Starts with arjuns lip is nearing rads neck…..rads closed her eyes…..arjun lips touched her neck….rads shivers….arjun cant able to control his burning feelings turns rads to make her face him….rads has her eyes closed….he cups her face and bring her lips close to his….suddenly there is knock on door…..arjun and rads looks ateachother shocked…arjun opens the door and finds neil….neil: ur practice s not yet over uh dude,arjun blushes and looks at rads…..neil notice both of them blushing with eachother…neil sayswith cuning smile oh…oh…i came here at wrong time i think so,,,isnt it dude….arjun signals him to keep his mouth shut…rads moves from there….neil smiles seeing rads and again start to tease arjun and runs…arjun runs behind him.
Scene2
Rads is siting in class,lost in thought of arjun,she s sweating more and his lips are shivering….tittu calls her…bt rads din respond…she comes and stand infront of rads….rads is busy dreaming abt arjun….tittu shakes her up….rads come out of her trance and ask hey…tittu wen did u come?….tittu: for past 10min am shouting like anything,n ur asking me wen did i came,in wich dreamland ur girl,hmm….rads become tensed,titu ask her….HEY WAT HAPPENED Y UR SO TENSED CHASNi? Did arjun tell anything…rads nods nothing….
Tittu: ok,watever it may be,nw come with me to canteen,am very hungry….rads tells no..titu am not coming u go,,,tittu ask y?….wat u going to do….rads says tittu am feeling tired pls leave me alone for sometime….she leaves…titu looks at rads confused.
Scene3
ni8,in hostel,rads feels restless,she again get lost in arjuns intimacy…rads get up and drinks water,and tells what s happening with me?,,,,y am thinking abt him too much…y my heart beats faster wenever he s close to me….wt kind of feeling is inkling wih me….she lays in bed, thinking…
Atsame time,arjun also thinking abt rads,,,y i cant move away from tis girl,y her presence is affecting me,,,y i cant control my feelings towards her….he s also left thinking…both are thinking abt eachother without knowing they are unfortunately falling in love with eachother crazily…
Precap:
rads tries to avoid arjun
Credit to: Deepa
39 Comments
Deepa am going crazy by reading ur story.I am waiting for next part
Hi devi,thank u yaar…love u buddy
Wow super episode i cant wait next episode yaar please update nextt episode also
Hi hayathi….sure vll try to update 2epi per day yaar
This is awesome ?
Hi niku,,thank u dr
Awww..Deepa wat a story yaar..Awesome,Superb,,good going..love ❤ it..eagerly waiting for next track…Pls update soon…Can’t wait..to know what is gonna happen…love ❤ it..Love ❤ u alot and ur story…Tight hugs to u dear..from ur fan..Aaliya…
Hello muskan…tight hug for u too my dr….ur comment mean lot to me yaar…keep giving feedback buddy
Wonderful epi
I cant wait fr the next epi so interesting
Thank u mira…..
Superb episode. Ardhika rocks.:-) 😉
Hi aparna,,,ardhika vll always rocks yaar
Awesome as always. I am dying for the next episode
Hey poulamee,,,,thanks so much dr….
asusual hotttttttt….hugs my deepa….lol
Oh my sweetieee thena…tight hug for u too my dr…..am going crazy to ur story yaar….its so hot…keep rocking buddy
this makes me to addict more than manmarzian.
manmarzian makes audience glue to their seats at the mid of the serial(Lenovola trip ardhika feelings..)
But this crazy one is dragged from the initial episodes…
keep doing it deepa
love your loads always awesome …
one small request that i want you to narrate the story in very elaborate manner i mean so many scenes ….
the updates are have intense story line in few passages only but i want the detailed story describes their feeling,chemistry,……(the god will to being together.)
This is my wish if it hurts you in anyway i’m sorry….
I love crazy love manmarzian so so so so muuuuuuuuuchhhhhhhhhh.
Hey nandhini….nice name yaar…sure vll describe it elaborately dr…..keep giving ur feedbacks dr….dont feel sorry n all yaar….
Awesome story yaar. …waiting for the next update. ….plse update fast
Hi lulu,,,,sure i vll update it faster yaar,,,bt its in tu hand also na my dr
hi deepa…..so long i am waiting for nxt episode….because i read all episodes till now……pls…..waiting for nxt episode…….pls….post dear……thanks for giving a wonderful story…….thanks once again………………………..
Hi happy….love u buddy…be happy always
hii deepu, tight hug to you dear !!!!!!!!
wow soooo much romantic yarrrr ¡¡¡
ardhika always rocks, miss you a lot manmarziyan.
but deepa we want also Neil- misha convo 🙂 🙂 😉
eagerly waiting for next epi…post it soon dear. love you dear ♥♥♥
Hi zara,,,love u buddy,,,sure there vill we convo between neil and misha in future episode dr…thanks alot buddy
its too gud deepa… i luv it.. waiting for next episode..ardhika <3
Hi akhila,,,,,thank u dr
Hey deepa , An awesome episode.
Wow. Love is in the air.
Actually You know how to make your fans addicted to your story.
Just loved it.
Darling. Well as a fan I really loved your story. But one thing is little bit missing.
Ardhika’s moment a bit smaller . Make it larger more romantic . With your beautiful words.
Actually how much much we read we enjoy keep reading about them.
Its up to you all. Love you dear. Always loving your story.
Love you Dear Keep writing.
Hey nisha….love u buddy,sure vll try to put big yaar…ur song selection is awesome yaar….loved it buddy…keep giving feedback yaar
u are soo good deepa it’s beautiful…………………………..
will wait for the next epi ……………………………………………………. i never saw manmarziyan bcoz i almost stopped watching starplus after nauc’s end …………………………………
but after reading ur updates i think i missed a cute crazy story (manmarziyan)
will wait 4 hte next update 🙂 😛 😉
Hi krishy…thank u dr,,,ur name is superb yaar
Hey my dearyyyy wat awesome epis tight hug..im so sorry dat i couldnt cm here n comment mostly becoz i was kinda busy soory, but i lv al ur epis. Keep going dear:D
Li the atmosphere n da title amazing and awesome 😀
My dearu kfar,,,,me too missd ur comments yaar….nw am happy….love u buddy….keep posting ur stories yaar
deepa ur story is very interesting and cute keep go on like this buddy…………………………….luv aradhika sizziling chemistry b/w them.
i am very glad that comment is 33 over crazy love…
people keep encourage your work … I too..
always keep rockz…
i am very glad that comment is 33 over crazy love…
people keep encourage your work … I too..
always keep rockz…
And plz post episode asap.
Nice gng buddy
Hi deepa..i read dis story for first time and not able to move off till i read all written episodes..dis story made a big fan of u…really super……
awesome story of ardhika…by the way is there any videos for the story?if gt mean plz let me noe the web,i’m so eagerly waiting to watch it
Hey deepa,,,,,,,,, Awesome yaar……….. keep rocking……… I wish that manmarziyaan season 2 should come out with this story (same cast).