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Home»Fan Fiction»Ae zindagi (prologue & CS) raglak, swasan, meghnal & twinj
Fan Fiction Swabhimaan Swaragini Tashan-e-Ishq

Ae zindagi (prologue & CS) raglak, swasan, meghnal & twinj

shivu213By shivu213August 17, 201756 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hii friends its me shivu here with another story of mine but before starting I tell u this story is mainly based on laksh & raglak r main couple but all characters & couples also have important roles so guys if u like it & want me to continue so plzz tell & if comments r less I don’t write it further

#prologue

In A big mansion a room is shown in which lots of pics of a kid are hanging in each wall in that room a lady of 40’s is sitting in a bed with a pic of the same kid & weeping silently creasing the pic

Lady(weeping):all r saying that u r died but I know & I feel that nothing is happen to u till(wiping her tears) till my last breath I’ll wait for u my son

At that time two boys of 20’s enters & watch lady crying

Boy1:mom
Boy2:badi mom
(The lady is Ap)

Ap immediately hide the pic & wipe her tears

Ap:sanskar kunal u here (hiding his tears)wo I came here to clean the room
San(hold her by shoulder):y r u hiding ur tears mom
Ap(avoiding eye contact):n..no y I’m crying
Kun:badi mom don’t hide ur tears we know u r missing laksh
San(cupping her face):we will find him soon
@ that tym a voice come from back yes annu sanskar is right they turn back & found Dp there Dp come near them
Kun:yes badi mom once masi get conscious then we find our lakshu soon

Then all hugs each other

Scene change

A flat is  shown inside the house a boy of 20’s is shown standing with his head down a couple of 40’scolding that boy & another boy of late 20’s sitting in the sofa with evil smile & a lady of 60’s standing little far away from them with tears

Lady(shouting @ the boy):what the hell lucky ha how dare u to split coffee on my son
Luc:but Chachi rajat is not walking properly
Man(angrily):Bhaiyaaa… don’t forget he is elder from u
Lady:say sorry to him
Luc:no I can’t
Lady(angrily):say sorry otherwise u & ur dadi doesn’t get food for two day

Lucky looks toward her dadi who is standing with tears he unwillingly say sorry to rajat & leave to his room & sit on bed @ that tym dadi come from there put her hand on his head he look @ her with tears & hugs her

Luc:dadi y don’t we leave this house
Dadi:no beta I can’t this house is the last sign of ur dadaji I can’t leave u can leave y u bear this much insult for me
Luc:no dadi after mom dad u r only one left in my life
Dadi:plzz sleep beta

After sometimes

Lucky is sleeping dadi is creasing his hair @ that tym maid come with food & give it to dadi
Mai:dadi plzz eat & make lucky Bhaiya eat
Dadi:no nirmala let him sleep
Nir:dadi if u don’t mind can I ask y don’t u leave this house they torture u so much & is lucky Bhaiya is not real son of bade saab
Dadi:no nirmala lucky is adopted son of my elder son vikram & the orphanage manager inform us that when he is 2 year someone left him there & when he is 3 year we adopted him but his bad destiny after 2 year my son & daughter in law died in car accident from that day my poor lucky is suffering like this
Nir:but dadi y don’t u leave this house
Dadi:no nirmala I can’t coz they have all the property papers of my elder son if we went from here they prove us die & shift all his property in rajat name then my lucky doesn’t have anything we have to live here till my lucky become 22 years
Nir:ok dadi may god fulfill all the dream of lucky bhaiya
Dadi smiles & kiss lucky forehead & went to sleep

Character sketch

Lucky(19):a sweet,silent & handsome boy who loves his dadi a lot he is 2nd year b.tech student studies in scholar he doesn’t have any friends he hates his Chacha Chachi he doesn’t have parents he is total mystery for all the students coz he doesn’t talk anyone do part time job in cafe as waiter



Ragini gadodia(19):total modern girl younger daughter of MLA loves her parents & friends alot rude for outer world but very nice to the people who know her she is also in 2nd year b.tech



Sanskar maheshwari(23): handsome dashing boy study in last year m.tech son of big businesses Dp & Ap he is also rude for outer world & sweet for friends & family



Swara gadodia(23):sweet,bubbly girl friend of sanskar & his classmate also elder sis of ragini



Kunal maheshwari(23): handsome dashing boy of college sanskar’s cousin & classmate his parents Rp&suj died when he was 12 he lives with his bade papa & badi maa little flirty boy



Meghna Singhania(23):simple but bold girl never scared from any best friend of swasan &
kunal daughter of well known owner of NGOs



Kunj sarna(20):cute,innocent boy ragini’s classmate & friend son of businessman of punjab live alone right now in Mumbai for study helpful in nature



Twinkle kapoor(19):cute,bubbly & naughty girl total chatterbox her parents r also very rich ragkunj’s classmate



Swasan, meghnal r in same classes & elder from twinj & rag but they hangout together they all r best friends & other students give their  group a name dangerous group because they all belongs to rich family & doesn’t give other students more importance

So guys plzz tell I continue this story or not

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    56 Comments

    1. teitokUn1718 on August 17, 2017 12:53 am

      Amazing…
      Continue dear…

      • shivu213 on August 17, 2017 8:26 am

        Thanks

    2. Presha on August 17, 2017 1:10 am

      Awesome…
      Loved it

      • shivu213 on August 17, 2017 8:26 am

        Thanks

    3. Meghnal on August 17, 2017 1:46 am

      Dear it’s enteresting
      Keep writing

      • shivu213 on August 17, 2017 8:25 am

        Thanks

    4. Sneha on August 17, 2017 5:20 am

      Amazing ??

      • shivu213 on August 17, 2017 8:24 am

        Thanks

    5. harita7 on August 17, 2017 7:29 am

      Awesome dr. ? ?

      • shivu213 on August 17, 2017 7:51 pm

        Thanks

    6. Ashly on August 17, 2017 3:04 pm

      Awesome dr

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 10:46 am

        Thanks

    7. asra on August 17, 2017 3:05 pm

      awesome dear…loved it….plz continue…waiting for ur update…tkcr dear

      • shivu213 on August 17, 2017 7:59 pm

        Thank uu sis & I’ll post soon tc

    8. Thahseem on August 17, 2017 3:49 pm

      Very Nice

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 10:45 am

        Thanks

    9. Arjuna on August 17, 2017 3:53 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 10:44 am

        Thanks

    10. Elizebathlovely on August 17, 2017 4:01 pm

      Awesome

      • shivu213 on August 17, 2017 7:52 pm

        Thank u

    11. Malu on August 17, 2017 4:16 pm

      Amazing nd can’t wait for next

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 9:50 am

        Thanks & I’ll post soon

    12. Vini on August 17, 2017 4:37 pm

      Loved it, keep going

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 9:50 am

        Thanks dear

    13. Jiyani on August 17, 2017 4:42 pm

      Awesome dear….Loved it

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 10:42 am

        Thanks

    14. Aamy on August 17, 2017 5:20 pm

      Awesome

      • shivu213 on August 17, 2017 7:57 pm

        Thanks

    15. msmahi on August 17, 2017 5:49 pm

      Awesome
      Post soon

      • shivu213 on August 17, 2017 7:56 pm

        Thanks

    16. Zoya9 on August 17, 2017 6:32 pm

      Interesting
      Post soon
      Keep smiling
      Take care

      • shivu213 on August 17, 2017 7:55 pm

        Thanks & take care u too??

    17. Monisha on August 17, 2017 7:14 pm

      Superb part continue plz

      • shivu213 on August 17, 2017 7:53 pm

        Thanks

    18. Vennila on August 17, 2017 7:51 pm

      Awesome

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 9:51 am

        Thanks dear

    19. Raglak_fan on August 17, 2017 8:32 pm

      Fantastic dear

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 9:52 am

        Thanks

    20. Monu on August 17, 2017 9:03 pm

      Interesting

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 9:52 am

        Thanks

    21. Ammu on August 17, 2017 9:31 pm

      Welcome back dear and I just loved this prologue. It’s really interesting dear and feeling bad for lucky. Eagerly waiting for Raglak scenes. Please post next part ASAP. Love you dear and take care

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 9:49 am

        Thanks dear for this lovely comment & I’ll post soon tc

    22. Pearly on August 17, 2017 9:39 pm

      Nice part

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 10:34 am

        Thanks

    23. Anju on August 17, 2017 10:12 pm

      Superb start

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 10:40 am

        Thanks

    24. Nishuu on August 18, 2017 12:11 am

      Interesting plot
      Loved it

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 10:39 am

        Thanks dear

    25. Laashya on August 18, 2017 6:41 am

      Awesome intro and can’t wait for next episode

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 10:36 am

        Thanks dear& I’ll post soon

    26. Sherin on August 18, 2017 7:28 am

      Superb dear

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 10:37 am

        Thanks

    27. Soumya on August 18, 2017 7:43 am

      Superb di…post next soon

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 10:37 am

        Thanks siso

    28. Ramya on August 18, 2017 6:21 pm

      Awesome one

      • shivu213 on August 18, 2017 11:35 pm

        Thanks

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