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Home»Fan Fiction»Ae zindagi by Shivu (part-1)
Fan Fiction Swabhimaan Swaragini Tashan-e-Ishq

Ae zindagi by Shivu (part-1)

shivu213By shivu213August 24, 201753 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hi guys Shivu here with first part of Ae zindagi thank u soon much for ur lovely comments guys & plzz commenting if ur comments get lessen then I stop writing so do comment ok

Before I start I again inform u that this story is mainly on laksh & after that all the couples so if u have any problem so tell me ok let’s start

Durgaprasad maheshwari:father of sanskar & bade papa of kunal big businessman nice & supporting father love his family & both son very much



Anpoorna maheshwari:mother of sanskar very nice,polite& supportive for her children she love both son equally & waiting for her younger son



Rakesh khanna:very rude,selfish & greedy man only listen to his wife love his son hate lucky who is adopted son on of his elder brother he always threaten him he also doesn’t respect his own mother



Ritu khanna:very bad lady very greedy & selfish always threaten lucky & her mother in law only love her son



Rajat khanna(28):rude arrogant boy completed his study but still not working only waste money hate lucky coz he is better then him never respect anyone



Sheela khanna:dadi of lucky & rajat she is very nice lady love lucky a lot she always support him



Sharda singhania:single mother of meghna very kind Lady owner of NGO



Shekhar gadodia:father of swaragini MLA nice & kind man



Shritama gadodia:sweet lady mother of swaragini loves her daughters & always support them



Part-1

Scene start A flat is shown inside it a room is shown where a boy is shown wearing black shirt & grey jeans getting ready (he is looking hot) at that time a old lady enters in his room
Lady:are lucky beta u get ready very soon today
(Yes the boy is our lucky)
Luc:yes dadi wo actually I have some work before college
Dadi:ok u did ur breakfast?
Luc:yes dadi ok dadi bye

And he went out of the room at that time a voice came

Voice: ohoo so mr. Lucky is ready today very soon

He turn & watch his Chachi ritu was standing with evil smile he ignored her & went out

Screen shift to a big mansion in which written maheshwari mansion inside it in a room a boy is sleeping peacefully at that time another boy is entered in his room

Boy:kunal wakeup we are getting late
(The boy who is sleeping is kunal)
Kun(sleepy):shanky let me sleep u go
(Another boy is sanskar)
San(fake anger):oye I’m ur big bro & u r not listening me
Kun(cover himself with blanket):only 6 Month elder
San(smirking):ok don’t wake I’ll call dad

Listening dad name kunal wakeup with jerk sanskar
start laughing at his condition kunal angrily glares him & throw pillow on him

Kun(angrily):huhh u scared me
San:ok baba sorry now get ready fast
Kun:ok
& sanskar leave

After sometime

Kunal & sanskar came down for breakfast kunal is wearing white T-shirt & blue jeans & sanskar grey T-shirt & black jeans both sit wish morning to Ap & Dp

Dp(while eating): so this is last year of ur college
San:yes dad

And they do random talks & after finishing breakfast both left for college

At another big mansion two beautiful girls r doing breakfast first one is wearing blue frock upto knee length is swara & another is wearing white crop top & black shorts

Swa:rags eat fast we r getting late
Rag:ohoo Di it’s ok if we get late one day
Swa(angrily):shut up & come fast

Shemish smiles watching them fighting after a while both hugs their parents & leave

At college

Inside the campus sanskar & kunal are waiting for their gang at that time swaragini come there

Kun:hy beautiful girls
Swaragini:hi
Rag:hi shanky
San(smiles):hy rags
Swa(angrily):am I invisible kunal
Kun(smiles):hehe what a joke
Swa:huhh kunal where is meghu
San(smirking):in my pocket
Swara(glares him):what a pathetic joke
Rag(irritated):shut up guys again started in morning

At that a girl come there who was wearing blue kurta & white legging

Girl:guys u again started in morning
Rag:see na meghu Di

(Yes the girl is meghna)

Swa:hi meghu
Kun&san:hi megh
Megh:hii guys

A boy also come there who was wearing yellow full sleeves T-shirt & black jeans

Boy:I’m also here u all forget me
Rag:hy kunj how we forget u yar
(The boy was kunj)
Kunj:that’s nice than & what topic going on
Kun:fighting

At that time a voice come

Voice:who is fighting without me

They all turn & watch twinkle was there wearing red top & white skirt

All together:hi twinki
Twi(with her million dollar smile):hii guys
Kunj:come na Teri hi kami thi
Twi:o really
Rag:guys r u all going to spend ur whole day here only
Kun:no
Rag:so y don’t we go to the classes we r getting late
Swa:o really rags but at home u r making us late
Rag:ya but we reached on time na
Megh:ok guys let’s go to class
San:ok meghu mata let’s go

Meghna glares sanskar & all leave for their classes

Here lucky enters inside the college & watch time
Luc:thank god I’m on time & I got job also

At that time his phone rings he pick up the call

Luc:hello dadi
Dadi:u reached college beta
Luc:yes dadi & u know I got job also in cafe
Dadi:that’s very good my son god bless u
Luc:ok dadi I’m getting late for classes I’ll call u later & ya I reach home at 10:30pm ok
Dadi:ok lucky bye
Luc:bye dadi love u

And he cut the call & leave for his class

The end

Recap:raglak meet & lucky first meet with dangerous gang

Guys plzz do comment ok

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    Srk jabra fan???? Varun dhawan lover??? Parth samthaan my Jaan??? Namish taneja my cutiepie??? I know I'm crazy but I loved that??

    53 Comments

    1. Raglak_fan on August 23, 2017 8:36 pm

      Fantastic dear

      • shivu213 on August 23, 2017 9:00 pm

        Thanks

    2. asra on August 23, 2017 9:20 pm

      awesome dear….loved it alot…eagerly waiting for raglak meeting….tkcr dear

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 8:28 am

        Thanks sis & I’ll post soon tc u too

    3. Ashly on August 23, 2017 9:30 pm

      Awesome superb

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 8:29 am

        Thanks sis & I’ll post soon tc u too

    4. Arjuna on August 23, 2017 9:42 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 8:31 am

        Thanks sis

    5. Aamy on August 23, 2017 9:52 pm

      Awesome

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 8:30 am

        Thanks sis

    6. IQRA222 on August 23, 2017 9:53 pm

      hello shivu di!!!!! how r u??? so sorry for not commenting on the prologue maybe i missed it.. but this story is fabulous
      and i really love it !! the concept is amazing!!
      loving lucky’s character tooo much!!!
      waiting for the next part eagerly!!

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 8:25 am

        Hy sis I’m fine & u& it’s ok sis
        Thanks for ur support??

      • IQRA222 on August 25, 2017 4:56 pm

        i am all fine di!

    7. teitokUn1718 on August 23, 2017 11:21 pm

      Superb….
      Feeling sad for Lucky…

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 8:27 am

        Thanks

    8. Vini on August 24, 2017 6:38 am

      Superb one, keep going

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 8:28 am

        Thanks

    9. Sherin on August 24, 2017 6:38 am

      Awesome dear

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 8:27 am

        Thanks

    10. Thahseem on August 24, 2017 7:05 am

      Nice

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 8:23 am

        Thanks

    11. Malu on August 24, 2017 7:06 am

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 8:23 am

        Thanks & I’ll post soon

    12. aleeza on August 24, 2017 11:07 am

      Nice

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 10:02 pm

        Thanks

    13. Anju on August 24, 2017 3:12 pm

      Awesome update

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 10:01 pm

        Thank u

    14. Laashya on August 24, 2017 3:41 pm

      Lovely episode and poor lucky

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 10:01 pm

        Thank u

    15. Elizebathlovely on August 24, 2017 3:54 pm

      Awesome

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 10:00 pm

        Thanks

    16. Soumya on August 24, 2017 4:10 pm

      Superb di…..post next soon

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 10:00 pm

        Thank u & I’ll post soon

    17. Monu on August 24, 2017 5:37 pm

      Superb dear

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 9:59 pm

        Thanks

    18. Ammu on August 24, 2017 7:40 pm

      It’s outstanding episode dear. Ragini and her friends bonding is awesome. Feeling bad for Laksh. Eagerly waiting for Raglak meeting and please post next part ASAP. Love you dear and take care

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 9:58 pm

        Thanks dear & I’ll post soon tc u too

    19. Vennila on August 24, 2017 7:53 pm

      Awesome episode

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 9:58 pm

        Thanks

    20. Pearly on August 24, 2017 8:25 pm

      Superb part

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 9:57 pm

        Thanks

    21. Jiyani on August 24, 2017 8:50 pm

      Awesome dear…Loved it

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 9:56 pm

        Thanks dear

    22. Monisha on August 24, 2017 9:23 pm

      Superrrrrrr

      • shivu213 on August 24, 2017 9:56 pm

        Thanks

    23. Presha on August 25, 2017 6:46 am

      awesome…
      loved it…
      too good..
      post soon

      • shivu213 on August 25, 2017 10:04 am

        Thanks?

    24. aleeza on August 25, 2017 10:48 am

      Awesome

      • shivu213 on August 25, 2017 7:48 pm

        Thanks

    25. msmahi on August 25, 2017 11:51 am

      Superb episode
      Plzzz post soon dear

      • shivu213 on August 25, 2017 7:48 pm

        Thanks

    26. Ramya on August 26, 2017 11:18 pm

      Awesome one

      • shivu213 on August 27, 2017 7:32 am

        Thanks

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