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Home»Fan Fiction»ALIEN FEELINGS – Part-12
Fan Fiction Ishqbaaz

ALIEN FEELINGS – Part-12

Aastha_ReddyBy Aastha_ReddyAugust 26, 201738 Comments7 Mins Read
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“Annika pack my luggage”- Shivaay Singh Oberoi ordered almost in a hurry,” I don’t want to….”. He has find all truth…placed every missing pieces of words..to find a story. his story . He is SSO and can do anything..He did that but reached a point where he never expected to find himself..Khanna uncle, his Annika, his own brain, his mothers behave to his Annika..Naam…khoon..khandaan…
Annika get shocked at this order..Shivaay is going leaving her behind and is telling her just now…ordering her..,”excuse me..I am your wife not Khanna to throw order at”.
“Haan..when did I deny the truth…you are my beautifully khidkitod wife Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi..”-,” but for now just listen to your pati parmeswar..ok pack yours too “.
He hold her hands in his tight fist,almost gripping her hands,trying to observe some energy from her…Annika understood nothing….,”why this Bhagad Billa is in this much fury today?”….
“Oh my maatha…”- Pinky blocked his way…,” Annika is not gettings out from this house that you are holding her this tight..”.
“Yeah..she is not…”- Shivaay took deep breath,” But future is unpredictable..Kal kisne dekha!!”
“Nice jocks..nice jocks..”- Pinky ranted,” But the bags..planning for honeymoon”.
“Yeah…gifting honey to my moon”- Shivaay proceed towards the door,”trying to show starry moon filled sky to my honey”.
” Shivaay where are you going now??”- Omkara stopped, Gouri followed,” with outkw saying to us..OmRu..”.
“I just thought to leave home..I don’t want to…you know now you are married to Gouri..tomorrow Rudra too will accept his marriage with Soumya and..then”- Shivaay reasoned,” I don’t want any one to suffer, loss their right just because of me”.
Omkara looked confused..he is married to Gouri..but here Shivaay is leaving home, oberoi mansion where they spent most beautiful times..,” after marriage, Gouri didn’t became my brother..she is my wife…”.
“And no one can replace your place in our lives..”-Rudra said smiling,” we can get a wife after marriage…not a brother…what has happed to you bhaiyya”.
“Annika come, we are getting late”- Shivaay passes the golden statue of lord Shiva, the fountain and then passes the huge gate in his black car to move forward..
“Stop the car now!! I said stop your damn car or you know me better”- Annika shouted when they reached a deserted place,” If not OmRu, I deserve to know your moves…you are taking me like that with out saying anything”.
Really!! She is the one who knows every thing..she faked to loss her memory…didn’t dare to disclose truth and now she is the one shouting on him demanding for an answer,” I just want to live my peaceful life with you Annika..only you..”.
“You find out it finally that you are…”-Annika get her shock.
“I did and I am strong now you see…let me live a life being Shivaay”.
When Annika was not he was a business tycoon, a great wall..Shivaay Singh Oberoi but she made him a Shivaay..Her Shivaay that he is no more feeling related to Shivaay Singh Oberoi…
“Tej Singh Oberoi is elder son of Prithviraj Singh Oberoi so he was the ultimate power holder in Oberoi family and Papa was just helping him in business…then come our generation Annika..I..me..Shivaay , now power was under my control..business, house, family…security..but this was not mine… She was just too hungry to grab Oberoi property…Mr. Shakti Singh Oberoi did a mistake and amens it hardly..what about Maahi and his mother..creating enemies is a child play for some irresponsible acts of elders and we are not supposed to suffer… this house is not a home..its a zoo..”.
“Lets go from here…”- Annika nudge him to resume driving…,” we can talk while driving…”.
“Annika..Bade papa is elder son means he must have married before to my father… then how come Omkara is younger then me…they just showered me with fake love to snatch…I am feeling disgust to even utter that..”.
“calm Shivaay…calm down”- Annika patted his back…
“So you thought to leave home..”- Annika spoke looking at his stoned face..,” they are your brother Shivaay..they are OmRu..they will search for you…and can’t live with out you…”.
“Look back..”- Annika eyed,” Your chipku OmRu come to hug you saying Bhaiyya bhaiyya….”
“You too can do..”- Shivaay was feeling little light now..,” I don’t mind..”.
Shivaay has changed too much..after meeting ber, after their marriage..a tadibaaz Bhagad Billa become an Ishqbaaz Shivaay,” I am going where you are taking me Shivaay..”.
“My flat..a small one”- He smiled..
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“Bhaiyya…”- Rudra hugged him tight after opening door,” Give me a room here in rent”.
“Hum toh apne Bhaujai ke saath hi rahenge…Bade bskhaiyya..you can adjust with Omkaraji in hall”- Gouri smiled,” Bhaujai…Come”.
“Shivaay…even after living with us for this long time you just left us behind and that too for this silly reason..”- Omkara kept on his toka,” Did anything mattered to you more then us or the vice versa. Let Mrs. Pinky Singh Oberoi enjoy her own digged gold..”.
” But bhaiyya…you just left home with out saying anything to Choti Maa…”- Rudra said.
“Sometimes Hiding truth matters more then hurting others..”- Shivaay smiled,” Annika taught me..”.
“You are sounding like O”- Rudra said,” I thought his spirit entered your body during last rakhi when you tied his long hairs…”.
“Leave the past…Just cherish this present..future..”- Omkara opened his box of philosophy….
“Oh my nandi bail…”-Gouri said,” You have to start making sculpture from tomorrow..go and take rest, Aagaye bade bhaiyya ko sunane keliye..”.
” Om..Gouri..You should return home..”- Annika advised.
“Ghar…Kis ka ghar..kaunsa ghar..”- Rudra said..
“Hum jaate waapis bhaujai par wo kaa he na..thoda raita pehla kar aagaye hain wahan tohab aap ke saath hi rahenge…”-Gouri pinched her husband,” Omkaraji ne kaha hai Laxman must follow his Ram every where….”.
“Don’t give me that look”- Rudra sat crossed,” I am not Bharat to snatch your Chamki-Chameli-chandni and return back…I am Rudra Singh Oberoi..”.
“Ek minute…Its Annika not me”- Shivaay defended.
“You learned nothing from me..”- Annika commented,” will you like if some one calls you as Human instead of Shivaay..!! My footwear may feel bad so…”.
“I understand…from now keep thinking for names…You need that in near future…”- Shivaay smirked.
“We heard nothing…”- The three junior monkey closes ears…
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“Soch rahi ho…”- Shivaay sat on his bed.
“Haan…!!!”- Annika said keeping their luggage in wardrobe,” Nahin aap hi ne toh kaha ki lets forget…”.
“Kaise bhool sakte hain..”- Shivaay looked for her reaction,” I thought you too will be happy to…Annika..Kya kya naam socha tumne abhi tak…”.
“You ..you..Bhagad Billa..Kanji ankhen wala Billu..”- Annika throw pillow at his face,” Shameless Singh Oberoi…”.
“I promise…I will try to be a good father…”- Shivaay said.
“You will be the best one”- Annika assured,” you have fulfilled every duty and relation perfectly till now..A brother..a son, a brother-in-law..Businessman…”.
“And…”-He pulles her leg.
“The best jiju Saahil could ask for..and the best husband an orphan can wish ever…”.
“Yahi hai tumhari problem..you have Saahil..OmRu, Gouri… and your husband Shivaay…”- Shivaay hugged her..,” How can some one be an orphan who have so many person to share love with…”.
“I wish..soon Ansh or Shivika will join us to make it more complete..if Omkara and Gouri too..”- Annika blabbered..
“chup kar meri…bachhon ke maa..”- Shivaay folded his arm,” I am Shivaay Singh Oberoi…I am not that week, I am actually feeling better”.
“Great wall of SSO”- They both smiled at each other….
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    38 Comments

    1. Aashi9 on August 27, 2017 1:14 am

      I’m gonna miss this fanfic
      be back soon with a new one
      luved it

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 27, 2017 9:26 am

        Aashi…Some where I feel, I failed to bind reader to my stories even after so many hits ,so I am thinking to write no more for now. I am pretty much happy with response from wu page and no more fanfiction for now. May be I will continue after getting challenge or when I feel like I should write.

      • Aashi9 on August 27, 2017 10:02 am

        Astha, the thing is you should use a wider choice of words and be more descriptive.
        I’ll suggest you to write when you feel like it. but plz keep in touch with the TU page.

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 27, 2017 11:12 am

        I am always on pkj and Rabba ve land Aashi with written update of ib and ipkknd-3. wider range of words..!!!really yaar, tum yeh keh rahi ho,I think its a new challenge now to write the same story of Ishqbaaz in another way. Lets meet each other tonight with another fresh start with “unexpected Love”.

    2. Tanz on August 27, 2017 1:35 am

      Ye kya tha Di???You ended it…..not fair! You know for how long I had been waiting for Alien feelings….
      But….. this part was khidkitod and gajab and superb and awesome and wonderful and what not… I toh just loved it as always….
      The best part was that you ended it at a happy note….Shivomru together….is just wonderful.And the level of maturity Shivaay showed in this part was just amazing ?…..He could have confronted Pinky Ponkey but he didn’t…”Sometimes hiding the truth matters more than hurting someone”….. Ofcourse he can’t hurt Pinky because he had always considered her as his mother…..
      The ending convo was lovely….?
      I’m seriously going to miss this ff a lot….I hope you come up with some other work of yours soon…..
      Till then, take care Di?
      Love you ❤

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 27, 2017 9:29 am

        I will try Tanz to return with one more story,not planned till now. Not interested to write short stories any more,but will continue writing one shots. Happy Sunday..stay blessed.

    3. Banita on August 27, 2017 2:29 am

      Part-12….!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think i miss some parts…. nooo not some many parts….
      Di can u plzz send me d link of other parts…
      Btw it’s Awesome….

      • Sairish on August 27, 2017 9:21 am

        I agree I have missed few parts ..i was a regular read butttt….
        ???????di..pls send me with the links
        but jitna bhi Maine padha ..I went spellbounded
        .your writings ..hats off!!!!!

      • Banita on August 27, 2017 10:56 am

        Yeh Sarish sme here…

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 27, 2017 11:20 am

        Thanks yaar…I am happy at this.

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 27, 2017 9:31 am

        Bunny…May be you didn’t miss. I write this story after 3months so irs giving that mich michi feel.if missing few parts. Happy Sunday.

      • Banita on August 27, 2017 11:22 am

        May be but i think i just read 3-4 part….

      • Sairish on August 27, 2017 1:23 pm

        I read till 5 and the rest is blank

    4. AB on August 27, 2017 5:32 am

      Very nice .

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 27, 2017 9:35 am

        Thanks AB. Happy Sunday.

    5. Arpita on August 27, 2017 7:21 am

      Only one line…..ye kya tha???????…….

      Btw i was absent for some days when you started it.tthen i thought it was ended..but nooooo…aaj khatam hua..

      @asthababy kal ki hotstar ki synopsis ki tarah aur ek heart attack aaya mujhe..

      But seriously it was really a enjoyable ff..i enjoy bit by bit……

      Hope yiu will back with another khidkitod work…

      Byy.

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 27, 2017 11:19 am

        Arpita…Its too late of three months yaar. I feel like a burden on me so thought to finish,so that I can concentrate more on one shots. love you my darling..Have your enjoyable Sunday.

    6. deepu on August 27, 2017 9:56 am

      Hi Aasthu I think u remember me right..? Every day I used to stalk ur tu page just for this one finally u gave the ending to Alien feelings.. Thank u soo much nd ur all ffs are just mind blowing nd khidikithod

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 27, 2017 11:17 am

        Hey Deepu,Of course I know you as one of my reader and friend in TU. I will be back soon….pinky promise,so that every time you stalk me again,you will find some thing new to read…

      • deepu on August 27, 2017 11:20 am

        Thnq soo much I will be waiting..Idk y but i love to stalk i mean love to read all ur comments they r just awesome nd unique like annika di’s language

    7. UF on August 27, 2017 11:00 am

      AWESOME FANTASTIC GREAT MIND BLOWING PERFECT SUPERB????????????

      Dear Astha
      So This My Tadibaaz Kattukileri Ka Story Tha??Iam Sorry Yaar Main Ye Firstly Follow Nahi Kar Paya?But Main Starting Se Read Karunga.But You Finish The Story Fast?Last Part Is Awesome??????

      Take Care And Stay Safe?

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 27, 2017 11:15 am

        UF…I am definitely not an author to keep dragging like real cvs. I feel like using spade for a work hands can do. I will be back to rock soon….
        Love you…Happy Sunday.

    8. Zaveesha on August 27, 2017 11:40 am

      It ended…but what a khidkitod ending di… Feel very happy to read ur ff after a long time…
      Di try to come up with an OS or FF…
      Love nd wishes…

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 27, 2017 3:48 pm

        Zaveesha…I am going to type now. Don’t know what will it come out to be but lets start another…

    9. Niriha on August 27, 2017 12:09 pm

      Awesome fabulous mind blowing part no words to say dear..loved it amazing ending dear..I am really going to miss this ff.come back soon with another ff
      Love you ????Take care

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 27, 2017 3:50 pm

        Thanks Niriha…I will be back soon…

    10. nikita_jai29 on August 27, 2017 1:34 pm

      It is awesome dii… I want sequel…. Love you ashu dii…

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 27, 2017 3:51 pm

        Nikku….Meet you all soon back in another Khidkitod way..Have patience dear….

    11. SMC on August 27, 2017 3:47 pm

      I honestly respect your decision for ending the fan fiction because I was also in your place ad you can’t always drag the story it gets a bit off track but till part 12 I really enjoyed all the parts and it ended very sweetly..????❤️
      Will definetly miss your writings and ofcourse you..?❤️?

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 27, 2017 5:09 pm

        SMC…Thank you. I am not leaving writing…I will be back soon. The hurting truth is naam-khoon-khandaan works here too. Peoples goes for stories of few authors only, no chance for all.

      • Logesh.M on August 28, 2017 9:08 am

        You dont think like that..Even i am a rikara fan,i like shivika ff too….I read almost all ff’s here…But i am a silent reader…i started commenting from past three weeks…☺☺☺☺☺

    12. alekhika20 on August 27, 2017 8:31 pm

      Superb update

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 27, 2017 9:08 pm

        Thanks Alekhika.

    13. Logesh.M on August 28, 2017 9:06 am

      Aastha reddy,i am a silent reader..But honestly i loved all the 12 parts…But sorry for not commenting in previous parts??But i loved this last part..I can understand why you ended this?but you would have continued it…But it is an awesome end…I loved your ff to the core??????Please come up with new ff soonnn sister….

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 28, 2017 10:07 am

        Logesh bro…trp problem for Alien feelings lol. It was not reader problem,I was just saying like that. Many reader were waiting and I just used season for a work hands can do well. Any way I will be back soon…
        But Do comment when you are reading, this means a lot to authors..their hard work. I always comments on others ff when I read them, but generally I never reads or very less. All the best for your fictions…

      • Logesh.M on August 28, 2017 11:12 am

        Aastha reddy i already completed 10 episodes of my rikara ff..And i am yet to go..Yes,hereafter i will not be a silent reader..After started writing my ff i came to know the value of comments????Tq soooooo much aastha reddy…please come up with new ff soooonnnn

    14. gayathri.visu on August 28, 2017 8:33 pm

      End???? Really u ended this ff di? Can’t believe this…but it’s ok, u didn’t drag this ff, like CVs r dragging our fav shows, that too unnecessarily. I loved this part…..n Shivaay’s decision. Superb dialogues!! These 12 parts are awesome….fantastic.
      Come back soon Miss. Astha Reddy!!!

      • Aastha_Reddy on August 28, 2017 11:33 pm

        Thanks Gayathri. I Will be back next month.

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