amrit manthan ff episode 9

the episode starts with karan taking care of amrit…..his mother says that we should admit her to hospital……they Both get up nd place amrit in van(they r on highway and they got amrit from jungle as they were near highway)…. nd rush towards a nearby hospital…..its the same hospital…..nimrit and agam leave hospital nd goes to home……karan his mother along with amrit on strecher enters hospital….doctor examines her nd says her bp is low v will have to admit her….she will get fine in a day or two……nd twice him prescription nd karan rush out…….

ONE DAY LATER agam nd nimrit enter hospital the walk past amrits ward nd get shivangi discharge…..they support her…..while supporting …..walking infront of amrits ward nimrit sees her……..She quickly rushes inside nd confort karan………before he could speak She slaps him hard……..his mother comes……agam also comes nd recognize him……karan mother tells them everything……they r angry but sad on what happened……….but nimrit forgives them……amrit also gains conscious ……..She says nimrit……nimrit shivangi nd amrit have a happy sister reunion…….doctor comes nd says that She can get discharge…..nimrit aSks karan nd his mother to come to thier home……they says no but agam insists them….the comply………..

at palace: kids has done all the necessary arrangements for surprise………they r shocked to see amrit with karan nd his mother…….nimrit comes forward nd tells everything kids happily hugs amrit….our dear jojo goes nd hugs shivangi…….She is very happy nd calls her mama…….tej also comes……family is very happy……..
at night……Both couples are in there respective rooms……they. have romance…..agam calls nimrit forward…..nimrit complies …….agam hugs her…….they have an eyelock…..Both fell on bed nd get intimate…..agam turns off the lights……

In tejs room shivangi is sitting tej comes from washroom……shivangi starts to speak….tej stops her place his hand on her mouth…..he says dnt say anything today we shall speak througb eyes Both share an eye lock……Both get intimate……lights r turned offff…….

precape:should I take leap or let it be like this?or should I add yug….as he is in jail for killing karan sister?

note: should I continue writting as i m not getting good remarks…..plzzz cmnt if u like it all….