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Home»Fan Fiction»Agar tu hota (1)
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Agar tu hota (1)

meenakshi03By meenakshi03September 14, 201616 Comments2 Mins Read
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Hi Guys I am Meenakshi.I am 13 yrs old . I am new here. This is an ff. This is not of your expectation because i am really inexperienced in this field.

Mumbai..

A lady is seen trying hard to wake up her little daughter.

Lady – baby pls. Mamma has work. Pls wake up
Girl – I don’t wanna go to school mamma.
Lady – baby, good girls doesn’t say like this. If you wake up now, Mumma will give u chocolate.
Girl – really. If then, I am gonna go to school. U take out my Uniform
Lady – Swakriti, go slowly.. be careful baby
(Yes most of u may have guessed it right. The lady is Swara and the girl is her little daughter Swakriti)

Sw – What to do with this girl

Then swara does her daily chores and sends her daughter to school. .

Kolkata..

A man is seen getting ready for office. After after combing his hair, he says Perfect, Just like she likes me.

Just then a Girl enters.

Gi – Sanskar Bhaiya, Come for BF.
Sa – Coming Ragu
(Yes the man was our handsome Sanskar and the girl was our cute Ragini)

Sa – Ragu, where’s Lucky? Today he has an important meeting.

Ra – He is on his way bhaiya.
Lu – I am here Sanky.

Sa – Gud, chale. Bye Ragu
Ra – Ur BF
Sa – in office. Bye.
Ra – bye laksh. Bye bhaiya

Then she goes to her room and takes a photo and hugs it.

Ragini’s pov

Di, where are u? I miss you. I know you and angel is alone in Mumbai. I wish I could come there. But u promised me that u would come on Maa Papa’s anniversary. Come soon di. I miss you.

Pov ends.
Epi ends

Sorry for all typos and grammatical errors.
Swakriti’s role is played by ruhi of yhm.
I hope u like it. Pls do comment. And sorry for short chappy ?

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    16 Comments

    1. tani on September 15, 2016 12:04 am

      Awesome

      • meenakshi03 on September 15, 2016 1:22 pm

        Thank you tani?

    2. SHAN on September 15, 2016 12:09 am

      Nice

      • meenakshi03 on September 15, 2016 1:23 pm

        Thank you Shan

    3. Samaira on September 15, 2016 12:22 am

      Nice name and story too. I can’t give u advise coz m too new. But reads ff’s . which will help u.

    4. s on September 15, 2016 12:38 am

      nice..

    5. Purvi on September 15, 2016 6:39 am

      Awesome……. Continue soon……

    6. mica on September 15, 2016 8:09 am

      waa….. it’s good one Meen! you are so talented writer.. continue soon, luv it ty

    7. Soujanya on September 15, 2016 8:29 am

      Nice

    8. Kakali on September 15, 2016 8:42 am

      U r 13 Meenakshi ,, but ur writing skills are good…. thnxx for ur chappy… loved it…waiting for d next…

    9. anu on September 15, 2016 10:17 am

      nice

    10. sanjanaagrawal on September 15, 2016 11:53 am

      Awesome …. and plz continue … and loved ur tittle … my fav song …

    11. Vidhi on September 15, 2016 11:56 am

      Nice one dear ????

    12. Arshaanya on September 15, 2016 12:42 pm

      Lvd it

    13. bhavana on September 15, 2016 1:09 pm

      woah meenakshi itz wonderful epi n nice start waiting 4 next update

    14. vyshu10 on September 15, 2016 2:27 pm

      nice

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