23 pm

    Dear Deepa,

    Loved this track, Loved your story. Toooooooooooooooooo much.

    Loved the way you weaved a story and also Loooooooved so much the way you write. Its tremendous.

    But as I said before.

    YOu have the talent of words. And we as a reader want you to expand the scenes specially of Ardhika a little bit longer.

    Than any other character.

    Because we loved this pair so much. And never getting bored to read about this pair chemistry.

    Just wish to read long romance in this pair..

    But we respect your talent tooo. And Luved the way you write Dear.

    Just wish to read more.

    Love you dear . Keep writing.

    Song of the day.

    Dheere Dheere Se meri zindagi me aana video of Hritik and Sonam

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RYIspUp2hXA

  21. chinnu on September 28, 2015 6:24 pm

    ur keeping the audience tight nervous with wonderful writing skills deepu and keep the freshness in the story is not a ordinary thing u made it and we luv ur track buddy………………………………………………………………………………….keep rocking like this.

  22. ♥lulu♥ on September 28, 2015 6:38 pm

    Deepa sooo nice yaar….hope there is no revenge motives in arjuns mind…thanx for fast update. …

  23. Harani on September 28, 2015 6:41 pm

    Tis much fast romance….in my opinion u may hav some twist …i guess dr … Anyways waiting fr ur nxt episode …as usual u rocked in ur narration dr ….loads of love ❤

  24. zara on September 28, 2015 8:09 pm

    hiii depa, its sooo romantic! !!!!
    finally they reached farmhouse…
    waiting for next episode…. update soon dear. keep continue.
    🙂

  25. nandhini on September 28, 2015 8:12 pm

    update the episode yaar
    Can’t sit without reading plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

  26. Mahima on September 28, 2015 8:20 pm

    I wanted to tell that whatever u r writing in story illegal.Because in reality this can’t b happen.But in college their nok jhok relation is awosome as well as ur writing skill.SORRY if my comment heart u.

  27. Roma on September 28, 2015 8:33 pm

    Hi Deepa, loving this story soooooooo much. Please don’t let turn Arjun as deceiving and try to make him hold on to his feelings for rads. I’m enjoying this story and please continue with its flow. I also think that its too fast for Arjun to fall in love with rads do something like wrong with her as it shows in this epi, but I think rads shojld stop him and somehow bring him back to senses but politely not slapping.
    My song dedication to this epi will be “Jadoo hai nasha haj madhoshiyan, thujhko bhulaake ab jaoon kahan” frlm jism movie…. thanks for update. Eagerly waiting for next episode…. love u and very tight hug…bye

  28. aradhana on September 28, 2015 9:25 pm

    Hi deep a. .nice story..eagerly waiting for nxt episode..so romantic. .

  29. kalai on September 29, 2015 12:06 am

    i think precap ll b just dream.. pls make it dream deepa.. or else it ll b a total disaster..

  30. jayaru on September 29, 2015 7:31 am

    wooooooooooow,i luv this story very much,bt dont put toooooo much luv , iwant more ardhika romance in a simple manner bt amazing dr,keep it up deepa

  31. aradhana on September 29, 2015 3:24 pm

    Hai deepa yen Nenga enum nxt episode post panala. .sekerama update panunga. ..

  32. nandhini on September 29, 2015 7:17 pm

    Deepa you are testing the patience of audience tooooooo muuccccchhhhhhhhhh

    Update your story fast yaar

    • valli on September 29, 2015 8:06 pm

      yes ur right nandhini….agree….she didnt update since long time. .yaar

  33. Anu on September 29, 2015 7:44 pm

    Deepa plz update the epd

  34. Mandy on September 29, 2015 8:40 pm

    Hey deepa 8 m back I jus jus jus jus love ur story like OMG!!!!!!! ♥♥♥♥ Very romantic yaar pls cntinu !!!!!!

  35. kfar on September 30, 2015 8:26 am

    Woooow deepa keeeerp going dear:D simply super. Missed u yaar sicne a while . Tight hug 😀

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