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Affection (swasan five shots) by mars (Shot 1)

MarsBy MarsMay 27, 201750 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hello guys!this is Mars u will think this girl has gone mad writing many stories at a time but what to do this idea came in my mind so I can’t stop myself from writing it and moreover I m bit free now a days so I thought to write.
Firstly I will tell you that this story has no negative character just family love and affection. You will get glimpse of father daughter bond,mother daughter interaction and husband wife’s pious relation and a perfect family.
Ok let’s begin

AFFECTION (swasan five shots)
SHOT 1
Characters:
Sanskar maheshwari:29 years old.one of the richest businessman in Kolkata.
Very dedicated towards his work.he loves his wife swara and his daughter siya to the core and they are his lifeline.He is very good son.

Swara sanskar maheshwari: 28 years old beautiful lady.She is housewife and loves her husband and daughter alot.He is perfect example of good wife,dil and mother.

Siya Sanskar maheshwari:6 years old cute beautiful like her mother.she is papa’s princess.She is apple of eye of whole family.studing in 2st class in Mount Carmel School(hehe it was my school).

Sujata and ram maheshwari: sanskar’s parents. They are good natured people. Enjoying their old age by seeing their happy family. They love Swara sanskar equally but siya is their everything.

Shomi and shekar gododia:swara’s parents.live in USA from last 5 years.satisfied to see their daughter happy.

Plot:
Swasan are married since 7 years and have their symbol of pious love their daughter siya.They are happy and satisfied in their life but life is not only bed of roses it have thorn also.Sanskar got shattered on that day when he came to know that his princess his daughter is suffering from brain tumor. Till now only he know about it.its only a week ago when he came to know.He really don’t know how to tell this to swara bcoz she is very sensitive.Even siya don’t know this.He is finding the Right time to disclose this to swara.let”s see what happen in their life.

Maheshwari house:
Morning:
Swasan room:
A beautiful lady in light pink saree entered the room and look at bed and got angry.Ofcouse that lady is swara
Swara(mumble):these both will never change.
And moved towards the bed where sanskar and siya are sleeping hugging each other.siya is almost lying on sanskar’s chest.
Swara(shouted): get up u both lazy fellow.Don’t know when u will learn to wake up early.Everyday I have to repeat the same thing but there is no effect on u.
Sanskar and siya’s sleep got disturbed due to swara’s shouting.
Siya(sleepy whispered to sanskar): papa plzzzz stop your wife’s morning radio channel
Sanskar(sleepy voice and hugging siya more): baby I m trying to shut it from last seven years but never succeeded.
Swara who listened this father daughter conversation got angry.
Swara(angry): I got to know what u think I m radio channel why don’t u both directly say that I should keep my mouth shut.Seriously firstly do this much for them and in turn listen their taunts.Fine I won’t say anything from today do whatever u both want to do.
Swara angrily moved towards cupboard and started setting clothes.
Sanskar and siya realized that she got angry. They opened their eyes and looked at each other.
Siya(said slowly): mom got angry.
Sanskar: yes let’s pacify her.
Both got up from bed and moved towards her.
Sanskar hugged Swara from back and siya from front but swara ignores them.
Siya: mommm
Sanskar: darlinggg
A small smile appeared on swara’s face but she hided.
Siya: u r angry?
Sanskar: u r really angry?
Siya(lovingly): u r best Mom
Sanskar: u r best wife
Siya(irrigated): papa don’t copy me use your lines.
Sanskar pouts
Finally swara smiled seeing their antics.
Siya:wow mom smiled it means she is not angry.
Sanskar:yes love u sweetheart .
He kissed swara’s cheeks.
Siya:papa me also.(extended her arms).
Sanskar understands and picked her in his arms bcoz she is small to reach swara’s face.
Siya kissed swara’s cheek
Siya :love u mom
Swara(kissing back): love u too baby.
Sanskar saw them lovingly and his eyes got filled with tears remembering siya’s health but he recovered.
Swara:ok enough for today both of you get ready.

After half hour
Swara is combing siya’s hair.
Sanskar is also getting ready for office.
Sanskar: swara where is my watch?
Swara:its in drawer only check properly.
Sanskar:make her ready fast swara it’s getting late.
Swara: that’s why I say wake up early but who listens to me.Sanskar I don’t understand why u had stopped siya from going by bus.It become difficult for u also to manage.
(Sanskar drop siya himself since he got to know about her disease as he don’t want to leave her alone.)
Sanskar (covering): just like that.buses are not safe now a days.
Swara: ok u put siya’s shoes I will bring lunch box.
Swara left.
Siya was sitting on bed and Sanskar sit in front of her. And started putting her shoes.
Sanskar:siya baby don’t take stress in class if u don’t understand anything.Ask from mom or me.
(As doctor told that she should not take stress).
Siya:ok papa
Swara came with her lunchbox
Swara:siya your bag is packed?
Siya: yes mom.
Swara put her lunch box in bag.
Swara: ok ready now.have a nice day.
She kissed siya’s cheeks and even siya kissed her and sanskar’s cheeks.
Sanskar:ok let’s go.
Before leaving sanskar put hand on siya’s eyes and give a Peck on swara’s lips.
Swara blushed.
Swara:come have your breakfast.
After having breakfast siya and sanskar left and swara got busy in household work.

Precap: flashback how sanskar get to know that siya have brain tumor.

Plz tell me whether I should continue or not.
Give your views through comments.
Thank you
Bye
Take care.

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    50 Comments

    1. SHAN on May 27, 2017 7:49 pm

      Awesome dr…. Continue it and make swara know that siya is having disease….

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 8:10 pm

        Thank you dear and swara will get to know soon and will post next part soon

    2. Neptune on May 27, 2017 8:10 pm

      awesome i loved this concept sooooooooooooooooo much mars waiting to know what will happen when swara comes to know about her tumor…………..

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 8:42 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    3. Nagamanasa on May 27, 2017 8:11 pm

      Interesting dear…continue soon

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 8:48 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    4. Stg on May 27, 2017 8:50 pm

      awesome..

      • Mars on May 28, 2017 3:52 am

        Thank you dear

    5. scooby on May 27, 2017 8:51 pm

      Hahah mars wt question is this???
      Definitely u should continue or else i will murder u ?? lolz…
      Awesome family and concept too??

      • Mars on May 28, 2017 3:55 am

        Thank you dear and will continue soon bcoz I don’t want to die so soon hehe

    6. anu on May 27, 2017 8:53 pm

      awesome continue

      • Mars on May 28, 2017 3:56 am

        Thank you dead will continue soon

      • Mars on May 28, 2017 3:57 am

        So sorry its dear

    7. sneha on May 27, 2017 9:49 pm

      Awesome..

      • Mars on May 28, 2017 3:59 am

        Thank you dear

    8. Simi on May 27, 2017 10:00 pm

      Awesome dear.. Continue soon..

      • Mars on May 28, 2017 4:00 am

        Thank you dear will post soon

    9. phoniex on May 27, 2017 10:12 pm

      Loved it dear it’s amazing

      • Mars on May 28, 2017 4:02 am

        Thank you dear

    10. sindhura on May 27, 2017 10:23 pm

      Nyc…diff concept..poor diya such a cute baby..lwt swara knw her disease bcz its every mothers right to knw the whereabouts of der children..

      • Mars on May 28, 2017 4:04 am

        Thank you dear and swara will get to know soon about siya

    11. Harshita on May 27, 2017 11:00 pm

      Awsm….feeling bad for siya…..so cute and innocent she is….

      Do continue dear…

      Eagerly waiting for next chappie…

      Update asap…

      Bye

      • Mars on May 28, 2017 4:05 am

        Thank you dear and I will post soon

    12. kumu on May 28, 2017 12:08 am

      interesting..continue soon..tc..

      • Mars on May 28, 2017 4:07 am

        Thank you dear will continue soon

    13. Swasan on May 28, 2017 12:13 am

      Wonderful

      • Mars on May 28, 2017 4:08 am

        Thank you dear

    14. Arshaanya on May 28, 2017 2:12 am

      M loving all ur stories…❤

      • Mars on May 28, 2017 5:31 am

        Thank you so much dear

    15. yamee on May 28, 2017 6:31 am

      Interesting, plzzz continue….waiting for next part.

      • Mars on May 28, 2017 9:44 am

        Thank you dear and will post soon

    16. alex Taylor on May 28, 2017 9:28 am

      eagerly waiting for da nxt part…plz update soon..u kno wat…i also study in mount carmel of kolkata…

      • Mars on May 28, 2017 12:12 pm

        Thank you dear and will post soon.
        Wow u r also carmelian love u dear

    17. Soujanya on May 28, 2017 11:12 am

      Awesome

      • Mars on May 28, 2017 12:13 pm

        Thank you dear

    18. ayshakhan on May 28, 2017 8:16 pm

      radio channel haha very funny..hi mars gud epi lovd it

      • Mars on May 29, 2017 5:23 am

        Thank you dear

    19. gayathri.visu on May 28, 2017 11:29 pm

      Wonderful concept dear…. Awesome!!

      • Mars on May 29, 2017 5:25 am

        Thank you dear

    20. Seebu_s on May 28, 2017 11:37 pm

      loved it

      • Mars on May 29, 2017 5:26 am

        Thank you dear

    21. ritu on May 29, 2017 10:17 am

      amazing dear?

      • Mars on May 29, 2017 12:15 pm

        Thank you dear

    22. meera_s on May 30, 2017 12:20 pm

      loved it dear..hope sanskar will say to swara abt siya and siya will be recovered

      • Mars on May 30, 2017 5:55 pm

        Thank you dear

    23. Sus on May 30, 2017 1:13 pm

      lovely dear so sweet family

      • Mars on May 30, 2017 5:57 pm

        Thank you dear

    24. sri on May 31, 2017 7:00 am

      aww…loved swasan siya bond so much? …hope siya will be fine..

      • Mars on May 31, 2017 8:41 am

        Thank you dear

    25. vyshu10 on June 6, 2017 2:25 pm

      Awesome…loved it. Hope siya will be cured.

      U know….i am really very glad that you are writing many stories on swasan. It is like a breath of fresh air in TU….loving your works. If u have time, plz write some more?

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